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1、读后续写：脱离困境型Part1：经典例文（玩具店遇险）1Part2：困境类场景描写3一、环境描写（恶劣）3二、情绪描写（绝望、恐惧+挣扎）5三、转机描写描写声音传来或看见了什么7四、情绪描写（希望+努力）7五、脱险描写8六、情绪描写（感恩+高兴）8七、主旨描写8Part3：灵活应用9例1：瀑布遇险9例2：火灾救老人10例3：森林迷路脱险12Part1：经典例文（玩具店遇险）阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。It was a Saturday afternoon. The color of the sky was changing, first light gray,

2、then dark gray, and finally dark and dense. The wind was blowing heavily,and the trees were swaying in the strong wind. It began to rain cats and dogs. Soon, the road was filled with puddles from the rain.On such a stormy afternoon, my mother took my five-year-old brother, Christopher, and me to a n

3、ew big toy store she had read about in the newspaper. “So many toys,” the advertisement had shouted in full and flashy color,“that we had to get a huge warehouse to fit them all!”Christopher and I couldnt have been more excited. We ran across the parking lot, through the cold rain, as fast as our li

4、ttle legs could carry us. We left our mother outside to battle with the frustrating umbrella, which never worked when she wanted it to. “Christine! Take care of your young brother!” Mother shouted at the top of her voice.“Christine!Im going to find the Lego section(乐高积木区)! Theres a new pirate ship I

5、 want, and I have four dollars! Maybe I can buy it!” Christopher exclaimed and ran off excitedly. I only half heard him. I took a right turn and, to my wide-eyed delight, found myself in the midst of the Barbie(芭比) World.I was studying a Barbie and doing some simple math in my head when suddenly an

6、earthshaking clap of thunder roared from the storm outside. I jumped at the noise, dropping the doll to the floor. The lights flickered(闪烁) once and went out, covering everything in a blanket of blackness. Thunder continued to shake the sky and lightning illuminated the store for seconds, casting fr

7、ightening shadows on my mind.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:“Oh no,” I thought, “Wheres Christopher?”_Paragraph 2:“Christine, Im here.”_答案写作提示原文讲述“我”和弟弟以及妈妈去买玩具,结果“我”和弟弟刚进去玩具店没多久,由于雷电,商店停电,我们都看不到对方。根据第一段的段首句,本段应该是作者在黑暗中寻找弟弟的情景。在

8、续写时,除了动作,还要注意心理描述。根据第二段的段首句可知,弟弟找到了“我”。此段应该描述姐弟俩相遇的情景。这里的描述应该有“劫后余生”的感觉。Paragraph 1:“Oh no,” I thought, “Wheres Christopher?” Scared, I was frozen on the spot, overcome with the need to see my brother, hug him and make certain he was all right. My stomach twisted and turned inside. I ran up and down

9、 the aisles through the darkness, panic filling my small chest and making it difficult to breathe. I knocked into displays of candy and tripped over toys, all the while frantically calling my brothers name. Anxious as I was, I could barely see his figure. Tears of frustration and fear trickled down

10、my face, but I continued to run.“哦，不，”我想，“克里斯托弗在哪里？”我当场冻僵了，需要见到我哥哥，拥抱他，确保他没事。我的胃扭曲了，转了进去。我在黑暗中跑来来跑去，恐慌充满了我的小胸部，呼吸困难。我一直在看糖果，被玩具绊倒疯狂地叫着我哥哥的名字。虽然我很焦虑，但我几乎看不见他的身影。沮丧和恐惧的眼泪从我的脸上滴了下来，但我继续跑着。Paragraph 2:“Christine, Im here.” Excitement took my breath awaythere in the dark Lego aisle I found Christopher. H

11、e was standing alone, perfectly still, hiding under the pirate ship set. I began to cry out from relief, throwing my arms around him and hugged him tightly. He hugged me back, say-ing, “I knew if I waited here, Christine, you would be able to find me.”Then, I took his hand in mine and we went to fin

12、d our mother, who must be desperately searching the store for us. “克里斯汀，我在这里。“兴奋让我喘住了呼吸在黑暗的乐高走廊里，我找到了克里斯托弗。他独自站着，完全不动，藏在海盗船下面。我开始欣慰地大叫起来，伸出双臂搂住他，紧紧地拥抱着他。他拥抱我，说：“我知道如果我在这里等着，克里斯汀，你就能找到我。”然后，我抓住我的手，我们去找我们的母亲，她一定是拼命地在商店里找我们。Part2：困境类场景描写一、环境描写（恶劣）波涛汹涌：1.As I floated on, a huge wave (一个巨浪) whistled (呼啸而

13、来)and approached us.2. The big wind roared through our ears (在耳边咆哮), and we were pushed away from the shore farther and farther.3. All my senses told me that a big wave was about to come.(即将来临)4. A powerful-looking(看似猛烈的)wave was coming towards us. (靠近我们)鲨鱼的可怕：It was a shark, a massive shark that wa

14、s swimming around, not far away from her.The sharks jaws opened wide, showing rows of sharp teeth.陆地上的水：Splashing raindrops hit the windshield frantically and the skies were overhung with a blanket of grey,.雨滴疯狂地打在挡风玻璃上，天空笼罩在一片灰色之中。The water kept rising, as if it wouldengulfme alive.水不停地涨，仿佛要把我活吞下去。

15、Unfortunately, the water poured in and crept upon my waist.在水里行走（不可能rush, dash）推荐句型：1. The wind blows/whistles/howls/picks up/whips through sth/sweeps across sth.风刮/飕飕的刮/呼啸而过/愈刮愈大/刮过/掠过2. They were gettingdrenched by icy water.他们被冰冷的水浇透了。3. The heavy rain was violentlybeatingagainst the window.大雨疯狂地

16、击打窗户。4. The raindrummedon the roof of the building.雨不停地击打着房预。5. The furious storm isgrumblingoutside.狂风暴雨在室外呼啸着。6. The icy wind startedhowling,stingingmy face.寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。7.A flash oflightninglit upthe whole sky.一道闪电点亮了整个天空。8. The sharpclapsof thunderpiercedthe quiet night.声声清脆的雷声划破了宁静的夜晚。9. The b

17、olt of lightningstabsthe earth. 一道闪电划过天空。10. 天空和海洋融为一体| the sky and the oceanmelt intoeach other二、情绪描写（绝望、恐惧+挣扎）疲倦/寒冷1. Salt stinging(刺痛) my eyes, I could hardly tell how long I could hold on.2. Time passing us, tirednessengulfed(包围了) us with my feetstiff/numb(僵硬/麻木)andshivering.3.Exhausted as we we

18、re(尽管很累), we didnt stop. Gritting our teeth, we kept swimming.4.After what seemed a century, I feltextremely fatigued(非常累) while swimming hard tokeepmyselfafloat(漂浮着的).5. He washuddledinto his coat, his faceblue with cold.他缩进大衣里，冷得脸都发紫了。6.Fingersnumbedby thechillywater, throat choked by icy wind, I

19、felt on the verge of collapsing.7. She clasped the baby to her bosom in thebiting/cutting/piercing/sharpwind.在刺骨的寒风里，她把孩子紧紧地抱在胸前。8. The icy wind started howling,cutting my face like a sharp knife/needles.寒风开始咆哮，像锋利的小刀/针一样刺痛了我的脸。9. Her teeth werechatteringwith cold.她冷得牙齿直打颤。害怕1. I took a deep breath

20、andswallowed hard(害怕地咽了口吐沫).2. A chill feeling crept up her spine.3.Exhausted and cold, the thought that we might die here flashed across my mind, which made mequiver with an uncontrollable terror/horror/fright(难以控制地发抖).4. Looking at thevastsea, I felt a sense of fearsurging through my whole body.(在

21、身体涌动)5. As time ticked by, fearcrept upon my heart(爬上我心头) and I could hardly tell how long I couldplough on(前行).6. The thought of hopelessnesssent shivers down my spine(让我后脊背发凉).7. I wasflooded with a sense of horror(被恐惧感淹没).8. Seeing this, I felt my feargrowing/increasing(剧增) inside.9. I felta wave

22、 of anxiety(一阵焦虑)swept over my body(袭来).10. Tears of frustration and horror gushing from my eyes, I felt I had sunk into hopelessness.11. A sense of terror sweeping through my body, I shouted in panic, “Help! Help!”12. The hairs on the back of my neck prickled with dread and I was drenched in sweat.

23、 （汗毛倒竖；湿透）13. Swallowed by a wave of despair, I crossed my fingers, closed my eyes and prayed in a shivering voice.14. Trembling like a leaf, the car was ready to be flooded away at any time, which refrained me from moving a single inch.描写挣扎努力1. Tom looked thoughtful (若有所思)2. “We need to think out a

24、 way!” Imuttered(喃喃自语), scratching my head(绞尽脑汁)3. .,We swam tooth and nail(全力以赴地).4. We spared no effort to(不遗余力地) to swim towards the shore.5. We exchanged a determined look(互换了坚定的神情) , then ploughed on (继续前行) at an incredible speed(难以置信的速度).三、转机描写描写声音传来或看见了什么1. Adistantsoundreached our ears.(传入耳朵

25、)2. Just then, my mind raced why not call 911 and Joe?3. The sound of the boatechoed in our ears.(在我们耳内回响)4. At that moment, ashrill whistle(汽笛声)rippedthe air (划破天空).5. When we were at a loss of what to do, there wererasping(刺耳的)shouts(喊叫声)rising from the distance(从远处升起).6. Jason saw something flick

26、er in the distance. “Lights! I see lights!” Jason shouted out.7. In sheer desperation(在绝望中), I finally caught sight of some boats with lifeguards on them heading towards usin the distance.8. After a long time, a light spot appeared in the distance! We waved our hands and yelled out for help.四、情绪描写（希

27、望+努力）描写如释重负1.As if clutching at straws,I dialed the number again and again.2. Hearing thecomfortingnews, Icouldnt help restraining my excitement.(情难自抑)3.His words reignited the flame of hope in my heart4. On hearing the good news, Tom and Isighed in great relief(如释重负地叹了口气),grinning merrily ateach ot

28、her.5.Smiling in relief(如释重负地微笑), Ifelt a rush of pride(感到一阵自豪).6.Overjoyed(狂喜) to see a boat coming to our rescue, Tom and Ibreathed a sigh of relief(如释重负地松了口气)7. Stiff from keeping in one position for hours, they slowly unfolded their bodies.五、脱险描写1.The boat finally reached us and took all of us b

29、ack to the shore.船终于到达了我们身边，把我们所有人都带回了岸边。2.Yellingat the top of his lung, Joe tried to soothe me and convince me that it was the best way to escape the danger.乔大声大叫，试图安慰我，让我相信这是逃离危险的最好方法。六、情绪描写（感恩+高兴）1.When we pictured what the merry scene would be, relief lay in my heart and happiness was written o

30、n my face.当我们想象欢乐的场景是什么时，我心中有解脱，幸福写在我的脸上。2.Sighing in relief, I couldnt stop thinking about the whole event. I knew they would have died if they had been in the sea for any longer.我如释重负，不停地想整个事件。我知道如果他们再在海里，就会死了。七、主旨描写1. It occurred to me that helping others was priceless and everyone should be a li

31、feguard.我突然想到，帮助别人是无价的，每个人都应该是一个救生员。2. For the first time since, ones emotions got the best of him and tears trickled down his cheeks.这是.，的情绪第一次充分利用他，眼泪从他的脸颊上滴下来。3. Only then did I realize that it was Joe who had been caring for me through thick and thin.4.Sobbing in relief,Iwas overwhelmed by waves

32、 of guilt and remorse. I murmured sorry, reflecting that I should have taken his warning seriously.5. All this took only a few minutes, but Betty would never forget the frightening experience.Part3：灵活应用例1：瀑布遇险It was last August. We were on vacation, having driven from our home in Washington, DC, to

33、New Hampshire. We wouldnt see friends or familyit would be just me, my husband, and our two kids out for a nice,safe, socially distanced week away.We had hiked about half a mile to a popular spot called Dianas Baths, near the town of North Conway, where the water falls off a series of flat boulders

34、layered up the mountainside like an M.C. Escher drawing. The baths were full of families, so we made our way to one of the upper levels of rock to keep our distance.Both where we sat and down below, the water cascaded and fell into small pools, where kids in swimsuits were splashing around. I watche

35、d as some younger parents nervously corralled their toddlers away from the rocks edges, feeling grateful that my husband and I were out of that stage that our kids, at six and eight, could navigate their physical space with more confidence. Dont get me wrong: I was still terrified as I saw my two bo

36、ys jump between the slippery rocks. “No running,” I said again and again. “Stay away from all those edges.”But I soon relaxed, and we were all having fun, splashing in the pools, my kids laughing as my husband dunked his head under the cold running water. Then, seconds later, every fear Id ever had

37、rose to the surface.I turned and saw my son Wyatt sitting down between two boulders（大圆石） in a fast-moving stream. I yelled at him to get out. He yelled back something that I couldnt hear, and then he disappeared over the edge.My husband was already sprinting down the rocks. I finally looked. Wyatt w

38、as sitting uphe was alive. My biggest fear was erased.While everyone else looked on from a distance, too afraid or unbothered to help, a lady with a mask didnt hesitate. In fact, by the time I had climbed down the rocks and my husband had pulled Wyatt out of the water, she had already called 911.Par

39、agraph1:She told me that she was a nurse. _Paragraph2:The rescue team came. _参考答案：She told me that she was a nurse.She gave Wyatt a red, white, and blue striped towel to put under his head. She implored us to keep him still and on his back in case he had injured his spinal cord. I finally had the wh

40、erewithal to ask her name. “Lisa,” she said. “And Im not leaving you.”She looked at me so deeply, as if she were trying to take every bit of energy, love, and strength in her body and push it out through the only part of her face I could see.她告诉我她是一名护士。她给了怀亚特一条红、白、蓝条纹的毛巾放在他的头底下。她恳求我们让他保持不动，以防他伤了脊髓。我

41、终于有了钱问她的名字了。“丽莎，”她说。“我不会离开你。她深深地看着我，仿佛她想把身体里的一切能量、爱和力量，从我唯一看到的脸推出去。The rescue team came.They took Wyatt out of the park on a stretcher. An ambulance took us to the small local hospital where he was undergoing tests and scans. As soon as I knew that Wyatt was going to be OK, my thoughts fell to Lisa.

42、 If she had not stepped up, would someone else have done so? Perhaps. But it was her. She was the one who went toward the unthinkable instead of turning away.救援队来了。他们用担架把怀亚特带出了公园。一辆救护车把我们送到当地的小医院，他正在那里接受检查和扫描。我一知道怀亚特会没事，我的思绪就落到丽莎身上了。如果她没有站起来，还有其他人会这样做吗？也许吧。但那是她。她是那个走向不可想象的事情而不是转身离开的人。例2：火灾救老人阅读下面短文,

43、根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。The event that stands out in Toms memory happened one morning when Tom was only ten years old. He was at home with his elder sister Jane. Tom was doing his homework when he heard raised voices. At first he thought nothing of it since customers in the motorcycle shop directly b

44、elow their flat often became loud, but he soon realized this time it was different.“Quick!Quick!Remove the motorcycles from the shop.” someone yelled.Then a thick burning smell filled the air. When Tom opened the front door of their flat to investigate, a thick cloud of smoke greeted him. The motorc

45、ycle shop had caught fire and people were running and crying. Jane, who had been playing the violin in her room, hurried to the living room. They rushed out of the door and along the corridor(走廊)through the smoke.They were heading towards the stairway at the far end of the corridor when Jane suddenl

46、y stopped.She turned around and headed back the way they came. Tom had no idea what she was doing, but he followed her.Jane had suddenly remembered the lady in her 70s who lived next door to them, who they called Makcik. Jane began banging on Makciks door, but got no answer. As the smoke thickened around them, Tom could see many of their neighborssome still in their pyjamasrunning for safety. The thought of fear crossed his mind. “She would have run for safety like everyone