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1、读后续写：历险型Part1：经典例文（森林遇险）1Part2：历险类细节描写3海上遇难3洪水5地震5火灾5受伤6丛林逃生7Part3：历险类故事构造“三大套路”8套路一：恶劣环境要烘托8套路二：转折思维技巧好8套路三：万能升华要牢记9Part4：灵活应用10例1：山洞遇险10Part5：高考真题再现12真题1：爸爸与我森林遇险【2018年6月浙江卷】12真题2：旅游途中遇狼【2017年6月浙江卷】14Part1：经典例文（森林遇险）Bradywas a recently retired search andrescuedog.He was not happy and missed his ow

2、ner Al because Al had gone out on a rescue mission without him. Als nephew Steve took Brady along when he and his friend Zach went on a overnight hike. But suddenly Steve and Zach smelled something burning and they realized that lightning had set the woods onfire.Wind-blown flame had leaped from the

3、 top of one tree to another. The long dry summer had turned the forest into a tinderbox(火绒箱) and the thunderstorm wasnt helping much. It had more wind and lightning than rain. ZachpulledSteve s arm. “Lets go! We can make it back tothe riverwe crossed today.” Steve pulled Bradys leash（皮带）and their he

4、ads down against the strong fire-wind, they hurried down the path they had followed earlier. The air wasfull of smoke，and pine branches broke from burning trees with a crisp sound. Steve kept his eyes on the route. All they had to do was to make it down to the riverBradybarked a sharp warning. Ahead

5、 of them lay a dense curtain of smoke across the path. Theyd never make it through that. They would have to find anotherescape route. The dog was pulling at his leash trying to draw them away from the smoke. This was what Brady wastrainedto do, and yet Steve was uneasy. It seemed to him they were mo

6、ving away from the river.Brady lifted his head and smelled the smoky wind. Suddenly, the dog ran away and disappeared. The boys yelled and shouted for him，but he didnt come back.They had no choice but to leave him behind. Heartsick, Steve and Zach went up a slope（斜坡）. He couldnt blame Brady for pani

7、cking and escaping. He himself wanted to run even though he didnt have a clue which way.They hadnt gone far when there was a familiar bark, and Brady came running toward him.注意：1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1：“Whereve you been?” Ste

8、ve cried. Paragraph 2：Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees. 参考范文:Paragraph 1“Whereve you been?Steve cried Brady stopped directly in front of him and started pushing him back toward the slope theyd just climbed. When Steve still didnt get it, Brady grabbed the boys jeans and pulled h

9、arder. The message was clear, but Steve hesitated. Of course he remembered what his uncle had said about Brady saving his life, but that had been a long time ago. Was he still sharp enough to get them through this? Brady pulled again,urgently, “0K,big guy,” Steve decided.Paragraph 2Brady led them ba

10、ck down the slope and into the trees. Several times the big dog stopped to get his escape route. Often he changed direction. How long theyd walked Steve had no idea. He just held onto Bradys leash with one hand and kept putting one foot in front of the other. He was almost numb when he heard the won

11、derful sound of rushing water. The river! With a yell the boys ran unsteadily forward until they jumped in cool,running water. “Brady, you did it!”第1段： “你去哪儿了？ 史蒂夫叫道，布雷迪直接停在他面前，开始把他推回他们刚爬上去的斜坡。 当史蒂夫仍然没有得到它，布雷迪抓住男孩的牛仔裤，并拉得更用力。 信息很清楚，但史蒂夫犹豫了。 他当然记得他叔叔说过布雷迪救他的命，但那是很久以前的事了。 他还能让他们度过难关吗？ 布雷迪又紧急地拉了一下，“0K，

12、大个子，”史蒂夫决定. 第2段： 布雷迪带领他们回到斜坡上，进入树林。 这只大狗停了好几次，以获得他的逃跑路线。 他经常改变方向。 他们走了多久，史蒂夫不知道。 他只是用一只手抓住布雷迪的皮带，继续把一只脚放在另一只前面。 听到哗哗的水声，他几乎麻木了。 河流！ 孩子们大喊一声，摇摇晃晃地向前跑，直到他们跳进凉爽的流水里。 “布雷迪，你做到了！”Part2：历险类细节描写海上遇难天气*The sky is darkened with gloomy clouds. Lighting flashed across the sky, followed by a clap of thunder. Mi

13、nutes later, there came a downpour.*The wind was howling and the waves smacked repeatedly against her face.海上*The sea boiled in the storm.*The angry waves crashed against the side of the boat, with water splashing here and there.船*Leaned sideways*The ship was rocking up and down in the restless sea.

14、*The crashing waves filled their boat with water faster than they could empty it.救援人*But then, as I looked in the distance, I discovered a series of three or four big waves heading towards the shore.*Without thinking, I ran down into the street, holding my body board on the way and shouted at a stra

15、nger to call the police.*Patting their faces to wake them up, I continuously told them to be strong.遇难者*She calmed down to keep the rhyme of breathing so that she could breathe evenly.*I felt extremely exhausted（apparently worn-out）*Looking at the vast sea, I felt a sense of fear surging through my

16、whole body.*Salt stinging my eyes, I could hardly tell how long I could hold on.*But I still shouted in my head: keep on.*He saw an airplane flying overhead. But with no flashlight, he was invisible in the vast ocean.*He took off his yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and fla

17、gged them if they came back.*In sheer desperation, I finally caught sight of some boats with lifeguards on them heading towards us. Thank you, lord.*Quite soon, I felt strong arms pull me out of the sea onto the board.(摘自杭二中参考答案)救援过程*Then he dragged her upper from the water,.救人未遂*He held her hand ti

18、ghtly but a huge wave separated them.*He fought the waves and strove to catch her, but failed, she was drifted away.其他*Energy returning magically, he rose to his feet and took immediate action.*They waved the flag and screamed for help.*Bear Grylls caught sight of the shabby boat and two men in rags

19、.*They were taken on board and thanked Edward over and over again.*From them on, he made up his mind never to take any risks unless he could ensure tight safety. Because it was simply his stubborn conducts and his ignorance of.that.洪水*The water kept rising. Two hours passed. He did not dare to move

20、an inch for fear of slipping.*Another two hours later, he noticed that the water level went down enough that he could try an escape. *Stiff from keeping in one position for hours, he slowly unfolded his bodies.*Cautiously and steadily, he made his way forward to the entrance.地震*Deep cracks opened up

21、 in the streets.*The wall caved in.*Huge buildings collapsed, sending clouds of dust into the air.*The animals grew restless as if in anticipation of a disaster.火灾屋子*Fanned by the wind, the house was bathed in an immense stream of flames.*The house was bathed in an immense stream of flames.*The roar

22、ing fire swallowed the whole house.烟*Dense smoke swirled and billowed and the fumes made her choke for a moment.*The thick smoke caused him to stumble blindly around, burned his eyes, and made it impossible to breathe.人的反应*Through the office door, she saw flames climbing up the wall.*Both of them we

23、re coughing and their eyes were stinging.*She clung to her, terrified by the leaping flames.*Turning, he fought through the smoke and ran out of the house.*Shielding her noise from the smoke, she prompted him to run for safety.*When he opened the front door of their flat to investigate, a thick clou

24、d of smoke greeted him.*By then, with their mouths choked with smoke, both of them feel the heat engulfing everything.受伤*She turned around, only to find Tim beaten to the ground in extreme danger.*Afraid and merely desperate, she rushed towards him.*With all her strength, she instantly seated him on

25、to the car.*He pulled her towards him with full strength.*Her body was limp and she was not breathing.*He scooped her into his arms and struggled to feet.伤情*He was attacked violently and covered with scratches.*There was a trickle of blood from the wound.治疗*She applies a clean towel to the wound and

26、 press firmly on it to stop the bleeding.*Wash and stitched the wound*Apply some medicine to his wound丛林逃生意识到不见了*He scanned around the forest for her. “Eurus?” he shouted again.*her heart dropped as he realized that she was gone.*he spared no effort to find her, but it was all in vain.*Thinking back

27、 to all of the good times that he had shared with her, he realized that he loved her and he wanted nothing more than for her to come back.逃生*He tried to get on faster, but he could not find the way out of the bush.*He was getting tired because Ceil was too heavy to carry for a young boy.*At last he

28、came into an open space with a large pool in the middle.*He quickly soaked his clothes, for the approaching smoke could choke them.救援*He immediately ran out for searching, sb running after him.*My poor children, the flame could have burnt them to death. thought sb desperately.*While they walked on w

29、ithout hope, there came a sweet voice. ”Dad!”it was from sb. *Sb jumped with joy and hugged his kids.*She could hear water tricking somewhere at a distance.Part3：历险类故事构造“三大套路”套路一：恶劣环境要烘托1. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats， got on our horses， and headed slowly towards the mountains（慢慢地向山走去

30、）. （17年11月浙江高考 ）2. Never had I seen such a lovely creature in my life, so I followed its track without thinking twice（不假思索地追随它的足迹）.（17年11月浙江高考 ）3. In the process of seeking for it, I was totally immersed in the charm of nature（完全沉浸在大自然的魅力中）. （17年11月浙江高考 ）4. Whats worse, he didnt have any food or wat

31、er with him, let alone his cell phone or other supplies（更不要说他的手机和其他日用品）. （江苏省如皋中学2021届高三第一学期教学质量调研试）5. We were in the middle of nowhere, wearing only underwear, with our supplies burnt into ashes（把我们的物品烧成灰烬）, including our cellphones. （湖北省宜昌市第二中学2021届高三起点考试英语试题）套路二：转折思维技巧好例如，故事中我们迷路了，正在想办法如何脱离困境。Sud

32、denly it occurred to us that we could keep to the track to guide us back.But it was getting darker and darker, thus making it increasingly difficult for us to make out the road.（突然我们想到我们可以坚持小路引导我们回去。但天色越来越暗，使我们走道路越来越困难。）解析：这个例子属于“正”变“负”的模式。迷路后，想到了办法，属于“正向”，但是外在环境不允许：天色太晚。属于“负向”。【素材积累】1. Ultimately,

33、we were back, safe and sound（安然无恙）. （17年11月浙江高考 ）2. We jumped into the warm vehicle and the forester drove us to the ranger station（开车送我们去巡逻站）, where we were given clothes and were able to call our parents.（湖北省宜昌市第二中学2021届高三起点考试英语试题）套路三：万能升华要牢记需要牢记，历险类的文章不要无缘无故拔高主题，一般的主题词是“勇敢”、“克服困难”，当然还有一个万能的表达“这是一

34、次难忘的经历”。万能句1：That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever. 那天是如此难忘，它将永远留在我的记忆。 遇到危险并且最终成功脱险的经历，想必对我们每个人来说一定是一生中难忘的经历。所以这个句子使用的场合还是挺多的。句子中使用了so.that的句式结构：如此.以至于。unforgettable是一个形容词，表示“无法忘记的”。万能句2：Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty

35、 came in the way. 直到那时，我才意识到，正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。遇到危险后，勇敢面对，才能解决问题。这个句子突出了“勇敢”这个核心，这在“脱险型”的故事里，是非常恰当的。这句话使用了倒装的结构和强调结构结合的方式，也属于高分亮点句。【素材积累】1. Sitting in the guestroom, I found it really blissful to be accompanied by our beloved ones（有我们所爱的人陪伴真的很幸福）.（17年11月浙江高考 ）2. Despite feeling weak, Nicholas was general

36、ly in a good condition,and he was really happy as he was carried back to the ski resort to reunite with his family（和他的家人团聚）.（江苏省如皋中学2021届高三第一学期教学质量调研试）3.As our van chugged(发动机缓慢运转时)发出突突声) down the freeway, I thought this trip might not be so bad after all. Good-bye, regular old summer vacation. Hell

37、oTrip of a Lifetime（一生一次的旅程）?（2021.03 十校联盟续写讲评）Part4：灵活应用例1：山洞遇险阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Two months ago, my friend Lisa, Harry and I, planned to do something adventurous, so we decided to explore a deep cave in the outskirt of our city with some food, water, torches and most importantly

38、our cell phones. But things were not going well. We could not find any vehicle to drop us there. At long last, we managed to find a taxi which took us to the outskirt of the city. Another evidence of bad luck was that Harry had left his cell phone at home.After we got out of the taxi, some of the lo

39、cals told us the way to the cave. The cave looked very attractive yet still mysterious: the cave was so dark, and the tiny sounds made by the insects and animals could be heard properly, pulling us into the cave with some unknown supernatural power. As we were moving forward we made marks on the roc

40、ks along our path to remind us of the exit of the cave. And we always kept our mobiles in switch on mode to contact each other in case we got separated and even worse, lost in the cave.As we were moving forward, Harry felt that somebody was following our footsteps but he left his intuition to a joke

41、. When we reached in the deep of the cave, we lost our way and gradually the fog spread everywhere and we were not able to see each other properly. All of us got very scared of what was happening around us. Suddenly, we noticed that Harry was not with us and then we vaguely heard a shout from the de

42、pth of the cave and we thought it was Harry, so we started searching for him. But our torches were left no use in such thick fog.续写词数应为150左右Paragraph 1:So we groped our way towards the direction of the shout._Paragraph 2:After we reunited with Harry, we tried to find the way out._【答案】So we groped ou

43、r way towards the direction of the shout. Frightened as we were, we still made up our mind to search for Harry. Hardly can we see anything in the completely dark situation, so we had to feel our way to search Harry with all strength. Slowly and cautiously moving forward, we held our hands tightly in

44、 order not to be separated. With the voice approaching, we realized we would meet Harry immediately. Fortunately, when finding Harry sitting on the ground, we sighed with a relief.After we reunited with Harry, we tried to find the way out. Without hesitation, we decided to hunt for these marks which

45、 we had made before. “I get it!” Harry screamed. Looking up quickly, we found these clear marks easily. It was with the help of these marks that we quickly found the exit. When walking out of the cave, we knew we were saved. From this experience, what we learnt was that it was dangerous to explore t

46、he unknown word without a fully detailed plan.【解析】【分析】本文是一篇记叙文，讲述了作者和小伙伴们一起去探索一个位于城市郊区的山洞。山洞里面太黑又有雾，所以Harry和我们走散了。当听到Harry的呼救后，我们一起找到了Harry，最终逃离了山洞。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“所以我们摸索着朝着呼喊的方向走去。”可知，第一段可描写我们是如何在山洞中寻找Harry的。由第二段首句内容“我们和Harry重逢后，我们试图找到出路。”可知，第二段可描写我们利用之前所做的记号逃离山洞的过程。2.续写线索：听到声音寻找Harry找到Harry寻找出口逃离山洞领悟感受3. 词类激活行为类寻找：hunt for/search for/ find大叫：sc