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1、四级备考写作经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用大学英语四级作文v评分标准v历年真题、写作原则及方法v起承转合v写作技巧v常见错误v实战练习经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用理论篇v写作部分要求考生用英语进行短文写作，思想表达准确、意义连贯、无重大语法错误。v重点考察的技能:vA 思想表达 vB 篇章组织vC 语言运用 vD 写作格式经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损

2、失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用思想表达v1.表达中心思想v2.表达重要或特定信息v3.表达观点、态度等经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用篇章组织v4.围绕所给的题目叙述、议论或描述，突出重点v5.连贯地组句成段，组段成篇经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用语言运用v6.运用恰当的词汇v7.运用正确的语法v8.运用合适的句子结构v9.使用正确的标点符号v10.运用衔接手段表达句间关系

3、(如对比、原因、结果、程度、目的等)经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用写作格式v11.运用正确的符合英语表达习惯的写作格式 经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用评分原则v1.CET作文题采用总体评分(Global Scoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(Reward Scores),而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。v2.从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目

4、所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否 切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而合适地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用v2分：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。v5分：基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。v8分：基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。v11分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。v14

5、分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。v(注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分。)v字数不足应酌情扣分。v各分数段范文经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attractionv I feel it a great honor to be your tour guide today.First,on behalf of my company,I warmly welc

6、ome all my distinguished guests from Australia to visit Shanghai and the Oriental Pearl TV Tower.v Located on the Huangpu River,the Oriental Pearl TV Tower is now the symbol of the city.Built in 1994 and opened to the public in 1995,it is now the highest building in Shanghai and the third highest in

7、 Asia.The Tower has a quite unique structure and consists of 3 large balls and 5 small balls.Inside the balls,you can have a birds eye view of the city.v Our schedule for the trip to the TV Tower is as follows:you have an hour from 9:30-10:30am to experience the history of Shanghai on the first floo

8、r.Then well assemble in the middle of the hall at 10:30 and have another hour to overlook at the beautiful city sceneries in the middle ball.Finally please do remember to go to the top ball at 11:30 to enjoy your lunch.v Thanks for listening.Have a good time!(14/184)经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其

9、受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attractionv Welcome to this beautiful city Hangzhou.Im very honored to be your tour guide to show you the most charming scenery of the city.Im sure you will never forget the wonderful visit I will lead you to.v Now,Im going to give yo

10、u the introduction of todays schedule.In the morning,we will visit the Lingyin Temple.Its one of the most famous temple in China because of its long history and good location.v After visiting the temple,we plan to have lunch at the restaurant near the West Lake.There,you will have the real tradition

11、al Chinese food and enjoy the landscape of West Lake.In the afternoon,we will go to Leifeng Tower which has an romantic Chinese love story which I will tell you during the visiting.After dinner,I will show you the most well-known scenery-West Lake.You can boating in the lake and enjoy the beautiful

12、views.v What do you think of the plan?If you have some advise,please tell me.I will arrange it and give you a most comfortable trip.(11/179)经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attractionv Welcome everyone come to visit Shanghai.Im the to

13、ur guide.Im glad to introduce you the city where I grow up.v Now the following is the schedule for the day where we will go.At first,well go to the Shanghai Museum at 9 am.I believe youll like there.You can learn some history of China as you are interest in our country.Secondly,at noon,well go to th

14、e Yu Garden and have a rest.You can not only buy something that you like but also have something to eat.The food is so delicious that Im sure that everyone will like.At 2 pm well go to the next site which is also the last one today.The last place is Pudong.Youll find the development of Shanghai is f

15、ast.And at about 4 pm,it will be end and well go back to the hotel.v I hope everyone will have a good time today.If you meet with troubles,you can turn to me for help at any time.(8/173)经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用A Brief Introduction to a Tourist AttractionvHell

16、o!Everybody.Welcome to here!Today Im yours guide.I believe we will have a good trip.vWe will go to the An Ji.An Ji is very beautiful city in Zhe Jiang.I think you will be intrest in it.The days plan is so much.First,We will go to the ZhuZhong Yuan at 8:00 am.There have so much and vary of ZhuZi.At 1

17、1:30 am,We will eating lunch.vAnd at the afternoon,We will go to the Canglong BaiPu.At 1:00 pm in the mountain,a river still around it.The river so clear and cold.We can see some small fish in the river.Walk along the stone road.We will be seeing the view beside of the back to hotel.Later,You can ea

18、ting the dinner in the hotel.This is the plan of today.Now,Are you have some questions?If have then asked me,And I will give you a perfect answer!vSo I hope and believe that We will have a good trip.(5/173)经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用A Brief Introduction to a Tou

19、rist AttractionvIm very glad to your come to Shanghai,Welcome.we are visit Jin Mao Building today.vJin Mao Building stand Lujiazui Finanent Trade,in Pu Dong.The shopping and eating all above in Lujazui Finanent Trade.Zheng Da Guang Chang,do Fang Ming Zhu etc.vJin Mao Building is 800 miller-higher,Ji

20、n Mao Kai Yue Hotel in it.Its the highest for Building in Shanghai.At 88 stairs,We can look all of Shanghai,Jin Mao Building is steel above all,glass above with.Its very clear in the Suny.vSome business office in here,so its the famous Finanent Trade in Shanghai.vWe are visiting Jin Mao Building can

21、 introduce peoples living in Shanghai.vIm wish your visit happy today.(2/121)返回经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用历年真题v2010/6vDue Attention Should Be Given to Spelling 1.如今不少学生在 英语学习中不重视拼写2.出现这种情况的原因3.这种现象导致的结果经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受

22、服务的费用v2009/12vCreate a Green Campus v1.建设绿色校园十分重要v2.绿色校园不仅指绿色环境v3.为了建设绿色校园我们应该 经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用v2009/6vFree admission to museumsv越来越多的博物馆免费开放的目的是什么?v也会带来一些问题v你的看法经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用v2008/12vDisposable Plas

23、tic Bags 1.一次性塑料袋的使用2.使用一次性塑料袋带来的问题3.限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用v2008/6vRecreational activity v1.娱乐活动多种多样2.娱乐也可能有危害性3.作为大学生，我的看法。经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用v2007/12vElectives on campusv1、各大学开设了各种各样的选修课v2、学生因为各种原

24、因选择了不同的选修课v3、以你自己为例经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用v2007/6vAn introduction to a clubv1、本社团的主要活动内容v2、参加本社团的好处v3、如何加入本社团经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用v2006/12vthe CCTV Spring Festival Gala v1.许多人喜欢在除夕夜观看春节晚会v2.但有些人提出取消春节晚会。v3.我的看法。经营者

25、提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用v2006/6vAn announcement for a voluntary programv1、校学生会组织一次暑假志愿活动现招聘志愿者v2、本次志愿者活动的目的、内容及安排v3、报名条件和联系方式经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用v2005/12 vShould the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?v1.名校校园正成为旅游新

26、热点v2.校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同v3.我认为经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用v10=2+8v8=(议论文,记叙文,说明文,etc.)v2=(应用文)经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用写作的原则v抛开各类文体作文的写作技巧等理论不说,单就实用的原则来看，写四级作文应注意的主要方面有五:v1.切题v2.干净v3.减少错误v4.开门见山v5.闪光点。经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费

27、者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用切题vIs it really easy for you?vExamples:vBenefits of Sports（运动的好处）vHow university graduates find work 经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用干净v作文干不干净已不再是一个战术性小事，而成了一个战略性问题。v记住，把你的作文写得干净整齐就等于向阅卷人员发送一个信息“老师，我尊重你的辛勤劳动!”经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的

28、，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用减少错误vPlay safe(求稳,小心行事)经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用开门见山vExample:Good Health vImportance of good health Ways to keep fit.My own practices.vWith the rapid development of our economy，with the improvement of our living

29、standard，with more and more peoples realization of the importance of good health，now people are attaching greater importance to their health.(X)经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用闪光点v单词、句子结构、语法、词组,或是具体的事例等,都可称得上是一篇作文的闪光点.经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费

30、者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用写作过程v审题并列出提纲（约5分钟）开始写:（1）切题（2）干净（3）少犯错误（4）开门见山（5）闪光点（约20分钟）交卷前检查（1）拼写错误（2）语法错误等（约5分钟)返回经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用实战篇v确定文章的段落结构v一般来说，一篇完整的四级应试作文应该包括三个部分:开头(起)、中间(承、转)、结尾(合)经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用vWill E-b

31、ooks replace traditional books?v1).随着信息技术的发展，电子图书越来越多v2).有人认为电子图书会取代传统图书，理由是v3).我的看法经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用vPara.1：Phenomenon:ubiquitous E-books nowadays/E-books become more popularvReasons:the development of information technology(IT)vExamples:E-products/e-

32、based productse-mails,e-tickets,e-tests,e-books etc.经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用vPara.2：Some persons view:E-books will replace traditional books.vReasons:advantages of E-books;disadvantages of traditional booksvExamples:read online without payment;immediate readi

33、ng newly headline information经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用vPara.3：(possible version 1)vMy view:agreevReasons:advantages of E-books;(convenient and accessible;easily storing and place-saving;easy-reading;environment protection)vExamples:bamboo-based books replaced

34、by paper-based books经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用v(possible version 2)vMy view:disagreevReasons:advantages of traditional booksvExamples:reading traditional books is good for eyes/healthy经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用v(possible v

35、ersion 3)vMy view:(neither totally agree nor totally disagree)coexistvReasons:both has its advantages of existingvExamples:young people like E-books,while the old like traditional books;coexisting of camera and painting经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用v起承转合句型或词组v多样化句型

36、v连接词经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用起vWhen asked about/When it comes to/Faced with,some people claim/think/argue/believe that,but/while others(differently)vNowadays there is much/general discussion as to.vWith the development/improvement/growth of,vNow,it is commonly

37、/widely/increasingly believed/thought/held/acknowledge that,vAccording to a recent survey/investigation/poll,vA recent statistics shows that vHave you ever thought/wondered?vSuppose v A proverb says,vAs everyone knows,.经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用vA proverb says.

38、At present.As the proverb says.Currently.Generally speaking,.Now,.In general,.On the Whole.It is clear that.Recently.It is often said that.Without doubt,.经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用承vThose who hold.vIt is true that vTo be sure vFirst/Firstly vThe main/leading/un

39、derlying/root/primary/chief/essential.经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用vFirst(of all),.Moreover,.Firstly,.No one can deny that.In the first place,.Obviously.To begin with,.Of course,.Also,.Similarly,.At the same time.Therefore,we should realize that.Certainly.There is

40、 no doubt that.In addition,.Whats more,.In fact.It can be easily proved that.Meanwhile.经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用转vIt sounds like a good/attractive idea(suggestion),but they fail to understand/see/notice.vThere is probably an element of truth in the arguments(i

41、deas),but they ignore a more important(basic)fact vCloser examination/analysis,however,suggests /shows that this argument(claim,idea)may not be supported by the following evidence(facts,examples,statistics).vClose(careful)examination(analysis)of these arguments(ideas,suggestions),however,would revea

42、l(suggest,prove)how flimsy(不足信的，不严密)(fallacious（靠不住的）,groundless（没有根据的）)they are.经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用vHowever logical(sound,forcible(有说服力)these arguments may be,they dont make sense(only skim the surface of the problem)when is viewed the other way(taken i

43、nto consideration).vAs opposed to(Contrary to)the widely(commonly,generally)held idea(belief,view),new studies(facts)challenge(fail to justify)the opinion(view).vGood/Superior/Wonderful as.,it has its own disadvantages/it brings its own problems.经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品

44、的价款或接受服务的费用vThey may be right about,but they seem to neglect /fail to mention/take into account vIn all the discussion and debate over,one important/basic fact is ignored/overlooked/neglected.vIt is true that/Admittedly,but it is unlikely/it doesnt follow/it doesnt mean that vThere is an element of

45、truth in these arguments/statements,but they ignore a deeper and more basic/essential/important fact/factor vIn many cases,however,vAs far as is concerned,经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用v But.Still,.But the problem is not so simple.There is a certain amount of truth

46、 in this,but we still have a problem with regard to.However,.To our surprise,.Nevertheless,.Unfortunately.On the other hand,.Yet difference will be found and that is why I feel that.Others may find this to be true,but I do not.I think.经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用

47、合vExperience/Evidence/All the facts suggest/show/demonstrate/indicate that vFrom what has been discussed above/Taking into account all these factors,we may safely draw/reach/come to/arrive/the conclusion thatvIn conclusion/To sum up/In summary/In short/To conclude.经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到

48、的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用vIt is important/necessary/essential that effective/proper/powerful actions/measure/remedies should be taken to vAbove all,In brief,.Accordingly,.In conclusion,.All in all,.In other words,it is hard to escape the conclusion that.As a consequence,.In short,.As I have sho

49、wn/said/stated/.In sum,.In summary,.As has been noted,.Obviously,.By so doing,.On the whole,.Consequently,.Presumably,.Eventually,.To conclude,.Finally,.To sum up,.In a word,.To summarize,.返回经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用v 1)定语从句(限定性和非限定性)vThere are many reasons wh

50、y I want to study in your university.vIt is estimated that tens of billions of yuan is spent on cigarettes every year in our country,which is a huge waste.v2)状语从句(时间，原因，地点，条件，让步等)vWhen the man is enjoying the cigarette,the smoke becomes a monster(怪物)which will devour him.vWhatever the reason,there a