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1、公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司读后续写：助人型读后续写：助人型.读后续写：助人类（故事构造“三部曲”）-2023年新高考英语读后续写提分技能公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司Part1：经典例文（披萨店员工救人）Part1：经典例文（披萨店员工救人）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为 150 左右。左右。When the employees at the Dominos pizza place in Salem,Oregon,ha

2、dntreceived any order from Kirk Alexander for more than 2 weeks,they knew somethingwasnt right.Kirk was a loyal customer and the staff all knew him.So it was naturalthat they got worried when they had no news about him.Their concern saved his life.Sarah Fuller,the general manager at the Dominos bran

3、ch,said that Kirk,whowas 48 years old,had been a loyal customer since 2009.“He orders every day,orevery other day,”Sarah said.Normally,his order came up on the screen because he ordered online.So we sawit came across the screen and we were thinking,“Oh,Kirks order.”After a few dayswithout a single o

4、rder,Sarah and the staff started to worry.Afew Dominos drivers had mentioned that they hadnt seen his order comeacross their screen in a while.Sarah checked the system and saw that no order hadcome in 11 days.So they decided to investigate.Sarah decided to send Tracy Hamblen,a deliver driver,to Kirk

5、s place.When hegot there,he immediately knew something waswrong.While the lights and TV were on,Kirk didnot come to the door.Additionally,his phonewent directly to voicemail.So Tracy immediatelycalled 911.Para.1:When the police arrived at the place,_Para.2:公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司Afew days later,Kirk

6、was released from the hospital._【参考答案】Para1:When the police arrived at the place,they heard a cry for help from the insideof the house.Inside,they found Kirk,who was in need of immediate medical help.Due to the quick actions of Tracy,Kirk is in stable condition at the Salem Hospital.The Dominos empl

7、oyees received a lot of praise online for their unbelievablethoughtfulness.But they said that it was just part of their job and they were just doingtheir job.当警察到达现场时，他们听到了来自房子内部的呼救声。在里面，他们发现了需要立即得到医疗帮助的柯克。由于特蕾西的快速行动，柯克在塞勒姆医院的情况很稳定。多米美乐的员工令人难以置信的体贴在网上得到了很多赞扬。但他们说，这只是他们工作的一部分，他们只是在做他们的工作。Para2:Afew d

8、ays later,Kirk was released from the hospital.He came to theDominos personally with some homemade cookies to say thank-you to Sarah andthe Dominos staff.The Dominos mentioned that“Caring for customers should notbe taken at face value.We should remember that the customers determine the successof our

9、company and in turn we can also have an impact on their lives,small or big.”Kirks story has made this pizza shop even more popular in the community,and it hasreceived more orders ever since.几天后，柯克出院了。他亲自带着一些自制的饼干来到多米诺餐厅，对莎拉和多米诺餐厅的工作人员说声谢谢。多米美乐提到“照顾客户不应该是表面价值。”我们应该记住，客户决定了我们公司的成功，反过来我们也可以对他们的生活产生影响，无

10、论大小。柯克的故事让这家披萨店在社区中更受欢迎，此后它收到了更多的订单。【解析】【分析】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个披萨店的员工，细心地发现近期没公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司有收到来自老顾客 Kirk 的订单，于是派人前去查看，发现 Kirk 生病并及时报警就医，确保了 Kirk 的安全。员工的善举为披萨店赢得了更多的称赞和订单。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“当警察赶到现场时，”可知，第一段可描写警察将 Kirk 送到医院的经过。由第二段首句内容“几天后，Kirk 出院了。”可知，第二段可描写 Kirk 出院后去披萨店感谢员工们拯救了他的生命以及该披萨店因为善意举

11、动而为自己赢得更多的订单和顾客。2.续写线索：呼救成功被救助感谢店员表达观点披萨店更受欢迎3.3.词汇激活4.行为类5.大声求救：cry for help/shout for help/scream for help6.受到赞扬：received a lot of praise/be praised greatly7.照顾，护理：caring for/taking care of/8.情绪类9.感谢：say thank-you/express appreciation/show appreciation/show hisgratitude/be grateful10.体贴：thoughtful

12、ness/being considerate11.【点睛】高分句型 1.Inside,they found Kirk,who was in need of immediatemedical help.(由关系代词 who 引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词 Kirk。)12.高分句型 2.We should remember that the customers determine the success ofour company and in turn we can also have an impact on their lives,small or big.(that引导宾语从句作 r

13、emember 的宾语。)公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司Part2：助人类故事构造三部曲第一步：困难描写（消极情绪+困难处境）Part2：助人类故事构造三部曲第一步：困难描写（消极情绪+困难处境）（1）消极情绪）消极情绪典型表达是：感到（这个可以有很多表达方式，并且可以结合在每一个环感到（这个可以有很多表达方式，并且可以结合在每一个环节中，可有非谓语动词形式和介词短语）节中，可有非谓语动词形式和介词短语）1.a flush of(表情绪的名词)=a wave of.=a feeling/sense of.一阵.2.joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/p

14、anic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/dispointment/guilt/shame.)3.(表情绪的名词)flooded over sb=swept over sb因因.颤抖颤抖tremble/shiver/shake(with fear,panic excitement,rage.)（2）进进一一步步细细节节描描写写典型是：流泪；心里想流流泪泪：1.Tears blurred ones eyes.泪眼模糊2.Ones eyes got misty.眼睛模糊了3.Ones eyes misted/dimmed with tears.泪

15、眼模糊4.be close to tears 几乎要哭了5.tears(roll down ones eyes/cheeks/face)泪水落下困困难难处处境境1.随着经济的衰退,镇上有些人失业了。他们的许多家庭都在努力维持生计。As the economy was in decline(经济衰退),some people in the town had lost theirjobs.Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet(使收支平衡).（2020.7 高考山东卷）2.有个男人卧病在床,他的妻子和儿子因为要照顾他而不能出

16、去工作。公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司There was a man sick in bed(卧病在床),his wife,who took care of him and could notgo out to work,and their little boy.（2020.7 高考山东卷）3.但是有一天，一场飓风袭击了当地，他的家被彻底摧毁了。But one day,a hurricane hit the area(台风袭击当地)where he lived,completelydestroying his home(完全摧毁他的家).第二步：助人过程呈现（想到办法+动作链）第

17、二步：助人过程呈现（想到办法+动作链）（1）突然有了一个想法：一句话表示想法）突然有了一个想法：一句话表示想法典型：某人想到典型：某人想到/明白明白.;有了主意有了主意1.It suddenly occurred to sb that 从句=It hit sb that 从句=It struck me that 从句=It dawned on sb that 从句2.(idea,thought.)occurred/cametosb.=.came/flashedintoonesmind=.crowded in ones mind3.Ones mind began to race（2）动动作作链链

18、然后他从卡车上拿到了一把锯子，从路边的一根大木头上砍了一段。我们把它翻过来，把他的千斤顶放在上面，我们开始做生意。Then he got a saw(锯子)fromthe truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road.We rolled it overand put his jack on top,and we were in business.第三步：皆大欢喜结局（感激+感动+升华）第三步：皆大欢喜结局（感激+感动+升华）（1）皆大欢喜：过了一段时间，事情有了最后的转折）皆大欢喜：过了一段时间，事情有了最后的

19、转折过了一段时间过了一段时间公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司1.not long after that,.=shortly afterwards,.=before long,.=It didnt takelong before 从句=It took some time before 从句不久,.2.for an instant/moment 一瞬间（2）有了结果）有了结果1.To ones surprise(delight)/Strangely enough,it turned out that 从句2.But on second thoughts,.但是转而一想，.3.But w

20、hat happened next was pure magic.接下来发生的非常奇妙（3）感感谢谢1.现在，我非常感谢她伸出援助之手。Now,I was definitelygrateful to her for extending a helping hand(伸出援手).（2021 届湖南长沙市一中高三月考三）2.Molly 和 Shawn 星期二见面了，她太感谢他了，所有人都为她付出了一切。Molly and Shawn met on Tuesday,and she says she couldnt thank him enough(非常感谢他)and everyone involve

21、d in for what they did for her.（4）感动）感动1.不必说，他们被深深地感动了，尤其是 Bernard，他终于找到了为家人赚钱的方法。Needless to say,theywere deeply moved(他们被深深地感动了),especiallyBernard who finally found a way to make money for hisfamily.（2020.7 高考山东卷）2.我这样一个完全陌生的人，如此关心他，这让他很感动，他说他愿意工作。公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司He was touched that I,a comp

22、lete stranger,cared so much about him(如此关心他)and said he was willing to work.3.刹那间，泪水涌上眼眶，我感动得说不出话来，我感到如此温暖，仿佛胸中有九个太阳。In a flash,with tears welling up in my eyes,I was touched beyondwords(感动得说不出话来).I felt so warm as if there were nine suns in my chest.4.我点点头表示感谢，眼睛里闪烁着抑制不住的泪水。I nodded in gratitude,ey

23、esglistening with held-back tears(眼睛因为强忍的泪水而闪耀).5.惊讶又感动，我盯着那张纸条，对我之前认为所有人都漠不关心的想法感到内疚。Stunned and moved(惊讶又感动),I stared at the note,feeling a pang of guiltabout my previous thought that all people were indifferent.（5）升升华华1.是爱让世界运转，Bernard 深深地感受到了这一点。It is lovethat makes the world go round（是爱让世界运转）an

24、d Bernard felt itdeep in his little heart.（2020.7 高考山东卷）2.每个人都很开心，很甜蜜，露出了一副洁白的牙齿。Everyonewas happy and sweet,exposing their sets of white teeth（露出他们洁白的牙齿）.（2020.7 高考山东卷）3.我决定把“爱”传递给别人，俗话说：“赠人玫瑰，手有余香”。I made up my mindto pass on“love”to others（传递爱给其他人）.Just as a saying goes:“Roses given,fragrance in

25、hand（赠人玫瑰，手有余香）.”4.从那天起，每次我遇到需要帮助的人时，我都会向他们伸出援手，希望把墨西哥家庭提供给我的这种善意传递给他们。From that day on,every time I meet公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司someone who needs help,I always reach out to them,hoping to pass on the kindness（希望传递善意）that Mexican family offered me.5.有时，一个小小的善举可能足以产生巨大的影响。Sometimes,a small act ofkindne

26、ss may be powerful enough to make a huge difference（会有很大不同）.Part3：助人场景描写一、帮助他人之后Part3：助人场景描写一、帮助他人之后I just looked at my friend with disbelief as he told the story of the first day wemet.Kyle had planned to kill himself over the weekend.He talked of how he hadcleaned out his locker so his Mom wouldnt

27、 have to do it later and was carrying hisstuff home.Meanwhile,I found he looked hard at me and gave me a littlesmile.Thankfully,I was saved.My friend saved me from doing the unspeakable,Iheard the gasp go through the crowd as this handsome,popular boy told us all abouthis weakest moment.When his eye

28、s caught mine,I was able to see tears shimmered inhis smiling eyes.我只是难以置信地看着我的朋友，他讲述了我们第一天见面的故事。凯尔计划周末消遣。他谈到了他是如何清理他的储物柜的，这样他的妈妈就不用再做了，然后把他的东西带回家了。同时，我发现他狠狠地看着我，给了我一个小小的微笑。“谢天谢地，我得救了。我的朋友不让我做那些无法形容的事，我听到人群中的喘息声，就像这个英俊、受欢迎的男孩告诉我们他最脆弱的时刻一样。当他的眼睛抓住我的眼睛时，我能看到他微笑的眼睛里闪烁着泪水。I smiled back in tears.Not unti

29、l that moment did I realize what big difference onesmall gesture had made to him.I even saw his Mom and Dad looking at me andsmiling that same grateful smile.It dawned on me that never should we underestimatethe power of our actions.With one small gesture we can change a persons life.For公众号：高中试卷君学科网

30、（北京）股份有限公司better or for worse.我笑着。直到那一刻，我才意识到一个小小的手势对他产生了多么大的不同。我甚至看到他的爸爸妈妈看着我，也带着同样感激的微笑。我意识到，我们永远不应该低估我们行动的力量。只要用一个小小的手势，我们就可以改变一个人的生活。为好或坏。二、发生水灾之后二、发生水灾之后The water kept rising,and there was no hope of rescue.The hours passed.Jasonand Andrew didnt dare to move for fear of slipping.They dozed off

31、and then jerkedthemselves awake.Every once in a while,one of them turned on his headlamp tocheck the water level.An hour later,the water level went down enough that theycould try an escape.Stiff from keeping in one position for 12 hours,they slowlyunfolded their bodies.Jason screamed in pain,but he

32、was determined not to let it stophim.水不断上涨，没有了救援的希望。几个小时过去了。杰森和安德鲁不敢动，因为害怕滑倒。他们打了个瞌睡，然后猛地清醒过来。每隔一段时间，其中一个人就打开他的前照灯检查水位。一个小时后，水位下降到足以让他们尝试逃跑。他们僵硬地保持在一个位置 12 小时，慢慢地展开他们的身体。杰森痛苦地尖叫着，但他决心不让它阻止他。Slowly but steadily,the group made their way forward.Still,each time Jasonmoved a leg,he cried out.Over the ne

33、xt 90 minutes,they made their way toward theentrance,at times in chest-high water.Now,in a passage that was high enough forthem to walkupright,Jason saw something flicker in the distance.Lights!I seelights!Jason shouted out.For the first time since entering the cave,over 20 hoursearlier,Jasons emoti

34、ons got the best of him and tears trickled down his cheeks.水不断上涨，没有了救援的希望。几个小时过去了。杰森和安德鲁不敢动，因为害怕滑倒。他们打了个瞌睡，然后猛地清醒过来。每隔一段时间，其中一公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司个人就打开他的前照灯检查水位。一个小时后，水位下降到足以让他们尝试逃跑。他们僵硬地保持在一个位置 12 小时，慢慢地展开他们的身体。杰森痛苦地尖叫着，但他决心不让它阻止他。三、发生误解之后三、发生误解之后As she reached in her baggage,she gasped with surp

35、rise.At that moment,in hersight came the packet of cookies,which had beenjust bought by her,unopened at all.Ashamed and feeling like a thief,she finally got that the cookies were not hers butbelonged to the man sitting next to her,who had calmly offered to share his lastcookie with her.A sudden rush

36、 of shy blood filling the face,she instinctively lookaround with the hope of finding the very man to make anapology.当她伸手拿行李时，她惊讶地喘了一口气。就在这时，她看到了她刚买的一包饼干，根本没有打开。她感到羞愧，感觉自己像个小偷，终于明白了这些饼干不是她的，而是属于坐在她旁边的男人，他平静地提出和她分享他的最后一块饼干。脸上突然涌满了害羞的鲜血，她本能地环顾四周，希望能找到那个男人来道歉。Surprisingly,she found the man sitting just

37、behind her.He was just looking upand met her eyes,also with a smile on his face.The woman was at an absolute loss butgave the man a nervous laugh in return.Witha quite open mouth,she was unable tosay any apology to him.Murmuring Sorry,sorry.It was I myself who was the realcookie thief.After a while,

38、she fell asleep on her seat with the plane flying steadily.The next day,when she arrived at her new company,the biggest surprise was waitingfor her.令人惊讶的是，她发现那个男人就坐在她身后。他只是抬头看了看她的眼公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司睛，脸上也带着微笑。女人完全不知所措，但却给了男人一声紧张的笑声作为回报。她张开嘴，不能向他道歉。“对不起，对不起。真正偷饼的是我自己。”过了一会儿，她在座位上睡着了，飞机平稳地飞着。第二天，当她

39、来到她的新公司时，最大的惊喜就是在等她。四、发生火灾之后四、发生火灾之后Tom noticed the flame was reaching up.Frozen with fear,he stood rooted to thespot.He comprehended the gravity of the situation and held Janes hand tightly.Bythen,both of them were coughing and their eyes were stinging.Time seemed to standstill,though they were pro

40、bably there for only two or three minutes.Tom begged Janeto run for safety as quickly as possible.Jane tried to shield her nose from the chokingsmoke and shook her head.She kept pounding against the door.Tom burst out crying.汤姆注意到火焰正在升起。他吓得僵住了，站在原地。他明白形势的严重性，紧紧地握住简的手。到那时，他们俩都在咳嗽，眼睛刺痛。时间似乎静止不动，虽然他们可能

41、只在那里两三分钟。汤姆恳求简尽快跑过去寻求安全。简想保护她的鼻子免受呛人的烟雾，摇了摇头。她不停地敲门。汤姆突然哭了起来。Luckily,some neighbors passing by stopped and offered help.A sense of strengthimmediately replaced the mounting fear and anxiety in Janes mind.She told them Ms.Makcik must be still in the room.They forced the door open with all their might

42、.Sureenough,Makcik was lying in bed,unconscious.She was carried downstairs and thenrushed to the hospital,where she finally came to herself.People in the neighborhoodfelt relieved and Jane and Toms joy was immense.幸运的是，一些邻居路过时停下来，并提供了帮助。一种力量感立刻取代了简心中日益增加的恐惧和焦虑。她告诉他们，马克奇克女士一定还在房间里。他们竭尽全力地强行打开了门。果然，马克

43、西克正躺在床上，失去了知觉。她被带下楼，然后被紧急送往医院，终于苏醒过来。附近的人都松了一口气，简和汤姆公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司非常高兴。五、感受善良之后五、感受善良之后Seeing what was going on,my dad put his hand in his pocket,pulled out a$20bill and dropped it on the ground.Then he picked it up and tapped the man on theshoulder and said,Excuse me,sir,this fell out of yo

44、ur pocket.The man turnedaround and saw the money.He knew what was going on,he looked straight into mydads eyes,took my dads hand in both of his,squeezed tightly onto the$20 bill,andwith his lip shaking and a tear running down his cheek,he replied,Thank you,thankyou,sir.This really means a lot to me

45、and my family.水不断上涨，没有了救援的希望。几个小时过去了。杰森和安德鲁不敢动，因为害怕滑倒。他们打了个瞌睡，然后猛地清醒过来。每隔一段时间，其中一个人就打开他的前照灯检查水位。一个小时后，水位下降到足以让他们尝试逃跑。他们僵硬地保持在一个位置 12 小时，慢慢地展开他们的身体。杰森痛苦地尖叫着，但他决心不让它阻止他。That day my father andI went back to our car and drove home without anytickets.We didnt go to the circus that night,when I asked dad

46、why he did so,Dadsaid,My child,it was a desperate,heartbreaking and embarrassing situation for afather.Surely he wasnt begging fora handout,but he reminded me of my father,whenI was young.He paused for a while,as if wandering in his memory.We shouldappreciate what we have obtained from life and seiz

47、e every opportunity to helpothers.We didnt go to the circus tonight,but we didnt go without.Now,who wants anice cream?。那天，我和我父亲回到我们的车里，没有任何票就开车回家了。那天晚上我们没有去马戏团，当我问爸爸为什么这么做时，爸爸说：“我的孩子，对一个父亲来说，这是一个绝望、令人心碎和尴尬的情况。他当然不是乞求施舍，但公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司他让我想起了我年轻时的父亲。”他停顿了一会儿，仿佛在记忆中徘徊。我们应该珍惜从生活中获得的东西，抓住一切机会帮助别人

48、。我们今晚没有去马戏团，但我们没有去。谁要冰淇淋？。六、感受幸福之后六、感受幸福之后The driver responded,It must feel good to be taken care of and protected like youare every day.Confused by what the driver talked about,she asked,What do youmean?The driver answered,Every morning in the past week,a fine lookinggentleman ina military uniform

49、has been standing across the street watching yougetting off the bus.He makes sure you cross the street safely and he watches until youenter your office building.Then he blows you a kiss,gives you a lite salute and walksaway.You are one lucky lady.司机回答说：“像每天一样被照顾和保护一定会感觉很好。她对司机所说的话感到困惑，她问道，“你是什么意思？”司

50、机回答说：“在过去的一周里，每天早上，一个漂亮的军装绅士都站在街对面看着你下车。他确保你安全过马路，他看着，直到你进入你的办公楼。然后他打了你一个吻，向你轻轻地敬礼，然后走开了。你是一位幸运的女士。”Tears of happiness poured down Susans cheeks.She stood motionlessly facingthe opposite side of the street as if gazing at someone.Although she couldntphysically see him,she definitely felt Marks prese