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1、open-endingcomposition图画式开放作文写作指导-审题和立意怎么理解怎么理解“开放开放”？vThe word“open”means the article is open to any reasonable possibilities.v思思维没有定式，要自没有定式，要自圆其其说05060708v共同特点:v结构特点:北京市北京市“开放作文开放作文”倾向于倾向于“就图论就图论事事”1.描述图画（描述图画（describe the picture）2.阐述你对图画的看法阐述你对图画的看法（explain how you understand it）/注意注意:在在“描述描述”和

2、和“阐述阐述”之间，添加一个之间，添加一个“过渡过渡”。也就是说，也就是说，“开放作文开放作文”应该分为三层，应该分为三层，分别是分别是“描述描述”、“过渡过渡”、“阐述阐述”。1.审主题审主题2.审人称审人称3.审时态审时态4.审要点审要点5.审逻辑层次审逻辑层次开放式作文的开放式作文的审题 In your English class,you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to your classmates how you understand it.1-审题:v结构：构：v人称人称:v时态:v要点要点:v可

3、能的立意:1.2.3.v图片要点信息：片要点信息：1、池子里有很多、池子里有很多鱼，但是表，但是表层鱼不多，不多，而且大小不同而且大小不同2、几个人正在离开、几个人正在离开3、一个人坚持不走，钓到了鱼、一个人坚持不走，钓到了鱼结构：构：人称：人称：时态：立意立意:1.describe the picture-图片描写片描写2.explain how you understand it-对于于图片的理解和自己的片的理解和自己的观点点图片描述用第三人称；图片描述用第三人称；自己观点用第一人称自己观点用第一人称一般现在时一般现在时?1.图中要离开的人中要离开的人钓到到鱼后放生，既后放生，既尝到了到了

4、钓鱼的的乐趣，又使趣，又使鱼儿快儿快乐地生活，体地生活，体现了人与了人与自然的和自然的和谐。2.There are plenty more fish in the sea.(in the perspective(展望展望)of people who are leaving)3.持之以恒才能成功持之以恒才能成功4.人人钓鱼 动物物灭绝 人破坏自然人破坏自然5.Dont Aim High!6.一家人在海一家人在海边玩。玩。7.湖太小不湖太小不值得垂得垂钓 优选立意:持之以恒才能成功持之以恒才能成功Perseverance is the key factor on the way to succes

5、s!习作作:In the picture,a boy is absorbed in fishing,while others are leaving,empty-handed.Finally his efforts pay off,and he gets one big fish.Actually,there are still more fish in the water.If those who are heading back could stay longer,they would surely get a good catch.So from the childrens differ

6、ent behaviors,we can see that success needs a persons patience because patience plays an important role in the process of achieving goals.Perseverance in what we are doing,and the gain we get will be beyond imagination just like the fish left in the pool.14图片构成、整体感觉图片构成、整体感觉2审图立意立意局部与整体的关系、多角度立意局部与整

7、体的关系、多角度立意立意立意1 1、应该看到事物的正反两个方面。失败是成功之母。应该看到事物的正反两个方面。失败是成功之母。立意立意2 2、应该看到事物的正反两个方面。以积极的态度对待生、应该看到事物的正反两个方面。以积极的态度对待生 活，生活就呈现出不同的一面。活，生活就呈现出不同的一面。立意立意3 3、眼睛所见到的不一定真实，应该透过现象看本质。学、眼睛所见到的不一定真实，应该透过现象看本质。学 会分析问题。会分析问题。立意立意4 4、眼睛所见到的不一定是事实，美丽的外貌也许徒有虚、眼睛所见到的不一定是事实，美丽的外貌也许徒有虚 名。我们应该注重内在美的修养。名。我们应该注重内在美的修养。

8、立意立意5 5、衰老是自然现象，老年人也有过年轻的季节。我们应、衰老是自然现象，老年人也有过年轻的季节。我们应 该尊重他们。该尊重他们。立意立意6 6、衰老是自然的现象，青年人应该抓紧时光，努力学习。、衰老是自然的现象，青年人应该抓紧时光，努力学习。优选立意、确定主题优选立意、确定主题优选立意、确定主立意、确定主题:*应该看到事物的正反两个方面。*以积极的态度对待生活，生活就呈现出不同的一面。习作:As can be seen in the picture,there is an old lady.But turn the picture upside down,it turns out to

9、 be a young princess.What a fantastic picture!So keep an optimistic mood to everything,and youll find something better and wonderful.For example,if you failed in an exam,dont be so upset.Try to think it from an another direction.This failure will remind you in next exam so that you wont make the sam

10、e mistake.So try to be an optimistic person and think things from different views.Then you find that impossible is nothing.1313开放式作文开放式作文审图立意三步立意三步骤一一审:二二审：三三审：图片构成、整体感觉图片构成、整体感觉局部与整体的关系、局部与整体的关系、多角度立意多角度立意优选立意、确定主题优选立意、确定主题 Group work:审题审题:结构结构-人称人称-时态时态-要点要点-可能的立意可能的立意Maggie.YuMaggie.Yu开放写作写作八字方开放

11、写作写作八字方针：用用第第三三人人称称和和一一般般现现在在时时客客观观描描述述图图片片内内容容，不不超超过过三三分分之一篇幅。之一篇幅。根根据据图图片片内内容容和和寓寓意意（论论点点）进进行行议议论论，该该部部分分是是文文章章的的主主体体部部分分，约约占占三三分分之之二二篇篇幅。幅。点点出出图图片片的的寓寓意意，即即文文章章的的论论点点，相相当当于于描描图图和和议议论之间的过渡。论之间的过渡。根据议论方向，联系到自根据议论方向，联系到自身，即我们应当怎样做才身，即我们应当怎样做才能解决图片中提出的问题。能解决图片中提出的问题。描图描图-解图解图-议论议论-升华升华开放作文开头句子vThis i

12、s a simple but meaningful picture.vAs we can see in the picture,vAs can be seen in the picture,vAs we can see from the picture,there is vIn the picture we can see sb doing sthv描述一定要用一般描述一定要用一般现在在时Maggie.YuMaggie.Yu开放作文第二段开头句子vThe picture has a symbolic meaning far more important than the picture its

13、elf.vThe picture is more than what it can show us.vThis picture shows very well thatvSo from sbs behavior,we can see that vNowadays,its a common phenomenon that vSuch a picture reminds me of It also proves that vThe picture shows different attitudes towards.Time flies.阴似箭，日月如梭）阴似箭，日月如梭）Time is life

14、and when the idle man kills time,he kills himself.（时间就是生命，就是生命，懒人消耗人消耗时间就是消耗自己的生命。就是消耗自己的生命。Never put off till tomorrow what may be done today.（今日（今日事，今日事，今日毕）Time and tide wait for no man.（岁月不待人）月不待人）Time lost can not be recalled（光阴一去不复返）（光阴一去不复返）Time flies like an arrow,and time lost never returns

15、.(光阴光阴似箭，一去不返）似箭，一去不返）Yesterday is history,tomorrow is a mystery,and today is a gift.惜惜时名言名言Maggie.YuMaggie.Yu开放作文开放作文结尾句尾句子子vThats how I understand it.Does it make sense?vWe hope our effort will be of some help to vThis cartoon attempts to convey the message that everyone,as a member of society,sho

16、uld do v Only in this way can we build a harmonious society.Maggie.YuMaggie.Yu开放作文开放作文结尾句子尾句子vThis cartoon attempts to convey the message that everyone,as a member of society,should do v Only 引引导倒装句倒装句作业作业:开放作文（开放作文（15分）分）请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。In your English class,you are asked to describe the following picture,now tell your classmates how you understand it.