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1、读后续写（新高考专用）模拟题061 . （2022.福建莆田.一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构 成一篇完整的短文。Back in the early 1980s, the idea of home computers was catching on. I wasnt keen on getting one. Somehow, I evolved and have owned several computers over the years. Some days, I loved my computer, but more often than not, I hat

2、ed it. I didn*t grow up with them, and they were a challenge to my mental health. Dealing with modern technology was my introduction to stress, and I know who to blame: my children.They werent satisfied that their dad and I finally bought a computer and learned to send e-mails. We were quite happy w

3、ith that, but next came a cellphone. Then just talking on the phone was not acceptable; they insisted we learn to text as well. We couldnt get a break.I remember well the night that Facebook became a household word around here. Those kids of ours were determined to set up a joint account for us. It

4、took some convincing. We felt no guilt for grating on （激怒）their nerves considering the drama theyd sometimes created for us during their teenage years. A little payback wouldnt hurt those two.More recently, my husband and I were forced into getting rid of our flip phones and getting smartphones. I w

5、ill admit that I progressed into appreciating mine. I liked speaking to Siri and finding out what I needed to know in an instant. I enjoyed having Internet access everywhere I went. I felt a sense of accomplishment; my husband-not so much. To this day, he would happily take back his flip phone.Last

6、Christmas, our children surprised us with yet another popular form of technology-Alexa. The girls took our smartphones in hand and got us programmed. Before we fully understood what was happening, we could tell Alexa to turn our lamp on or off, and she would. To be honest, we were a bit annoyed at h

7、aving to learn how to use yet another device, but we decided to keep it. We mastered turning the lamp on and off, and once again I got the hang of it sooner than my husband did. I became his Alexa coach.L续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。I hesitated, wondering if I should help my father.In all, it took

8、 us one month of hard work.参考答案：I hesitated, wondering if I should help my father. Then well make one together,he told me. First, Dad cut leftover board into strips and nailed them in a circle on a wood base, showing me how to make the rough edges smooth. Then he sawed the base in half and attached

9、hinges to one side so the log would swing open and shut. He gathered pieces of wallpaper, matching patterns as carefully. He painted the outside with shades of brown, and added a tiny path to the front doormade from real concrete.In all, it took us one month of hard work. But the log house was the g

10、reatest gift a child could ask for. Long after I gave up playing with dolls, I would still sometimes bring it down from the upper floor just to admire it and remember those months I watched Dad bring my dream to life. Dad has spent his life creating, mending and improving the most valued parts of mi

11、ne. Hes given me the greatest treasure a father can give.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，作者讲述了父亲亲自动手为自己制作玩具屋，给了作者一个父亲所 能给予的东西。【详解】L段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我犹豫了一下，想知道我是否应该帮助我的父亲。”可知，第一段可描写 作者和父亲一起制作玩具屋的经过。由第二段首句内容“总共，我们花了一个月，努力工作。”可知，第二段可描写作者非常珍 惜玩具屋以及感受到的浓浓的父爱。2 .续写线索：一起制作玩具屋父亲精心制作珍爱玩具屋感受父爱.词汇激活行为类.把系在：attach.to./tie.to .

12、U攵集:gather/ collect sth. together匹配：match/go with情绪类.喜欢：admire【点睛】高分句型 1. First, Dad cut leftover board into strips and nailed them in a circle on a wood base, showing me how to make the rough edges smooth.（运用了现在分词作状语和“疑问词+不定式” 作宾语）高分句型 2. But the log house was the greatest gift a child could ask fo

13、r.（运用 了省略了关系词 的定语从句）高分句型 3. Long after I gave up playing with dolls, I would still sometimes bring it down from the upper floor just to admire it and remember those months I watched Dad bring my dream to life.（运用了 after引导的状语从句，不定式作状语，省略了关系词的定语从句注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。One night, Alexa d

14、id not turn on the lamp when I gave the command.We should thank our children and grandchildren.参考答案：One night, Alexa did not turn on the lamp when I gave the command. I tried to say “Turn on the light“ to it countless times, but Alexa didnt work. New technologies are always unreliable.my husband com

15、plained. I searched the Internet and immediately found the reason why Alex couldnt work. I just needed to tell Alex to set the light color to white or whatever color I wanted, and then it would turn on the light. Then Alex turned on the light itself.We should thank our children and grandchildren. It

16、 was our children and grandchildren that taught us to use technology so that I could find a solution on the Internet by myself. Without them, our life is always invariable and boring. Our children and grandchildren “force“ us to accept and use technology, which seems to put us under pressure. Howeve

17、r, the fact is that our children and grandchildren let us really accept and use technology to make our life more convenient.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的孩子们为自己和丈夫推荐了许多现代科技产品，作者 从很有压力变得喜欢上它们，有一种成就感，但是作者的丈夫不太喜欢。去年圣诞节，孩子 们给作者的智能手机安装了 Alexa程序，可以打开或者关闭灯。【详解】.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“一天晚上，当我发出命令时，Alexa没有开灯。”可知，第一段可描写 作者

18、和丈夫对此的不同反应，作者用孩子们教会的技能想到办法解决问题。由第二段首句内容“我们应该感谢我们的子孙。”可知，第二段可描写作者感受到孩子们教 会的科技是有用处的，感谢孩子们。1 .续写线索：Alexa不工作丈夫抱怨作者想办法Alexa被修好感谢孩子们科技的用处2 .词汇激活行为类打开：turn on/switch on教：teach/instruct找到：find/seek out情绪类感谢：thank/appreciate压力：pressure/stress【点睛】【高分句型 1 I searched the Internet and immediately found the reaso

19、n why Alex couldnt work.（由关系副词why引导限制性定语从句）【高分句型 2However, the fact is that our children and grandchildren let us really accept and use technology to make our life more convenient.（由连接词 that 引导表语从句）2. （2022.辽宁模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构 成一篇完整的短文。One of my most memorable trips took place during

20、 the summer vacation about three years ago, when my sister, my aunt and I took a trip to Spain because we were moving. On the day of the trip, I lay in bed thinking about my friends whom I was going to leave behind and thoughts were flooding in.When we arrived at the hire station, we seemed to have

21、some problems with our luggage because it was too much for a taxi, so we had to book a van （厢式送货车）to take our luggage to the airport. We waited for a long period to find a perfect van that would fit our luggage.Before leaving, I felt very bad because I was going to a different country and was going

22、to miss all my friends and family. I was not comfortable and cried.The journey was almost perfect at the beginning, but soon it began to rain. Because of the rain, the drivers could not see far away, which caused a huge traffic jam. I was sitting by the window with a can of Coke that I had bought in

23、 the store earlier. My aunt and sister fell asleep, and during this time. I felt bored and thought about other things that bothered me. My eyes turned to the mountain in front of us.A bus suddenly appeared in the picture. It was very close to us. Cars sped past us without any speed limit. Beside me

24、was a very deep lake: I wondered to myself what if something or someone fell inside it. Suddenly, a bus in front of our van stopped, and because it was raining heavily and the van was going fast, no one could see what was going to happen. Then, bang, we bumped into each other. Our van overturned, bu

25、t luckily, it didnt fall into the lake. People came to help us get out of the van because we were blocked and the driver was half-dead. 注意：1 ,续写词数应为15。左右；2,续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。We struggled to get out of the van and everything we had was gone.I was losing a lot of blood and then the emergency aid ca

26、me.参考答案:We struggled to get out of the van and everything we had was gone. Everything was very strange. I had never had that kind of experience before. It was like watching a horror movie. Some people who were also in the accident started crying, looking for their children, tears beginning to increa

27、se. My leg was badly injured. My aunt was calling to seek some help, and my sister was full of injury. It almost seemed that the tragedy was never going to end.I was losing a lot of blood and then the emergency aid came. They took us to hospital where we were treated. We had to pay for some fees, bu

28、t we had no money. The doctors and nurses who were present learned of our condition and paid for us. Although we had experienced a bad accident, we were all lucky to have received help from those warm-hearted people. After that we went on with our journey and reached our destination successfully at

29、last.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索开展故事，作者讲述了三年前去西班牙度暑假时，在去飞机场的路上，遭 遇车祸的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我们挣扎着从厢式送货车里爬出来，发现我们的一切东西都不见了。” 可知，第一段可描写作者目睹遭遇车祸后的惨状。由第二段首句内容“我正在流血，救护车来了。”可知，第二段可描写医生和护士抢救我们 的经过。2,续写线索：爬出运货车目睹惨状绝望救护车到达医院救助医护人员 筹钱感动3 .词汇激活 行为类 寻找：look for/search for 结束：go to end/come to a stop 照顾：treat/take care of

30、 情绪类哭泣：start crying/burst out crying糟糕的：bad/terrible【点睛】高分句型 1. Some people who were also in the accident started crying, looking for their children, tears beginning to increase.（运用了 who引导的定语从句以及现在分词作状语和独立主格结构） 高分句型 2. They took us to hospital where we were treated.（运用 了 where 引导的定语从句）3. （2022.福建福建.

31、一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构 成一篇完整的短文。A New Addition to the FamilyFor the initial ten years of his life, Victor was the prince of the household. As he was an only child, his parents petted him and showered all their love and attention on him. Whatever toys his parents bought, they were always mea

32、nt for him. Whatever food was in the refrigerator, there was no one to compete with him to polish it off first. Victor could leave his toys or books around the house with complete ease of mind, knowing that there was no one who would get their hands on his belongings and cause any damage.However, al

33、l that was to change overnight when Victors parents brought back his new baby sister, Lina, from the hospital. With her rosy cheeks, wide open eyes and angelic smile, Lina caught the hearts of her parents, grandparents and relatives. Everyone focused their attention on the cute bunch of joy. Wheneve

34、r she cried, her mother or father would rush to her bed. She simply cried because she wanted to be carried. There was little time left for Victor.Now that Victors mother had his baby sister to take care of, she expected Victor himself to do most of the chores he can do. Victor was asked to clean his

35、 own room, iron his own school uniform and clean his own shoes. Before Linas arrival, he had never lifted a finger to help out with these tasks. The whole family also went out less because it was unhealthy to expose Lina to the bacteria（细菌）being in the outside world too often.Victor felt neglected b

36、y his parents. He felt that they loved Lina more than him. As a result, he tried to attract his parents attention by becoming resistant. One evening, Victors parents were called up by his teacher because Victor had got into a fight at school. His teacher had noticed Victors behaviour and work attitu

37、de changing downwards in the past two months. Before that, he had been a model student.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。Upon hearing the teachers feedback, Victors parents got lost in thought.Victor realized that his parents still cared for him.参考作案：Upon hearing the teacher7s feedback, Victors p

38、arents got lost in thought. Since their second childLinda was born, they have devoted all their attention to her. To some degree, they neglected victors feelings. After all, he wanted to share the love from parents with Linda. So they made a decision that they should treat the two children equally.

39、Gradually, something changed in the family. After school Victor often found some delicious food and new toys on his desk. When he did his homework, his father came to his room and sat beside him, reading a book quietly, which made him comfortable and warm. At that time, his mother was taking care of

40、 his sister Linda. After he finished his homework, his mother asked him to play with Linda. Seeing her sweet smile, he felt so happy.Victor realized that his parents still cared for him.So he was determined to help his parents take good care of his sister. Having finished his homework, he learned to

41、 clean their rooms and do all the chores that he could. While his mother was cooking, he played with his sister happily. He came to realize that he should take responsibility for the family because he grew up.【解析】【分析】本文以一个小男孩Victor的感受为线索展开，讲述了在Victor的妹妹Linda出生以后，父母 将全部的注意力集中到她身上，这让他感到被忽略，因此他用对抗来引起父母

42、的注意。最后 父母也意识到这一点，就做出改变，让Victor重新感受到父母的爱。【详解】.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“听到老师的反馈，父母陷入沉思”可知，第一段可描写父母对自己行为 的反省。由第二段首句内容“Victor意识到父母仍旧关爱他”可知，第二段可描写Victor感受到父母 仍旧爱他后的积极行动。1 .续写线索：沉思反省一改变一陪孩子一感受到爱回报.词汇激活行为类全身投入：devote all ones attention to / put ones heart into决定： make a decision/ make up ones mind,照看：take care of / l

43、ook after情绪类感到高兴：feel happy/ feel pleased幸福地：happily / merrily【点睛】高分句型 1 . So they made a decision that they should treat the two children equally.（运用同位语从句）高分句型 2. Having finished his homework, he learned to clean their rooms and do all the choresthat he could.（运用现在分词作状语以及定语从句）4. （2022.重庆.一模）阅读下面材料，

44、根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一 篇完整的短文。My father is a practical man. He cant explain calculus（微积分）,but he can tell you how much pressure a boiler needs. He cant draw an architects plan, but he can tell you if the pipes and wiring will sustain the structure. He put himself through night school to become an e

45、ngineer, but that was only after he worked a slumber, an electrician, and a mechanic.One day we walked by a toy store window. Sitting in the comer was the most unusual doll-house Id ever seen. It was shaped liked an upturned log （原木）.Little oval windows decorated with nice curtains and framed by tin

46、y balconies were cut into it.“Oh, Daddy,“ I said, isnt it beautiful? Do you think Santa Claus will bring it to me?Dad looked at the $100 price tag, silent - thafs a rather big figure in those days. I think even Santa couldnt afford this house,“ he joked, lifting up his belt as he often does when hes

47、 nervous. Maybe one day, sweetheart.”On Christmas morning, I awoke early and raced downstairs. In the dim light, I made out a lot of wrapped boxes under the tree - but none large enough to contain my dollhouse. Dad could see my disappointment He pulled me onto his lap and gently told me how, as a bo

48、y, he had wanted a red wagon, but his father couldnt afford one. He said he made his own from wood and old wheels he found. Til make one for you J Dad assured me.And right after Christmas, despite all the unfinished projects at home, he started it. I naively （幼稚地）thought it was an easy toy to make, but every step of the long process was considerably more complex than I had anticipated. Night after night, Dad would come home from his job dead tired, yet hed always find time to work on the log house. In the dark yellow electric light, Dad was always busy creating my dollhouse. 要求：