教育专题：比赛课-写作.ppt

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1、例例:我们的班长是个漂亮的女孩子我们的班长是个漂亮的女孩子,她学习努力。她学习努力。1.使用同位语使用同位语Our monitor,a beautiful girl,studies hard.Our monitor is a beautiful girl.She studies hard.射击最初只是生存工具，射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才发展成世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。为一项体育运动。Shooting,a means of survival originally,developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.Shooting

2、 is originally a means of survival.Shooting developed into a sport only in the late 19th century.2.使用非谓语使用非谓语例：故事是用简单的英语写的，很受英语例：故事是用简单的英语写的，很受英语初学者的欢迎。初学者的欢迎。一般一般 The stories are written in simple English.They are popular with English beginners.高级高级 Written in simple English,the stories are popular

3、 with English beginners.The number of people visiting Shanghai Expo reached 72.6 million,ranking the first among all the expos.72.6 million people visited the Shanghai Expo and it ranked the first among all the expos.非谓语非谓语上海世博会参观人数达上海世博会参观人数达72,600,000人，人，为历届之最。为历届之最。3.巧用巧用with结构结构她是个漂亮的姑娘，长着两只大眼睛，

4、她是个漂亮的姑娘，长着两只大眼睛，留着长发。留着长发。巧用巧用withShe is a beautiful girl.She has big eyes and long hair.She is a beautiful girl with long hair and big eyes.人们选择不去电影院的原因人们选择不去电影院的原因:随着随着网络的普及，很多人宁愿上网看电网络的普及，很多人宁愿上网看电影而不去电影院看电影了。影而不去电影院看电影了。With the Internet becoming increasingly popular,people prefer to see films

5、on line rather than go to cinemas.4巧用复合句巧用复合句如今网络非常便利，人们可以随时收发电如今网络非常便利，人们可以随时收发电子邮件。子邮件。People have easy access to the Internet now,and they can send and receive e-mails at any time.复合句复合句People have easy access to the Internet now,which enables them to send and receive e-mails whenever they like.在

6、他一生中在他一生中,他获得了许多荣誉他获得了许多荣誉,其中包括获得其中包括获得“2005感动中国年度人物感动中国年度人物”的称号的称号.He got many honours in his life,and he got the 2005 CCTV Moving China Award.定语从句定语从句非谓语动词非谓语动词In his life,he got many honours,including the 2005 CCTV Moving China Award.In his life,he got many honours,one of which is the 2005 CCTV M

7、oving China Award.他不但对科学极有兴趣他不但对科学极有兴趣,而且对音乐有天赋而且对音乐有天赋.倒装句式倒装句式He not only shows great interest in science,but also has a gift for music.5巧用倒装句、感叹句、强调句、虚拟语气句等巧用倒装句、感叹句、强调句、虚拟语气句等Not only does he show great interest in science,but also he has a gift for music.我们决不能忽视环境保护的重要性。我们决不能忽视环境保护的重要性。倒装句式倒装句式

8、We can not ignore the importance of environmental protection.Never/By no means/On no account/can we ignore the importance of environmental protection.The purpose of the program is to make our school more beautiful,to make the air cleaner and fresher,and to turn our school into a better place for us

9、to study and live in.6巧用排山倒海句巧用排山倒海句这个这个 项目旨在使学校变得更美丽，让学生项目旨在使学校变得更美丽，让学生有个更好的学习和生活环境。有个更好的学习和生活环境。基础写作：人们生活的变化基础写作：人们生活的变化随着科技的快速发展随着科技的快速发展,人们的生活各方面人们的生活各方面都发生了巨大变化。都发生了巨大变化。用用5个英语句子表达所有信息。个英语句子表达所有信息。参考词汇：参考词汇：尼龙：尼龙：nylon;卷轴：卷轴：scroll过去过去现在现在住住木制房屋或木制房屋或草房草房高楼大厦或公寓房高楼大厦或公寓房行行马马,速度慢速度慢,摩托车、汽车、火车或飞

10、机摩托车、汽车、火车或飞机,速度快速度快穿穿丝、布丝、布尼龙、羊毛、棉织品等尼龙、羊毛、棉织品等读书读书卷轴、竹简卷轴、竹简纸质印刷书本纸质印刷书本,电子刊物电子刊物1.1.随着科技的快速发展随着科技的快速发展,人们的生活各方面都发生了巨大变化。人们的生活各方面都发生了巨大变化。With the science and technology developing fast,great changes have taken place in all respects of life.2.过去过去现在现在住住木制房屋或木制房屋或草房草房高楼大厦或公寓房高楼大厦或公寓房Compared with l

11、iving in houses made of wood or grass in the past,people are now living much more comfortably in tall buildings or flats.3.过去过去现在现在行行马马,速度慢速度慢,摩托车、汽车、火车或飞机摩托车、汽车、火车或飞机,速度快速度快4.过去过去现在现在穿穿丝、布丝、布尼龙、羊毛、棉织品等尼龙、羊毛、棉织品等Riding a horse,a common means of transportation in the past,is of no doubt much slower t

12、han taking modern transportation tools such as motorbikes,cars,trains or planes,which enable people to go anywhere at any time they want.Seldom do people wear clothes made of silk or cloth by hand as they did in the past,and what they wear now are clothes made of wool,nylon and cotton.5.过去过去现在现在读书读书

13、卷轴、竹简卷轴、竹简纸质印刷书本纸质印刷书本,电子刊物电子刊物People can read whatever and whenever they like with easy access to not only printed paper books but also e-books while in the past,people can only read a few scrolls or bamboo slips.With the science and technology developing fast,great changes have taken place in all

14、respects of life.Firstly,compared with living in houses made of wood or grass in the past,people are now living much more comfortably in tall buildings or flats.Secondly,riding a horse,a common means of transportation in the past,is of no doubt much slower than taking modern transportation tools suc

15、h as motorbikes,cars,trains or planes,which enable people to go anywhere at any time they want.Thirdly,seldom do people wear clothes made of silk or cloth by hand as they did in the past,and what they wear now are clothes made of wool,nylon and cotton.As to reading,people can read whatever and whenever they like with easy access to not only printed paper books but also e-books while in the past,people can only read a few scrolls or bamboo slips.