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1、1A连贯与句式的运用连贯与句式的运用2A连贯连贯(coherence)指文章语意的通顺和语言形式的紧密衔接并符合一定的逻辑关系。要使文章前后衔接紧密,可采用以下方法:提示1:恰当使用关联词 如when,so,if,because,so that等。提示2:巧妙使用意思有联系的词或短语 如First,Second,Third,Soon,Whats more,As a result等。提示3:适当使用过渡性语句 The reasons are as follows.Every coin has two sides.On the other hand,On the contrary,3A连接词、句型
2、的选择连接词、句型的选择1、递进关系递进关系(肯定)(肯定)(否定)(否定)2、时间时间一一就就不久不久然后然后同时同时Besides/Whatsmore/Also/Inaddition/FurthermoreWhatsworse/Evenworse/Worsestill/TomakemattersworseThemoment/Ondoing/assoonas/immediately/directlyItwasnotlongbefore/Afterawhile/SoonAfterthat/Then/So/NextAtthesametime/Meanwhile4A3、转折转折4、顺序顺序5、条件
3、条件6、强调、强调however,/but/onthecontrary/Ontheotherhand/yetFirst/Second/Third/Last/Next/ThenIf/Aslongas/Solongas/onconditionthatItwasthat/who/Soshedid./Idohope/Shedidhelpme./Itreallyworked.5A7、其它其它不得不做某事不得不做某事havetodosth./havenochoicebuttodosth./havenothingtodobutdosth.有必要做某事有必要做某事Thereisnoneed(forsb.)to
4、dosth./Itisnecessary(forsb.)todo最好做某事最好做某事Youdbetterdosth.Itsbettertodosth.做某事没困难做某事没困难havenodifficultyindoingsth./havenotroubleindoingsth.感谢某人感谢某人thanksb./bethankfultosb./expressonesthankstosb./begratefultosb./Thanksto6A求助某人求助某人turntosb.forhelp/asksb.forhelp/withthehelpof/withoneshelp惊奇惊奇Toonessurp
5、rise/Insurprise/Surprisingly/only+不定式(表意外结果)不定式(表意外结果)原因如下(很多)原因如下(很多)Thereasonsareasfollows.Therearemanyreasonsforit.浪费金钱(时间)浪费金钱(时间)Itsawasteofmoney/time结果结果Asaresult/Therefore/Thus/So总结总结Inaword/Inshort/Aboveall/Afterall表达观点表达观点Inmyopinion/Ithink/Ibelieve/Imsure/Iguess7ATask 1 请在下列句子中(间)填上恰当的关联词或
6、意思有联系的短语。1.XiaoMingwaswalkinginthestreetheheardsomeonecryforhelp.2.HeadvisedthatIhireacarIcouldtravelaroundinthewest.3.Itwasnotlongthepolicecame.4.heheardthecryforhelp,hejumpedintothewatertosavethegirl.5.Doyouagreewithmyarrangement?,dowritetomesoon.6.Wecangodowntownanddosomeshopping.,7.wecanpayavisi
7、ttosomeplacesofinterest.7.Isharedthecostofthegaswithmyfriends.,Isaved$80.8.Eatingsugarisbadforourteeth.,9.itmaymakeusfat.Whatsmore/Besides/Also/Furthermore/Inaddition whensothat/inorderthatbeforeAssoonas/Immediately/Directly/ThemomentIfnotAsaresult/ThereforeWhatsworse/Evenworse/Tomakemattersworse8A句
8、式的运用句式的运用:利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思,能增加文章的文采。:利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思,能增加文章的文采。基本句型:基本句型:1、感叹句感叹句e.g.1)HowhappyIwaswhenIreceivedyourletter.2)Whatakindboyheis!3)Howdisappointedhewas!2、强调句强调句e.g.Itwasthisyoungboythathelpedtheoldgranny.3、倒装句倒装句e.g.1)Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.2)There comesthepolicecar.3)Hardlyh
9、adtheygottothestationwhen theymettheyoungman.9A句式的运用句式的运用:利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思,能增加文章的文采。:利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思,能增加文章的文采。基本句型:基本句型:4、省略句省略句e.g.Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.5、with短语短语e.g.Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwithahandbaginherhand.6、定语从句定语从句e.g.Inmyopinion,cybercafesshouldbeaplacewherewecan
10、findmuchusefulinformation.7、各种名词性从句各种名词性从句e.g.ThatswhatIshoulddo.8、各种状语从句各种状语从句e.g.Timepassedquicklybeforeweknewit.10ATask2按要求改写下列句子按要求改写下列句子,使其更具文采。使其更具文采。1.Tomsavedthedrowninggirl.(强调强调)2.IhopeIcanpayavisittoyounextyear.(强调)(强调)3.Tomwaspuzzled.(感叹)(感叹)4.Itisgreatfuntoclimbthehill.(感叹)(感叹)5.TomandM
11、arylikesingingsongs.(肯定倒装)(肯定倒装)6.Johnlikestostudyandplay.(否定倒装)(否定倒装)7.Soonthefirefighterscame.(表时间句型)(表时间句型)It was Tom that/who saved the drowning girl.I do hope I can pay a visit to you next year.How puzzled Tom was!What great fun it is to climb the hill!Tom likes singing songs,so does Mary.Not o
12、nly does John like to study,but(also)he likes to play.It was not long before the firefighters came.11ATask3WritingPractice请你给中国日报写一篇稿件,谈谈农村儿童失学的主要原因及你的看法。原因:1、家庭贫穷,供不起儿童上学,他们不得不在家赚钱养家。2、部分家长认为女孩上学无用,不愿让她们上学。3、部分儿童对功课不感兴趣,不愿上学。看法:1、每个儿童包括女孩都应有受教育的机会。2、全社会都应重视儿童教育,他们对国家的未来将起到重要的作用。要求:1、不要逐字逐句翻译。2、语句要连
13、贯通顺。3、字数100个左右。12A Now in the country areas,there are many children out of school.Most families are poor and cant afford their education.They have to stay at home and make money.Some parents think daughters neednt go to school.They dont let them go to school.Some children are not interested in their
14、 studies and wouldnt like to go to school.All the children including girls should be educated.The whole society should pay attention to it.Theyll play an important part in the future of our country.13A诊断:优点缺点药方1、词能达意;2、语句表达基本正确。语句不够连贯1、使用常见句型;2、每两个句子之间使用关联词或过渡词。14ANow in the country areas,there are
15、many children out of school.。,most families are too poor to send their children to school.,they have no choice but to stay at home and make money.,some parents think there is no need for their daughters to go to school.,they dont let them go to school.,some children are not interested in their studi
16、es.,some wouldnt like to go to school.,all the children including girls should be educated.,the whole society should pay attention to it theyll play an important part in the future of our country one day.ThereasonsareasfollowsTherearemanyreasonsforthis.FirstAsaresultSecondSo/ThereforeThirdWhatsworse
17、/WorsestillEvenworse/TomakemattersworseInmyopinionWhatsmore/Besidesbecause15ATask 4 Writing by yourselves 下列图画描述的是两位少先队员上星期日去少年宫的途中经历的事情.请据此写一篇短文,参加由英语组组织的英语作文竞赛。16A练习一、练习一、(一)简单句翻译(一)简单句翻译1我们在学习怎样用电脑。我们在学习怎样用电脑。Were learning how to use the computer.2他和他的朋友经常查字典。他和他的朋友经常查字典。He and his friend always
18、look up in the dictionary.17A 3请给我一杯水请给我一杯水,好吗?好吗?Please give me a cup of water,will you?4老师让我回答了这个问题。老师让我回答了这个问题。The teacher asked me to answer the question.18A 5我们的国家变得越来越强大。我们的国家变得越来越强大。Our country is getting stronger and stronger.6你的到来使我很高兴。你的到来使我很高兴。Your arrival makes me very happy.19A 7村庄里有许多绿
19、树和湖泊。村庄里有许多绿树和湖泊。There are many green trees and lakes in the village.8我们不应该歧视弱者。我们不应该歧视弱者。We should not look down upon the weak.20A(二二)并列句翻译并列句翻译1.我我 喜喜 欢欢 读读 书书,他他 喜喜 欢欢 玩玩 玩玩 具具。(while)I like reading while he likes playing with toys.2.孩孩子子们们非非常常高高兴兴,或或者者至至少少看看起起来来很很高兴。(高兴。(or)The children are very
20、 happy or at least they look happy.21A 3.中中国国是是发发展展中中国国家家,而而美美国国是是发发达达国国家。(家。(but/while)China is a developing country,while the United States is a developed one.4.这里常下雨,有时有暴风雨。这里常下雨,有时有暴风雨。(and)It often rains here,and storms sometimes.22A 5他他不不但但受受到到我我们们的的鼓鼓励励而而且且受受到到老老师的表扬。(师的表扬。(notonlybutalso)He
21、was not only encouraged by us but also praised by the teacher.6我我们们周周围围的的东东西西不不是是固固体体、液液体体就就是气体。是气体。(eitheror)Everything around us is either solid,liquid or gas.23A 7一个人既应该有勇气也应有毅力。一个人既应该有勇气也应有毅力。(bothand)A man should have both courage and perseverance.24A8.新新中中国国的的妇妇女女在在政政治治生生活活和和家家庭庭生生活活方面享有和男子同等权
22、利。方面享有和男子同等权利。(aswellas)In new China women enjoy equal rights with men in political life as well as in family life.9.我喝咖啡要加奶加糖。我喝咖啡要加奶加糖。When I drink coffee,I prefer to add sugar as well as milk.25A(三三)复合句翻译复合句翻译1我相信你一定能成功。我相信你一定能成功。Im sure youll succeed.2北京再也不是北京再也不是20年前的样子了。年前的样子了。Beijing is no lo
23、nger what was 20 years ago.26A 3这个城市是我出生的地方。这个城市是我出生的地方。This is the city where I was born./The city is the one which I was born in.4他和以前不一样了。他和以前不一样了。He is not what he used to be.27A 5为了明天赶上早班车,我要早起。为了明天赶上早班车,我要早起。I have to get up earlier so that I can catch up the early bus.6.虽然他年轻,但是经验很丰富。虽然他年轻,但是
24、经验很丰富。Although he is young,he is very experienced./He is young but he is very experienced.28A 7如果有困难,请来找我。如果有困难,请来找我。Please turn to me if you are in trouble.8.老师所讲的都记在笔记本上了。老师所讲的都记在笔记本上了。What the teacher said was all taken down on the notebook.29A9众所周知,中国是人口大国。众所周知,中国是人口大国。It is well-known that Chin
25、a is a country with a large population.10据据报报道道,他他是是来来自自新新西西兰兰的的一一位位学者。学者。It is reported that he is a scholar from New Zealand.30A11他他与与我我们们到到别别时时留留下下了了他他的的姓姓名名和地址。和地址。He left his name and address when he said good-bye to me.12李秘书被解雇是因为他受贿。李秘书被解雇是因为他受贿。Secretary Li was dismissed because he took brib
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