备战2023年高考英语一轮复习考点 48-书面表达建议信邀请信和申请信（核心考点解析版）.docx

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1、专题48书面表达建议信、遨靖信和申请信（核心考点精讲练） 建议信方法技巧一、必备词汇和万能句式必备词汇1 .gve/offer sb. some advice(on)给某人提建议2 .ask sb. for advice向某人征求意见3 .as follows如下4 .in my opinion/in my view/from my point of view 在我看来5 .findhelpful/useful/beneficial认为有用6 .take part in/participate in.参力口7 .foliow/take/adopt one*s advice采纳某人的建议8 .t

2、ake sth. into account/consideration把考虑在内9 .with regard to关于； 就10 . put forward提出1.1 in this regard/in this respect在这点上/在这方面1.5 share sth. with sb.与某人分享某事13 .with time going on随着时间的推移14 . Be faced w汕面临15 .take sth. seriously重视；认真对待必备词汇句型第一部分：说明写信的目的套语：1. Pm sorry to hear that you are having trouble f

3、itting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。2. T have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.我已

4、经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。3. Pm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients (顾客).我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。(2)希望贵校能给我寄来空白申请表。I hope you will kindly send me an application form.(3)如能收到所需的申请表和有关入学的指南我将十分感激。I wou

5、ld greatly appreciate receiving copies of the required application forms and any instructions you may be so kind as to give me regarding my possible admission.(4)希望同意面试，届时我可以更详细地说明我的技能。I hope I may be granted an interview, when I can explain my qualifications more fully.(5)我将乐意在您方便时接受面试，届时我将进一步介绍自己。

6、I should be pleased to attend for an interview at your convenience, when I could give you further details concerning myself.【写作佳句】【篇首句】介绍自己，简要说明信息来源，并提出申请。1. Im Li Hua, from Class One, Senior Two.我是李华，来自高二一班。2.1 have read in the newspaper that a secretary is wanted in your company.我在报纸上看到你们公司在招聘一名秘书

7、。3.1 read the announcement of the Experience Life that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. 我在网上看到你们发布的体验生活的消息，我对此很感兴趣。4.1 am extremely pleased to see your advertisement for an English tutor (家庭教师/助教)in the newspaper. 我很高兴在报纸上看到你们招聘家庭教师/助教的广告。5.1 am writing to apply for the sum

8、mer camp in your school.我写信是想申请加入你们学校的夏令营。6.1 am writing to tell you that Im suitable for the job you are advertising.我写信是想告诉你，我适合做你们在广告上刊登的这份工作。7.1 am writing to inquire about the possibility of the job.我写信是询问(我得到)这份工作的可能性。8.1 am writing to join the program.我写信是想加入这个项目。9.1 would like to apply for i

9、t during the summer vacation.我想要暑假申请它。【篇中句】突出自己特点，具体说明胜任理由。1.1 think Im qualified for the position.我认为对于这个职位我是有资格的。2. In the first place, I have strong written and spoken communication skills.首先，我有很好的写作和交流技巧。3. Whats more, I am well acquainted with the western culture, (be acquainted with 熟悉)而且，我非常熟

10、悉西方文化。4. Last but not the least, I have good personality, and I am independent in life. 最后但也是很重要的一点是，我有很好的性格，并且在生活中很独立。5.1 think its of great use to me. For one thing, I can gain some experience for my future job; for another, I can make more friends.我认为它对我是有好处的。一则，我能够为未来的工作获得经验；二则，我可以交到更多的朋友。6.1 am

11、 sure I can do my best in the job. 我保证在工作中会尽最大努力。7. Thafs why I am applying for the position.那就是我申请这个职位的原因。8.1 hope I can join you.我希望我能够加入你们。【篇尾句】请求给予机会，期望尽快回复。1.1 will be much grateful if you can give me the opportunity. 如果你能给我这个机会，我会非常感激。2. T hope you can offer me the opportunity.我希望你能提供给我这个机会。3.

12、1 hope 1 can be accepted as a member of your summer camp.我希望我能够成为你们夏令营的一员。4. If you need to know more about me, please contact me at 189.如果你需要了解我更多，请给我打电话189.5.1 am looking forward to your early reply. 期待你的早日恢复。6.1 am looking forward to hearing from you soon.期待早日收到你的来信。【写作模板】Dear Sir or Madam,Im（简单自

13、我介绍）.When I was reading the advertisement,（表达看到相关广告后 的感受）. I think its a good opportunity for me to（应聘的原因）.Therefore I recommend myself to without hesitation.I（陈述本人的性格优势）.For one thing, I can（陈述本人特长一）.For another thing, I can（陈述本人特长二）.Please contact me at（你的联系方式一：电话号码）.Or e-mail me at（你的联系 方式二：电子邮箱地

14、址）.I am looking forward to your early reply .Yours Sincerely,Li Hua经典好题2019年新课标全国卷I假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要剧版中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容 包括：1 .写信目的；2 .个人优势；3 .能做的事情。注意:：1 .词数100左右;2,可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3 .结束语已为你写好。Looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua. 【试题趋势】今年全国卷一的书面表达要求考生写一封申请信，仍然属于书信应用文。试题要求考生给伦敦的

15、一家 将举办中国画展览的美术馆写信，申请当一名志愿者。本篇书面表达体现了传播中国传统文化与中外文化 交流。与2018年及2017年高考书面表达所考查的内容比较类似。2018年是新西兰人来中国人家做客,2017 年是给外国人上汉语课讲唐诗，都融入了对中国传统文化的宣传，树立文化自信和民族自豪感。同时，今 年的考题还融入了美育知识，引导学生关注和提高审美情趣。正如我们去年对2019年试题趋势的分析和 预测一样，掌握一些传统文化方面的英语知识势在必行。在备考时，要集中看一些与日常生活和传统文化 相关的话题，如文学艺术、风土人情、社交礼仪、饮食、体育运动、语言学习等，按照话题网络化复习， 效果会更佳。

16、试题分析：书面表达旨在考查考生的英语写作能力，评价其能否运用相关常识和语言知识进行有效的文字表达, 完成特定的交际任务。今年的书面表达要求考生写一封申请信。题目的内容要点设计比较灵活，难度与往 年大致相当。写作的基本要求是切题、完整、准确、连贯。作文要切题，考生要认真审题，精准把握主旨，确保内 容围绕主题展开；内容要完整，短文要覆盖各内容要点，无遗漏地完成交际任务；表达要准确，语言运用 应贴切、得体，能有力支撑交际目的的顺利实现；行文要连贯，各要点间应关系紧密，脉络清晰。【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。1 .审题立意本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写申请信，人称使用第一人称和第二人称，时态

17、用一般现在式。2 .谋篇布局书信格式，称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段，写信的目的，中间段写个人优势和能做的事，最后一段总结。 3.要求从写信目的、个人优势和能做的事情这三个方面展开写作。考生在写作时要做到层次分明，应着重 掌握个人优势的常用表达,如Im good at;I have the ability to；Im experienced in等等。从语言风 格来讲，短文应该是正式的形式，应运用得体的语气及礼貌用语或结构等。【范文】Dear sir or madam,I am a Chinese student named Li Hua, who is studying in London d

18、uring the summer vacation. Knowing that the local art gallery will hold an exhibition of Chinese paintings, I am writing to apply for volunteering. As a student who has learned Chinese painting since 5 years old, I am very pleased to have an opportunity to introduce Chinese paintings to foreigners.

19、Besides, my fluent spoken English and rich knowledge about Chinese paintings will help visitors understand the meaning behind each painting deeply. I will appreciate it if I could be given the opportunity.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua.Writing 1（2022.河南.模拟预测）假定你是某国际学校高中生李华，最近你发现你校

20、图书馆阅览室存在高声喧哗和乱丢垃圾的现象，请用英语给馆长Mr.Smith写一封信。要点如下:1 .说明写信的目的；2 .反映存在问题并提出合理的建议；注意：1 .词数100字左右；3 .可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯；4 .开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Mr.Smith,I am Li Hua, a high school student.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,I am Li Hua, a high school student. I am writing to draw your attention to the impr

21、oper behaviors among students in the reading room of the school library: making too much noise and littering.As you know, it is difficult for readers to focus while some students are talking to each other or making phone calls. Besides, a noisy and dirty environment is not only bad for our health bu

22、t also has a negative effect on our studying.Therefore, in my opinion, some measures should be taken to solve these problem. First, put up some signs that forbid such improper behaviors. Second, ask all the students to pick up their rubbish when they leave.Thank you for your consideration.Yours sinc

23、erely,Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定考生是某国际学校高中生李华，最近你发现你校图书馆阅览室存 在高声喧哗和乱丢垃圾的现象，请用英语给馆长Mr.Smith写一封信。【详解】1.词汇积累采取措施做某事：take measures to do sth take action to do sth 解决：solves settle 禁止：forbid- ban众所周 知：as is known it is known that2.句式拓展 同义句转化 原句： Therefore, in my opinion, some measures should be taken to s

24、olve these problem.拓展句： Therefore, as far as I am concerned, some measures should be taken to solve these problem.【点睛】高分句型 1 As you know, it is difficult for readers to focus while some students are talking to each other or making phone calls, （as引导的非限制性定语从句）高分句型 2 Second, ask all the students to pi

25、ck up their rubbish when they leave, （when 引导的时间状语从句）Writing 2（2022上海长宁二模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假设你是明启中学高三学生王磊，最近在学校英语报“Advice Column”中看到一则启示，关于征询同学们“提 高在线学习有效性”的建议。请给该报的编辑写一封邮件，内容须包括：1）你的建议2）你的理由【答案】Dear editor

26、:Im WangLei, a senior 3 student of Mingqi middle school. Recently, I saw a message in the advice column of the school English newspaper and it asked students for suggestions on improving the effectiveness of online learning. Tm writing to give my advice.First of all, you should find a quiet room and

27、 put your phone outside the room. The reason is that you should concentrate all your attention on the study and make sure you are not disturbed during your study. Whats more, you should communicate with teachers and students actively in the discussion boards. By doing this, you can not only share yo

28、ur thoughts and experiences but also remember the knowledge well.I hope my suggestions useful. Looking forward to your reply.Yours,WangLei【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英语报的编辑写邮件，对于“提高在线学习有效性”提出建 议，并且给出理由。【详解】1 .词汇积累建议：suggestion 一 ad vice集中 精力：concentrate onfbcus on止匕夕卜：what*s morebesides 交流：communicate一exch

29、ange 2 .句式拓展并列句变成复合句原句： Recently, I saw a message in the advice column of the school English newspaper and it asked students for suggestions on improving the effectiveness of online learning.拓展句： Recently, I saw a message in the advice column of the school English newspaper, which asked students for

30、 suggestions on improving the effectiveness of online learning.【点睛】【高分句型 1 The reason is that you should concentrate all your attention on the study and make sure you are not disturbed during your study.（that 弓| 导表语从句）高分句型 2 By doing this, you can not only share your thoughts and experiences but als

31、o remember the knowledge well.（not only.but also引导的并列句）Writing 3（2022.湖北.武汉市第十二中学模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校英语广播电台将对播出时段、时长、栏目 等做调整，正在向听众征求意见。请你写封邮件，内容包括：1 .你的建议；2 ,你的理由。注意：1 .写作词数应为80左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。【答案】Dear English radio station,Knowing that you will adjust the broadcast time slot, length and column, I

32、 am writing to give my suggestions.First of all, I think a 20-minute news summary can be played before the morning reading class, which will help students understand national events and stimulate their listening ability. Secondly, English pop songs can be played for ten minutes after school at noon,

33、 which can relieve students9 study pressure all morning. Finally, during the afternoon break, some excellent sample essays published by students can be played.Hoping my suggestions can be helpful.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你校英语广播电台将对播出时段、时长、栏目等做调整， 正在向听众征求意见的情况，写封邮件给出建议。【详解】L词汇积累建议：suggestion

34、s advice缓解,放松：relieve- relax压力：pressure一 stress优秀的：excellent outstanding3 ,句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Finally, during the afternoon break, some excellent sample essays published by students can be played. 拓展句：Finally, during the afternoon break, some excellent sample essays which are published by students can be

35、 played.【点睛】【高分句型 1 First of all, I think a 20-minute news summary can be played before the morning reading class, which will help students understand national events and stimulate their listening ability.（运用 了 which 弓| 导 的非限制性定语从句。）【高分句型 2】Finally, during the afternoon break, some excellent sample

36、essays published by students can be played.（运用了非谓语动词作后置定语。）Writing 4（2022广东华南师大附中三模）假设你是中学生李华，在英国学习，担任学校中国语言与文化社社长。 近期，校学生会发布了举办“国际文化节”的通知，请结合通知要求写一封邮件申请参加此活动。AnnouncementThis is to inform that the annual International Cultural Festival is to be held on June 15lh, 2O22.Any student club that intends

37、to join please send an email to by May 15th, 2022 to apply for a booth （摊位）.The name of the booth and main activities should be included in the application.onStudent Un注意：1 ,词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数;2 .可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Student Union,Sincerely yours,Li Hua【答案 1 Dear Student Union,I am Li Hua, presid

38、ent of China language and Culture Society. I am glad to know that the annual International Cultural Festival is to be held on June 15th, 2022.1 am writing to apply for a booth.The name of the booth is Chinese Tea Art Show, where we will introduce different kinds of Chinese Tea and its benefits. Chin

39、ese tea is considered as the most beneficial drink with a long history of planting. It has become a green, healthy and popular drink in our daily life, through which we can enjoy a healthy and pleasant life. Besides students visiting our booth will enjoy drinking various Chinese tea.I would apprecia

40、te it if you can take my application into account. Looking forward to your reply.Sincerely yours,Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生结合通知要求写一封邮件申请参加国际文化节活动。【详解】1 ,词汇积累开心做某事：be glad to do sthbe pleased to do sth被认为是：be considered as一be though as高兴的：pleasant 一happy各种各样的：various all kinds of3 .句式拓展原句： Chinese t

41、ea is considered as the most beneficial drink with a long history of planting. 拓展句： Chinese tea is considered as the most beneficial drink ,which has a long history of planting.【点睛】【高分句型 1 The name of the booth is Chinese Tea Art Show, where we will introduce different kinds of Chinese Tea and their

42、 benefits.（运用了 where引导的非限制性定语从句。）【高分句型 2 It has become a green, healthy and popular drink in our daily life, through which we can enjoy a healthy and pleasant life.（运用了 through which引导的非限制性定语从句。）Writing 5（2022上海奉贤二模）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructi

43、ons given below in Chinese.假如你是明启中学高三学生李华，最近你校“解忧”社团（Anxiety Relieving Club）正在招新，旨在帮助同 学们排忧减压。你很想成为其中一员，请给社长写封申请信，内容须包括：1 .你想加入该社团的理由；2 .你对如何开展解忧活动的建议。答案Dear Sir/Madam,I am very glad to hear that our school is going to set up Anxiety Relieving Club to help students relieve stress. As a warm-hearted

44、and outgoing boy, I am eager to become a member of it.At the beginning of high school, I was under great pressure. Thanks to the help of teachers and classmates, I came out of the haze, so I have the experience of helping other students reduce pressure. I have found that many students under great pr

45、essure are shy and dont like to communicate with others, so I think helping them become active is the key. Ifs a good choice to let them join study groups and sports activities.I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua

46、【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封申请信，申请成为学校“解忧”社团的一员，信中介绍 你想加入该社团的理由和你对如何开展解忧活动的建议。【详解】1 .词汇积累高兴的：glad-happy仓ij 立：set up一establish害羞的：shy-sel&conscious建议：suggestionadvice3 ,句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： At the beginning of high school, I was under great pressure.拓展句： At the beginning of high school, I was under great pressu

47、re, which made me sad.【点睛】 【高分句型 1】I am very glad to hear that our school is going to set up Anxiety Relieving Club to help students relieve stress.（运用 了 that 引导的宾语从句）【高分句型 2 I have found that many students under great pressure are shy and dont like to communicate with others, so I think helping the

48、m become active is the key.（运用 了 that 引导的宾语从句）Writing 6（2022四川凉山三模）假定你是李华。你校要举办一年一度的戏剧节，想邀请外教Rebecca观看你班彩排 并提出建议，请你用英语给她写封100字左右的邮件，内容包括如下：1 .戏剧节日期和要求。2 .你班准备的节目。3 .期待建议。【答案】Dear Rebecca,Im writing to inform you that the annual “Drama Festival“ is coming next month. It is required that each class prepares one performance, adapted