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1、考点40读后续写05对话模式突破（解析版）【命题解读】“对话”何时用？如何写？写多少？写哪里？看完本节的讲解，会有一个比较明晰的答案。【思维导图】对话标签的三个位置“对话”注意事项1）对话描写必须为推动故事情节服务，是情节发展的一个环节，每段出现一两句即可;2）对话描写必须反映人物的心理与情感，刻画人物的性格；3）对话描写不宜过长，侧重口语化词汇，避开生僻词汇；4）对话描写要尽可能结合动作描写，明确对谁说，具有画面感；5）对话描写中要学会使用几个感叹词，表示说话人的喜、怒、哀、乐等情绪；她说，“我想和你一起去，但我还没有完成家庭作业。”这句话用英语，从句式结构的角度来看，怎么表达【模拟题3】（

2、2022湖南一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150 左右。When a tornado hit a small town nearby, many families were left homeless. Afterward, all the local newspapers carried stories of the families who suffered the hardest to appeal to peoples attention and assistance.One Sunday, a particular pi

3、cture especially touched me. A young woman stood in front of a mobile home, a depressed expression on her face. A young boy, seven or eight years old. stood at her side, eyes downcast. Hiding behind her skirt was a tiny girl who stared into the camera, wide eyes with confusion and fear. The article

4、below gave clothing sizes closely matched ours. This would be a good opportunity to teach my seven-year-old twins. Brad and Brett, and three-year-old Meghan to help those less fortunate than themselves.“We have so much. And these poor people now have nothing I said. “Well share what we have with the

5、m J I brought three large boxes down from the room upstairs and placed them in the living room. Meghan watched seriously, as the boys and I filled one of the boxes with canned goods and foods. While I sorted through our clothes, I encouraged the boys to go through their toys and donate some of their

6、 less favorite things. The boys were pleased to join. Brad rose and went to his room fast. He came back bringing his action figures that he played with not so frequently. Brett also jumped up and ran to fetch some of his Matchbox cars and airplane models. Meghan watched quietly as the boys piled up

7、abandoned toys.The boys placed the objects they had chosen to donate into one of the boxes while I filled the third box with clothes. Meghan walked up with Lucy, her worn, faded, best-loved rag doll hugged tightly to her chest. Ill help you find something for the little girl, too. I said to the litt

8、le Meghan.Para. 1:“Mommy, I will give Lucy to them,“ Meghan turned to me.Para. 2:Recognizing what little Meghans gesture meant, I removed my old jacket from the box of clothes.参考答案：“Mommy, I will give Lucy to them J Meghan turned to me. “Oh, honey,“ I said. “You dont have to give Lucy. You love her

9、so much. Meghan nodded seriously, eyes glistening with tears. Lucy makes me happy, Mommy. Maybe shell make that little girl happy, too. She paused in front of the box that held the toys, pressed her round little face into Lucys flat face, gave her a final kiss, and then laid her gently on top of the

10、 other toys. The boys watched, open-mouthed, as their baby sister placed her favorite doll in the box.Recognizing what little Meghans gesture meant, I removed my old jacket from the box of clothes. I replaced it with the new hunter green jacket that I had bought on sale last week. I believed the you

11、ng woman in the picture would like it and fit it as much as I did. The boys had also been inspired by our behavior and carried their beloved things. We all wished the family could pass the difficult period as soon as possible and that they would love the things we gave them with all our heart.【解析】【分

12、析】本文以为受难者捐赠衣物和食物为线索展开，文章主要讲述龙卷风发生后，作者看到一张无家可归的一 家人的照片，作者想让她的孩子们为受难者捐赠衣服、食物和玩具。女儿Meghan决定捐赠她最喜欢的娃 娃，这个行动影响了作者，于是作者也将旧衣服换成新衣服捐给受难者。希望通过捐赠的物品使受难者 感受到他们的一片心意。【详解】1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容“Meghan转向我，对我说：妈妈，我要把Lucy捐给他们。”可知，第一 段可描写Meghan捐赠娃娃Lucy的过程。由第二段首句内容“意识到小Meghan行为的意义，我把旧夹克衫从衣服箱子里拿了出来。”可知，第二 段可描写作者行为的变化和感受。2 .

13、续写线索：Meghan捐LucyMeghan的想法作者拿出旧夹克衫捐新衣服感受3 .词汇激活 行为类 看：watch/stare 放：place/pile up 捐：donate/give 情绪类喜爱的：favorite/beloved/best-loved【点睛】高分句型 1 I replaced it with the new hunter green jacket that I had bought on sale last week.（运用 了 that 弓I 导的定语从句）高分句型 2 The boys had also been inspired by our behavior a

14、nd carried their beloved things.（运用 了 被动语 态）【模拟题4 （2022江苏模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。For weeks, the troop had been busy preparing for its Parents Night program. Everything was in order. The walls were filled with displays, the scouts （童子军）were all enthusiastic. The tables were covered

15、with good things to eat.Now it was time for Jimmie Davis to give his speech. This was the moment he had been looking forward to fbr several weeks. As he arose, he caught a glimpse of his mothers bright face and his fathers calm, confident expression. Jimmie held his head high as he started his speec

16、h, his words bursting with pride and enthusiasm. He made sure the speech was lively and moving, conscious that his listeners were showing high praise to him by their careful attention.Then something happened. The world seemed to move slowly from side to side before him. He felt his mind went blank a

17、nd forgot what to say next. He slowed down, faltered （结巴），and finally stopped. His face turned red, and his hands sought each other wildly. In desperation, he looked toward his scout leader, begging for his help.Having heard that boyish but great speech practiced again and again, the boys scout lead

18、er supplied the missing words that allowed Jimmie to continue. But somehow it was different now. The wonderful speech had been messed up.Jimmie paused again, and once again the scout leader helped him. For the remaining two minutes, the speech seemed more like the scout leaders than Jimmies.After wh

19、at seemed like ages, the speech was finally over. In the heart of Jimmie, who sat down knowing that he had failed, there was a great weight pressing down on him. Disappointment was clearly written on the face of his mother. A twitch （抽搐）of the fathers face showed how painful he felt.The audience app

20、lauded in a perfunctory （敷衍的）way, feeling sorry for the boy who they thought had failed.But the scout leader was on his feet. His eyes twinkled. All the audience listened carefully. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1:The calm, sure voice of the scout leader echoed （回响）around the hall.

21、Paragraph 2:Jimmie began to speak in a trembling but firm voice.参考答案：The calm, sure voice of the scout leader echoed （回响）around the hall. You have seen a boy make a glorious victory out of what might have been a miserable failure. Jimmie had his chance to quit. To have quit would have been easy, but

22、 he didnt. He did deserve our true respect?9 Hearing the inspiring words and looking into his leaders encouraging eyes, Jimmie felt that he had to do something. Gathering up all his courage, he finally felt himself, arose again and walked onto the stage slowly and firmly.Jimmie began to speak in a t

23、rembling but firm voice. uTo be honest, I couldnt have made it without my leader. I thought about giving up, but it was his encouragement that reminded me of the spirit of our troop, that is, to play the game even under difficulties!?, Jimmie looked toward his leader with his eyes glittering with te

24、ars. The leader went up to him and threw his arms around him. At this moment, his parents overwhelmingly proud of their son, the entire hall thundered their applause at the little boy.【解析】【分析】本文本文是记叙文，讲述了吉米戴维斯在Parents，Night上搞砸了自己的演讲，让观众和他和父母感到十 分失望，就在他万分懊悔的时候，童子军队长站出给他以认可与鼓励，让他重新找回自信的故事。【详解】1 .段落续写：

25、由第一段首句内容“童子军队长平静而坚定的声音在大厅里回荡。”可知，第一段可描写童子军队长对在 场的所有人说的话。由第二段首句内容“吉米开始用颤抖但坚定的声音说。”可知，第二段可描写吉米受到队长鼓励后找回自 信，勇敢地面对自己的失误，并当众发言。2 .续写线索：队长鼓励勇敢站出来感谢队长感悟得到认可3 .词汇激 行为类 .放弃：quit /give up .发光：glitter /shine/flash 情绪类 .激励：inspiring /encouraging .坚定：sure /firm/certain【点睛】高分句型 1. You have seen a boy make a glori

26、ous victory out of what might have been a miserable failure, （what引导的宾语从句）高分句型 2. Hearing the inspiring words and looking into his leaders encouraging eyes, Jimmie felt that he had to do something.（现在分词短语作时间状语）高分句型 3. To be honest, I couldnt have made it without my leader.（虚拟语气）【模拟题5 （2022.江苏.南京市第一中

27、学一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Henry got on his bike and began to deliver copies of the March 8,1970,issue of The Gazette. Half an hour later,he threw the last newspaper onto the porch （门廊）at 35 Oak Street and cycled to The Gazette offices. There must be something important for the editor

28、in chief to meet with an 11 -year-old paperboy.nNo good way to deliver bad news JMr. Trotta greeted him when Henry stepped in.Henrys smile faded.“Were closing shop,Henry. Advertising is down.Television is how people get their news today. Local papers are the first to close.Mr.Trotta shrugged.Henry c

29、ouldnt believe his ears, frozen to the spot.He thought of all hose people he had met on his route. They wouldnt get their neighborhood news anymore!You were great,Henryalways dependable1Mr. Irotta said.Henry forced his head up to say good-bye.As he rode past the houses he knew so well he saw Mr.Grad

30、y on his porch,holding a broom （扫帚）.Henry led him to a chair and cleaned the porch.They sat for a while as Mr.Grady recalled how happy he*d been moving his family to 10 Oak. He sounded lonely.A week after his last deliveries, Henry wondered if his customers missed The Gazette as much as he did. He t

31、hought of a way to find out. He started out on his old route with a notebookHenry stopped at Mrs.Burkes. She opened the door, holding the two babies.She asked him if he knew any neighbors with experience of looking after children.Mr. Simon was next door, carrying his violin out.Hey, Henry. My band i

32、s having a concert in the park this Friday. Tell all your friends/As Henry made more notes, an idea started forming in his head. Maybe he could create a newsy page （小 报）for the neighbors.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Neighbors cheered Henry*s idea,ready to offer information.Henrys first Oak

33、 Street News then produced desired effects.参考答案：Neighbors cheered Henrys idea, ready to offer infonnation. Besides Mrs. Burke who longed for a baby sitter and Mr. Simon who desired a large audience for his concert. Henry also collected six other neighbors1 appealing and needs, including Mr. Grady wh

34、o yearned for his childrens coming back for a short reunion. Information in hand, Henry knocked at Mr. Trottas door and pleaded for his support in publishing his first Oak Street News, who approved almost immediately. Soon, Henrys tabloid was in circulation, which he cheerfully delivered from door t

35、o door as before.Henrys first Oak Street News then produced desired effects. Neighbors applauded the idea of sharing their needs in a communal newspaper, which really addressed their immediate concern in a practical and efficient way. As Mrs. Burke successfully found an ideal baby sitter, Mr. Simon

36、secured a large following for his concert and Mr. Grady who happily reunited with his kids, Henry realized, from his deep heart, that The Gazette was far from gone in this TV era, but transformed into Oak Street News that connected, bonded and tied the Oak neighbors in a cozy fabric.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索

37、展开，讲述了因为科技的发展，Henry送的报纸公报不再营业，想到了那些等待着 报纸看新闻的人，Henry决定自己办一份小报给邻居的故事。【详解】1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容“邻居们为亨利的想法欢呼起来，准备提供信息。”可知，第一段可描写邻居们都给小报 提供信息，小报出版了。由第二段首句内容“亨利的第一个橡树街新闻随后产生了预期的效果。”可知，第二段可描写小报给邻居们 带来了益处，将邻居们联系在一起。2 .续写线索：邻居提供信息出版报纸报纸达到了预期后果报纸给邻居们带来好处邻居更 团结3 .词汇激活（一个词汇要写出相近的表达） 行为类收集：collect/ gather/accumulate

38、.支持：approve/accept.改变：transform/change 情绪类.舒适的：cozy/comfortable.高兴：happily/ gladly/merrily【点睛】高分句型 1. Besides Mrs. Burke who longed for a baby sitter and Mr. Simon who desired a large audience for his concert.（使用了 who引导的定语从句）高分句型 2|. Soon, Henry*s tabloid was in circulation, which he cheerfully deli

39、vered from door to door as before. （使用了 which引导的定语从句）高分句型 3. Neighbors applauded the idea of sharing their needs in a communal newspaper, which really addressed their immediate concern in a practical and efficient way.（使用 了 which 弓| 导非限制性定语从句）【模拟题6 （2022,广东汕头市聿怀中学模拟预测）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。O

40、n a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled （骑彳亍）along alone, he th

41、ought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that*s a big dog!” he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasnt a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catch

42、ing up with him.Macs heart jumped. He found out his can of hear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Macs relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Ma

43、cs bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase （追赶）.Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the

44、 hill, hed be easy caught up and the wolfs teeth would be tearing into his flesh.At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didnt think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too

45、,assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好；Paragraph 1:The c

46、ar abruptly stopped in front of him.Paragraph 2:A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived.参考答案：The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Seeing Paul wave at him kindly and open the car door for him, Mac jumped off his bicycle and rushed into the car without any hesitation. No sooner had th

47、e poor man got in than Paul closed the door instantly. The wolf walked around the car and howled furiously at them, but just in vain. Realizing it couldnt catch Mac any more, the wolf ultimately gave up and walked away gloomily. On spotting the wolf swallowed by the road, Mac, bathed in perspiration

48、, sighed with relief and sank down to the back seat. Paul handed a bottle of water to Mac, who managed a weak smile, murmuring something like “Thank you”.A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived. Knowing that Mac had been chased by a wolf, they were stumped for words and paralyzed with fear. The two friends extended their earnest gratitude to Paul for rescuing Mac and then took Mac back home. After such a terrible experience, the splendid landscape of Alaska seemed no longer to be a tempt