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1、考点45读后续写10高分开头技15 （解析版）【命题解读】一个好的故事开头就好比是一个带着香味十足的诱饵，诱使读者上钩并且饶有趣味地看完。而 一个拙劣的故事开头，定会让读者大倒胃口，恢恢欲睡。俗话说：“well begun is half done! ”（好的 开头就成功了一半）。可见，写好一个好故事的好开头是多么的重要。那么到底在时间紧迫的考场 上如何写出靓丽的开头呢？【思维导图】我们先来看两个例句：Carefully, he stepped over all the broken glass他小心翼翼地踩过了所有的碎玻璃。JoyfuHy , he skipped up the street

2、他很高兴地跳过了街道。这里的carefully和joyfully把后面的两个动作“step踩”和“skip跳”描写的更加细致和生动。我们来看2016年高考真题。故事大致是这样的：夫妻旅游途中吵架，妻子独自离开，迷路在树林 里，直升飞机来了几次救援但没有看见她，她感到很失望。第一段开头的提示句是：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.意思是：没有直升机来了，天又黑了。同学们，可以想一想，我们该怎么接下来写开头呢？（停顿3秒钟）我们来看看下面的 写法: opened it and nodded to me to go

3、in. I walked along the cracked walkway. Tall grass tickled （使发痒）my ankles.Did someone really live here? I couldnt imagine that. The house didnft look nice, but I kept going. In front of the door leading to the enclosed front doorway, I paused, and my grandmother called out, “Mrs. Hershel, weve broug

4、ht you some lunch.” 注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。The reply in a low voice came from my left, Come on in.”On the road home, my grandmother said J For some of them, we*re the only person they see and a kind word and a smile go a long way.”参考答案：The reply in a low voice came from my left. Come

5、 on iny I turned around and found an old lady in the corner looking at me. She was in her nineties with grey hair. She was sitting in a rock chair in a loose dress. When I drew near to her, she smiled at me. My grandmother introduced me to her. She thanked me again. However, I stared at her and just

6、 stood there holding the food, unsure what to do. Under the guide of my grandmother, T placed the food on her kitchen table. I was unwilling to stay there and withdrew at once.On the road home, my grandmother said. For some of them, we re the only person they see and a kind word and a smile go a lon

7、g way And she asked if I would try it again the next day. With the lonely woman coining to my mind, I nodded. The next morning, I saw each person a little differently. I smiled at each one and greeted them. With those smiles I saw true happiness in their eyes. That summer I did something incredible

8、not only earning money but making a difference to someone.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者11岁的时候很需要钱，奶奶给了他一份给人送午餐的工作。【详解】1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我的左边传来一个低低的声音:“请进。”可知，第一段可描写作者跟随奶奶去到一个 老奶奶家所看到的情形。由第二段首句内容“在回家的路上，我的祖母说:“对他们中的一些人来说，我们是他们唯一能看到的 人，一句友善的话语和一个微笑会有很长的路要走“可知，第二段可描写作者听了奶奶的话以后的感受和 改变。2 .续写线索：走近她盯着她退了出去微笑打招呼3

9、 .词汇激活 行为类走近她：draw near to her/approach her 盯着她：stare at her/gaze at her 退 了 出去：withdraw/back out 打招呼：greet/say hello情绪类感谢：thank/show her gratitude 孤独的：lonely/solitary【点睛】高分句型 lHowever, I stared at her and just stood there holding the food, unsure what to do.（用现在分词作状 语）高分句型 2That summer I did someth

10、ing incredible not only earning money but making a difference to someone.（用现在分词作状语）【模拟题4 （2022.广东广东.一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Probably, most of you had the feeling before, at least once一you had been waiting for a long time, yet being afraid of getting. It was exactly my state of mind b

11、efore the first day at college. I had been working hard to pass the necessary tests and have my application to the undergraduate programme in management approved. And when the time had come for me to visit the college for the first day of the study,! couldnt sleep all night because of being anxious

12、about how to look good physically in front of the whole new world I was about to enter.However,the positive attitude and readiness to accept support from others helped a lot in a new environment.It was Monday morning. Being too excited to sleep the night before, I came to the college half an hour ea

13、rlier for the first lecture and was walking nervously through the hallway. About 15 minutes after I came, the hallway started to be full of students. Professors who walked on their business probably didnt pay attention to me. I knew which hall to go to and had already checked that it was open. Howev

14、er,! was hesitant to enter the hall and sit there alone. People were moving around me as if they hadnt seen me. I felt disappointed with the fact that I had nobody to talk to in the new and seemingly unfriendly place.Suddenly,a well-dressed man who seemed to be in his late twenties approached me. He

15、 introduced himself as Mathews and asked whether I was lost and whether he could help me with anything.In that situation,! realized it was very kind of him and that he was exactly the person I wanted to ask in my thoughts a minute before, but then I was too nervous for a friendly chat. As a result,

16、instead of welcoming the opportunity to make the first acquaintance （相识）,I told the man to mind his business and leave me alone since I was an adult capable of finding my class without anybodys assistance. 注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Luckily,the man didnt seem to be angry.Professor Mathew

17、s turned out to be an excellent speaker and the lecture went really well.参考答案：Luckily, the man didnt seem to be angry. He just shrugged, smiled a bit and went to the room where my first lecture was about to take place. Quite a lot of people had entered the room, so I didnt care about having an unhap

18、py experience with one of my future peers. I was embarrassed, however, when I finally learned that the man to whom I had been rude minutes before was our professor of the first lecture.Professor Mathews turned out to be an excellent speaker and the lecture went really well. After the class was dismi

19、ssed, I came to him to apologize for my bad manners earlier in the day. Professor Mathews said that he was not unhappy and on his first day as the student of our college, he was afraid and nervous, too. The incident helped me realize that I should not let emotional strain and anxiety prevent me from

20、 communicating with people openly and pleasantly.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开。作者在大学第一天时很紧张，当天去听讲座时迷了路。一位好心的教授想要帮 助他却被作者粗鲁地拒绝了。后来，他发现原来想要帮助他的人就是当天讲座的老师。最后作者向那位 教授道了歉并且明白了不应该让情绪紧张和焦虑阻碍自己与人开诚布公、愉快地交流。【详解】1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容“幸运的是，这个男人似乎并不生气。”可知，第一段可描写作者听讲座的时候发现了 做讲座的教授正是想要帮助他的人，感到很尴尬。由第二段首句内容“马修斯教授是一位出色的演讲者，讲座进行得非常顺

21、利。”可知，第二段可描写作者 向教授道歉及自己的感悟。2 .续写线索：进入教室发现真相感到尴尬道歉感悟3 .词汇激活 行为类 .进入：enter/get into .意识至II： realize/recognize .证明：turn out/prove 情绪类 .生气：angry/filled with anger .尴尬：embarrassed/awkward【点睛】高分句型 1. He just shrugged, smiled a bit and went to the room where my first lecture was about to take place. （由wher

22、e引导的限制性定语从句）高分句型 2. Professor Mathews said that he was not unhappy and on his first day as the student of our college, he was afraid and nervous, too.（由 that 引导的宾语从句）【模拟题5 （2022.辽宁东北育才学校一模）阅读下面材.料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Two fast friends were Willie and his little dog Bounce. Willie could neve

23、r think of taking a walk without Bounce. Cake and play were equally shared between them. Willie taught his dog many cunning tricks, and often said that Bounce could do almost anything in the world but talk. Then on a bright summer afternoon, Willie had strolled with Bounce down to the river, which w

24、as not more than two blocks from his father storeMr. Browns store.Willie began to throw stones into the water, and to watch ripples as they made one circle after another. Bounce lay on the grass, watching the flies buzzing around his nose, and catching any that came too near.There were some logs flo

25、ating in the river near the bank. Willie jumped upon one of them to see if he could throw a stone across the river. He drew back, sent the stone with all strength Just as it left his hand, the log turned and he fell into the water. He was frightened, for he did not know how to swim, and there was no

26、 one to hear, though he called as loud as he could for help.If he had been a big water dog, he could have jumped in and brought his master out. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；He ran up and down the bank two or three times, barking, looking first at Willie and then around.Finally, the father came to the river.参考答案

27、：Para 1:He ran up and down the bank two or three times, barking, looking first at Willie and thee around. Then he started, as fast as he could run up the street to the store. When he got there the door was shut, but he scratched against it and barked loudly, until some one came and opened it. He cau

28、ght hold of Mr. Browns clothes, then ran to the door, then back again, catching at him, barking and jumping. Noticing the dogs abnormal behavior, Mr. Brown realized something must have been wrong. He put on his hat and went with the dog. Bounce, seeing Mr. Brown take his hat, started for the river.P

29、ara 2:Finally, the father came to the river. He saw Willies hat floating on the water, and his small arm throw up.Without thinking twice, he sprang in and caught him just as he was going down for the last time, and quickly carried him to the bank. On the bank, Willie was given first aid and came to

30、life after a while. When he got over his fright, no one seemed to be more delighted than Bounce, his true friends.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了 Willie和他的小狗Bounce外出时，Willie掉进了水里，多亏了 Bounce及 时回家通知Willie的父亲，让Willie及时得救了。【详解】1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容“他在河岸上跑了两三次，汪汪叫着，先看了看Willie,然后又转了一圈。”可知，第 一段可描写Willie落水后，小狗回家通知他的父亲。由第

31、二段首句内容“最后，父亲来到河边。”可知，第二段可描写父亲救出Willie的经过以及被救后的反 应。2,续写线索：Bounce跑回商店Bounce叫来Willie的父亲父亲来到河边父亲救出Willie Willie得救3 .词汇激活 行为类 关闭：shut /close 看见：see/spot 苏醒：come to life/come to oneself 情绪类奇怪：abnormal/strange 高兴：delighted /glad 【点睛】高分句型 1 When he got there the door was shut, but he scratched against it an

32、d barked loudly, until some one came and opened it.（运用了 when引导时间状语从句）高分句型 2 Bounce, seeing Mr. Brown take his hat, started for the river.（运用 了现在分词作状语）【模拟题6 （2022江苏盐城一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成篇完整的短文。December 5, 2012, was a very special day for Josephine and Scott Lansing, as it marked the fourt

33、h adoption for the Lansings.When they began the journey to adopt their first daughter, Cloe, years ago, Josephine and Scott Lansing never imagined they would eventually have a house full of girls. The couple later adopted Josie in 2011 and Annabelle in 2012. For the Lansing family, adoption is about

34、 giving every child the opportunity to grow healthily in a loving home. Scott and Josephine are great advocates for each of their daughters, and they make sure each child knows how special and loved they are.In February of 2009, Bethany entered into the care of Child Protective Services due to her m

35、others inability to care for her and her brothers and sisters. Her experiences made it very difficult for her to trust adults, since she learned from an early age that she could only count on herself. She lived in a shelter for several months before moving into a foster home (寄养家庭).Still, Bethany st

36、ruggled to understand why she had been taken away from the only family she had known. In May of 2010, Bethany was placed at Helping Hand Home for Childrens Residential Treatment Center, where her journey to returning to normal finally began. With the patience, support, and guidance of the Helping Ha

37、nd Home staff, Bethany developed healthy, appropriate ways to express her emotions. She was taught to respect herself, and she learned that it was okay to trust others.When Bethany was introduced to the Lansing family in June of 2012, the meeting did not go as smoothly as everyone hoped. Bethanys in

38、securities resurfaced due to the suffering she experienced at such a young age, and she refused to talk or even look at the Lansings at their first meeting. 注意:1 .续写词数应为150左右：2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。But the Lansing family had no intention to give up.Later, Bethany experienced a lot of exciting things.参

39、考答案：But the Lansing family had no intention to give up. They were patient with Bethany and explained that they wanted to get to know her better and hoped she would one day be part of their family. The other girls shared their stories of coming from the foster care system, and they told her how scare

40、d they had been about meeting a new family too and how happy they were now. Soon Bethanys anxiety eased, and she agreed to go and see her new home. (77 words)Later, Bethany experienced a lot of exciting things. From many hours spent at the neighborhood pool to her first trip to the beach, Bethany no

41、w lived the life every child deserves. The Lansings celebrated Bethanys 11th birthday with a superb cruise. When Bethany returns to Helping Hand Home to visit, the first thing everyone comments on is her self-confidence. The little girl who was once afraid to make eye contact is now a secure, funny

42、young lady who would talk your ear off. (77 words)【解析】【分析】这是一篇记叙文。Josephine和Scott Lansing几年来相继收养了 Cloe, Josie, Annabelle三位女孩，并给她 们提供了健康幸福的成长环境。因为家庭原因，Bethany不得不接受寄养家庭，但是她的童年经历使得她 不信任任何人，在Helping Hand Home工作人员的帮助下，她的性格有了些许好转，但是在与Lansing 一 家会面时，还是有些抵触。【详解】1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容“但Lansing一家并不打算放弃。”可知，第一段可描写La

43、nsing一家合力劝导Bethany o由第二段首句内容“后来，Bethany经历了许多激动人心的事情。”可知，第二段可描写Bethany的经历 和变化。2 .续写线索：女孩们分享经历Bethany不再抗拒外出游玩Bethany的变化3 .词汇激活行为类 .想做某事：want to do/would like to do .看看：see/have a look at .返回：return to/go back to情绪类 .害怕的：scared/frightened .幸福的：happy/blissful【点睛】高分句型 1 They were patient with Bethany and

44、 explained that they wanted to get to know her better and hoped she would one day be part of their family.（运用 了 that 引导的宾语从句）高分句型 2When Bethany returns to Helping Hand Home to visit, the first thing everyone comments on is her self-confidence.（运用了 when引导的状语从句）Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled

45、the forest.立亥U, 一片黑暗笼罩着森林。 这里就用了：时间副词immediately衔接+环境描写，烘托了森林里迷路的紧张气氛。形容词短语开头我们先看两个例句：Curious to know what was inside, he tiptoed into the dark cave.他好奇地想知道里面是什么，踮着脚尖走 进了黑暗的洞穴。这里的“Curious to know what was inside,很想知道里面有什么东西”就是形容词短语，表明他进洞穴的原 因。相当于： He was curious to know what was inside, and he tipto

46、ed into the dark cave.Unable to say a word, he was rooted to the spot.一句话也说不出来，他就楞在了原地。这里的“unable to say a word”也是一个形容词短语，表现了“楞在原地”这个动作伴随动作：说不出一个字。我们来看2018年高考真题，讲的是爸爸带儿子去朋友家农场游玩而迷路的故事。第一段开头给的提示 句是：Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.突然，一只小兔子跳到了 我的马前。怎么接下来写开头呢？（停顿3秒钟）我们可以这么写：Afra

47、id that I miqht hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse. 意思 是：我害怕我会伤害这个可爱的小生物，我自动发出一声喊叫来阻止我的马。这里用情绪形容词+从句的 形式，很好体现了后一个动作“喊叫cry”的原因。我们来看这篇文章的第二段开头：文章给的提示句是：We had no idea where we were and it got dark.我们不知道自己在哪里，天变黑了。怎么接下来写开头呢？（停顿3秒钟）我们可以这么写：Exhausted and hungry

48、, I wondered if we could find our way back.我又累又饿，想知道我们能不能找到回 去的路。这里用情绪形容词+从句的形式,很好体现了后一个动作伴随的情况：又累又饿！适W非谓语开头先看这个例句：Lookinq around him cautiously, he slipped into the room and softly closed the door.他小心翼翼地环顾四周， 溜进了房间，轻轻地关上门。这里的“Looking around him cautiously”意思是：小心翼翼地环顾四周，是一个非谓语动词短语。我们来看2016年高考真题第一段开头，刚才提到过，讲了妻子在森林里迷路的故事。文章给的提示句是：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.但是没有直升机来了，天又 黑了。刚才我们用副词开头写了一个句子。现在我们用非谓语开头，怎么写呢？（停顿3秒钟）我 们可以这么写：Feeling disappointed, Jane had to stay alone for anothe