写作常见语法错误分析VI.ppt

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1、College Students Job Hunting 大大学生就业问题学生就业问题 In recent years,college students find it increasingly difficult to get a job.It sounds strange since young college students are usually intelligent,well-educated phenomenon,aspirant and eager to bring their talent into full play.Then what underlies the str

2、ange phenomenon?There are several reasons for this.To begin with,nowadays college students aim too high.All they want are“good”jobs which could offer good salary,comfortable working conditions,high social status among others.Consequently,most college students are unwilling to accept vacant jobs they

3、 consider not“good”enough.Another reason is that there is a big gap between the majors some students study in school and the demands of vacant jobs.So companies think some students are not fit for the jobs.表示列举的连词表示列举的连词：ufirst,second,third;ufirstly,secondly,thirdly;ufirst,next,then;uinthefirstplace

4、,inthesecondplace;uforonething,foranotherthing;utobeginwith,whatsmore,toconclude/Tosumup表示原因的连词：because,since,as,nowthat表示结果的连词：so,therefore,thus,hence,accordingly,consequently,asaresult表示对照的连词：onthecontrary,incontrast,bycontrast,incomparison,bycomparison,conversely表示让步和转折的连词：however,nevertheless,no

5、netheless,still,though,yet,inspiteof,atanyrate,inanycase,whoever,whatever表示时间顺序的连词：when,while,as,after,before,since,until,assoonas,once表示目的的连词：sothat,inorderthat表示总结的连词：Inaword,Insum,InconclusionEducationPays（2012.12真题）真题）lTheabovebarchartclearlyshowsuseducationpaysin2010.Weseethatunemploymentrateof

6、thosewithhighereducationbackgroundismuchlowerthanthosewithlowereducationdegree.Forinstance,theunemploymentrateofcollegestudentswithnodegreeisashighas14.9%whilethatofthosewithdoctoraldegreeisonly1.9%.（图表作文第一段第一句先介绍图表（图表作文第一段第一句先介绍图表主题，第二句说明数据所呈现的特点主题，第二句说明数据所呈现的特点/趋势，第趋势，第3，4句引用两个数据来说明这一特点，切勿将所句引用两个数

7、据来说明这一特点，切勿将所用数据例出，且数据表达方法正确）用数据例出，且数据表达方法正确）lThefollowingreason,inmyopinion,isthemostimportantonetoaccountforthisphenomenon.Comparedwiththosewithcomparativelylowereducationdegree,peoplewhohavereceivedhighereducationpossessconsiderablywiderknowledge,moreremarkablelearningandresearchability,greaterin

8、novationandmostofall,resourcefulsocialnetwork,allofwhichmakethemmorequalifiedandcompetentfortheirtask.Thus,theyarelesslikelytolosetheirjobs.lThisphenomenontellsusthateducationisaworthyinvestment.Therefore,educationinvestmentshouldbestrengthenedwhilewe,ascollegestudents,shouldstudyhardertoavoidunempl

9、oyment.l交通话题一直是四级作文命题话题之一。交通话题一直是四级作文命题话题之一。1990年年6月考查过月考查过HowtosolvetheproblemofHeavyTraffic,1994年年1月考题月考题TheWorldIsGettingSmallerandSmaller也与交通有关，近年来，随着私家也与交通有关，近年来，随着私家车的日益增多，城市交通拥堵凸显，出行车的日益增多，城市交通拥堵凸显，出行难越来越成为人们关注的焦点。难越来越成为人们关注的焦点。lAsweknow,trafficaccidentsarebecomingmoreandmoreseriousinChangsha

10、.Everyyearanincreasingnumberofpeopleinvolvedinthemareinjured,andevenkilled,which,ofcourse,hasarousedwidespreadconcernofthepublic.lTaketheabovechartasanexample.In2010,fromJulytoJanuary,183peoplewereinjuredintrafficaccidentsand41peoplelosttheirlivesinthem.Takingacarefullookatthem,youllfindthattraffica

11、ccidentsinChangshahavebeenincreasingallthetime.InJuly,therewereonly20peopleinjured,whileinDecember,theinjuredwentupto49.Asforthedead,inJuly,therewereonly3,butinDecember,therewere14.Thisisa367%increase.TrafficAccidentsInChangshal The increase of traffic accidents is not only a threat to peoples life,

12、but also shows the traffic system problems in Changsha.It is urgent for the authorities related to bring it under control.trafficProblems交通问题交通问题Thereisnodoubtthattrafficcongestionbecomesagrowingworryfortheresidentsofmosturbanareas.Everyday,especiallyinrushhours,theroadsarecrowdedwithvehicles.People

13、havetospendmuchtimeontheirwayhomeortoworkandevenmightgetinvolvedinanaccident.Thisproblemhascausedmuchtroubleinmanybigcities.lThemaincausesforthetrafficproblemscanbeattributedtothefollowingfactors.First,withtheexplosion/growthofthepopulationinthecities,moreandmorepeoplehavetocommutebybusorcar,whileth

14、etransportfacilitiescantmeettheneedsoftheincreasingpopulation.Forexample,manyroadsandstreetsareoldandnarrow.Besides,somedriversandpedestriansdonotobeythetrafficregulations,whichaddstotheseriousnessofthetrafficproblems.lOnesolutiontothetrafficproblemistoconstructmoreroadsandtrafficbridgesandopenupmor

15、ebuslines.Butconsideringtheintensivelanduseindowntownareas,thegovernmentshouldfurtherdevelopthesuburbandthecountrysideespeciallyforthenewindustrialenterprisesandlivingquarterssoastoreducethedensepopulationandconsequentlytheheavytrafficinthecities.MotorcyclesandCityTraffic1近年来中国城市中的摩托车2摩托车的优点和缺点3我对我国

16、城市中摩托车发展前景的看法lNowadays,motorcyclesarepopulararoundus.TheyhavebecomeanimportantmeansoftransportinChinesecities.Comparedwiththebikeandthecar,themotorcyclehasitsownadvantages.First,itisquiteflexible.Whenthereisatrafficjam,itcangothroughthecarsthatareheldupinthestreet.Besides,itdoesntconsumemuchpetrol.M

17、ostimportantofall,itcancarryanotherpersonattheback.lButeverycoinhastwosides.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent.Tobeginwith,itsverycomplicatedtogetqualifiedfurridingamotorcycle.Youllhavetogothroughaseriesofprocedurestogetaridinglicense.Furthermore,themaintenanceisexpensive.Worstofall,itcostsabigsumofm

18、oneytopayfurthelicenseplate,especiallyinbigcities.Inconclusion,ithasbothfavorableandunfavorableaspects.However,iftheauthoritiesconcernedsimplifytheproceduresandreducethecostofthelicenseplate,themotorcyclewillbeacceptedbymorepeople.HowtoDealwithSub-health?lWiththemodernizationoftheworld,peoplesstanda

19、rdoflivinghasimprovedalot.Thenthereappearsastateofsub-healthamongpeoplewhichposeanewthreattothem.lTherearesometypicalsymptomsforpeoplewhoareinastateofsub-health.Firstofall,thosewhosufferfromitoftenhaveaheadacheorbackache.Secondly,theyfeellikehavingarestfrequently.Whatupsetsusmostisthat,thesituationi

20、sspreadingcountrywide.Asaresult,moreandmoreworkersinbigcitiesareharassedbyit,withapercentageof75inBeijing,72inShanghaiand70inGuangzhourespectively.lThenhowcanwesolvethisproblemeffectively?Expertssuggestthatthebestwaytokeepushealthyistodoexercises.Itisalsoveryimportantthatpeopleshouldformagoodlivingh

21、abit,forexample,gettingupearlyandgoingtosleepearly.Onlydoingsocanwekeepushealthy.Advertisements广告广告lWiththedevelopmentofmaterialprosperity,advertisementshavebecomemoreandmoreimportantinourdailylife.Advertisementsgivelatestinformationaboutproducts.Iftherewerenoadvertising,consumerscouldnotknowaboutgo

22、odsintheirlocalshops.Advertisinghelpsselltoabiggermarket.Therefore,asmoregoodsaresoldtheyarecheaper.Advertisementsalsoprovidemoneyfornewspapers,magazines,radiosandTVstations,etc.lButtherearealsosomeopinionsagainstadvertising.Somepeoplethinkthatadvertisementsdonotgivemuchinformationbutonlytrytopersuadeyoutobuy.Theycreateademandforgoodsthatarenotreallyneeded.Besides,advertisingaddstothecostofgoods.Furthermore,theyareuglytolookatandspoiltheenvironments.Actually,everycoinhastwosides.Advertisingiswithoutexception.Butintodaysworld,advertisingisnotonlynecessarybutalsohelpful.