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1、2021年中考满分作文特快专刊作文01北京卷（北京市2021年中考英语试题）题目北京是一座蕴含着丰富文化的城市，这里的建筑、戏曲、美食、服饰、手工艺品等，都有文化的印 记。假如你是李华，你校英语社团正在开展线上国际交流活动，其公众号计划做关于北京文化的系列推 送，现就“Cultural Symbols of Beijing（北京文化标志）”这一话题在校内收集素材。请你用英语给公众号留 言，推荐一个你眼中的北京文化标志，对其作简要介绍，并说明推荐理由。提示词语：show, traditional, love, treasure, important提示问题：In your opinion, wh

2、ats the cultural symbol of Beijing?Please describe it.Why do you think it can be a symbol?Im Li Hua, from Class I, Grade 9.I hope my idea can be taken. Thanks!题目现实中，大到自然环境和社会环境，小到个人生活和学习，变化无处不在，面对变化，唯有积极适搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。 【高分句型一】Beijing is a beautiful city with many famou

3、s places, such as the Great Wall and the Forbidden City.匕京是个美 丽的城市，有许多著名的地方，如长城和紫禁城。such as the Great Wall and the Forbidden City.用such as 来列举北京的著名景点。【高分句型二】I believe the air will become fresher.我相信空气会变得更新鲜。句子 the air will become fresher 做 believe 的 宾语。相似题假如你叫李华，某英文网站以I love Beijing为题征文，请你投稿。介绍一下北京的

4、情况，北京著名景点或 小吃，以及你热爱北京的理由。所给提示词语仅供选用。提示词语：capital, north, population, large, weather, the Great Wall, Beijing Duck, Beijing Opera.提示问题:What is Beijing like?What is Beijing famous for?Why do you love Beijing?【参考范文】Beijing is our capital.lt is in the north.lt has a large population.The weather here is

5、cold in winter and hot in summer.lt has has a lot of palces of interest like the Great Wall. Beijing Duck is famous food. Beijing Opera is Chinese treasure.I likeBeijing Opera because it can help me understand China deeply.I also love to make dumplings inBeijing. By the way, I will learn various tra

6、ditional Chinese cultures in Beijing.【考题解析】试题分析：本次作文为话题类作文，话题是介绍一下北京的情况。认真阅读提示：1 .北京著名景点或小吃，以及你热爱北京的理由。2.提示问题：What is Beijing like? What is Beijing famous for? Why do you love Beijing? 3. 提示词语：capital, north, population, large, weather, the Great Wall, Beijing Duck, Beijing Opera动 笔前要认真思考，列好提纲，不要遗漏要

7、点，并适当发挥。注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。 写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，字数不要太少。写完以后，再读一遍，检查 是否有写和语法错误，语言是否通顺，要点是否齐全，条理是否清楚。【亮点说明】这篇文章语言规范，表达清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语言通顺，要点齐 全，字数符合要求，没有拼写和语法错误，上下文意思连贯，条理清楚。相似题我们的每一次变化都见证了我们的成长。请以“The biggest personal change I have ever made”为题，并根据要 点和要求，用英语写一篇短文。要点：1.变化是什么；.变化变化是如

8、何发生的；2 .变化后有何感受；要求：1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；3 .词数80左右The biggest personal change I have ever made【参考范文】The biggest personal change I have ever madeThe biggest personal change Ive ever made is that I have fallen in love with reading.When I was a child, I didnt enjoy books at all. Later, my mother always rea

9、d stories for me and bought me books. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time.Books are my friends. And they have benefited and will benefit me a lot.【考题解析】 这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少,fall in love with

10、 reading, be a child, not.at all, read stories for me, buy me books, begin to do, love reading, talk with, a fantastic way to pass my free time, benefit me a lot 等。同时 When I was a child, I didnt enjoy books at all./ The biggest personal change Ive ever made is that I have fallen in love with reading

11、.等多种从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容，使表达多样 化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表 达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考 查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语 和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。相似题在两年多的初中学习和生活中，我们被不同的人影响着、改变着，请选择一位影响你或改变你的 人，写写她/他给你带来的变化。要点提示：1 .你的变化；.谁影响或改变了你

12、；2 .他/她怎样影响或改变你；要求：1 .字数：80-120词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。2 .包含以上要点，可以适当扩充。3 .文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。I have changed a lot in the past two years.【参考范文】I have changed a lot in the past two years. I used to have time management problems. Since Junior 1,1 have been the class leader and have been trying to help my teac

13、hers manage the class. At first, I found I had little time left for my studies and failed several tests.I didn*t want to be the class leader any longer. But my headteacher said that I should try to improve my time management skills first. He gave me some tips. For example, I can do two things at onc

14、e, like listening to lesson tapes while running. My teacher also said I could share some of the class leader work with other classmates.Fve now developed good habits and found a balance between my studies and other class work.【考题解析】.题干解读：该题目属于描写人的记叙文写作，开头已给出。根据要点提示，写一位影响你或改变你的 人，可适当发挥。1 .写作指导：本文应该用第

15、一和第三人称来叙述故事内容；时态使用一般过去时为主，描述对现在的影响 时，可采用现在完成时。在描写他/她怎样影响你或改变你时应细致，叙述要完整，保证条理清晰。可适当 使用连词，增加文章的连贯性。应使用一些能反应你英语水平的复合句等高分句型。写完以后，注意检 查，确保语法、单词拼写和标点正确。相似题Write at least 60 words on the topic “A personal habit Fd like to change”.以“我想改变的一个个人习惯”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。The following points are only for refere

16、nce:简述你想改变的这个个人习惯； 说明你改变这一习惯的理由及措施。【参考范文】In real life, there are many people who have trouble finding themselves. So Im not an exception. For me, worry seems to be a habit which has been a personal habit Id like to change.To tell the truth, I often feel tired. In fact I am not so unlucky, but my inn

17、er sadness, and there is a one - sided understanding of life. A wise man, even in a troubled environment, often finds pleasure in himself. There is no denying that I have to find the reason to get rid of the bad habit before it destroys me. It is important that I first get to know how harmful the ha

18、bit really is. Take the habit of worry as an example. Obviously, worry is harmful to my health. It can result in anxiety and nervousness. Besides, worry is a waste of time. A depressed person spends almost as much time a day as I can thinking about some unnecessary little things. Since I can realize

19、 the danger and waste, it is likely that I may stop worrying slowly.To get rid of a bad habit, it is essential that I also have a strong will. Where there is a will, there is a way. I believe I am able to change this bad habit in the near future.【考题解析】题干分析：阅读题干，这是一篇话题型作文。必须要写清楚想改变的这个个人习惯以及说明你改变这一习 惯

20、的理由及措施。例文点评：例文采用三段式，第一段点题，引出话题；第二段紧接写出自己想改变的个人习惯以理由；第 三段提出措施。例文逻辑条理清楚。高分亮点：短语：In fact实际上；There is no denying that从句不可否认的是；get rid of摆脱；be harmful to对有 害。句型：For me, worry seems to be a habit.对我来说，烦恼似乎是一种习惯.这里seem to do sth表示似 乎做某事。I believe I am able to change this bad habit in the near future.相信在不久的

21、将来我能改变这个 坏习惯.这里believe后面跟的是一个宾语从句，be able t。d。sth表示能做某事。相似题Write at least 60 words on the given “has changed me”.（以 改变了 我为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）世间瞬息万变，凡事都在变化，都在发展，我们也在不断地调整、改变自己。某些人、事、经历改变 着我们的心态、行为、价值观、思维方式、生活方式等。请结合题目和自己的经历，谈一谈自己的改变。 （注意：1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。）【参考范文】Difficu

22、lty has changed meLast year, my father bought me a very thick book. The book has more than 500 pages. At the beginning, I felt a lot of pressure because I didnt know when I would finish reading the book. But my father told me that I could do it as long as I worked hard. I began to realize that inste

23、ad of being afraid of difficulties, I wanted to be brave. So I read two pages a day. I finally finished reading it this year. My father said he was proud of me.At first, it was very difficult for me to finish reading the book. But when I finally overcame this difficulty, I realized that I had become

24、 brave.【考题解析】,题干解读：本文是一篇半命题作文。要求补充完整题目“has changed me,再结合题目和自己的 经历，谈一谈自己的改变。1 .写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可以从自己经历的困难、心理变 化等方面讲述困难使自己变得更勇敢。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。相似题Write a passage of at least 60 words on “ My Change” according to the given situation（以“我变 了为题，写一篇 不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格）你在生活或者学习中一定发生了不少改变，比如

25、生活技能的改变、学习方法的改变等，请选取一个方面， 结合自身经历，谈一谈你是如何变化了。（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）Phrases for reference （以下短语仅供参考）： used to do/be.try my best to do.【参考范文】My ChangeMy life has changed a lot in the last few years. I used to be more serious, but now I am outgoing. I used to be overweight, but I am not fat

26、anymore .1 used to like watching cartoon every day, but now I like to watch TV play .The biggest change in my life is that I begin to understand others. When I was a child, I didnt know why our family had so many rules. I thought that maybe my parents didnt like me. But now I know they love me and t

27、hey do that in order to make me a better man. Every time when I come across something I dont understand. I will put myself in others shoes and I will feel better.【考题解析】题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，要求介绍“我的改变。根据提示可知，本文人称为第一人称。要求结合 自身经历介绍自己如何变化。注意主谓一致，上下文连接。用词准确、文章连贯性。例文点评：本文时态是主要一般现在时，以第一人称书写。本文第一段主要介绍我的一些改变，然后第二 段

28、介绍我的具体改变“我会理解他人了文章符合写作要求，思路清晰，层次分明，要点齐全。高分亮点：高分短语：used to; not anymore; like to do sth.;every time; come across; put oneself in sbs shoes;feel better o 高分句型： My life has changed a lot in the last few years.； The biggest change in my life is that I begin to understand others o【点睛】在作文中如何描述过去发生的事情，需要注意

29、以下几点：1. 人称：人称一般题目会告知以第几人称口吻来写。2. 时态：叙述过去的事情，常用的时态是一般过去时和过去进行时。本文在叙述“当我小的时候， 我不明白为什么我有那么多家规。”时使用一般过去时。3. 要素：以事情发展的时间地点来写，注意when、where who和what,也可以用倒叙的方法， 先写自己的感受，然后再写发生的事情。应，才能有所进步和收获。某英文网站正在开展以“适应变化”为主题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你生活中的一个变化，你是如何应对这个变化的，以及有什么收获。提示词语：help, enjoy, new, challenge, take ac

30、tion提示问题： What is the change that happened in your life?How did you deal with it?What have you learned from the experience?There are many changes in a persons life.2021年北京卷中考作文与2020年相比，在考试形式上没有什么特殊的变化，还是二选一，学生 选择其中一题完成任务的考试形式。这两篇作文涉及到的话题分别是：“传统文化”和“适应变化”。话 题仍贴近学生的实际生活，让学生学以致用。作文一是一篇材料作文，要求介绍北京文化标志，根

31、据提示介绍什么是北京的文化标志，并叙述 原因。注意理由合理，内容符合客观事实。本文需采用第一人称书写，时态是一般现在时。文中可使用宾 语从句和非谓语动词等，为文章增色，上下文多使用连词或副词，使行文流畅。作文二要求根据提示词语和问题，写出自己在生活中的一个变化，以及如何应对这个变化，有什 么收获等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。写作时要与己给 出的开头融合起来，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，要做到 要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。题目范文一Im Li Hua. from Class I, Grade 9.1 belie

32、ve that Jingju is a cultural symbol of Beijing. Jingju tells time- honored stories through singing and movements, showing us what life was like in the past. The performers are in beautiful clothes and with colorful faces.Jingju is a traditional art form loved by people of all ages. Besides, as a nat

33、ional treasure, it plays an important role in Chinese culture. Thats why I think Jingju can be a cultural symbol of Beijing.I hope my idea can be taken. Thanks!范文二Im Li Hua, from Class 1, Grade 9. In my opinion, the cultural symbol of Beijing is the Palace Museum. It was built in Ming Dynasty and is

34、 located in the center of Beijing.As for the reasons, first of all, in the Palace Museum, there are a number of valuable exhibits which show the traditional culture and the long history of Beijing to the world. In addition, as one of the most famous tourist attractions in Beijing, it hardly fails to

35、 amaze tourists from all over the world. If s said that a trip to Beijing is never complete enough unless we pay a visit to this beautiful palace.I feel lucky to live in Beijing and promise to treasure what have been left for us. All above is about my opinion towards the cultural symbol of Beijing.I

36、 hope my idea can be taken. Thanks.题目范文一There are many changes in a persons life. When I entered middle school, I felt lonely. I missed my old friends, but I knew I had to fit in. I offered help to my class, joined in the after-school activities and invited my classmates to my birthday party. Gradua

37、lly, I made some friends and enjoyed the company of my new classmates.From this experience, I get to know change brings challenges as well as opportunities. When change comes, we should face it and take action.范文二There are many changes in a persons life. Sometimes changes can be unexpected and quite

38、 challenging, but I think we should face the challenges bravely.My biggest challenge was the new way of learning during COVID-19. Sitting in the classroom had helped me stay focused. However, when I was alone in front of my computer, I had to take responsibility for myself. After I made up my mind,

39、I started setting learning goals, making plans, and taking action. I tried hard to improve myself and finally achieved better learning results.Changes have made me stronger. I have become more self-disciplined and self-driven, which will lead me to a promising future.作文一是以征文的形式要求考生写出自己心中“北京文化的标志”，描述

40、并说明原因。作文一对于考生 观察和理解传统文化提出了一定的能力要求。同时、侧重考查了考生运用所学英文知识描述事物，表达观点 的能力。考生在写作文一时可选择的范围相对较大，可从“衣食住行”（如：瑞映祥的唐装、全聚德的烤鸭、 交错四九城的胡同、前门大街的人力车，京剧）等不同方面来思考，并选择自己最擅长的某个方面动笔书写。 在写这篇作文时，最重要的是能细致描述并充分说明原因。考生在这一过程中要充分利用题目给出的提示词 语，并结合要点做好分段。作文二要求考生写出自己生活中遇到的变化，说明自己的处理方式及总结收获。本次作文二的考查方向 与2020海淀区初三第一学期期中学业水平调研的作文二考查方向颇为接近

41、。二者均是要求考生观察并记录 生活中的变化（困难），说明应对变化的方式（处理困难的过程），并最终总结自己的收获。因此，对于常 练题目二的考生来说，这一主题的作文应该并不感觉到陌生。作文二对于考生的记叙和议论能力提出了较高 的要求，同时也需要考生具备健康、积极、向上的情感态度。考生在写作文二的时候，可结合自己生活中的 真实案例展开，有条理、有逻辑地写好自己面对改变时采取的有效应对措施，并在文章最后总结自己的收获 并适当升华主题。值得关注的是，写作文二时考生也要结合要点分段，并高效利用提示词语。1 . Jingju tells time-honored stories through singin

42、g and movements, showing us what life was like in the past.【亮点】本句使用time-honored表历史悠久的，可作为积累词汇。且本句使用非谓语来介绍京剧，同学们 在自己的作文中也可进行借鉴学习。2 .Jingju is a traditional art form loved by people of all ages.【亮点】本句采用过去分词作定语，修饰art form。3Thats why I think Jingju can be a cultural symbol of Beijing.【亮点】本句句型“Thats why”

43、表这就是的原因”，可作为作文的句型素材积累。4. As fbr the reasons, first of all.In addition,. .Besides,.【亮点】列举原因时，我们可以运用这类连接词，使得文章结构清晰，逻辑严谨。5. As for the reasons, first of all ， there are a number of valuable exhibits which show the traditional culture and the long history of Beijing to the world.【亮点】本句采用了定语从句，对exhibits进

44、行了解释说明，使得文章更加出彩。6.1 feel lucky to live in Beijing and promise to treasure what have been left for us.【亮点】本句运用了宾语从句，丰富了文章句型。7.All above is about my opinion towards the cultural symbol of Beijing.【亮点】本句作为总结性话语，可将本句中。pinion改为advice,用于给出相关建议的文章。8. From this experience, I get to know change brings challe

45、nges as well as opportunities.【亮点】get t。know表“逐渐明白”，并且此句用aswellas替代了 and,值得借鉴学习。9.Sitting in the classroom had helped me stay focused.【亮点】本句采用动名词短语作主语的形式，使得句型结构更丰富化。10.1 have become more self-disciplined and self-driven, which will lead me to a promising future.【亮点】本句运用了非限制性定语从句，使文章更有层次感。且这一句型很好运用，可

46、以在平时作文中多 运用。相似题北京市文化和旅游局正在开展以“Charming Bejjing, Cultural Tour1（魅力北京，文化之旅）为主题的 征文活动，假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍来北京旅游的最佳时间、交通方式及活动内 容.提示词语：visit, Great Wall, Beijing Opera提示问题：When is the best time to visit Beijing?How can people travel around Bejing?What can people do when they are in Bejjing?Charming Beij

47、ing, Cultural TourBeijing is a charming city full of culture. 【参考范文】Charming Beijing, Cultural TourBeijing is a charming city full of culture. It is the capital of China. The best time to go to Beijing is in autumn, because it is neither cold nor hot. People can travel around Beijing by subway, beca

48、use the subway is almost all over the city. So the subway is the most convenient. There are many places of interest in Beijing that are worth visiting, such as the Great Wall, the imperial palace, the Summer Palace and so on. People can also watch Beijing Opera because it is a kind of traditional Chinese culture. Besides, people can also taste a variety of Chinese food.【考题解析】.题干解读：这是一篇征文稿，以Charming Beijing, Cultural Tour*（魅力北京，文化之旅）为主题的征 文活动，介绍来北京旅游的最佳时间、交通方式及活动内容。注意用上文中所给的提示词及问题。1 .写作指导：这篇短文应该使用一般现在时态，人称用第三人称，认真阅读材料，不要遗漏提示要点，写 作过程要注意表达的