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1、2021年中考满分作文特快专刊作文10黑龙江省齐齐哈尔卷真题在线（黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市2021年中考英语试题）值此毕业之际，学生会主席倡议大家“携手爱校园，为母校献礼请你根据以下提示写一篇短文。介 绍你将如何为母校献礼。要求:1字迹工整，段落清晰，表达清楚，语法正确，行文连贯;.要点必须包括所有相关信息，并适当发挥;2 .词数：80100词。开头己给出，不计入总词数。How time flies!售题解析本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容介绍你将如何为母校献礼，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。满分范文How time flics! Its time to leave my school. Next

2、Monday, Ill go back to do something fbr it. Here arc the things that I will do.First, I will pick up the rubbish around the school. Til clean the windows and doors, too. Then Pll give the younger schoolmates some useful advice. For example, do (he homework by themselves or listen to the teachers car

3、efully. Next Ill give away my notes.Its really hard to say goodbye. I wish my school will have a better future.名师点评2021年齐齐哈尔市中考英语作文跟前几年相比，难度没有太大变化，题干中要点皆有相关提示，写作中必 须根据文中要点提示进行写作，要求要点必须全面，可适当发挥。写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态以一 般将来时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍要做什么；第三段收尾，提出希望。保证 语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。佳句积累How time flies!【亮点】感叹句，意

4、为“时光飞逝”。1. Here are (he things that I will do.【亮点】开门见山，表明写该文章的目的。2. First, .Then, . For example, .Next.【亮点】文中运用相关衔接词，使文章更流畅。相似题马上要初中毕业了，假如你有机会负责组织你们班的“毕业派对”，你将会如何构思设计出一个充满创意、 情感和品位的毕业庆祝活动呢？请写一篇80词以上的短文，介绍你的毕业派对计划。内容要求：1.简介大致的构思；.分点列出活动流程；2 .小结活动的主要特色。注 意：短文中不允许出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名和校名等信息。【参考范文】I have a pla

5、n for the party that divides into three parts. Theyre Picture show, Talent show and Senior high message.Part 1. Picture showWe bring some photos taken with our teachers or classmates and describe the photos with a good story about our school lives.Part 2. Talent showWe can share our hobbies with our

6、 classmates. We can show what we can do in music, art or sport. We can also show other special abilities like playing magic and so on.Part 3. Senior high messageEach of us prepares a big card, and then writes down a message for senior high on the card for each other. So every one can exchange the be

7、st wishes with his or her classmates.In this party, all of us can share our wonderful experience in the past three years. Wc can present what theyve learnt and how much progress weve made, too. And finally wc may look fbrward to the future with lots of encouragemenc or advice.【考题解析】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍

8、你的毕业派对计划。这是一个开放式的作文，可以自己够了派对活 动内容。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查般现在时态，人称为第i人称和第三人称，注意主谓致问 题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：We can share., Each of us prepares., all of us can., And finally we may look forward to 等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意 多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系.写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的派对计划分成三部分，接下来介绍分成三段介绍这 三部分：图片展示，才

9、艺表演，初中留言，最后期望充满鼓励和建议的未来。此处divide into, share wi(h,write down, exchange with, make progress, look forward to 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。考点：提纲作文。相似题初中三年的学校生活即将成为美好的回忆。回首三年时光，你有哪些收获?即将毕业，你有什么感受？假如你是李华，你校英文校刊邀请你写一篇短文谈谈毕业之际的感想，内容包括你三年学校生活的收获 以及你即将毕业的感受。提示词语:knowledge, friend, memory, happy提示问题:What have you got du

10、ring the past three years? How do you feel upon graduation?【参考范文】During (he past three years, I have leanit a lot of knowledge from the books and I have improved my study skills. I can get along with my teachers and classmates. We learn from each other and help each other, too. Especially, my memory

11、 has improved a lot and I can remember much difficult knowledge. It makes me very happy. At home I can do some housework so that my parents can have more time to rest. On my way to school, I can obey the traffic rules. When I meet difficulty, I can talk to my friends about it.Now I feel stressed in

12、my study. 1 have too much homework to do every day and I have to stay up late to finish it, so I have no time for my hobbies.【考题解析】.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，在写作时应结合提示词语和提示问题开展论述；主要讲述三年来的收 获。1 .例文点评：例文用第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，重点讲述自己的收获。叙述时避免 汉语式英语，句意完整且条理清晰。2 .高分亮点：短语：get along with sb： learn from each other； imp

13、rove a lot； make me happy： obey the traffic rules； talk to my friends； stay up late句型： At home I can do some housework so that my parents can have more time to rest.相似题作为一名即将毕业的初三学生，回想过去三年学习生活，一定会有让你难忘的人和事。请你为学校英 语校刊写一篇毕业感言。提示要点：1 .难忘的人和事；.你的感想和收获；2 要求：L80-120词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。2 .包含以上要点，可以适当扩充。3 .文中不能出

14、现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。How time flies! Soon I will graduate（毕业）from junior high school.【参考范文】How time flics! Soon I will graduate from junior high school. Looking back at these past three years. I remember many things.I remember my first birthday party at school which was held by my head teacher, since then

15、 I havent felt lonely any more. I remember my English teacher, who was always so patient when I asked him questions. 1 remember my math teacher, who listened to me carefully and explained everything so clearly. There is no doubt (hat I have achieved lots of knowledge and skills during the three year

16、s, which are good for my future study.Ill never forget my dear teachers and classmates. I will cherish my study experiences at school. Because it is the school life that colors my whole life.【考题解析】.题干解读：本文为材料作文，要求就初中三年难忘的人和事写一篇文章。时态可用现在时和过去时，人 称用第一人称。1 .例文点评：例文采用三段式，第一段用于引出“难忘的人”这一主题；第二段则详细描述了初中三年有哪

17、 些老师令作者难忘；第三段收尾，表示自己将永远记得这三年时光。例文层次分明，思路清晰，包含了题 FI所给全部要点，并进行了适当拓展，单词拼写语法无误，使用了一些复杂复合句型，为本文增加了一些 亮点。2 .高分亮点:短语：graduate from, look back, not. any more, listen to, lots of, be good for。句型：(1)1 remember my English teacher, who was always so patient when I asked him questions.(定语从句)There is no doubt tha

18、t I have achieved lots of knowledge and skills during the three years, which arc good fbr my future study. (There is no doubt that 固定句型)相似题假如你是Eric,即将初中毕业，作为一名优秀学生代表，你将在毕业典礼上发言。请你根据内容提示 写一篇发言稿吧！ 内容提示：1 .毕业前的感受；.对未来的展望。要 求：1 .要求要点齐全，语意连贯，可适当发挥。2 .文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名。3 .短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Good morning, dear

19、 teachers, parents and friends. Three years will soon pass.Good luck to all of you and thanks for your attention.【参考范文】Good morning, dear teachers, parents and friends. Three years will soon pass. I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month. I am ea

20、ger to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years life. One of them impressed me very much.I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldnt do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my Eng

21、lish teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to leam English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, Ive become interested in English and Im good at it. I want to thank her. At the same time, I hope that all the students have a good future and I am looking for

22、ward to a much happier high school life.Good luck to all of you and thanks for your attention.【考题解析】.题干解读：本文是一篇发言稿。围绕“毕业前的感受”及“对未来的展望”写一篇短文。1 .写作指导：本文主要采用一般过去时和一般将来时。分为三段式：笫一段描述自己毕业前的感受；第二 段描述令自己印象最深的一件事，并展望未来；最后一段表达祝愿和感谢。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑 性要强，无语法和标点错误。相似题初中毕业之际，校报“英语角”栏目向同学们征集毕业典礼活动计划。假定你是李华，请根据要点写一封信，

23、提 出你的建议。写作要点：毕业典礼时间、地点7月1日，学校报告厅三项活动1.校长讲话送祝福2.学生发言谈感恩3写作要求:1.80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；2 .不能出现真实的校名和人名,否则不得分；.写作要点都必须用上，紧扣主题，适当发挥。参考词汇:毕业典礼 graduation ceremony;前进中学 Qianjin Middle School;学校报告厅 the school halLDear editor,Im very happy to have the chance to show you my plan for the graduation ceremony.T

24、his is what wc will do.I hope you will choose my plan.Yours,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear editor,Im very happy to have the chance to show you my plan for rhe graduation ceremony.The ceremony will be held in our school hall on July 1st. I have planned three activities for it.First of al I, we would like to invite

25、 our headmaster (o make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future.Aftcr that,one of the students will read a thank-you letter to all the people who have helped us.In the end,some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.This is what we will do.I hope you wil

26、l choose my plan.Yours,Li Hua【考题解析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍毕业典礼活动计划。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般现在 时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用， 比如：The ceremony will, one of the students will read, some pictures will be shown to等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了很高兴参加毕业典礼，接下来介绍毕业典礼的时间、地点，最后介 绍了比亚典礼的三项活动。此处first of all, invite sb to do sth, give sb sth, in the end等这些词组的运用也让文 章增色不少。