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1、2021年中考满分作文特快专刊作文06内蒙古自治区通辽卷，真题在笺a（内蒙古自治区通辽市2021年中考英语试题）我们国家历史悠久，地大物博。有勤劳善良的人民；有绿水青山，美丽的风景；有独特的美食，传统 的饮食文化。请以“Beautift11china”为题，写一篇作文，描写大美中国，表达我们对祖国的热爱。要求：1 .思路清晰，语句通顺，书写规范。2 .文中不得出现与考生本人相关的校名和姓名等真实信息。3 .词数：80词左右的短文。Beautiful China该题目是写一篇英语短文。要求根据题目要求，并以Beautiful China”为题，写一篇作文，描写大美中国，表达我们对祖国的热爱，可适

2、当发挥。Beautiful ChinaChina is a country with a long history and vast land. There are hard-working and kind people, who make China more and more prosperous and strong. There are many clean lakes and green hills, which make China have beautiful scenery. There is rich and unique food that creates its tra

3、ditional food culture. China is famous as its food tasting tourism resources home and abroad.This is beautiful China, and I love it very much.2021年通辽卷与中国元素有关，与2019年描述中国春节与美国圣诞节异同有一定的相似之处，即都含有 一定的中国文化的元素。考生在备考中要注意中国文化方面的词汇和句型的积累。本文在写作中应该用第 三人称来描述中国的特点；时态采用一般现在时为主；描述中国时，应描写细致、突出亮点；短文需要叙 述完整，保证条理清晰。1 .

4、 There are hard-working and kind people, who make China more and more prosperous and strong.【亮点】本句运用了定语从句，使得文章句型更丰富。2 .There are many clean lakes and green hills, which make China have beautiful scenery.【亮点】本句同样运用了定语从句，且和上文句型结构类似，显得文章句式结构整齐。3 .China is famous as its food tasting tourism resources ho

5、me and abroad.【亮点】be famous as：作为而出名。home and abroad：国内夕卜。相似题为迎接祖国母亲第70个生日，学校开展了丰寓多彩的活动，如讲故事、制作卡片、参观博物馆等；请围绕该话题写一篇短文，内容包括以下要点：1 .你看到或参加过一次活动（包括时间、地点、经过）；.你对该活动的感受以及对祖国的热爱之情；2 .你今后如何为建设祖国贡献力量。注意：1 .文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；.词数在80100,已给出的文字不计入总词数。To celebrate the 70th birthday of our motherland （祖 国）, 【参考范文】

6、To celebrate the 70th birthday of our motherland, the school has carried out colorful activities, such as telling stories, making cards, visiting museums and so on. Last October, my parents and I visited the Beijing Museum. Its the greatest museum Ive ever seen.We saw many weapons that used by the t

7、he old warriors, they protect our country and bring us the new life, there are all kinds of samples that used during the war are presented in front of us. We learn that our new life is not easy to get and we should cherish. I am proud of my motherland. Now I want to study hard and make contributions

8、 to my motherland in the future.【考题解析】为迎接祖国母亲第70个生日，学校开展了丰寓多彩的活动，如讲故事、制作卡片、参观博物馆等；请围 绕该话题写一篇短文。考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须 认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，文中用到一些好的句型：Its the greatest museum Ive ever seen.We saw many weapons that used by t

9、he the old warriors, they protect our country and bring us the new life.这些给文章增色不少。相似题为迎接党的第100个生日，学校将开展丰富多彩的庆祝活动，现在学校招募一名活动组织人。请你根 据下列内容写一篇英语短文来参加竞选吧。内容：1 .你打算组织一次什么活动及其原因；.表达你对祖国和党的热爱之情；2 .你打算今后如何为祖国和党的建设贡献力量。要求：1.表达清楚，语法正确，包括所有相关信息，可作适当发挥；.文章中不得出现真实姓名和校名；3 .字数：80-100.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。Our party will

10、be 100 years old.【参考范文】Our party will be 100 years old. To celebrate the 100th birthday of our motherland, our school will hold all kinds of colourful activities. I want to be an organizer. Til organize an activity. My classmates can tell stories about our motherland, because it can express your lov

11、e for the motherland and the party.I think the activity is very meaningful. I love my motherland very much. I am proud of it.From now on, I will keep working hard and try my best to learn all my subjects so that I can help our motherland and make a difference to our country in the future.【考题解析】.题干解读

12、：该题目属于应用文写作。在写作时应承接短文开头，表达自己想成为活动组织人，介绍将要 组织的活动和原因，以及表达对祖国和党的热爱之情及今后的打算。1 .写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述内容；时态采用一般将来时和一般现在时；在叙述内容时，力求语言正确，行文连贯，保证条理清晰，有号召力。相似题根据要求完成大作文，词数；80-100词。现在许多人在讨论中国梦（the Chinese dream,我们的祖国如何早日梦想成真。这需要我们每位中国人的努 力！我们每个人的小梦想是中国梦的一部分。请以My dream为题，谈谈你的梦想。开头已给出，不计入总词数） 提示：a.你的梦想是什么？ b.你为什么有

13、这样的梦想？ c.你打算怎样做才能实现你的梦想?My dreamNow many people are talking about the Chinese dream. We all hope the dream will come true soon. Everybodyshard work is needed. My dream is part of it.【参考范文】My dreamNow many people are talking about the Chinese dream. We all hope the dream will come true soon.Everybody

14、s hard work is needed. My dream is part of it.Im going to be a teacher in the future. Til be patient with my students and help them study better. Til give them love and let the students know what love and thankfulness are. Til train my students to be brave creative and helpful. To do this, I need to

15、 become knowledgeable. So from now on, Ill study harder than before. Read more books in my free time. Exercise more to keep healthy. If I have a chance, Td like to be a volunteer to help other people. I want to know more about the world and be helpful. I hope my dream will come true. The Chinese dre

16、am will come true! I love China.【考题解析】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如talk about, the Chinese dream, come true, part of, be going to, in the future, be patient with, from now on 等。而复杂并歹U结构 Ill be patient with my students and help them study better.和 Ill give them love and let the students know what love

17、and thankfulness are./ If I have a chance, Id like to be a volunteer to help other people 等复杂从句结构的运用,丰富 了 短文内 容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引 用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考 查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语 和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到

18、较高的分数。相似题“我和我的祖国一刻也不能分割”还记得这首优美的歌曲么？假如你是李华，作为一名中国人， 你对自己的祖国了解多少呢？请依据以下要点给你的美国笔友Tom写一封信，向他介绍你的祖国。（词 数：80词左右）中国是亚洲最大的国家，和美国差不多大。 中国有世界上最多的人口，我们中国人勤劳且善良。 长江是世界上最长河流之一，黄河是中国第二长河流。 中国有超过5000年的历史，比美国历史长多了。推荐词汇：Asia 亚洲, population 人口，the Yangtze River 长江。要求：1 .恰当运用比较级和最高级，可适当拓展。2 .不得在作文中出现学校及学生的真实名称。3 .包含所

19、有信息点，语句连贯，开头已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Tom,Im glad to be your pen pal. Td like to tell you something about China.Best wishes,Li Hua 【参考范文】Dear Tom,Im glad to be your pen pal. Id like to tell you something about China.China is the biggest country in Asia. Ifs almost as big as the USA. China has the biggest popu

20、lation in the world. The people here are friendly and hard-working. The Yangtze River is one of the longest rivers in the world. The Yellow River is the second longest river in China. China is over 5000 years old. It has a much longer history than the USA. The Qomolangma is the highest mountain in t

21、he world.I love China very much. Welcome to China and play with me.Best wishes,Li Hua 【考题详解】.题干解读：该题目是书信类书面表达，根据题目所给的要点提示，结合题目要求，向汤姆介绍自己的祖 国，信件的开头和结尾已经给出，补充剩余内容即可。1 .写作指导：该题目人称应主要使用第一人称和第三人称，主要使用一般现在时来介绍自己祖国的相关情 况，内容包含题目中所有的要点提示，要保证内容完整，结构清晰，叙述有条理。相似题随着祖国的日益强大，越来越多的外国朋友对我们中国的传统节日十分感兴趣，请你用英文以“My favo

22、rite Chinese festival”为题目写一篇短文，把你最喜欢的一个节日介绍给广大的外国朋友们，更好地宣传 我们中国的传统文化。要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；.文中不得使用真实的姓名和校名，否则以零分计。2 .书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。My favorite Chinese festival【参考范文】My favorite Chinese festivalSpring Festival is my favorite among all the Chinese traditional festivals. The first r

23、eason why I love it the most is because I can get lucky money on that festival. It is the Chinese custom that the old will give children lucky money on Spring Festival to wish a good luck for the young generation. Moreover, people everywhere on those days are full of happiness. Quarrel, fight and ab

24、use are almost disappeared at that time. Meanwhile, my mother will make a big meal for us to celebrate. Everyone will forget the unhappy thing they meet, instead remembering to appreciate life to wish a better future. That is my favorite festival.【考题解析】题干解读：短文要求给外国人介绍你最喜欢的中国节日，来宣扬中国文化，当介绍风俗时，要用积极向上 的语言。例文点评：短文用第一人称介绍了春节，描述人们经常在春节做的事情，用一般现在时。展望未来用一般 将来时。高分亮点：短语：lucky money; be full of;句型：because引导的原因状语从句；