专题04建议信 - 2023年高考英语满分作文万能句型+写作模板+真题+训练.pdf

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1、专专题 04 应用文写作【建议信】2023 年高考英语满分作文万能句型+写作模板+真题+训练题 04 应用文写作【建议信】2023 年高考英语满分作文万能句型+写作模板+真题+训练【文章结构】【文章结构】第一段第一段：问题陈述：根据信息点确定举行表达。第二段第二段：提出建议：使用多种句型，避免单一句型表达。第三段第三段：愿望或期望：写信的结尾套句。【万能句式】【万能句式】一 篇首句一 篇首句1.Having learnt that our library is planning to buy new books,Im willing to recommend some books toyou.

2、得知我们图书馆准备买新书，我愿意向您推荐一些书。2.Glad/Pleased/Delighted to know that you are traveling in Shanghai，I think it is a good choice to visitHuangpu River.很高兴得知你在上海旅游，我认为参观黄浦江是个不错的选择。3.I have learned that you have some trouble in.and would like to give/offer you the following suggestions.我知道你在方面有困难，因此我想给你提如下一些建议

3、。4.When it comes to/As for.,the following are my suggestions./My suggestions are as follows.当涉及/关于，我的建议如下。5.Im writing to give you some suggestions/give you a hand.我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/帮助。6.Im extremely delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life.很高兴收到你的来信，信

4、上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。7.Here are my some suggestions.这有我的一些建议。二 篇中句二 篇中句1.The reason why I recommend this book is that it emphasizes the importance of good habits.我推荐这本书的原因是它强调好习惯的重要性。2.It is a good way to broaden your mind,through which you can learn different cultures of the world.这是一个很好的可以拓宽视野的方式。通过这种

5、方式，你可以了解到世界上的不同文化。3.First of all,you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over yourlessons as soon as you can after class.首先，你应该认真听老师讲课。上课做好笔记，以便下课后可以及时复习。4.I recommend it mainly for the following two reasons.我推荐它主要有以下两个原因。5.In my opinion/As far as Im con

6、cerned/Personally,it would be wise to take the following action.在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。6.I think it would be of benefit/beneficial if you.我认为如果，将会受益。7.Doing.is a good/great/better choice.做是一个好的/棒的/更好的选择。8.It is also a good idea/also helps to do.,which can.做也不错，这能三 篇尾句三 篇尾句1.If you need further information,

7、dont hesitate to contact me.如果你需要更多信息，请联系我。2.Ill be more than happy if you can take my recommendation/ideas into consideration.如果你能考虑我的建议/想法，我会非常高兴。3.I hope that my suggestions/advice will be beneficial/of benefit to you.我希望我的建议对你有益。4.I hope you will find my suggestions/advice helpful/useful/practic

8、al/beneficial.我希望你认为我的建议有帮助/有用/实用/有益的。【满分模板【满分模板 1】Dear classmates,Have you realized Mothers Day is _即将到来?And whatideas have you_to celebrate it?In my view,how much youll spend for your mother _并不重要;theessential issue is if it can _表达我们衷心的爱和感激 to our mothers.Soa bunch of flowers,a postcard or a hug

9、is all acceptable _作为回报 theirdevotion to us.But doing what they do for us every day,I think,is more significant in honor of them._ 只 有这 样willwebeoverwhelminglyawareof_母亲给了我们多少.Ive made a plan to cook a meal for my motherthat day,even though I never did it before.My dear friends,_你做好决定了吗?Yours,Li Hua

10、【真题演练】【真题演练】假如你叫李华，你的英国朋友 Andrew 下个月要来你校学习两个月。他来信请你对他上学期间的交通方式提出建议。现在,请你用英语回一封信,按以下各点注意:1.建议骑自行车上学;2.自行车是学生常用的交通工具;3.骑自行车的一些好处;4.骑自行车需注意的问题。注意:1.词数 100 左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。DearAndrew,_Yours sincerely,Li Hua(优秀范文优秀范文)DearAndrew,As for the question about the transportation to and from

11、schoolId like to recommend your riding a bicycle.Here are some reasons.Firstly,riding a bike to and from school is very common among the students,for buying or repairing a bicycledoesn t cost a lot.Next,parking a bicycle is easy and convenient in our school.Actually/As a matter offact,bicycle-riding

12、 is also a practical way to do exercise and protect the environment.What you should do carefullyis just to keep an appropriate speed while riding and lock it after youre off it.In this way,youll feel it simple andrelaxing to ride a bicycle while youre here.Hopefully,these tips could be helpful.Yours

13、 sincerely,Li Hua佳作练习佳作练习1（2022 年全国高三专题练习）年全国高三专题练习）你是晨光中学的李津，你校要举办一个英语特色活动，作为负责人，你给你曾经的外教 Jonathan 写一封 E-mail,请求他给你一些建议。1.你举办这个活动的设想(时间、地点、目的、一个活动形式如：英语戏剧表演或英语图书 分享会等)。2,对外教提两个有关活动设想的具体的问题。词数不少于 100。开头已给出，不计入词数。Dear Jonathan,How time flies!We havent seen each other for almost one year since you wen

14、t back home._（优秀范文）One possible answerDear Jonathan,How time flies!We havent seen each other for almost one year since you went back home.I am writing to askfor your advice on organizing an activity featuring English,hoping you can help me organize a successful eventI,as the student in charge,have m

15、ade a plan that this activity will be held next month in our school library inthe form of a drama competition.The aim of the competition is to arouse students interest in learning English andliterature.The students will take part in this competition representing their classes.One class one team.What

16、smore,the drama they choose can be either English dramas or Chinese dramas,but all should be performed inEnglish.I do believe this competition can not only enhance students English level but also improve studentsall-tound ability.Mr.Jonathan,do you think my plan is practical?Can you recommend any dr

17、amas that are suitable for the highschool students in China to perform?I would appreciate it a lot if you could give me some suggestions.Looking forward to your reply.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给曾经的外教 Jonathan 写一封信，请求关于英语特色活动的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累（4 个以上，含 4 个）代表：on behalf ofrepresent提高：improveenhance建议：adviserecom

18、mend感激 be gratefulappreciate2.句式拓展简单句变倒装句原句：I do believe this competition can not only enhance students English level but also improve students all-tound ability.拓展句：Not only can this competition enhance students English level but also improve students all-tound ability.【点睛】高分句型 1.I do believe this

19、competition can not only enhance students English level but also improve students all-tound ability.(强调句)高分句型 2.I would appreciate it a lot if you could give me some suggestions.(if 引导的状语从句)2（2022 年全国高三）年全国高三）假如你是一家报社的编辑布莱克先生，收到了高一学生李华的来信。近来他在英语的阅读上有些困难，做阅读理解题时常出错，因此他很着急，不知该如何做，请求你给想想办法，尽快调整好，适应高一的学

20、习生活。请你根据以上的情况写一篇 100 词左右的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出。Dear Li Hua,Im glad to hear from you.Im honored to be believed._As far as Im concerned,if you do like this,I believe you will make great progress.Best wishes!Yours,Mr Black（优秀范文）Dear Li Hua,Im glad to hear from you.Im honored to be believed.I know you have trou

21、ble in doing exercises in readingand you are worried.Here is some advice,which may be of help to you.Firstly,you should know everyone can meet with the same difficulty.You should have confidence,which isthe key to success.Secondly,youd better not be afraid of making mistakes.Thirdly,you should go on

22、 reading thepassage-one passage a day.After a short period of time,you will find you make fewer mistakes.Insisting onreading to the end is to victory.Lastly,you should make a proper plan for your subjects,which will be helpful foryour future study.As far as Im concerned,if you do like this,I believe

23、 you will make great progress.Best wishes!Yours.Mr Black【分析】这是一封建议信格式的应用文。根据信中要求回复给出学习上的建议。【详解】第一步：审题第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：要求：1.了解到阅读学习上有困难，你很着急。提出给建议，也许可以帮到你。I know you have trouble in doing exercises in reading and you are worried.Here is s

24、ome advice,which may be of help to you.2.建议如下：1）你应该知道每个人都会遇到你相同的困难。Firstly,you should know everyone can meet with the same difficulty.你应该有信心，这是成功的关键。You should have confidence,which is the key to success.2）你应该不要害怕犯错误。Secondly,youd better not be afraid of making mistakes.3）你应该继续进行阅读训练，每天一篇文章，Thirdly,

25、you should go on reading the passage-one passage a day.短时间后你会发现你犯的错误减少了。After a short period of time,you will find you make fewer mistakes.坚持阅读直到你成功为止。Insisting on reading to the end is to victory.4）你应该制定合适的阅读计划，这样会有助于你将来的学习。Lastly,you should make a proper plan for your subjects,which will be helpfu

26、l for your future study.3.表示愿望：据我所知，如果你照我说的去做，我相信你会取得巨大的进步。As far as Im concerned,if you do like this,I believe you will make great progress.4.表示祝愿：Best wishes!第二步：列提纲（重点词组及句型）第二步：列提纲（重点词组及句型）have trouble in doing exercises；in reading；and you are worried；be of help to you；meet with the same difficul

27、ty；have confidence；the key to success；youd better not；be afraid of；making mistakes；go on reading the passage；after a short period of time；make fewer mistakes；insisting on reading to the end；is to victory；make a proper plan；for your subjects,；be helpful for；your future study.第三步：连词成句第三步：连词成句I know yo

28、u have trouble in doing exercises in reading and you are worried.Here is some advice,which may be of help to you.Firstly,you should know everyone can meet with the same difficulty.You should have confidence,which is the key to success.Secondly,youd better not be afraid of making mistakes.Thirdly,you

29、 should go on reading the passage-one passage a dayAfter a short period of time,you will find you make fewer mistakes.Insisting on reading to the end is to victory.Lastly,you should make a proper plan for your subjects,which will be helpful for your future study.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成

30、篇（衔接词）第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second And then,Finally,In the end,At last2.表并列补充关系：What is more,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,In addition,As well as,not onlybut(also),including,3.表转折对比关系：However,On the contrary,but,Although+clause(从句),In spite of+n/doing,On the oneha

31、nd,On the other hand Some,while others,as for,sothat4.表因果关系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,As a result,not becausebut because连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改第五步：润色修改【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式和词汇：非限制性定语从句：Here is some advice,which may be of help to you；You should have confid

32、ence,which is the keyto success；Lastly,you should make a proper plan for your subjects,which will be helpful for your future study.高级词汇：have confidence；the key to success；youd better not；be afraid of；making mistakes；go on reading thepassage；after a short period of time；make fewer mistakes；insisting

33、on reading to the end；is to victory；make aproper plan；高级句式和词汇的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。3（2022 年重庆巴蜀中学高三）年重庆巴蜀中学高三）假如你是李华，你校学生会即将组织一次徒步活动，已在校园网发布方案，征求师生的修改意见。你需要写一 封邮件，包含以下两点:1.提出你觉得需要改进的地方；2.需要改进的原因。徒步活动主题:发现重庆时间:5 月 1 日下午 2 点路线:从人民大礼堂(the Great Hall of the People)到解放碑、(Liberation Monument),全

34、程徒步。注意:1.词数 100 左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Sir/Madam,_Yours sincerely,Li Hua（优秀范文）Dear Sir/Madam,Im really excited to hear that a hiking activity from the Great Hall of the People to the Liberation Monumentis going to be held on the Labor Day holiday.However,there may be further impr

35、ovement of the scheme youveposted on the campus website,as Id like to point out.First of all,the hike needs to be planned in more details as the information released online appears to be toogeneral.As participants,we need to know how long the hike will last.In the mean time,we are willing to have ac

36、learer picture of security precautions and necessary medical support for the activity.Only by doing so are youlikely to make it a success.Whats more,I suggest the hike be more suited to the theme“Discover Chongqing”through additional activities.I propose an introduction of the architecture on Chaoti

37、anmen Square.By appreciatingthe artistic style of the landmark,we can gain a deeper insight into the prosperity of our city.All in all,if the hike is organized in more details and in a more supportive way,it is sure to succeed.I hope thatmy voice above can be heard and considered and wish the activi

38、ty a great success.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求李华写一封邮件，对徒步活动方案提出修改意见。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：建议信人称：第一人称时态：一般将来时；一般现在时要点：1.听说学校徒步方案，指出有待改进。2.需改进的地方和具体原因。第二部 列要点 写提纲Para.1 be excited to hear that;is going to be held;further improvement;post on the campus websitePara.2 plan in details;have a clearer p

39、icture of sth;security precautions;medical support;propose an introductionof sth;gain a deeper insight into sthPara.3 in a more supportive way;be sure to succeed;第三步 连词成句1.Im really excited to hear that a hiking activity from the Great Hall of the People to the Liberation Monument isgoing to be held

40、 on the Labor Day holiday.2.There may be further improvement of the scheme youve posted on the campus website.3.The hike needs to be planned in more details as the information released online appears to be too general.4.We need to know how long the hike will last.5.We are willing to have a clearer p

41、icture of security precautions and necessary medical support for the activity.6.I suggest the hike be more suited to the theme“Discover Chongqing”through additional activities.I propose anintroduction of the architecture on Chaotianmen Square.7.When we appreciate the artistic style of the landmark,w

42、e can gain a deeper insight into the prosperity of our city.8.If the hike is organized in more details and in a more supportive way,it is sure to succeed.9.I hope that my voice above can be heard and considered and wish the activity a great success.第四步 润色提高1.添加关联表达However;First of all;In the meantim

43、e;Whats more;All in all2.句式升级However,there may be further improvement of the scheme youve posted on the campus website,as Id like topoint out.As participants,we need to know how long the hike will last.Only by doing so are you likely to make it a success.By appreciating the artistic style of the lan

44、dmark,we can gain a deeper insight into the prosperity of our city.第四步 漂亮书写【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，分段合理。本文句式运用灵活，运用了种句式。比如使用了定语从句 However,there may be further improvement of the scheme youve posted on thecampus website,as Id like to point out.使用了 only 的倒装句作小结：Only by doing so are you likely t

45、o make ita success.使用介词短语，让文章更加连贯简洁：By appreciating the artistic style of the landmark,we can gain adeeper insight into the prosperity of our city.4（2022 年广西柳州高三测试）年广西柳州高三测试）假如你是李华，请给你的外国朋友 Tom 写一封信，给他提一些汉语学习方面的好建议并陈述理由。要点如下：1.培养兴趣 2.多阅读 3.看中文电影注意：1.词数 100 词左右（信的开头和结尾已经给出，并不计入总词数）；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

46、Dear Tom,_Yours,Li Hua（优秀范文）Dear Tom,As for the good ways to learn Chinese well,my suggestions are as follows.First and foremost,be interested in what you are learning.As we all know,interest is the best teacher.If youhave an interest in something,its easier for you to pay attention to it for a long

47、 time.In addition,its also a goodidea to read more Chinese books.This is because you can learn many new words while reading.Last but not least,you can try to improve your Chinese by watching Chinese movies as well,which will help you to improve yourlistening and speaking skills.I hope you can take m

48、y advice into consideration.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇上面表达属于应用文建议信的写作。要求考生写一封信，给外国朋友 Tom 提一些汉语学习方面的好建议并陈述理由。【详解】第一步：审题第一步：审题体裁：体裁：应用文建议信时态时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。人称：人称：第二人称结构结构：总分法。先总说自己有建议，再分说具体的建议。最后提出期望。要求要求：1.学习汉语有很多方法，表达自己的建议。2.分说具体建议1）培养兴趣（develop an interest）2）多阅读（reading more about Chinese）3)看中文电影（watch C

49、hinese movies）3.期待能考虑我的建议。（hope to take these suggestions into consideration）第二步第二步:列提纲（重点词组）列提纲（重点词组）as follows,be interested in,develop an interest in,read more Chinese books,gain much knowledge,improve Chinese,watch Chinese movies,improve listening and speaking skills第三步：连词成句第三步：连词成句My suggestion

50、s are as follows.Its a good idea to read more Chinese books.You can learn many new words while reading.You can try to improve your Chinese by watching Chinese movies.It will help you to improve your listening and speaking skills.第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First and foremost,in addition,last