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1、story writinghow to readhow to read123Reading for basic informationReading for plotReading for cluesReading for basick information1wherewhenwhowhatFind out these elements in the story.Find out these elements in the story.read for basic information阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。It was our turn to open

2、 our presents this particular Christmas morning.The living room was already covered with tom wrapping paper.My wife,Brenda,and her family have a tradition of getting each other gag(恶作剧)gifts.Recently,my six-year-old daughter Christy seemed to busy herself with something while I was playing computer

3、video flight games.I tore the paper and there it was a toy airplane about two inches long.Our holiday guests started giggling to themselves as I looked up to my wife with an unpleasant smile on my face and blurted(脱口而出)out,“A toy airplane?Are you kidding me?”Reading for information1Christmas morning

4、I,my wife Brenda,my daughter,Christyliving roomI received a gag gift and felt unhappywhenwhowherewhatReading for plots2阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Now we adults sat around the room with our presents at our feet,slowly removing the paper,trying to maintain our dignity(尊尊 严严)in front of the children

5、.My wife,Brenda,and her family have a tradition of getting each other gag(恶作剧)gifts.This always makes me a bit uneasy at Christmas or my birthday,never knowing what form of embarrassment lies waiting for me under the thin borders of the wrapping paper.How did adults feel when I opened my gift?They f

6、elt exited but tried to contain my excitement to keep our dignity in front of kids.How did I feel when I thought of my wifes family tradition?I felt uneasy.Reading for plots2Recently,my six-year-old daughter Christy seemed to busy herself with something while I was playing computer video flight game

7、s.Now she was standing directly in front of me.The excitement of the moment just beamed(眉眉开开眼眼笑笑)across her face.It was everything she could do to keep herself from helping me rip(撕)the paper from each present Finally,I came to the last gift and with my natural Sherlock Holmes ability,I concluded th

8、at this had to be the gag gift.With everyone looking on,I decided to go ahead and get it over withjust let them have their laughand I tore the paper and there it was a toy airplane about two inches long.Our holiday guests started giggling to themselves as I looked up to my wife with an unpleasant sm

9、ile on my face and blurted(脱口而出)out,“A toy airplane?Are you kidding me?”How did my daughter feel before I opened my gift?exitedHow did I feel before I opened my gift?worried.How did I feel when I found my gift was a toy airplane?I felt unhappy.Reading for plots2Brenda gave me the look-that look that

10、 always tells me I have just said something wrong and should have given it a second thought.I had failed to look at the name tag(标签)before I opened the present to see who it was from.As I picked up the paper from the floor and read the name tag,my heart sank.Paragraph 1:On the tag were the letters t

11、hat read,To Dad,Love Christy.Why did the writers heart sink when he picked up the name tag?He realized that the gift was given by her daughter and he might misunderstand her.续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。It was our turn to open our presents this particular Christmas morning.The living room was alr

12、eady covered with tom wrapping paper.Obviously,the children could hardly wait to discover the hidden treasures,which they had expected for nearly a month.Now we adults sat around the room with our presents at our feet,slowly removing the paper,trying to maintain our dignity(尊严)in front of the childr

13、en.My wife,Brenda,and her family have a tradition of getting each other gag(恶作剧)gifts.This always makes me a bit uneasy at Christmas or my birthday,never knowing what form of embarrassment lies waiting for me under the thin borders of the wrapping paper.续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Recently,my si

14、x-year-old daughter Christy seemed to busy herself with something while I was playing computer video flight games.Now she was standing directly in front of me.The excitement of the moment just beamed(眉开眼笑)across her face.It was everything she could do to keep herself from helping me rip(撕)the paper

15、from each present Finally,I came to the last gift and with my natural Sherlock Holmes ability,I concluded that this had to be the gag gift.With everyone looking on,I decided to go ahead and get it over withjust let them have their laughand I tore the paper and there it was a toy airplane about two i

16、nches long.Our holiday guests started giggling to themselves as I looked up to my wife with an unpleasant smile on my face and blurted(脱口而出)out,“A toy airplane?Are you kidding me?”续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Brenda gave me the look-that look that always tells me I have just said something wrong

17、and should have given it a second thought.I had failed to look at the name tag(标签)before I opened the present to see who it was from.As I picked up the paper from the floor and read the name tag,my heart sank.Paragraph 1:On the tag were the letters that read,To Dad,Love Christy.Paragraph 2:Staring a

18、t the gift,I suddenly thought of a way to lift her up.how to writehow to write1234find clues in the passageanalyze the first sentencesplan the plots5 5analyze the underlined wordscomplete the writing with proper words and grammaranalyze the first sentences given for each paragraphParagraph 1:On the

19、tag were the letters that read,To Dad,Love Christy.What did the writer do?Did he still feel unhappy?How did Christy react?How did she feel?Why did Christy give her dad the toy airplane?Paragraph 2:Staring at the gift,I suddenly thought of a way to lift her up.what is the way to lift her up?what did

20、the writer finally think of the gift?find the clues to help design your writingRecently,my six-year-old daughter Christy seemed to busy herself with something while I was playing computer video flight games.Now she was standing directly in front of me.The excitement of the moment just beamed(眉开眼笑)ac

21、ross her face.analyze underlined wordscharacterschildren,Christyfeelinguneasy,embarrassment,smile,heartactiondiscover,playinggifttoy airplanefinish your writing and share your work1234情情节合理合理用用词准确准确衔接自然接自然5 5句式丰富句式丰富主主题突出突出sampleParagraph 1:On the tag were the letters that read,To Dad,Love Christy.T

22、he laughter fading away,the whole room sank into complete stillness.Christy obviously sensed my embarrassment and unhappiness.She lowered her head,saying softly,“Im sorry,dad.The toy airplane was not intended to be a gag but a special gift for you because I think you like planes”Looking at the toy a

23、irplane carefully,I found it looked exactly like the plane in the games.It suddenly hit me that I must have misunderstood my daughter.Paragraph 2:Staring at the gift,I suddenly thought of a way to lift her up.“I love it so much and it is the best gift I have ever received,honey”.Hearing my words Christy looked at me in disbelief.I nodded determinedly.Getting my definite reply,her face lit up.I advised her to fly the toy plane and she agreed readily.That morning,she had great fun.Seeing happy smile on her face,I breathe a sigh of relief.