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1、读写任务讲评与指导一模一模书面表达题书面表达题快速审题四确定Key words:_1.文体：文体：_ 2.人称：人称：_ 3.时态：时态：_ 4.标题（有标题（有/无）：无）：_Tips:先读英文先读英文essay还是先读中文要求还是先读中文要求?控制养狗控制养狗议论文议论文概括第三人称概括第三人称,观点第三观点第三+第一人称第一人称一般现在时一般现在时 When a dog bites a man,it usually doesnt make news.However,this saying changed when Beijing and several other Chinese cit

2、ies announced the“Civilized Dog Raising”campaign in late November and December.The government will require Beijingers to get licenses for their dogs,and enforce the one-dog,one-family policy.Police say the“one-dog policy”is aimed at reducing the number of dog bites and lowering the risk of rabies(狂犬

3、病狂犬病).According to the ministry of Health,rabies has become the top infectious(传染的传染的)disease in China.Dangerous dogs and dogs taller than 35cm,such as Great Danes(斑点狗斑点狗),have been banned from urban areas._announced the campaignget a licensesone-dog policy Pet owners are also required to clean up t

4、heir dogs droppings and make sure dogs are leashed(拴狗链拴狗链),especially in public areas.Some public areas,such as banks,are closed to dogs entirely.Actually,there are many dog lovers in Beijing.The city now has more than 550,000 registered dogs,up 20 percent from last year.l(summarythe announcement)l

5、The growing number of dogs has caused serious problems,so in some cities,such as Beijing,the government has taken measures to control dogs.Each home can only have one dog,which must have a license and dogs are not allowed in some public places._require写作内容写作内容1.概括短文的内容要点概括短文的内容要点,该部分词数大约为该部分词数大约为30词

6、词2.以约以约120个词发表你对控制养狗的看法个词发表你对控制养狗的看法,并包括以下要并包括以下要点点:(1)人们对控制养狗有不同的看法人们对控制养狗有不同的看法;(2)有人认为养狗有很多好处有人认为养狗有很多好处;(3)有人认为养狗有很多坏处有人认为养狗有很多坏处;(4)说明你自己的看法说明你自己的看法.写作要求写作要求1.作文中可以使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事作文中可以使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以也可以参照阅读材料的内容参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子但不得直接引用原文中的句子.2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称.评分标准评分标准概括

7、准确概括准确,语言规范语言规范,内容合适内容合适,篇章连贯篇章连贯本文与哪些热门写作话题有关本文与哪些热门写作话题有关?话题一：爱好与兴趣话题一：爱好与兴趣 话题二：劳动与劳动观念话题二：劳动与劳动观念 话题三：创建和谐社会话题三：创建和谐社会 话题四：招聘与求职话题四：招聘与求职 话题五：健康问题话题五：健康问题 话题六：环境保护话题六：环境保护 话题七：文明与安全问题话题七：文明与安全问题 话题八：友谊话题八：友谊 l l话题一：爱好与兴趣话题一：爱好与兴趣 l l话题二：劳动与劳动观念话题二：劳动与劳动观念 l l话题三：创建和谐社会话题三：创建和谐社会 l l话题四：招聘与求职话题四：

8、招聘与求职 l l话题五：健康问题话题五：健康问题 l l话题六：环境保护话题六：环境保护 l l话题七：文明与安全问题话题七：文明与安全问题 l l话题八：友谊话题八：友谊 举一反三举一反三:同一话题在不同文体的考查同一话题在不同文体的考查养狗的利弊养狗的利弊饲养宠物的利弊饲养宠物的利弊限制养狗的建议限制养狗的建议描述一次被狗伤害的经历描述一次被狗伤害的经历你最喜欢的宠物你最喜欢的宠物你与宠物的一次经历你与宠物的一次经历宠物的未来宠物的未来?宠物改变人们的生活习惯吗宠物改变人们的生活习惯吗?宠物对人们生活的影响宠物对人们生活的影响/作用作用.狗狗,猫猫,蜥蜴等宠物蜥蜴等宠物对人类社会的影响对

9、人类社会的影响心有灵犀一起错,有错有病一起治1.1.审题错误审题错误(2(2人人)不是讲对狗的控制的看法,而是讲了如何养狗?2.2.语法错误语法错误(多人多人)A.A.拼写错误拼写错误rais/rise a dog hode the ideagoverment sholdIn my oppionbenifitdieasein dangourmy litte brotherunfortunatlyB.B.用词不当用词不当(词性，单复数词性，单复数)Pet a dog is so interesting.With a pet dog,I wont feel boringI afraided the

10、 dog would bite me.Dogs can make them happily.From my personally point of view,We can get away the lonely There are another people who dont like the dog.People have many different idea about have a dogs.Dogs is mans good friend.I have a experience about dogs.It would make many noise at night.心有灵犀一起错

11、,有错有病一起治C.谓语动词出错,基本句型没有掌握好I am not agree with the government.I was keeped a dog.I will running with him outside.They will bites a man.The number of dogs will bite people and will lower the risk of rabies.Every coin have two sides.Man cant known whether the boys will bite someone.心有灵犀一起错,有错有病一起治D.Chi

12、nglish,D.Chinglish,从句运用错误导致表意不清从句运用错误导致表意不清My home has a dog.Dogs can guard the entrance when no people at home.应为:Dogs can keep an eye onkeep an eye on your house when you are out./when there is nobody at home.In order to peoples health,some dangerous dogs have been bannedOnly when we petting a dog

13、 carefully,can we pet a dog.(只有认真养狗，才能养狗？表意不清)E.E.其他问题其他问题词数太少，理由不充分，言之无物心有灵犀一起错,有错有病一起治表观点Express the opinionsDifferent people hold quite different ideashold quite different ideas on keeping dogs or not.No one can deny thatNo one can deny that dogs are good friends to human.(简)They hold the idea th

14、atThey hold the idea that dogs help them to get rid of loneliness.However,some people hold the negative attitudehold the negative attitude towards this problem.(范）It is my opinion that raising dogs has positive effects on people.(李嘉恩)As far as I am concerned,(Kelly,楚肥，苏)From my personal point of vie

15、w,In my point of view,it is hard to please all it is hard to please all(众口难调众口难调),),but petting a dog do more good than harmdo more good than harm(利大于弊利大于弊)to us.(wing)Shining Gold 闪光点Shining Gold 闪光点表过渡表过渡On one handOn the other hand(Heaven,小英)On the contrary,Whats worse,(Kelly)In addition,(苏)Every

16、 coin has two sides.(圈，彬)To make the matter worse,(淑仪）Shining Gold 闪光点Cause and effect(表因果表因果)People treattreat dogs asas their honest friends,becausebecause it can share the their owners joys and sorrowsshare the their owners joys and sorrows.(Apple)I think it is necessary toit is necessary to redu

17、ce raising crazy dogs.(zhipi)The reason whyThe reason why they say so is thatis that dogs may bring rabies whichwhich will kill some man.(wing)becausebecause dogs can play with them and reduce their reduce their pressurepressure.(浩浩)It is troublesometroublesome to keep a dog.(明)Keeping a dogKeeping

18、a dog,you will have more fun when you are tired after work.(旭）It is well know thatIt is well know that dogs are very friendly.(谭)Shining Gold 闪光点表总结，结论表总结，结论All in all,(谭)Several strong measures should be takenstrong measures should be taken to deal with the deal with the problemproblem.(冯yin，淑仪)As

19、the saying goes,As the saying goes,“dog are the most honest animals.(胡)Only whenOnly when we pet a dog,can wecan we enjoy the happiness that the dog bring to us.(圈)Only whenOnly when humans and dogs build a good relationship,can can peoplepeople be more happier.(孙)文章结尾常用万能句文章结尾常用万能句Only when(+SVO),c

20、an we do sth.Only when(+SVO),can we do sth.只有当只有当的时候的时候,我们才能我们才能(做某事做某事)只有以合适的方式控制养狗，才能使狗真正成为人的朋只有以合适的方式控制养狗，才能使狗真正成为人的朋友友Only whenOnly when we control dogs in a proper way,can wecan we make dogs become our true friends.只有学好英语只有学好英语,才能找到好的工作并赚更多钱。才能找到好的工作并赚更多钱。Only whenOnly when we study English wel

21、l,can wecan we find a good job and earn much more money.网上交友：只有网上交友：只有 才能才能？Only whenOnly when we make friends online in a careful way,can can wewe not be cheated online.本文考点利弊的表达方式利弊的表达方式利弊的表达方式利弊的表达方式Doing sth has good/bad effects on sth.Be good forDo harm to Benefit usBe beneficial to us观点的表达方式观点

22、的表达方式观点的表达方式观点的表达方式They hold the idea that It is my opinion that As far as I am concerned,From my personal point of view,In my point of view,写作模板：写作模板：“一分为二一分为二”观点的议论文观点的议论文 Nowadays,more and more people _._ has/have both advantages and disadvantages.Some people consider _.Generally,the advantages c

23、an be listed as follows.Firstly,_.(For example,_.)Secondly,_.In addition/Whats more,_.Every coin has two sides.The disadvantages are also obvious.To begin with,_.To make matters worse,_.Worst of all,_.So other people hold the opinion that _.From my point of view,as _,if _,the advantages would overwe

24、igh the disadvantages.Therefore,only when _,can we _.(养狗养狗)(养狗养狗)(养狗有好处养狗有好处)狗是人的朋友狗是人的朋友狗可以安慰人狗可以安慰人狗可以看家狗可以看家狗很忠心狗很忠心狗粪污染环境狗粪污染环境狗叫产生噪音狗叫产生噪音,影响休息影响休息许多人因狂犬病而死许多人因狂犬病而死养狗坏处多养狗坏处多,必须限制必须限制/文明养狗文明养狗狗是人的朋友狗是人的朋友文明养狗文明养狗allegiant控制养狗控制养狗创建和谐的社会创建和谐的社会 Nowadays,more and more peopleNowadays,more and mor

25、e people raising dogs.Raising dogs has has both advantages and disadvantages.Some peopleboth advantages and disadvantages.Some people love dogs very much.Generally,the advantages can be listed as follows.Firstly,Generally,the advantages can be listed as follows.Firstly,dogs are humans best friends.O

26、ften they can comfort us at times when human words dont help.Secondly,Secondly,dogs are the most loyal animals.In addition,In addition,dogs help to watch the house when people are out/sleeping.Every coin has two sides.The disadvantages are also obvious.To Every coin has two sides.The disadvantages a

27、re also obvious.To begin with,begin with,dogs may pollute the environment where we are living.To To make matters worse,make matters worse,dogs may make some noise when people are asleep so that people cant have enough energy to go to work.Worst Worst of all,of all,many people bitten by dogs have die

28、d from rabies.So other So other people hold the opinion thatpeople hold the opinion that keeping dogs has bad effect on our daily life and the government should take dog raising under control.From my point of view,asFrom my point of view,as dogs are humans friends,if,if they can be kept civilizedly

29、the advantages would overweigh the disadvantages.the advantages would overweigh the disadvantages.Therefore,only whenTherefore,only when we control dogs in a proper way,can wecan we build a harmonious society.If you are an examiner,what other topics would you like to test the students?the advantages

30、 and disadvantages of doing sth.的利弊的利弊?课外活动的利弊课外活动的利弊网上交友的利弊网上交友的利弊网上购物的利弊网上购物的利弊周六补课的利弊周六补课的利弊出国留学的利弊出国留学的利弊带手机上学的利弊带手机上学的利弊禁止提供免费塑料袋的利弊（深圳一模禁止提供免费塑料袋的利弊（深圳一模)举一反三举一反三:同一文体同一文体对不同话对不同话题的考查题的考查基础写作 参考范文 In China,children begin to go to school at the age of seven.It takes six years for them to finish

31、 primary school and in this stage,they are taught elementary knowledge in language and science,which lays the foundation for their further education.After primary school,they go to junior middle school,without having to pass any exam and education at this level is compulsory.It lasts three years and other attend profession school for two or three years.Thank you for your attention!