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1、经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用浙江卷高考作文-续写 -Amber经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用课程导入知识梳理典型例题课堂练习CONTENT课堂小结课后检测经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用课堂导入PART 01经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额

2、为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用课堂导入庭有枇杷树，吾妻死之年所手植也，今已亭亭如盖矣。低俗版本续写：今伐之，为博小娘子一笑有趣版本：小娘子一笑，正若吾妻年少时。高阶版本：小娘子为吾妻及吾之女，今伐树，为小娘子造出嫁之物，愿伉俪情深，不输吾与亡妻。经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用习题演练It was Christmas Day.Pappy was working alone fixing an old lantern in the backroom when he heard the rin

3、ging of his bell on the shop door.The bell,which produced a uniquely pleasant sound,had been in Pappys family for over a hundred years.He valued it dearly and enjoyed sharing its song with all who came to his shop.Although the bell hung on the inside of the main door,Pappy had tied a wire to the scr

4、een door so that it would ring whether the inner door was open or not.Hearing the bell,he left the backroom to greet his customer.经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用习题演练“And how can I help you,little lady?”Pappys voice was joyful.“Hello,sir.”The little girl spoke almost

5、 in a whisper.She looked at Pappy with her big brown eyes,and then slowly scanned the room in search of something special.Shyly she told him,“Id like to buy a present,sir.”“Well,lets see,”Pappy said,“who is this present for?”经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用习题演练“My gr

6、andpa.Its for my grandpa.But I dont know what to get.”Pappy began to make suggestions.“How about a pocket watch?Its in good condition.”The little girl didnt answer.She had walked to the doorway and put her small hand on the door.She shook the door gently to ring the bell.Pappys face seemed to glow a

7、s he saw her smiling with excitement.“This is just right,”the little girl said.“Momma says grandpa loves music.”经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用习题演练Just then,Pappys expression changed.Fearful of breaking the little girls heart,he told her,“Im sorry,Missy.Thats not fo

8、r sale.Maybe your grandpa would like this little radio.”The girl looked at the radio,bowed her head,and sadly sighed,“No,I dont think so.”In an effort to help her understand,Pappy told her that the bell had been his only companion,for the rest of his family were all gone now,except for his estranged

9、(疏远的)daughter whom he had not seen for nearly a decade.经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用习题演练.注意：所续写短文的词数应为150左右；应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:With a giant tear in her eye,the little girl looked up at him._Paragraph 2:Later

10、 that evening when Pappy was closing up the shop,he heard a familiar ringing._经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用习题演练 With a giant tear in her eye,the little girl looked up at him.She forced a smile,saying“Thank you”and walked towards the door.Pappy thought of his daugh

11、ter and said to the girl loudly,“How much have you got to spend?”Hearing this,the little girl counted money in her purse-two dollars.After thinking for a few seconds,Pappy said,“Today is Christmas Day and this is your lucky day.The bell costs two dollars.”The child went out,holding the special bell

12、in her hand.经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用习题演练 Later that evening when Pappy was closing up the shop,he heard a familiar ringing.He couldnt believe his ears.The girl stood in the doorway,ringing the bell happily.Then Pappy got close to her and asked,“Have you chang

13、ed your mind,Miss?”“No.My Momma says the present is for you.”said the child.Before Pappy had time to say another word,a young woman walked in.She said to Pappy,“Hello,Dad.”经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用知识梳理+典型例题PART 02经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为

14、消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用010203How to polish your story?Advanced words and phrasesAbundant sentence patternsUse proper conjunctions经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用“小”心思Detailed verbs to make expressions powerful“小”词汇Inner thoughts to portray the figures“小”细节Proper adverbs t

15、o enrich your story经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用“小”词汇增加表达效果tell,speak,explain,talk,reply,respond,announce,declaremurmur,whisper,scream,shout,roarcry out,call outsay经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用The government _ a state of emergen

16、cy.“Get out of my house!”The officer _.He _ something in his sleep.Seeing the film star,the fans _ with excitement.Asked why he was late,Alex _ that his car had broken down.“小”词汇增加表达效果经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用The government _declared_ a state of emergency.“Get

17、 out of my house!”The officer _roared_.He _murmured_ something in his sleep.Seeing the film star,the fans _screamed_ with excitement.Asked why he was late,Alex _explained_ that his car had broken down.“小”词汇增加表达效果经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用“小”心思丰满人物内心荒野冒险读后续写，阅读下

18、面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。One weekend in July,Jane and her husband,Tom,had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest.Unfortunately,on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel.By the time they reached the lake,Jane was so angry that she said to Tom,“Im goi

19、ng to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time.After she had climbed to a high place,she turned around,hoping to see the lake.To her surprise,she saw nothing but forest and,far beyond,a snowcapped mountain top.She suddenly rea

20、lized that she was lost.“Tom!”she cried.“Help!”经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用“小”心思丰满人物内心No reply.If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom.Jane kept moving,but the farther she walked,the more confused she became.As night was beginning to fall,J

21、ane was so tired that she had to stop for the night.Lying awake in the dark,Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family.She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day,hungry and thirsty.She could hear water trickling(滴落)somewhere at a distance.Quickl

22、y she followed the sound to a stream.To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes.She drank and ate a few berries.Never in her life had she tasted anything better.Feeling stronger now,Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失

23、，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用“小”心思丰满人物内心As she picked her way carefully along the stream,Jane heard a helicopter.Is that for me?Unfortunately,the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above.A few minutes later,another helicopter flew overhead.Jane took off her yellow blouse,thinking that

24、 she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用“小”心思丰满人物内心注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:But no more helicopter came and it was getting dark

25、again._Paragraph2:It was daybreak when Jane woke up._(356words)经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用“小”心思丰满人物内心2016年10月高考作文23分悲伤快乐经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用“小”心思丰满人物内心2017年6月高考作文23分震惊经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者

26、购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用One day,the Brother,who had become a Monk,forced himself on the same road where he found accommodation years ago.He decided to visit the family.But the shabby cottage was nowhere to be found.He only found a splendid house.He thought the family might die.Suddenly,a man came out.The mon

27、k recognized him.It was the father of the family.So he asked,“Have you lived here?”“小”心思丰满人物内心经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用One day,the Brother,who had become a Monk,forced himself on the same road where he found accommodation years ago.Driven by a sense of regret,

28、he decided to visit the family.To his great surprise,the shabby cottage was nowhere to be found.He only found a splendid house.Upon thinking the family might have starved to death,he sighed with guilt.Suddenly,a man came out.The monk recognized him.It was the father of the family.So he asked,“Have y

29、ou lived here?”“小”心思丰满人物内心经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用010203He decided to visit the family.But the shabby cottage was nowhere to be found.He only found a splendid house.He thought the family might die.010203 Driven by a sense of regret,he decided to visit the fam

30、ily.To his great surprise,the shabby cottage was nowhere to be found.He only found a splendid house.Upon thinking the family might have starved to death,he sighed with guilt.In conclusion，the description of inner thoughts can make our story more logical,reasonable,creative and powerful.“小”心思丰满人物内心经营

31、者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用How to describe your inner feelings?1.Feeling happy/sad/angry/guilty/depressed,2.Driven by curiosity/a sense of regret/sympathy Deeply touched/moved by3.,full of regret/anger/fear/gratitude/sadness4.To ones disappointment/surprise/deligh

32、t/relief/astonishment5.in surprise/relief/anger 或者是 with satisfaction/excitement(等于一个副词）6.具体的动作描写 stand frozen,jump with joy,tremble with anger,with tears filling ones eyes,with ones eyes wide open 等等经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用“小细节”丰富故事情节 Topic：a shocking knife

33、attack From Book 5 Unit5First Aid Anne Slade,mother of three,had been stabbed _ with a knife.She was lying in her front garden bleeding very _.Her hands had _ been cut off.经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用“小细节”丰富故事情节 Topic：a shocking knife attack From Book 5 Unit5Firs

34、t Aid Anne Slade,mother of three,had been stabbed _repeated_ with a knife.She was lying in her front garden bleeding very _heavily_.Her hands had _almost_ been cut off.经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用“小细节”丰富故事情节 With a giant tear in her eye,the little girl looked up

35、at him.She forced a smile,murmuring“Thank you”and made her way to the door._,Pappy thought of his daughter.Driven by a sense of sympathy,Pappy called out,“How much have you got to spend?”Hearing this,the little girl counted money in her purse-two dollars_.After thinking for a few seconds,Pappy annou

36、nced,“Today is Christmas Day and this is your lucky day.The bell costs _ two dollars.”The child danced out with great joy,holding the special bell in her hand.经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用“小细节”丰富故事情节 With a giant tear in her eye,the little girl looked up at him.Sh

37、e forced a smile,murmuring“Thank you”and made her way to the door._Suddenly_,Pappy thought of his daughter.Driven by a sense of sympathy,Pappy called out,“How much have you got to spend?”Hearing this,the little girl counted money in her purse-two dollars _altogether_.After thinking for a few seconds

38、,Pappy announced,“Today is Christmas Day and this is your lucky day.The bell costs _exactly_ two dollars.”The child danced out with great joy,holding the special bell in her hand.经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用“小细节”丰富故事情节 Later that evening when Pappy was closing up

39、 the shop,he heard a familiar ringing.He couldnt believe his ears.The girl stood in the doorway,ringing the bell happily.Feeling puzzled,Pappy got close to her and asked,“Have you changed your mind,Miss?”“No.My Momma says the present is for you.”explained the little girl.Then,her mother stepped in.T

40、ears filling her eyes,she cried out cheerfully,“Hello,Dad.”经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用课堂练习PART 03经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用The user can demonstrate on a projector or computer print the presentation 标题文字添加此处1.The girl forced

41、 a smile,saying“Thank you.”and turned towards the door.2.Driven by a sense of sympathy,Pappy said to the girl loudly,“How much have you got to spend,Missy?”经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用课堂练习1.The girl forced a smile,saying“Thank you.”and turned towards the door.2.D

42、riven by a sense of sympathy,Pappy said to the girl loudly,“How much have you got to spend,Missy?”murmuring called out 经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用课堂练习3.After thinking for a few seconds,Pappy said,“Today is Christmas Day and this is your lucky Day.”4.“No.My Momma

43、 says the present is for you.”said the child.5.Tears filling her eyes,she said cheerfully,“Hello,Dad.”经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用课堂练习3.After thinking for a few seconds,Pappy said,“Today is Christmas Day and this is your lucky Day.”4.“No.My Momma says the present

44、 is for you.”said the child.5.Tears filling her eyes,she said cheerfully,“Hello,Dad.”announcedexplainedcried out经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用课堂补充只要是记叙文，难以逃脱的动作描写肯定有，动嘴，动手与动脚。除了熟知各种说的表达方式外，请记住各种看，和各种走Eg:see,watch,observe,peep,look around,look back,stare at,glare at

45、,glance at,catch sight of,lose sight of,etcEg:walk,run,wander,dash,stroll around,pace back and forth,step into,make ones way to,dance out,etc经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用课堂练习 1.She forced a smile,murmuring：“Thank you”and walked towards the door.2 The child went ou

46、t with great joy,holding the special bell in her hand.3.Before Pappy had time to say another word,a young woman walked in.make her way to danced out stepped in 经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用课堂小结PART 04经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费

47、用010203How to polish your story?Advanced words and phrasesAbundant sentence patternsUse proper conjunctions经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用课后检测PART 05经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用Ali and his younger sister,Zahra,lived with their pa

48、rents in a poor neighborhood.Their mother was very sick and their father was struggling to find a job,and they had only a little money with which to buy food.As they had not paid the rent for several months,the landlord was breathing down their necks.One day,Ali took Zahras shoes to a shoe repairman

49、 to be fixed,but he lost them on the way home.It wasnt until he got home that he realized he had lost the shoes.He was afraid that his parents would be angry and disappointed,so he begged his sister to keep it secret.Zahra agreed and the two decided to share Alis running shoes.Zahras school hours we

50、re in the morning,so she would wear them first.After school,she would rush back and give them to Ali.He could then run to his school,which began in the afternoon.Although he ran as fast as he could,Ali often arrived late and was warned by the school.经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者