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1、2023年雅思高分写作范文 第一篇：雅思高分写作范文 下面是三个雅思高分写作模板，都是关于选择观点类型的。观点选择类型的雅思写作话题在雅思写作考试中是最常见的一类，对于这类话题，大家确定要准备一个适合自己的雅思写作模板，这样在考试的时候，就可以有备无患的应对了。下面是具体内容。 雅思写作观点选择类型的题目：A or B ,which one do you agree with? Give specific reasons for your answer.(A,B 表示供选择的两种观点。Do C 指题目中提及的某件事情。如：some people prefer A in order to Do

2、C.雅思写作观点选择类型的写作模板： 1、As for the question that which is better, A or B, different people have different opinions.A has its advantages, but at the mean time, it has many disadvantages.In my point of view, I would prefer B.First of all,(1)支持 B 的缘由之一。For example,(2)举例说明支持 B 的缘由之一。 Another reason is that

3、(3)支持 B 的缘由之二。 The third reason, however, goes this way:(4)支持 B 的缘由之三。 So from what has been discussed, one can reach only this conclusion that(5)重申观点。 2、Some people believe A, they point out the fact that(1)人们支持 A 的缘由。However, other people believe B.They hold that(2)人们支持 B 的缘由。 As far as Im concern

4、ed, I prefer A.As we all know(3)我支持 A 的缘由之一。I remember(4)举例说明。 In addition,(5)我支持 A 的缘由之二。 On the other hand,(6)从反面论证 A 的优势。 Last but not least,(7)我支持 A 的缘由之三。 As a matter of fact, there are also some disadvantages in A，such as(8)举例说明 A 的劣势。But these can be compensated by its advantages.3、There are

5、two different views on the matter of DOING C.Some people believe that(1)支持的观点 A.By this , they argue that(2)进一步阐述观点 A.For example,(3)举例说明。 Others hold, on the other hand, that(4)反对的观点 B。 Furthermore,(5)进一步阐述观点 B.For instance,(6)举例说明观点 B。 Considering the views on the two sides, I prefer to put weight

6、 to the pros rather than cons.personally,(7)我支持 A 的缘由。 以上就是这三个雅思高分写作模板的全部内容，总体来讲就是在雅思观点选择类型的写作中，考生可以选择一种观点进行具体的论述，但是确定不要遗忘对两种观点都有所涉及，这样才客观，同时也增加的写作的字数。 其次篇：雅思写作高分 雅思写作大作文必看高分范文 TASK 2: 高分范文一 Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment;only governments and large companies can make a differe

7、nce.To what do you agree or disagree? Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about environmental protection and regard it as one of the most important challenges.However, whether only governments and big firms have resources and powers to preserve our environment is a controversial i

8、ssue.My view is that every single citizen could also make a huge difference.In the first place, it is clear that it is human activities that have the greatest impact throughout the history.Both environment contamination and conservation are the long-term process, and no single government or big comp

9、any can meet this challenge alone.So whoever created the problem should be responsible for solving it;environment protection needs every one of us to continuously participate in.Moreover, the publics wills and behaviors have critical influence on governments policies and companies strategies.For exa

10、mple, if everyone says “no to plastic shopping bags and paper cups, the companies that manufacture such products will switch to environmental-friendly substitutes in order to survive in the market.However, that is not to say that governments and large companies cannot positively contribute.Indeed, g

11、overnments can enact laws and introduce programs to raise the publics low-carbon awareness;companies can promote green products to change the publics consuming habits.But they also need every citizens appreciation and support to bring good results.In sum, no effort is too small when we are protectin

12、g the environment.Meanwhile, local authorities and organizations must shoulder their responsibility to develop low-carbon economy at the macro level.Only by doing so can we assure that we could hand this beautiful planet to our next generation and the next generation after.TASK 2: 高分范文二-Argumentatio

13、n The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades.Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive.What are your opinions on this? The Internet has brought significant changes to our lives in recent years.However, th

14、ere remains some disagreement as to whether the overall effect of this technology has been positive or negative.While there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary, I personally believe that the benefits of the Internet far outweigh its drawbacks and these benefits are twofold.First of all, it

15、 is an indisputable fact that the Internet has revolutionized the way we communicate.Despite the risk of social isolation-a problem occasionally seen in people who spend too much time at their computer terminal rather than relating to people in the real world-most of us have benefited greatly from e

16、-mails and Internet chat programs like MSN Messenger.These incredibly useful and powerful tools of communication facilitate both contact with loved ones in faraway places and global trade.Moreover, the Internet has placed the entire world(and all of the information in it)at our fingertips.In earlier

17、 times, conducting research entailed long hours searching library shelves.Now, however, the same information can be accessed at the click of a button.Admittedly, not all of the information available on the Internet is reliable or helpful-there is a vast amount of material online that some would cons

18、ider offensive or dangerous, ranging from pornography to instructions on how to make bombs.Nonetheless, I would contend that this free flow of information has generally been a very positive development.By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that the Internet has had a positive impac

19、t on modern life because of its influences on communication and the flow of information.TASK 2: 高分范文三-Report With divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globally, it is generally accepted that families today are not close as they used to be.Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some p

20、ossible solutions to it.Divorce and family breakdown were virtually unheard of just 100 years ago.Now, however, almost half of all marriages fail.This phenomenon is symptomatic of the growing distance between family members in modern society.In this essay, I intend to explore the sources of this pro

21、blem along with some possible solutions to it.Chief among the causes of this problem is the modern lifestyle.Todays parents have to work harder than those of previous generations to support their families.Traditionally, one parent assumed the role of breadwinner, while the other-typically the mother

22、-acted as the homemaker.Recently, though, double income families have become the norm.Consequently, an increasing number of children now grow up in a parentless environment.Little wonder, then, that they feel alienated.Another contributing factor is the passive and solitary nature of many modern for

23、ms of entertainment.In order to solve this sense of alienation within families, I believe we must first address its root causes.Perhaps the most effective method of doing this would be for governments to offer financial incentives to parents who choose to remain at home and take care of their famili

24、es.Admittedly, such incentives would probably not fully compensate couples for lost income;however, they would at least soften the hardship of living on a single income and provide an alternative for parents who would rather remain at home but are unable to do so because of financial constraints.One

25、 further measure would be to promote more interactive leisure activities in the community through public education campaigns.In conclusion, I believe that this is clearly a problem of such complexity that no solution is likely in the short term.However, I believe that the measures outlined above wou

26、ld constitute a good first step.Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions.Some people think this is fully justified while other think it is unfair.Discuss both these views and give your opinion.As a result of constant media attention,

27、 sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries.Just like movie stars, they live extravagant lifestyles with huge houses and cars.Many people find their rewards unfair, especially when comparing these super salaries with those of top

28、 surgeons or research scientists, or even leading politicians who have the responsibility of governing the country.However, sports salaries are not determined by considering the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he or she holds.Instead, they reflect the public po

29、pularity of sport in general and the level of public support that successful stars can generate.So the notion of “fairness is not the issue.While those who feel that sports stars salaries are justified might argue that the number of professionals with real talent are very few, and the money is a rec

30、ognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful.Competition is constant and a player is tested every time they perform in their relatively short career.The pressure from the media is intense and there is little privacy out of the spotlight.So all of these factors may justify th

31、e huge earnings.Personally, I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicates that our society places more value on sport than on more essential professionals and achievements.In many countries, the pro

32、portion of older people is steadily increasing.Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on society? In more and more developed countries we see the following trends: incomes rise, people get married later and have fewer kids.The result is the demographics change and the population ages

33、.While having more old people sounds like a good thing(as they tend to be kind and warm-hearted), it can have a serious impact on economies and societies.Consider, for example, that in order for a countrys GDP to grow it needs to produce more goods and services each year.With an aging population and

34、 more people retiring, fewer are left to work, creating an economic hole.The result is that such countries have to rely on immigration to fill the gap and this is a less-than-desirable solution.Consider also, that as more people reach their twilight years they will face increasing health problems an

35、d this puts huge pressure on health care and other social programs.In most countries the government pays for at least some of the costs of health care, not to mention things like pensions, all of which means a big bill someone has to pay for.To be fair, however, we should be careful not to direct ou

36、r anger towards old people themselves.Old people can still make contributions to society, whether it means helping look after grandchildren, working part time or even doing voluntary work.On an individual level, old people can be a real treasure.To sum up, governments should recognize the challenges

37、 of an aging society and take the appropriate action.But in addition to fixing the short-term impact of an older society, they should also look at the bigger picture and do their best so that in the future we have a better age balance. 第三篇：雅思写作高分 雅思写作高分模板共享 本文由新航道雅思整理发布 目前最常见的雅思写作类型为分析型和一面倒类型，天经地义的也

38、成为烤鸭们在雅思备考中练习最多的，下面是为烤鸭们准备好的模板，大家可以根据自己的爱好和特点选择适合自己的，并且能拿到高分的模板，祝烤鸭们考试顺当。 雅思写作高分模板|雅思作文高分模板一面倒 1.NO invention has received more praises and abuses than cars Now there is a growing awareness over traffic safety.2.Although some people acclaim that I am still prone to go along with the other side based

39、 on the following sound reasons.： 3.To embark on it, it comes as the first problem that.： 4.Should it remain unable to unfold my perspectives, itll come as reinforcement that 5.It is indisputable that nowhere in history has.been more visible.As far as I am 雅思写作高分模板|雅思作文高分模板分析型 1.Recently the.has bee

40、n brought into focus.Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible.In this essay, I aim to explore this complicated phenomenon from diverse perspectives, identify the relevant contributing factors and bring up some effective measures.2.As far as I am concerned, an array of integrated factors co

41、ntributes to the.The first role that should be blamed is.Another equally important factor lies in Last but not least.： 3.As a matter of fact,.gives rise to a host of problems, such as.Confronted with such a thorny issue, people come up with a variety of constructive countermeasures.Personally, the f

42、ollowing are worth recommendation.： 4.When everyone is fully aware of the severity and take feasible measures, I firmly believe.以上雅思写作高分模板都是以句子为单位进行列举的，这样的话也便于考生们自由的组合，通顺的表达雅思文章的主题思想。 更多精彩内容请点击查看新航道官方网站 :/ xiexiebang 第四篇：雅思写作高分词汇 雅思写作高分的取得并不是一件简洁的事，大家需要驾驭确定的写作技巧，词汇的应用就是最基础的。下面为大家搜集整理了两个关于词汇应用方面的雅思写作

43、高分技巧，供大家在写作备考的过程中进行适当的参考和借鉴。 词汇语序不精确是导致大家不能拿到雅思写作高分的重要因素。 因为中文和英文的表达方式的不同，词汇的搭配依次也有很大的区分，所以在雅思写作中，常常会造成一些中式英语的文章，也就是说会写一些完全依据中文语序逐字翻译的错句。这样的语言表达会给考官阅读带来困难，会对句意理解出现分歧，如此一来，当然会大大影响作文的得分。 例如：“竞争合作意识应当被翻成“the sense of competition and cooperation。 许多考生在情急之下，往往会翻成“competition and cooperation sense 这样的表达一旦

44、出现比例较高，便会给考官造成语言不地道的感觉，也就难以取得雅思写作高分。想要驾驭正确的词汇的表达依次这个雅思写作技巧，大家需要在备考雅思写作的过程中接触更多的英语读物，形成英语写作的思维。 书写上存在简写或缩写也是倒是大家不能拿到雅思写作高分的因素。 很多考生在备考雅思写作考试的时候，不能区分口语用词和书面用词的区分，以至于把一些不用在书面表达的方式用在了写作上。口语与写作的最大区分便是口语较随便，而写作比较严谨。为了凸显作文的书面感，建议考生应尽量避开明显的或者大量的简写和缩写形式。一来可以让卷面看起来更加清爽，二来也可以给考官留下认真严谨的好印象。 典型的易写缩写的表达有： Its 应当写

45、成it is Whats more应当写成what is more,Cant应当写成cannot 以上就是这两个雅思写作高分技巧的全部内容，包括了词汇的语序和词汇的简写和缩写两个部分。大家在自己的雅思写作备考的过程中，确定要留意这两个方面，只要不依据自己思索中文的思维方式来写作，就能大大削减这些可能性了。 第五篇：雅思写作高分词汇 雅思写作高分词汇 1解决: Solve, deal with, cope with, handle, resolve, address, tackle 2损害： Damage, hurt, injure, harm, impair, undermine, jeopa

46、rdize 3给与：Give, offer, render, impart, provide, supply, afford 4培育：Develop, cultivate, foster 5优势：Advantage, merit, virtue, benefit, upside, strength缺陷：Disadvantage, demerit, drawback, downside, weakness使迷惑：Puzzle, bewilder, perplex, baffle重要的：Key, crucial, critical, important, significant, vital, s

47、ubstantial, indispensable, imperative认为：Think, believe, insist, maintain, assert, conclude, deem, hold, argue, be convinced, be firmly convinced, be fully convinced爱惜：Protect, conserve, preserve 11确保：Assure, ensure, guarantee, pledge有害的： Bad, baneful evil, harmful, detrimental要求 ：Request, demand, ne

48、eds, requisition消退 ：Eliminate, clear, remove, clear up, take away, smooth away导致： Lead to, bring about, result in, cause, spark off, conduce to, procure, induce, generate因此：So, therefore, thus, hence, consequently, as a consequence, accordingly, as a result, because of this, as a result of this增长至：Grow to，rise to，increase to，go up to，climb to，ascend to，jump to，shoot to 18降低至：Dip to，fall to，decline to，decrease to，drop to，go down to，reduce to，slump to，descend to