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1、2023年人与动物精彩描写 人与动物精彩描写 2023年7月浙江高考作文照旧很稳定,又是读后续写。2023年6月上演人狼大战,2023年6月骑马放羊,兔子来捣乱,2023年1月家庭与宠物狗的深情,2023年7月是关于北极熊的故事。 所以不难看出,读后续写出题人很喜爱以;人与动物;为主题进行读后续写的考查,今日为老师和学生们预备了读后续写有关;人与动物;方面的读后续写素材! 1 关于狗的神态描写 How to make the dog in your writing vivid andeye-catching? 1.Uponhis master’s arrival, the dogl
2、eapt tohis feet,snorted happilyandbounded forward.(高兴狗狗) 2.The dogcurled into a wet lumpandlay shiveringon theground. (可怜狗狗) 3.Aware ofthe immense danger,the crippleddog wasdoing impression of a corpse.害怕狗狗 4.Hestretched,shook himselfandcircled several timesbefore dropping to the ground.伸个懒腰抖抖身,保证有个
3、好睡眠 5.With pricked ears, hewatched for a momentand thenyawned.警觉狗狗 6.Lying on the ground,the dogkept his eyes wide open,ears flat,a vibrating growl deep in his chest.别惹我,后果自负 7.The dogwandered offtorest her noses in her paws.我想静静,不想理你 8.Dogstake much pleasure in rolling andrubbing their necks and ba
4、cks with their paws.淘气狗狗 9.Seeing the meatin the master’s hand, the little dogwagged its tailandwatched with hopeful eyes.馋狗狗 10.At the sight ofa strangerapproaching the house,the dogwatched him,ears up,head slightly cocked.高度戒备狗狗 11.The dog,when intently watching and slowly approaching the pr
5、ey,kept one of itsfore-legs doubled up for a long time,ready for the next cautious step.伺机一扑,成败在此一举 12.Little puppiesenjoy playing growling and biting each other’s faces and legs.天真烂漫小可爱 13.The doggot worried, crawling up around the old man’s feetas iftoseek for safety and warmth.好怕怕,别过来
6、 2 人与动物的读后续写集锦 1 A heroic dog Like most dogs whose homes are situated on large plotsof land,one New Zealand dogregularly went off exploring through the farmland around hishomeforhours at a time. But asLouie,asheepdog rescued from a shelter when he was just a puppy,got older,his trips got shorter and
7、shorter.Now that Louie is 12 years old,hechooses to stay close to home and hardly ever goes out to explore any more,which is why his family was soworried when he recentlydisappearedand didn&39;t return home as usual. ;My mother was a little upset as he had stopped hiswandering,; said Marolyn Diver,w
8、hoseparentsown Louie.;Wewere veryconcernedthat he might forget where his home was.; Butthankfully,Louie turned up at the house a fewhours later.;He looked sotiredand had basically just collapsed(崩溃),;Marolyn said.;We were concerned that someone might have hurt him.But then werealized there wasa smal
9、l noteattached to Louie&39;s collar.After readingthe note,I felt complete reliefand relaxed,and then my heartmelted.; ;Louie is the hero of the day,; read the note,which was written by a neighborabout a mile away.;He led me to Maddy in distress stuck under a pile ofbranchesCheers,Rob; ;According to
10、Rob,Louie was waiting for him at hishouse and demanded to be followed.Rob said that he was 100 percent sure thatLouie knew what he was doing,and leading him to Maddywas his pure focus,; Marolyn explained. 留意: 1所续写短文的词数应为150左右; 2至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Par
11、agraph 1: Once Rob found Maddy,Louiehelped him dig her out. Paragraph 2: ;That night we were very worried about Louie,; Marolyn said. 【参考范文】 OnceRobfoundMaddy,Louiehelpedhimdigher out.According to Rob,Louiepulled atbranchesand dug her out of the ground.Rob said that as soon as Maddy was free,both do
12、gs ran to a nearby pond and jumped into it and began to drink water.Then he gave Louie a huge handful ofdog biscuits as a thank-you.He knew that Louie might get introuble for being late forhome,sohe thought he would writea small noteto explain why Louie was absent. ;ThatnightwewereveryworriedaboutLo
13、uie,;Marolynsaid.;He could hardlywalk and looked terrible.We wereconcernedthat he might not make it through the night.;Thankfully,Louie was back to normal the next morning whenRobcame by with Maddy for avisit.Marolyn said,;It has changed the way I look at him.And I think myparentsfeel the same way.I
14、&39;m so proud of him.; 2 阅读下面材料,依据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完好的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。 It was one of the hottest days of the dry season.We had not seen rain in almost a month.The crops were dying.Cows had stopped giving milk.The streams were long gone back into the earth.If we didn&39;t seesome rain soon we w
15、ould lose everything. I was in the kitchen making lunch for the family when I saw my six year- old son,Billy,walking toward the woods.I could only see his back.He wasn&39;t walking in his usual way.He was obviously walking with a great effort,trying to be as still aspossible.Minutes after he di
16、sappeared into the woods,he came running out again,toward the house. Moments later,however,he was once again walking in that slow and purposeful step toward the woods.This activity went on for over anhour:walking cautiously tothe woods,then running back to thehouse.Finally,my curiosity got the best
17、of me.I crept out of the house and followed him on his journey. He was cupping both hands in front of him as he walked;being very careful not to spill thewater he carried.Branches and thorns slapped(拍打)his little face but he did not try to avoid them.He had a much greaterpurpose.As I leaned against
18、a tree to spy on him,Isaw the most amazing site. Several large deers appeared threatening in front of him.But Billy walked right up to them.I almost screamed for him to get away.AndI saw a baby deer laying on the ground,obviously suffering from heavy loss of water and heat exhaustion,lift its head w
19、ith great effort to lap(舔饮) up the water in my beautiful boy&39;s hand. Paragraph 1: When the water was gone,Billy jumped up to run back to the house. Paragraph 2: And later I knew what was going on. 【参考范文】 Whenthewaterwasgone,Billyjumpeduptorun backtothehouse. My curiosity once again drove me to fo
20、llow him back.After he reached the kitchen,heturned on the tap.As he was trying hard to cup both hands to receive the water,it was still running away through his fingers.And he also had great difficulty turning off the tap with hands occupied.He seemed to be so sorry and selfcondemned for his w
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