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1、2023年雅思大作文高分技巧 第一篇:雅思大作文高分技巧 雅思大作文高分技巧:对比 为大家整理了雅思大作文高分技巧:对比,对比是雅思大作文写作中的高分方法,因为运用对比可以突出主题,也可以是文章更为吸引人。对比方法在雅思大作文写作这种的应用很多,可以把对比应用在事例中,也可以应用在依次中。华一留学的我为大家转载这篇文章。 1、通过比较和对比方式来论证,这样两个事物、行为或者观点的利弊就特殊明显。 Those who believe in the measure say that students benefit a lot from traveling or working for a yea
2、r before their formal university education.First, they can more broadly acquainted themselves with the society, deepen their understanding of the outside world, and thus better coordinate their objectives of learning with the needs of the society.In contrast, by immediate entrance to university they
3、 can not steer the direction of their study well and may display a poor combination of the theory with practice.Second, study at high school is really exhausting, especially when to win college admission.So it is necessary to grant these children a relatively long period of relaxation or buffer, say
4、, traveling or working for a year, to loosen the chords of their brain, so that when they go back to school later again, they can become completely refreshed and rejuvenated.这篇雅思大作文写作的内容是关于上高校前是否应当用一年的时间来旅游或者工作进行论证。此段的主题是学生在进入高校学习之前花一年时间进行旅游或工作的话,会让他们受益匪浅。对比点是:进入高校之前一年进行旅游或工作有利于让学生广泛了解社会,加深他们对外界的理解,
5、因此能让他们更好地协调好学习目标和社会的需要。应用这样的雅思大作文写作方法,相对比之下,干脆进入高校学习的话,他们不能够把握学习的方向,而且有可能会产生理论和实践相脱节。通过此番对比,旅游或工作一年对于即将步入高校的学生们的好处是自不待言,段落的主题句得到有力的论证。 2、通过假设进行正反论述。 Then, since the transportation system is the lifeline of a countrys economic activities, its paralysis would lead to the disintegration of the economy,
6、 either industry of farming or daylife.Suppose all the means of transportation were halted for lack of oil, factories with insufficient raw materials would have to close, workers would be out of work, and ripe farm crops would have to stay in the fields at the mercy of rain and storms.People would t
7、ry to store food and the price of all commodities would go up.If we take those power stations run by oil into account, situations would become even worse.In this sense, oil decides the fate of the whole economy and that of the government.通过假设得出了一系列的可怕的后果,最终再得出结论,这样的结论是发人深省,当然也是最能引起人们广泛重视的,这样的雅思大作文写作
8、方法是最简洁给人留下深刻印象的。 以上就是关于对比这种雅思大作文写作方法的介绍,大家可以通过上面的两个例子看到,这两个作用都是在雅思大作文写作中特殊有用的,都能起到特殊关键的点题作用。所以大家在自己的雅思大作文写作的备考中可以进行适当的应用。 其次篇:雅思作文高分好用 雅思小作文高分模版 小作文结构 开头段1-2句 转述原题 主体段11+X句 每个主体段第一句话概括本段,X句介绍数字 主体段N 结尾段1-2句 第一句介绍总数total假如没有就不写,其次句作结论 开头段 时态:一般如今时 替换词 proportion/ percentageinformation/ datanumber/ fi
9、gures family/ householdmales/ menfemales/ women influence/ affect(v.)effect(n.)categories/ kinds/ typesdemand/ need subway/ underground railwaystore/ shopuniversity/ college show/ describe/ illustrate/ demonstrate/ summarize/ indicate 国家的替换如美国,英国等 主体段 时态:由题目的时间确定 1.数据按依次介绍,不要跳动 2.4类关键数据:maximum最大值,m
10、inimum最小值,trend转变趋势,intersection交叉点线图 第一句,由图可见: As can be seen from the table that It can be seen from the table that We can see from the table that According to the xx chart, It is interesting to note that Noticeably,(Interestingly) 其次句,具体来说: To be more specific, = more specifically To be more exac
11、t, = more exactly 替换词 上升 increased/ an increaserose/ a rise 急剧上升 rocketed(boomed)a rocket(a boom) 下降 dropped/ a dropdecreased/ a decreasereduced / a reduction 急剧下降 slumpeda slump 持平 stabilizedremained / maintained / stayedstable / constant / steady 波动 fluctuateda fluctuation 最高点 peaked atreached the
12、 highest point at(as high as) 最低点 reached the bottom at 速度快/慢 rapid rapidly/ slow slowly 幅度大/小 significant significantly/ gradual gradually/ steady steadily/ slight slightly 大约:about/ around/approximately / just over/ just under 到达某个数量 reached/ stood at / arrived at 预期值将来时间必需用这个写 A is expected/ pred
13、icted / estimated / projected to reach 分别 respectively 占比 accounted for/ made up/ represented the percentage of / was responsible for / provided 一些例句: As can be seen from the graph, the number of fluctuated during the period of .As can be seen from the graph, there was a slight rise in the number of
14、 * from * to * The period between * and * experienced a slight rise of , with the number reaching *.It can be seen from the chart that * accounted for the greatest proportion of * As for other categories, After that, an opposite trend occurred.The highest was A, followed by 结尾段 Therefore, it can be
15、clearly seen from the table that 流程图 The process diagram illustrates in * stages how 由图可见 In the first stage(picture, period), / Initially,In the next step, After that(Next/ Then), Finally, (the whole cycle starts over again.) 追加描述 at this stage/ at this point/ as the diagram shows Therefore, the pr
16、ocess diagram clearly shows that 雅思大作文高分模版 (1) 立场类文章 开头段 1.As the world continues to increase in complexity, *(点题目的范围,比方education, crime, environmentalpreservation等)has triggered a wide public concern and discussion.2.When it comes to whether (这句从句确定要写对,就是点题), people hold conflicting opinions.3.Pers
17、onally, I strongly think that 其次段(你反对的那一方的有道理的部分。一般1-2个观点) 双边结合:On the one hand, there is no doubt that sth.has certain advantages(disadvantages).只选择一边立场:Ones first inclination might be to argue that sth.has certain advantages(disadvantages).第一个观点To begin with, .其次个观点Moreover, .论据部分可能的连接词: as a resu
18、lt/ to be more specific/ in other words/ for instance 第三段(你支持的那一方的观点,一般2-3个观点) 双边结合:On the other hand, we should not ignore the disadvantages it may bring along.只选择一边立场:A quick look at the following facts, however, may show us a different picture.连接词留意不要重复即可,如on top of that / besides / apart from 结尾
19、段此类文章结尾必需要写(仅以抽烟好不好为例) 只选择一边立场:Overall, despite the advantages smoking may bring, I think it has more disadvantages in terms of individual health and other aspects.Therefore, people should not be encouraged to take up smoking.假如为双边结合的,结尾可用not only, but also 连接 假如支持那方有新观点,也可以放在结尾段。 雅思大作文高分模版 (2) 解决问题
20、类文章 开头段 As the world continues to increase in complexity, *点题has triggered a wide public concern and discussion.New solutions to this problem are being proposed, trialed and implemented with ever increasing speed.This essay aims to analyze the reasons for and potential influences(effects)brought by
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