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1、2023年十五从军征改写记叙文 Wooden vessel is stood by to the bank slowly, I set foot on that native land that has recalled countless times in the dream. Step is a little rigid, reading aloud me to come back again only, can resembling again is to answer did not go. 木船渐渐向岸边靠近，我踏上了那块在梦中忆过很多次的故土。步伐有些僵硬，只念着我又回来了，可又像

2、是回不去了。 The smiling expression that removes for a long time to did not show is ticked off on my face, laugh at that is small Qing Qiu, laugh at paddy of that one wild gold, wave in Cong Zhulin of smoke from kitchen chimneys, everything peacefully, hill form as before. 我脸上勾起许久未现的笑容，笑那小座青丘，笑那一野金稻，炊烟从竹林

3、深处飘来，一切安然，山形照旧。 ; guest, are you where comer? But want to go in the village? A child child is in ; my ahead, crying to me. Before this wanting that walk up, I go, child of head of that bitter fleabane backed down however one pace. The hand that my accost wears slowly put down, 65 years, if I when se

4、e on the road unfamiliar, all over the face the person of bruise of introduced from the northern and western nationalities or from abroad broken bits, all over the body, also meet scared. The scar on my face resembles a stone forcedly, feel every time touch again however the place with the most dist

5、ressed heart. At the moment, I feel feeling of ; close countryside only more cowardly ; stopped. ;客人，你是何处来的人？可是要去村中？;一个孩童在我前方，冲我喊着。我本想走上前去，那蓬头小孩却后退了一步。我招呼着的手缓缓放下，六十五年了，若是儿时的我在路上观察一个生疏的、满脸胡渣、满身伤痕的人，也会恐惧。我脸上的疤痕硬得像块石头，每当摸起却又触及内心最酸楚的地方。此刻间，我只感觉;近乡情更怯;罢了。 Is ; you? ; all over the face the hand that the o

6、ld person of vicissitudes of life pulls a child, also saw me. ; is me! ; I am witting the father that he is A Ke. Before I go up, go pulling him. His empty and deep-set eye extensive is yellow, knit the face like paper skin is dark and bonily. The old person grasps my hand, piece dehisce, not langua

7、ge tear flows first. If the knife is wrung,that cloudy hot tear lets my heart. ; A Ke is gallant on battlefield fight the enemy, but already be dead. The double closefisted cinch with ; sere old person me, asp cheek as before old tear freely, a long time, he suddenly agonized laugh, squeeze drily gi

8、ve a word: ; is good, in that way it may not be a bad idea. ; child child unidentified sit so aside. Look at him, remember I and good brother A a jade-like stone to be taken together in those days when taking military service, also be 956 years old stop only. In the cold wind night of frontier fortr

9、ess, I dream of him to be stiff on yellow sanded battlefield in pool of blood constantly, along with 1000 army 10 thousand horses, accompany yellow wind mad sand, permanent bury is in exotic an alien land. Mr ; disappears, qinghai head, full marks of since time immemorial / nobody receive bones of t

10、he dead ; , below Bing Linchi of how many years, a symbol of war, my brother, my comrade-in-arms, each blood asperses skyline. And I stand in garden of heart countryside reason nowadays, also calculate fulfilled each other wish. ;是你？;一位满脸沧桑的老人牵起小孩的手，也观察了我。;是我！;我知晓他是阿珂的父亲。我上前去拉着他。他空洞深陷的眼睛泛黄，皱得像纸皮的脸乌黑

11、嶙峋。老人一把攥住我的手，张了张口，未语泪先流。那浑浊的热泪让我心如刀绞。;阿珂在战场上勇敢杀敌，但已经不在了。;老人干枯的双手紧紧握住我，颤抖的脸颊照旧老泪纵横，良久，他突然苦涩的笑了，干涩地挤出一句话：;好，那样也好。;孩童不明所以地坐在一边。看着他，想起我与好兄弟阿珂当年一同被带去服兵役时，也只是十五六岁罢。边塞的寒风夜里，我时常梦见他于黄沙战场上僵硬在血泊中，随千军万马，伴黄风狂沙，永久葬在异国他乡。;君不见，青海头，古来总分/白骨无人收;，多少年的兵临池下，金戈铁马，我的兄弟，我的战友，一个个血洒天涯。而我如今站在心乡故园中，也算完成了彼此的一个心愿。 I am going so,

12、a li of road, two lis of roads, 10 lis of roads that …… of 3 lis of roads leaves home are when chop bavin every day with father, play the place that make. ; the world hurts the past a few times, hill form as before ; of pillow cold current, the paddy cropland in ahead home is bedraggle

13、d also. I still am bearing the sadness that be overwhelmed with sorrow, ground of honor permits no turning back is going. ; your grown-ups and children has left early or late before a few years, all bury is on the green hill outside the rice field. My loneliness of 65 years resembles ; was to dry up

14、 tear, red bilged eye, the tear flows in past heart however. 我就这样走着，一里路，两里路，三里路……离家的十里路是儿时与父亲天天砍柴，玩闹的地方。;人世几回伤往事，山形照旧枕寒流;，前方家里的稻田地也荒废了。我还是忍着痛不欲生的哀痛，义无反顾地走着。;你一家老小在几年前已经先后离去，全都葬在稻田外的青山上了。;我六十五年的孤独像是干枯了泪水，红胀了眼，泪却往心里流。 The car rattles, the horse neighs, the officers and soldiers that goes

15、 far is taking a flock of young people, also be 15 above. Parental ; pulls garment stamp to bar cry ; aloof ; cry is straight on Gan Yunxiao ; . Greater part group is going, also be arrested even the woman v/arc be transported to a distant place for penal servitude. This goes classics year, it is a

16、flock of junior form bury the riverside in birthplace, who is clear, what bicephalous person awaits is the metempsychosis of life and death. 车辚辚，马萧萧，远远走来的官兵带着一群青年，也是十五开外。父母;牵衣顿足拦道哭;远远地;哭声直上干云霄;。大部队走着，连妇女也被抓去充军。此去经年，又是一群年少的身影埋没在家乡的河畔，谁都明白，两头人等待的是生死的轮回。 5 lis of roads, 6 lis of roads. Leisurely fleeti

17、ng time, time brings a great change to the worlds. A Ke Ceng Yan ; if I have this fight go notting have time, a grave ; stands for me when remembering coming home. Side side rings again junior when sad wail of the mother: ; official as form of a address for an official or rich man, they are small st

18、ill. I see ; clearly peach blossom of face of that piece of person in youth also is utterly disheartened. 五里路，六里路。悠悠流年，沧海桑田。阿珂曾言;若此战我有去无回，记得回家时为我立个墓;。耳边又响起年少时母亲的哀嚎：;官爷，他们还小啊。;我分明看到青春里那张人面桃花也万念俱灰。 Wet sound of day overcast and rainy chirps! dusty the home of for a long time is before, that is ground

19、child on received cobweb, thick dirt comes loose to go up in my shoulder along with overcast and rainy, some memory still urge person sentiment in the corner, and the person goes the building is empty, everything eventually will permanent bury in mist. 天阴雨湿声啾啾！尘封了许久的家就在眼前，那磨子上接了蜘蛛网，厚厚的灰尘随阴雨散在我的肩上，有些记忆还在角落催人感伤，而人去楼空，一切终将永久掩埋在雾中。 Instantly smooth evil wind did tear stains, blank of 65 years is being taken redness of skin and endless distressed, I think, a veteran play also should ring down the curtain. 须臾的光阴风干了泪痕，六十五年的空白带着血色与无尽的酸楚，我想，一台老兵的戏也该落幕了。(文/曾少颖)