2018年6月浙江高考读后续写分析(父子骑马野外迷失)ppt课件.pptx

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1、经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用Continuing the story经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用第二节第二节 读后续写读后续写(满分满分25分分)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。一个完整的故事。Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.Hed

2、ecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydadsfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用HiswifeTinacookedusadelicious

3、dinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning.UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast.“Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,”hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwit

4、hUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool._经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasntgoingtotakeahorseridebymysel

5、fanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.“Dontbelateforsupper,”UnclePaulcried,“andkeeptothetracksothatyoudontgetlost!”“OK!”mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgre

6、enpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(编织的编织的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus._经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用情节的不合理性：情节的不合理性：1.神兔带我们迷路，又带我们回家。神兔带我们迷路，又带我们回家。2.马突然有灵性，带我们回家。马突然有灵性，带我们回家。3.超级无能的爸爸，无所作为的爸爸超级无能的爸爸，

7、无所作为的爸爸经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用1.Dad/my dad 2.我们发现我们迷路了 We found ourselves got lost.We found ourselves lost.We found(that)we got lost.3.从视线中消失sth.disappear/vanish from sight/viewSth.were out of sight.4.看见什么We caught sight of sth.Sth came into sight/view.5.策马前

8、进urge the horse on with a whipwhip the horse on/forward6.突然想起某人的话His words popped into my mind/head.经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用Para 1Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.1.Thewriterwasattractedbytherabbit.2.Hebegantochasetherabbit.3.Hisfatherfollowedhi

9、mbehind,concernedabouthissafety.4.Bothofthemgotawayfromthetrackandwerelostinthedepthsoftheforest.经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用Para 2Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.1.Thewritersfeelingswhentheyfoundtheygotlost.2.Howhisfathercomfortedhimandworkedoutthesolution3.H

10、owtheyfoundtheirwayback4.Thewritersafterthoughts经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用1.Dad/my dad 2.我们发现我们迷路了 We found ourselves got lost.We found ourselves lost.We found(that)we got lost.3.从视线中消失sth.disappear/vanish from sight/viewSth.were out of sight.4.看见什么We caught si

11、ght of sth.Sth came into sight/view.5.策马前进urge the horse on(with a whip)whip the horse on6.突然想起某人的话His words popped into my mind/head.经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用Description of the horse1.Normally,thatwouldntbotherahorse,butforsomereason,mymare(母马母马)wasalotmorene

12、rvousthannormal.2.Shestartedtoneighandkickedupherheels.3.Itshotitstwofrontlegsup,andIheldontothesaddle(马鞍马鞍)tightly.Allofasuddenthehorsewasquicklygalloping(gallop飞奔飞奔)awayandwewerewayoffthetrack.4.Myhorsebolted(窜窜)totherightasIheldontightlyandtriednottofall.5.Badlystartledbythesuddenincident,thehors

13、espedoffthetrackintoanotherdirection.经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用Description of the horse6.Itwassoquickthatmyhorsewasscared.Thehorsestartedtoneigh,shiver（颤抖）（颤抖）andgraduallylosecontrol.ItsuddenlyrantoanotherdirectionawayfromtheinitialtrackUnclePaulhadwarnedustoke

14、ep.7.Thehorsewasrunningwild(失去控制失去控制)andfinallywefelloffthehorseandthehorsejustranaway,leavingmeandmydadlyingontheground.经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用1.动物的叫声集锦动物的叫声集锦neigh:马的嘶叫声马的嘶叫声bark：狗的叫声：狗的叫声bellow：（公牛）吼叫声：（公牛）吼叫声bleat：（羊或小牛）咩咩声：（羊或小牛）咩咩声buzz：（蜜蜂、蚊子等）嗡嗡声：（蜜蜂、

15、蚊子等）嗡嗡声cackle：（母鸡下蛋后）咯咯声：（母鸡下蛋后）咯咯声cheep：（小鸡）唧唧声；：（小鸡）唧唧声；chirp：（小鸟）啁啾声，：（小鸟）啁啾声，crow：（公鸡）喔喔声（公鸡）喔喔声grunt：（猪等）咕噜声：（猪等）咕噜声经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用水流声：水流声：1.Weheardariverbabblingnearby(v)2.Haveyouheardthebabbleofrunningwater?(n)3.ababbling/ripplingbrook(adj.)4.

16、Shealwaysbabblesaboutthemistakesmadebyherson.(v)唠唠叨叨唠唠叨叨 经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用Description of the rabbit1.ThelittleRabbithadacoatofwhite/brownhair.Thetwoearswerelongandstooduprightonitshead.2.Itraiseditsmuzzle(动物的嘴动物的嘴),wiggling(摇摆摇摆)itsflocky（毛茸茸）（毛茸茸）shor

17、ttail.3.Itwassocutewithitsmouthchewinggrass,glancingatusoccasionally.经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用Description of the surroundings1.Thesettingsuncastagoldenglowoverthemountain.2.Thesunsetdyedthehorizon.3.Themoonburstthroughthecloudsandcastitssilverlightalloverthewe

18、tland.4.Theluxuriant/thickforest,thetinyflowersthatperfumedtheair,thegroupsofsheepinthefardistanceandthesingingriverallmademysoulpurified.5.Atthatmoment,itwascompletelydarkexceptthefaintlightgivenoutbyafewstarsinthesky.6.Darkcloudsseemedtobegatheringinthesky.7.Bynowthesunhadalmostdippedbehindthehori

19、zon.经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用Feeling and reaction of the writer and his father:1.NeverhadIseensuchalovelycreatureinmylifesoIfolloweditswithoutthinkingtwice.2.Frozenwithfear,Iwas/stoodrootedtothespot.3.SoeagerwasItoapproachalovelycreaturethatIfeltanurgetocatchi

20、t.4.Intheblinkofaneye,therabbitescapedoutofsight.5.Withouttheslightesthesitation,Ifollowedit,offthetrack.6.Sodidmydad,leavingUnclePaulswordsbehind.7.Intheforest,weweregreetedwithbreathtakingscenery.8.Fearslowlycreptuponus.Unexpectedly,thereseemedtobefootsteps,stampingonthefallenleaves,creaking(嘎吱嘎吱作

21、响作响).经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用9.Failingtoresistthetemptation,IbeggedDadforanadventure.10.Asenseofcuriosityandexcitementgraduallycreepingintomyheart,Iwhisperedtomyfather.11.Speechless,mydadofferedacomfortingsmile,whicheasedmyterror.12.Dadtriedinvaintofindtheway

22、backaseverythingaroundseemedunfamiliar.13.Iburstoutcrying,overcomewithregretandfear.14.Swallowedbythedarkness,wetotallylostsightofeverything.15.Mydadheldtheropetightlyinordertocalmthehorsedown.However,itdidntwork.Feeling and reaction of the writer and his father:经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损

23、失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhouse.NeverhadIseensuchalovelycreatureinmylifesoIfolloweditstrackwithoutthinkingtwice.Butthecuterabbit,whicharousedmyinterest,wasquicklyoutofsight.Intheprocessofseekingforit,Iwastotallyimmersedinthecharmofnature.Theluxuriantforest,

24、thetinyflowerthatperfumedtheair,thegroupsofsheepinthefardistanceandthesingingriverallmademysoulpurified.BothDadandIhadforgottenthetimeanditseemeddifficultforustogoback.One sample(23 points)经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Thelovelypl

25、antsaroundusturnedintoahorribleappearance.ThedeadsilencebetweenDadandmemadememorenervousandscared.Finallywedecidedtowait.Atthatmoment,itwascompletelydarkexceptthefaintlightgivenoutbyafewstarsinthesky.Allofasudden,IsawtorchlightmovingandheardthevoiceofUnclePawl.InstinctivelyIshoutedbackcrazily.Thefea

26、randdespairthathadbeenbuildingupinsidemejustcametoanend.Ultimately,wewereback,safeandsound.Sittingintheguestroom,Ifounditreallyblissfultobeaccompaniedbyyourbelovedones.经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用Para1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Itwasfurrywith

27、acoatofgorgeousbrownhair.Afterlookingupatmewithitspairofredbulbs,itbegantoscurryahead.“WhynotcatchitandbringitbacktoUnclePaul?Theymustbeveryhappy.”Withthisthought,Irodehardtohuntforit.Dadsawitandhadtofollowme.Therabbitwasveryagile,soonenteringamountainforest.Wehadtogetdownthehorses,continuingthechas

28、eandtotallyforgettingthetrackback.Eventhoughwetrieddesperately,therabbitwasoutofsightintheend.Thenwerealizedwewereinthedeeppartofanforest.One sample经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用Para2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Anddarkcloudsseemedtobegatheringinthesky.Takin

29、goutthecellphone,wesoonfoundsomethingwaswrong:nosignal.Andnocompass.Frightened,IstaredatDad,tryingtoseekasolutionforthetroublefromhim.“Maybewhatyouhavelearnedingeographyclassworks,hesaid,pointingtothestarsinthesky.IknewhemeanttheNorthStar.Soonwefoundtherightdirection.Wehurriedbackfindingthehorses.An

30、dtheriverwasinsightagain.Thefamilywasworriedandabouttocallthepolice.Atthesightofus,theywerequiterelieved.Therewasnothingmorememorablethanthisrabbithuntinginmylife!经营者提供商品或者服务有欺诈行为的，应当按照消费者的要求增加赔偿其受到的损失，增加赔偿的金额为消费者购买商品的价款或接受服务的费用ProblemsandsolutionsPlotWritingpurposeCharactersFeelingsAnalysisshareonethrillingadventureandsthlearnedfromhisfatherThewriterHisfatherTherabbitUnclePaulexcitedamazedpuzzledfrightenedrelievef