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1、篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统 With a giant tear in her eye,the little girl looked up at him.She forced a smile,saying“Thank you”and walked towards the door.Pappy thought of his daughter and said to the girl loudly,“How mu

2、ch have you got to spend?”Hearing this,the little girl counted money in her purse-two dollars.After thinking for a few seconds,Pappy said,“Today is Christmas Day and this is your lucky day.The bell costs two dollars.”The child went out,holding the special bell in her hand.Grade the story Grade the s

3、tory 篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统 Later that evening when Pappy was closing up the shop,he heard a familiar ringing.He couldnt believe his ears.The girl stood in the doorway,ringing the bell happily.Then Pappy got close to her and asked,“Have you changed your mind,Miss?”“No

4、.My Momma says the present is for you.”said the child.Before Pappy had time to say another word,a young woman walked in.She said to Pappy,“Hello,Dad.”篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统How to polish your story?篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统润色文章的技巧 技 巧1.使用较高

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6、”细节细节丰富故事情节丰富故事情节 Proper adv to enrich your story 篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统Tip1：“小小”心思心思丰丰满人物内心人物内心悲伤悲伤快乐快乐20162016年年1010月高考作文月高考作文 2323分分篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统Tip1：“小小”心思心思丰丰满人物内心人物内心震惊震惊20172017年年6 6月高考作文月高考作文 2323分分篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分

7、多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统One day,the Brother,who had become a Monk,One day,the Brother,who had become a Monk,forced himself on the same road where he forced himself on the same road where he found accommodation years ago.found accommodation years ago.He He decided to visit the family.decided

8、 to visit the family.But the shabby But the shabby cottage was nowhere to be found.He only cottage was nowhere to be found.He only found a splendid house.found a splendid house.He thought the He thought the family might die.family might die.Suddenly,a man came out.Suddenly,a man came out.The monk re

9、cognized him.It was the father of The monk recognized him.It was the father of the family.So he asked,“Have you lived here?”the family.So he asked,“Have you lived here?”Tip1：“小小”心思心思丰丰满人物内心人物内心篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统One day,the Brother,who had become a Monk,One day,the

10、 Brother,who had become a Monk,forced himself on the same road where he found forced himself on the same road where he found accommodation years ago.accommodation years ago.Driven by a sense Driven by a sense of regret,of regret,he decided to visit the family.he decided to visit the family.To his To

11、 his great surprise,great surprise,the shabby cottage was nowhere to the shabby cottage was nowhere to be found.He only found a splendid house.be found.He only found a splendid house.Upon Upon thinking the family might have starved to death,thinking the family might have starved to death,he he sighe

12、d with guilt.sighed with guilt.Suddenly,a man came out.The Suddenly,a man came out.The monk recognized him.It was the father of the monk recognized him.It was the father of the family.So he asked,“Have you lived here?”family.So he asked,“Have you lived here?”Tip1：“小小”心思心思丰丰满人物内心人物内心篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时

13、间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统Lets compare！He decided to visit He decided to visit the family.the family.But the But the shabby cottage was shabby cottage was nowhere to be found.nowhere to be found.He only found a He only found a splendid house.splendid house.He He thought the family thought

14、 the family might die.might die.Driven by a sense of Driven by a sense of regret,regret,he decided to visit he decided to visit the family.the family.To his great To his great surprise,surprise,the shabby the shabby cottage was nowhere to cottage was nowhere to be found.He only found a be found.He o

15、nly found a splendid house.splendid house.Upon Upon thinking the family might thinking the family might have starved to death,have starved to death,he he sighed with guilt.sighed with guilt.In conclusionIn conclusion，the description of inner thoughts can the description of inner thoughts can make ou

16、r story make our story more logical,reasonable,creativemore logical,reasonable,creative and and powerful.powerful.篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统How to describe your inner feelings?1.Feeling happy/sad/angry/guilty/depressed,2.Driven by curiosity/a sense of regret/sympathy.或者是

17、Deeply touched/moved by3.,full of regret/anger/fear/gratitude/sadness4.To ones disappointment/surprise/delight/relief/astonishment5.in surprise/relief/anger 或者是with satisfaction/excitement(等于一个副词）6.具体的动作描写 stand frozen,jump with joy,tremble with anger,with tears filling ones eyes,with ones eyes wide

18、 open 等等篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统Lets have a try!1.Pappy said to the girl,“How much have you got to spend?”Driven by a sense of sympathy,Pappy said to the girl,“How much have you got to spend?”2.The child walked out,holding the special bell in her hands.The child went ou

19、t with great joy,holding the special bell in her hands.篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统3.Then Pappy got close to her and asked,“Have you changed your mind,Miss?”Feeling puzzled,Pappy got close to her and asked,“Have you changed your mind,Miss?”4.She said to Pappy,“Hello,Dad.”Wi

20、th tears filling her eyes,she said to Pappy cheerfully,“Hello,Dad.”篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统 With a giant tear in her eye,the little girl looked up at him.She forced a smile,saying“Thank you”and walked towards the door.Pappy thought of his daughter.Driven by a sense of s

21、ympathy,Pappy said to the girl loudly,“How much have you got to spend?”Hearing this,the little girl counted money in her purse-two dollars.After thinking for a few seconds,Pappy said,“Today is Christmas Day and this is your lucky day.The bell costs two dollars.”The child went out with great joy,hold

22、ing the special bell in her hand.篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统Later that evening when Pappy was closing up the shop,he heard a familiar ringing.He couldnt believe his ears.The girl stood in the doorway,ringing the bell happily.Feeling puzzled,Pappy got close to her and asked

23、,“Have you changed your mind,Miss?”“No.My Momma says the present is for you.”said the child.Before Pappy had time to say another word,a young woman walked in.Tears filling her eyes,she said to Pappy cheerfully,“Hello,Dad.”篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统Tip 2：“小小”词汇词汇增加表达效果增加表达

24、效果Brainstorming:telltell saysaywhisperwhisper murmurmurmur speakspeaktalktalk cry outcry out shoutshout respondrespond replyreply explainexplain screamscream roarroar announceannounce declaredeclare yell call out call out 篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统The government _ a state

25、 of emergency.“Get out of my house!”The officer _.He _ something in his sleep.Seeing the film star,the fans _ with excitement.Asked why he was late,Alex _ that his car had broken down.Tip 2：“小小”词汇增加表达效果增加表达效果declared declared roared roared murmured murmured screamed screamed explained explained 篮球比赛

26、是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统1.The girl forced a smile,saying“Thank you.”and turned towards the door.2.Driven by a sense of sympathy,Pappy said to the girl loudly,“How much have you got to spend,Missy?”Lets have a try!Lets have a try!murmuring murmuring called out called out 篮球比

27、赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统3.After thinking for a few seconds,Pappy said,“Today is Christmas Day and this is your lucky Day.”4.“No.My Momma says the present is for you.”said the child.5.Tears filling her eyes,she said cheerfully,“Hello,Dad.”announcedannouncedexplainedexplaine

28、dcried outcried out篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统What you are supposed to bear in mind:只要是记叙文，难以逃脱的动作描写肯定有，动嘴，动手与动脚。除了熟知各种说的表达方式外，请记住各种看，和各种走Eg:see,watch,observe,peep,look around,look back,stare at,glare at,glance at,catch sight of,lose sight of,etcEg:walk,run,wander,dash,str

29、oll around,pace back and forth,step into,make ones way to,dance out,etc篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统 1.She forced a smile,murmuring “Thank you”and walked towards the door.2 The child went out with great joy,holding the special bell in her hand.3.Before Pappy had time to say

30、another word,a young woman walked in.Tip 2：“小小”词汇词汇增加表达效果增加表达效果make her way to make her way to danced out danced out stepped in stepped in 篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统 With a giant tear in her eye,the little girl looked up at him.She forced a smile,murmuring“Thank you”and m

31、ade her way to the door.Pappy thought of his daughter.Driven by a sense of sympathy,Pappy called out,“How much have you got to spend?”Hearing this,the little girl counted money in her purse-two dollars.After thinking for a few seconds,Pappy announced,“Today is Christmas Day and this is your lucky da

32、y.The bell costs two dollars.”The child danced out with great joy,holding the special bell in her hand.篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统Later that evening when Pappy was closing up the shop,he heard a familiar ringing.He couldnt believe his ears.The girl stood in the doorway,rin

33、ging the bell happily.Feeling puzzled,Pappy got close to her and asked,“Have you changed your mind,Miss?”“No.My Momma says the present is for you.”explained the child.Before Pappy had time to say another word,a young woman stepped in.Tears filling her eyes,she cried out cheerfully,“Hello,Dad.”篮球比赛是根

34、据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统 Topic：a shocking knife attack From Book 5 Unit5First Aid Anne Slade,mother of three,had been stabbed _ with a knife.She was lying in her front garden bleeding very _.Her hands had _ been cut off.Tip 3：“小小”细节丰富故事情节丰富故事情节 repeatedlyrepeatedly heavilyhea

35、vily almost almost 篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统 With a giant tear in her eye,the little girl looked up at him.She forced a smile,murmuring“Thank you”and made her way to the door._,Pappy thought of his daughter.Driven by a sense of sympathy,Pappy called out,“How much have yo

36、u got to spend?”Hearing this,the little girl counted money in her purse-two dollars_.After thinking for a few seconds,Pappy announced,“Today is Christmas Day and this is your lucky day.The bell costs _ two dollars.”The child danced out with great joy,holding the special bell in her hand.SuddenlySudd

37、enlyaltogetheraltogetherexactlyexactly篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统Later that evening when Pappy was closing up the shop,he heard a familiar ringing.He couldnt believe his ears.The girl stood in the doorway,ringing the bell happily.Feeling puzzled,Pappy got close to her and

38、asked,“Have you changed your mind,Miss?”“No.My Momma says the present is for you.”explained the little girl.Then,her mother stepped in.Tears filling her eyes,she cried out cheerfully,“Hello,Dad.”篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统Thank you for Thank you for your attention!your attention!