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1、Writing a DiaryRevision如何写英文日记如何写英文日记日记是用来叙述一天生活中发生的日记是用来叙述一天生活中发生的最有趣最有趣或感受最深的一些事情或感受最深的一些事情。写英文日记要注意格式、时态和和人称的写英文日记要注意格式、时态和和人称的正确使用。英文日记的格式为：正确使用。英文日记的格式为：日期日期(Date),星期星期(Day)天气天气(Weather)正文正文(Body)：_ 写作指导写作指导1.通常是在通常是在左上角左上角写出当天的写出当天的日期日期和和星星期期，在靠，在靠右右的部分写上当天的的部分写上当天的天气情况天气情况。正文可有标题，也可不要。要注意正确正文

2、可有标题，也可不要。要注意正确书写月份和星期的名称；天气多用书写月份和星期的名称；天气多用形容形容词词表示。首字母通常要大写。表示。首字母通常要大写。Days:Monday 星期一星期一 Tuesday 星期二星期二Wednesday 星期三星期三 Thursday 星期四星期四Friday 星期五星期五 Saturday 星期六星期六Sunday 星期日星期日Months:1月月-January(Jan.)2月月-February(Feb.)3月月-March(Mar.)4月月-April(Apr.)5月月-May6月月-June(Jun.)7月月-July(Jul.)8月月-August(

3、Aug.)9月月-September(Sep.)10月月-October(Oct.)11月月-November(Nov.)12月月-December(Dec.)晴晴-Fine;Sunny;Shining；雨雨-Rainy;Raining;雪雪-Snowy阴阴-Overcast雾雾-foggy多风多风-Windy多云多云-Cloudy暴风雨暴风雨-Stormy;Thundering阵雨阵雨-Shower Weather:2.正文：正文：日记一般用日记一般用过去时态过去时态。使用使用第一人称第一人称。经过经过：按事情发生的先后顺序来记述。按事情发生的先后顺序来记述。所以常用所以常用at first

4、,then,later on,soon,at last等单词或词组使整篇文章通顺贯。等单词或词组使整篇文章通顺贯。结尾结尾：发表自己的感想或评论，可根发表自己的感想或评论，可根据具体情况使用过去时态、现在时态或将据具体情况使用过去时态、现在时态或将来时态来时态。常用的单词或词组使整篇文章通顺贯：常用的单词或词组使整篇文章通顺贯：Beginning of the event:first,firstly,in the beginningCourse of the event:then,later on,after,meanwhile,at the same time,whats more,more

5、overEnding:at last,in the end,finally,in short,in a word,as a result10月月20日星期天，你和同学们到红星农场旅游。日星期天，你和同学们到红星农场旅游。根据下面的图表用英语写一篇日记。根据下面的图表用英语写一篇日记。6：30：起床、乘车出发去红星农场、一路欣：起床、乘车出发去红星农场、一路欣赏风景、唱歌赏风景、唱歌8：30：到达农场、受到欢迎，参观、植树、：到达农场、受到欢迎，参观、植树、了解自然了解自然13：00：野炊、乘车回家：野炊、乘车回家有点累，但是很开心有点累，但是很开心要求：用要求：用first、next、then

6、和和 finally等连词等连词 使使日记连贯日记连贯,可适当加一些感受。可适当加一些感受。writing写作过程写作过程1.审题审题确定格式、体裁、确定格式、体裁、时态时态、人称等、人称等 写作要点。写作要点。2.列出提列出提纲纲，确定开，确定开头头句、句、扩扩展句和展句和总总 结结句，句，选择选择好适宜的句型。好适宜的句型。3.利用一些关利用一些关联词联词或者或者过过渡句把句子有渡句把句子有 机地机地连连接起来，必要接起来，必要时时可适当增加可适当增加细节细节。4.仔仔细检查细检查，适当修改，保，适当修改，保证证句子句子结结构完构完 整，要点整，要点齐齐全，全，人称人称时态时态主主谓谓一致

7、一致。5.认认真真誊誊写，卷面整写，卷面整洁洁。Step 1:Form_ _ _ 正文正文_October,20th.SundaySunny时态：时态：_人称：人称：_体裁：体裁：_一般过去时一般过去时第一人称第一人称记叙文记叙文Step 2:Write down the necessary simple sentences with your partners.Some necessary words and phrases:set off/have a good time/enjoy the scenerygive sb.a warm welcome show sb.aroundget c

8、lose to nature/be on the way backDiscuss togetherToday my classmates and I went to Hongxin Farm for travel.I got up at 6:30We set off by bus.We had a good time singing and enjoying the beautiful scenery outside the window.We arrived at the gate of the farm.The farmers waited to give us a warm welcom

9、e.We were shown around the big farm.We began to plant trees.It was really a good way to get close to nature and protect the environment.I had a delicious picnic with my classmates.We were on the way back.Although we were all very tired,our travel was really unforgettable.Step 3:connect the sentences

10、 with conjunction words and make the article better with your partnerOct.l0st,Sunday,sunny Today I as well as my classmates went to Hongxin Farm for travel.First,I got up at 6:30 and we set off by bus.On the bus,we had a good time singing and enjoying the beautiful scenery outside the window.Then tw

11、o hours later,we arrived at the gate of the farm,where the farmers were waiting to give us a warm welcome.After we were shown around the big farm,we began to plant trees,which was really a good way to get close to nature and protect the environment at the same time.Next,we had a picnic and it was gr

12、eat fun to eat in the open air.The time went very fast.Finally,It was time for us to go back.Although we were all very tired,our travel was really unforgettable.行文要连贯流畅行文要连贯流畅语句要严谨、准确语句要严谨、准确表达要简明、清楚表达要简明、清楚句型结构要有变化句型结构要有变化语言使用适当得体语言使用适当得体牢记书面表达概要牢记书面表达概要总结常用句型：总结常用句型：外出活动、欣赏美景外出活动、欣赏美景We went out f

13、or a picnic with my friends yesterday.Early in the morning,we set off for the farm for a visit.On the way,we had a good time singing and beautiful scenery.We enjoying the were shown around the farm,where we saw many beautiful plants.The moment we got to the top of the hill,we were attracted by the b

14、eautiful scenery.It was time for us to go back when the sun started to go down.事故发生事故发生Unfortunately an accident happened to him=Unfortunately he had an accident.I was walking when I met with an old friend of mine.He was so frightened that I could do nothing Feelings:Although we were tired,we felt v

15、ery happy.We enjoyed ourselves.=We had fun.=We had a good time.On the way back,we were laughing and talking all the time.What a wonderful weekend we had!Though I was late for school,Im proud of what I did.It wan an unforgettable experience for me.常用过渡语常用过渡语“启启”first,first of all,firstly,in the begin

16、ning,generally speaking,now,recently“承承”second,secondly,also,then,meanwhile,still,at the same time,whats more,moreover,after a while,after a few days,for example,in fact,in other words,indeed,of course“转转”anyway,after all,but,nevertheless,on the contrary,otherwise,perhaps,unfortunately,on the other hand,luckily,fortunately,in other words,however,fortunately,especially,in particular,“合合”finally,above all,in brief,in conclusion,in short,in a word,as a result,at last,therefore,thus