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1、THEBEAUTYOFWRITINGSENIORONECLASS18Students will be able to:1.Learn how to write a short passage of FUTURE.2.The scoring criteria in NMET3.Develop students awareness of writing4.Get some information about how to write a basic writing.高考英语评分原则：高考英语评分原则：1.本题总分为本题总分为30分，按分，按5个档次个档次给分。给分。2.先根据文章的先根据文章的内容

2、和语言内容和语言初步确定其所属初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。档次，最后给分。3.词数词数少于少于80和和多于多于120的，从总分中的，从总分中减去减去2分。分。4.评分时应注意的主要内容为：评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点内容要点，应用词汇应用词汇和和语法结构语法结构的的丰富性丰富性和和准确性准确性及上下文的及上下文的连贯性连贯性。高考英语评分原则：高考英语评分原则：5.拼写与标点符号拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际影响的程度予以考虑。英，评分时，应视其对交际

3、影响的程度予以考虑。英，美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6.如如书写较差书写较差以至影响交际，将其以至影响交际，将其分数降低分数降低一个档次一个档次。7.语言首先要求准确通顺。语言首先要求准确通顺。8.鼓励写出新颖词汇，顺畅连接和复杂结构。鼓励写出新颖词汇，顺畅连接和复杂结构。你校英语社团部要组织一次英语赛，你校英语社团部要组织一次英语赛，就就“是否应该缩短中学生在校时间为是否应该缩短中学生在校时间为8小时小时”这一论题进行辩论，请你作为正方代表，这一论题进行辩论，请你作为正方代表，写一份发言稿，内容要点如下：写一份发言稿，内容要点如下：1.保证充足保证充足睡眠睡眠2.提高

4、学习效率提高学习效率3.增加自主学习时间增加自主学习时间注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右左右2.可以适当增加细节，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯以使行文连贯3.辩论稿的开头已为你写好辩论稿的开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）。（不计入总词数）。Asaseniorhighstudent,Istronglyrecommendthat语法篇语法篇这第一句写的这第一句写的Istronglyrecommendthatthetimestudentsdevotedtostudyinginschoolshouldbereducedtoeighthoursaday.Themainreasonsaccounting

5、foritareasfollows.这动词错的这动词错的Shortstudentstimeinschoolcanhaveagoodeffectonstudy,itcanimportantforstudentsstudyxiaol,andincreasestudentsowntime.原来改书面表达就是原来改书面表达就是改错改错Inmyopinion,wemusthaveenoughtimetostudy,butwealsoshouldkeepenoughtimetorelaxandsleep,eitherofthemareimportant.Becauseofwehavetimetorelax

6、,wecanstudyenergetic.Reducestudytimealsocanimprovethequalityofourschoollife.这词汇这词汇欣赏一下这篇文欣赏一下这篇文章的句式结构章的句式结构Ifequalamountofworkhavetobeaccomplishedwithadeclinedschooltime,studyefficientlyisexpectedtobeenhanced.Moreover,extra-curriculartimewillmakeupmoreofthestudentsschedule.Thatistosay,chancesarewec

7、anmakeabetteruseofourtime.卷面篇卷面篇养眼的养眼的当批到下午两点看当批到下午两点看到了它们到了它们太挤了太挤了太乱了太乱了太空了太空了太潦草了太潦草了太花了太花了太没谱了太没谱了老师最恨的作文老师最恨的作文标点呢？段呢？标点呢？段呢？你长发及腰的字体难掩你长发及腰的字体难掩你每句都错的事实啊！你每句都错的事实啊！神，你别抄阅读理解行不神，你别抄阅读理解行不？俺们也会看试卷的！？俺们也会看试卷的！老师最喜欢的作文老师最喜欢的作文Greatmindsthinkalike!一点提示一点提示好练的字好练的字笔笔笔笔过长过长答题不可越界答题不可越界作文五档：（从教师阅卷印象角度

8、划分）n漂漂亮亮（2530分）（2125分）n有模有样（1924分）（1620分）n马马虎虎（1318分）（1115分）n稀里糊涂（712分）（610分）n一塌糊涂 （06分）（0 5分）近几年来，在新课标试卷中，书面表近几年来，在新课标试卷中，书面表达趋向于提纲式作文，但是这些提纲达趋向于提纲式作文，但是这些提纲只给出了大致的写作方向，没有限制只给出了大致的写作方向，没有限制具体内容，属于半开放式的提示；考具体内容，属于半开放式的提示；考查应用中的书信，话题与中学生的学查应用中的书信，话题与中学生的学习生活密切相关，考生会觉得有话可习生活密切相关，考生会觉得有话可说，有利于考生的自由发挥。说

9、，有利于考生的自由发挥。DISCUSSION:Whatisagoodwriting？Howtocatchtheexpertseye?AgoodcompositionContentstructurelanguageBeautybeattractive,completedinalimitedtime!DISCUSSION:What is a good writing？Content:everything needed included which is related to your view.(内容要完整内容要完整)（内容要点一个也不能丢，如果人家给的是文字（内容要点一个也不能丢，如果人家给的是

10、文字提示，可以用笔在试题处标出提示，可以用笔在试题处标出1,2,3,4，如果人，如果人家给的是图，那要先看懂图的意思，所有图都家给的是图，那要先看懂图的意思，所有图都要看看再动笔，不要看了一个马上就写。）要看看再动笔，不要看了一个马上就写。）DISCUSSION:What is a good writing？Structure:*Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾好的开头结尾)*Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理结构合理,行文流畅行文流畅)Language:*No Chinglish(避免中文式英文避免中文式英文

11、)*No Grammatical mistakes(没有语法错误没有语法错误)*With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns (词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)(一一)使用恰当的使用恰当的连连接接词词Howtowriteagoodcomposition？firstofall,tobeginwith,tostartwith,inthefirstplace一：高中英语中表层次的连接词一：高中英语中表层次的连接词in addition,besides,furthermore,moreov

12、er,on the other handfinally,eventually,in general,in a word,in short,on the whole,last but not least becauseof,onaccountof,dueto,asaresultof,owingto,thanksto二二.英语作文中表英语作文中表因果因果的连接词的连接词therefore,thus,since,as,because,三三.英语作文中表转折的连接词英语作文中表转折的连接词however,but,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand As a result;In a

13、ddition;To begin with;HoweverDear Editor,As a student reader,I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house.These books have many advantages._ One of them is that we can find a variety of topics,such as science,culture and history.These topics,I think,are very popular with

14、us students.To begin with In my opinion;Therefore;However;whats more_,along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures,which can help us understand English better.Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject._,some of the texts have

15、 too many new words and expressions which are hard for us._,Id like to suggest changing them into easier ones.whats moreHoweverTherefore1.Itwillbeveryinteresting.(换作同义词：换作同义词：Itwillbealotoffun.)2.Hewassocleverthathecouldcountallthewayupto100atoneyearold.(换作同义词：换作同义词：Hewassosmartthathecouldcountallth

16、ewayupto100atoneyearold.)3.LastsummerIvisitedNewJerseywithmyparents.(换作同义词：换作同义词：LastsummerItouredNewJerseywithmyparents.)（二）（二）同义词的使用同义词的使用（三）避免中式英语（三）避免中式英语1)Traffic in Shanghai is too crowded.2)There has a highway connected with Beijing.3)Though shes almost 40，but she still plans to compete.4)I f

17、orgot my dictionary at home.heavy.leftis改错so I have to refer to them in the dictionary.There is no doubt that English Study need lotsof time and efforts.Only by this way,can we keep up with otherstudents.Im LiHua,a new student of you.lookuplearninginLi Huayours（四）使用较为丰富的句式：（四）使用较为丰富的句式：(常用到的句常用到的句型结

18、构）型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。e.g.How disappointed he was!感叹句感叹句强调句强调句e.g.I do hope that you can come if possible.e.g.Only in this way can you solve this problem.e.g.They read while riding on a bus.e.g.Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreetwithahandbaginherhand.倒装句倒装句省略句省略句with短语短语从句从句What is worth

19、 doing is worth doing well.Bats are longlived creatures,some _a life span of 20 years.Bats are longlived creatures,some _a life span of 20 years.Bats are longlived creatures.Some _a life span of 20 years.of them haveof which havehaving（五）要使用标点符号（五）要使用标点符号Please learn to Your compositionwhen you fini

20、sh it from now.ASSESSMENTstructureIs the essay divided into parts?Does each part have a topic sentence?contentAre all the details stated?Is everything to the point(切切题题)?LanguageDoes the writer use any linking words?Are there any mistakes?Is there any advanced vocabulary（高（高级词汇级词汇）?Are there any goo

21、d sentence patterns（句式）（句式）?Letsimproveit:随着科技的发展，人们的生活发生了很大的变化，人们对自己的未来充满了期待。请展开想象以An Outlook on Future 为题，描述未来人们工作、学习、生活等方面的情境。With the development of science and technology,our life has changed a lot.As a result,I think there will likely to be great achievements in every area in the future.People

22、 will be working less with the help of computers,robots and other hi-tech products.The living environment will be cleaner,because people,stressing the importance of protecting the environment,begin to get rid of wastes more scientifically.Everyone who is thirsty for knowledge can receive higher educ

23、ation,whether they are young or old.On the whole,people will lead a happy and free life and they can travel not only all over the world but also in space.Though the future is hard to predict,we know for sure that advanced science and technology will shape our bright future if we use it properly.With

24、 the development of science and technology,our life has changed a lot.As a result,I think there will likely to be great achievements in every area in the future.People will be working less with the help of computers,robots and other hi-tech products.The living environment will be cleaner,because peo

25、ple,stressing the importance of protecting the environment,begin to get rid of wastes more scientifically.Everyone who is thirsty for knowledge can receive higher education,whether they are young or old.On the whole,people will lead a happy and free life and they can travel not only all over the wor

26、ld but also in space.Though the future is hard to predict,we know for sure that advanced science and technology will shape our bright future if we use it properly.参考词汇：随着的发展在的帮助下因此 摆脱渴望肯定地塑造无论老幼机器人高科技产品巨大的成就美好的未来先进的科学技术with the development ofwith the help of as a resultget rid ofbe thirsty for for s

27、ureshapewhether they are young or oldrobotshigh-tech products great achievementsbright futureadvanced science and technology ASSESSMENTstructureIs the essay divided into parts?Does each part have a topic sentence?contentAre all the details stated?Is everything to the point(切切题题)?LanguageDoes the wri

28、ter use any linking words?Are there any mistakes?Is there any advanced vocabulary（高（高级词汇级词汇）?Are there any good sentence patterns（句式）（句式）?Letsimproveit:Summary:A good essay is usually made up of a topic paragraph,some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.A good paragraph is one that consists of a topic sentence and supporting sentences.A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.A good paragraph is one with advanced vocabulary and varied sentence patterns.