2017年专题复习-慰问信.ppt

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1、作文作文专题复复习慰慰问信信（一）文体概述（一）文体概述慰慰问信是指在同学、信是指在同学、亲友考友考试失利、生失利、生病、受病、受伤或遇到火灾、水或遇到火灾、水灾、地震等不灾、地震等不幸事件幸事件时，对对方表示慰方表示慰问的信件。慰的信件。慰问信要写得真信要写得真诚并注意措辞并注意措辞,要要围绕一个一个中心中心,鼓励鼓励对方并令其得到安慰和鼓舞。方并令其得到安慰和鼓舞。内容常包括：内容常包括：对不幸事件表示同情不幸事件表示同情进行安慰和帮助和鼓励行安慰和帮助和鼓励再次表示同情再次表示同情并希望其早日复原。并希望其早日复原。(二二)必必备词汇1.sorrow _ 2.Flood_ 3.go th

2、rough _ 4.recovery_ 5.wish_ 6.convey _7.sympathy_ 8.deeply_ 9.shocked_ 10.quickly_11.sad_悲悲伤（名（名词）sadness洪灾（其他常洪灾（其他常见自然灾害的自然灾害的词？）？）渡渡过，熬，熬过恢复，康复恢复，康复祝愿祝愿传达达关心，同情，慰关心，同情，慰问深深地深深地震惊震惊快速地快速地rapidlyfast伤心，心，难过(三三)必必备短短语1.我很抱歉知我很抱歉知_2.听到听到我深感我深感难过_3.请接受我最深切的慰接受我最深切的慰问_4.我无法相信我无法相信_5.请转达我达我对的同情的同情_6.最好的

3、祝愿最好的祝愿_ I am deeply sorry to hear that I was so sorryto learn of the news thatPlease accept my deepest sympathyI couldnt believe thatPlease convey my sympathy toBest wishes for7.我我们都希望都希望 _8.我相信你会成功我相信你会成功 _9.完全康复完全康复 _10.出院出院 _11.我祝你快速康复我祝你快速康复_12.渡渡过难关关_We are all hopingI am sure you will succeed

4、 inmake a full recovery leave the hospitalI wish you quick recoverygo through the difficulty(四四)必必备句式句式1.听听说水灾水灾毁了你的家，我了你的家，我难过极了。极了。_2.我我们感到很悲痛。感到很悲痛。_3.请转达我向你家人的慰达我向你家人的慰问。_4.祝你很快度祝你很快度过（难关）。关）。_I was so sorry to hear that the flood destroyed your house.We are filled with deep sorrow.Please convey

5、 my sympathy to your family.I wish you go through the difficulty soon.5.大家都希望你早日大家都希望你早日归来。来。_6.如果需要我的帮助，如果需要我的帮助，请告知。告知。_7.我我们真心真心希望希望你能很快完全康复。你能很快完全康复。_ We all really hope that you will make a full recovery soon.If there is anything I can do to help you,please let me know.5.We are all hoping you w

6、ill be back soon.(五五).慰慰问信的信的结构构第一段：引出事第一段：引出事实，表达惋惜和同情；，表达惋惜和同情；第二段：安慰第二段：安慰对方或鼓励方或鼓励对方或者提方或者提出出给予帮助予帮助第三段：表达愿望和祝福。第三段：表达愿望和祝福。六解六解题步步骤：1）审题：确定写作的信件确定写作的信件类型型:_慰慰问信信_确定人称：第一，第二人称（有可能有第确定人称：第一，第二人称（有可能有第三人称）。三人称）。确定确定时态：现在在时，过去去时，将来，将来时2)列提列提纲：用自己的：用自己的话将将题目要求的要点目要求的要点陈述出来。述出来。开开头：不：不认识的要做自我介的要做自我介绍

7、，但是但是认识的不用的不用问候。候。引出收信人遭受的不好事引出收信人遭受的不好事件，并表达惋惜同情。件，并表达惋惜同情。内容：内容：对收信人表达安慰，鼓励，或者收信人表达安慰，鼓励，或者帮助。帮助。(三方面）三方面）结尾：表达尾：表达对收信人的美好祝愿和祝福收信人的美好祝愿和祝福例例题1：据据报道，道，7岁的美国女孩的美国女孩AmyBruce得知自得知自己身患肺癌己身患肺癌(lungcancer)后后处于极度的痛苦于极度的痛苦之中，美国抗癌之中，美国抗癌协会会(ACS)决定，每当决定，每当Amy收到一封慰收到一封慰问信，就信，就给她增加她增加3美分的治美分的治疗款。款。假如你是新假如你是新华中

8、学的学生李中学的学生李华，请你你用英文用英文给Amy写一封慰写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：信，主要内容包括：1.自我介自我介绍2.得知的得知的Amy的情况的情况3.表示鼓励表示鼓励 4.打算打算为她做什么她做什么5.祝她早日康复祝她早日康复Dear Amy,Im Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China.Im sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain.I quite understand how you feel now.But you should r

9、ealize that you are young and have a bright future.So stand up and fight against the disease!Im sure you will win.It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive.So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to writ

10、e to you.In that way,you will get enough money for you to be cured.Hope you can go through the difficulty and make full recovery soon.Yours,Li hua例例题2：你班同学你班同学Tom生重病住院两个星期了，同学生重病住院两个星期了，同学们都很都很难过。今天班主任要去医院看他，并。今天班主任要去医院看他，并请你代表全班同学些一封慰你代表全班同学些一封慰问信，要点如下：信，要点如下：1.表示同情和关心表示同情和关心2.送他一个包裹（幸运星和千送他一个包裹（幸运

11、星和千纸鹤；现金一金一万元）万元）3.祝他早日康复，返校上祝他早日康复，返校上课参考参考词汇：幸运星：幸运星：luckystars千千纸鹤：papercranesDear Tom,Iam very sorry to heat that you are seriously ill and that you have been in hospital for about two weeks.We are very concerned about you and your studies.Our head teacher will come to see you today so we ask hi

12、m to bring you a package with some lucky stars and colorful paper cranes in it.I hope you will like it and it will bring good luck to you.Also youll receive 10,000 yuan,which will help you pay the medical fees.Dont worry about your studies.Well try to help you make up the lessons you have missed bec

13、ause we are good friends.I hope I can come and see you soon on Sunday.Everyone in our class misses you very much,hoping youll be well and get back soon.Yours sincerely,Li Hua课堂演堂演练：假定你是李假定你是李华，你的同班好友小明，你的同班好友小明的家的家乡（湖北）（湖北）5月月1日以来数日降雨遭受洪灾，洪水日以来数日降雨遭受洪灾，洪水毁坏了家园，坏了家园，你作你作为朋友朋友给正在抗洪的她写一封慰正在抗洪的她写一封慰问信，要

14、点信，要点如下：如下：1.对该同班好友（同班好友（小明小明）表示关心。）表示关心。2.向其提供一些帮助，如捐助和回校后向其提供一些帮助，如捐助和回校后为她她补习。3.希望她希望她对生活充生活充满希望。希望。注意：注意：1.词数数100左右。左右。2.可以适当增加可以适当增加细节，以使行文以使行文连贯。Dear xiaoming,Were so sorry to hear that a horrible flood happened in your hometown and your house is in ruins.Were filled with deep sorrow.Please co

15、nvey my sympathy to your family.Thinking about your present situation,we cannot wait to make our effort to help you.As your friend,on behalf of our class,I express our most sincere pity and care for you.Besides,we made a donation of some money,expecting that it can help you go through the difficulty

16、.We believe that with the help of so many kind people,a better house can be rebuilt.Finally,were all hoping youll be back soon and we will make up the lessons for you.We all hope you can realize that it is full of hope for life.Yours sincerely,Li Hua课外作外作业 假定你是李假定你是李华，你的好友李明参加了今年的中，你的好友李明参加了今年的中国好声音

17、国好声音(The Voice of China)比比赛，没有，没有进入决入决赛，感到很，感到很伤心。心。请你你给他写一封慰他写一封慰问信，要点信，要点如下：如下：1.表示表示难过和理解。和理解。2.失失败原因不在于他，而是另有原因不在于他，而是另有别的的缘故。故。3.勉励他不要灰心，来年再勉励他不要灰心，来年再战必能成功。必能成功。注意注意：1.词数数100左右。左右。2.可以适当增加可以适当增加细节，以，以使行文使行文连贯。3.开开头语和和结束束语已已为你写好。你写好。Dear Li Ming,I am deeply sad to hear that you could not enter

18、the finals of The Voice of China of this year.I quite understand how you feel now.You have been doing well and your failure is not your own fault,I am sure.However,as we know,failure is the mother of success.I do hope you wont lose heart and will get ready to try again.Still you have many more chances to try for you are so young.Fate(命运命运)only can be changed by working hard,so if you go on practising singing,I am sure you will succeed next year.Best wishes!Yours sincerely,Li Hua