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1、【题目展示】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Over the summer I moved from Texas to Missouri. This was my second year of high school, but my first year of school in Missouri. I was really nervous about starting a new school and having people like me. I decided that I would be much happier in a new school if I

2、 made friends that were so-called “popular”. Getting in with the right group of people would make my life a whole lot better. I bought a new outfit so the first day would be perfect.On the first day of school, scared, yet eager to begin my new life, I walked up the stairs. My first class was geometr

3、y, but where was that? I was standing in the hall looking confused, when a short, blond girl wearing glasses came up and asked, “Are you new? You look lost. Do you want me to help you find your class? My name is Diane. Whats yours?” Even though she seemed a bit strange, definitely not the kind of pe

4、rson I wanted to be associated with, I decided to answer her anyway. I was, after all, lost.After exchanging names, I followed her up the stairs and down a hallway on the right. When we reached my room she said, “Well, here you are. It was nice meeting you. I hope I see you again and your day goes a

5、ll right.”I said a quick thank-you and waved good-bye. Once inside the classroom, I saw one big group of people huddled around someone who seemed to be telling some sort of story. I walked over and got close enough to overhear. All eyes were glued to the guy in the middle of the circle. I decided th

6、at this guy was popular.A few minutes later the teacher told everyone to go find a seat and get ready for the class. I managed to get one right next to the guy. I said, “Hi, my name is April and Im new here.” He said coldly, “Hi, Im Johnny.” That class dragged on and on. Finally, the bell rang. I tu

7、rned to him and asked, “Im not sure where my next class is, could you help me find it?” He looked at me and then said a quick no, turned back to his friends, and walked out of the classroom.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1: As they were walking out, I heard they were all laughing at m

8、e. Paragraph2: Before I was ready to go home, I heard a familiar voice calling my name. 【文本分析】第一段讲了：我从德克萨斯州搬到密苏里州，来到一个新学校。我担心开始在新学校生活以及不知如何让别人喜欢自己，于是准备结交一些所谓“受欢迎”的朋友，认为结交这样的朋友会让我的生活过得更好、更快乐。第二段讲了：上学第一天，我迷路了。戴眼镜的矮小金发女孩黛安娜帮助了迷路的我，尽管她绝对不是我想结交的那种人。第三段讲了：我和她交换了名字，她带着我找到了教室。第四段讲了：我说了谢谢并挥手道别。走进教室，看到一大群人挤在一

9、个似乎在讲某种故事的人周围，我觉得这个家伙很受欢迎。第五段讲了：准备上课了，我在那个家伙周围找了位置，并告诉他我的名字。他也告诉了我但是态度冷冷的。下课后我向他求助下一节课在哪，但被拒绝，他转身和朋友们走出教室。总的来说就是主人公April来到新学校，想结交一些受欢迎的人做朋友，他在班级中找到了这样的人却是热脸贴冷屁股，被冷漠回绝。与此同时，与之差别很大的就是热心的黛安娜，尽管她看上去不是特别受欢迎的那种人也不是主人公想结交的人，但是她热心善良帮助他人，这样的美好品质是那个受欢迎的人所不具备的，两者对比形成鲜明的反差。想结交的人冷漠无情不想结交的人善良温暖【段首句分析】As they were

10、 walking out, I heard they were all laughing at me.当约翰尼和他的朋友们走出去，我听到他们都在笑我。第一段可以描写我的失落，心中的想法打算与现实的落差带给我沉重的打击。Before I was ready to go home, I heard a familiar voice calling my name.在我准备回家的时候，我听到了一个熟悉的声音叫我的名字。由于我把自己名字告诉别人的只有黛安娜和约翰尼，所以这里肯定是黛安娜，后文应该描写她对我的安慰和帮助，带给我心灵的慰藉。【原创作文】As they were walking out, I

11、 heard them all laughing at me.I couldnt believe it. I thought that by trying to make friends with the popular crowd, my life would get better. However, I now felt embarrassed and foolish. I just wanted to crawl under a rock and disappear. Not only was I unable to find my next class without help, bu

12、t the person I asked for assistance rejected me. I felt like such an outcast. My vision was blurred by tears as I wandered the halls, trying to locate my next class. To avoid causing a scene, I ducked into a bathroom and tried to compose myself. I splashed some cold water on my face and took a few d

13、eep breaths, trying to calm down. Despite my efforts, I couldnt shake the feeling of disappointment, but I knew I had to try to make the best of the situation.Before I was ready to go home, I heard a familiar voice calling my name.It was Diane, the girl who had helped me find my first class. She was

14、 waving at me from across the hall and walking towards me. “Hey, how was your day?” she asked. “It was alright,” I replied, still feeling a bit down about the incident with Johnny. “Listen, I know it can be tough starting at a new school. But dont worry, youll make friends. You seem really nice, and

15、 Id be happy to hang out sometime if you want.” I was surprised by her offer and grateful for her kindness. Perhaps starting a new school wouldnt be as difficult as I had initially thought.【文本词汇积累】1.be nervous about：对紧张/担心2.get in with：认识；巴结3.be associated with：和联系在一起4.eyes were glued to：眼睛盯着5.drag on：拖得太久；持续太久学科网（北京）股份有限公司