开放式作文分类.ppt

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1、开放式作文的开放式作文的 分类与拓展分类与拓展I.叙事类：由远及近，娓娓道来叙事类：由远及近，娓娓道来II.例一例一Thismorningwhenyouenteredtheclassroom,yourheadteacherlookedangry.Telluswhy.III.Version1:Icametoschoollate.Theteachergotangry.Onthewaytoschool,wewerecaughtintherush-hourtrafficjam.Asaresult,Icametoschoollate.Theteachergotangry.Version2:Yesterd

2、ay,wehadalotofhomework.Ididntfinishituntillateintothenight.Iwenttobedwithoutturningonthealarmclock.Asaresult,Igotuplatethismorning.Nowyouknowwhytheteachergotangry.Version3:Yesterdaywehadmassesofhomework.Ididntfinishituntillateintothenight.Iwenttobedwithoutturningonthealarmclock.WhenIwokeupthismornin

3、g,itwasalreadylate.Unfortunately,onthewaytoschool,thebusbrokedown.Ittookalongtimetohaveitrepaired.Asaresult,Icametoschoollate.Thatswhytheteachergotangry.例二例二Youdidntgotoschoolyesterdaybecauseyouwereill.Whenyougotoschooltoday,youfindeverybodyisexcited.Youaskthemwhy.Version1:AschoolbandfromAmericaisco

4、mingtoourschooltomorrow.Weareveryexcited.Version2:WeareverygladtohearthataschoolbandfromAmericaiscomingtoourschooltomorrow.Everyoneisexcitedatthegoodnews.Version3:WeareverygladtohearthenewsthataschoolbandfromAmericawillcometoourschooltomorrow.Wearepreparingtowelcomethem.Therewillbeapartyintheafterno

5、onandwewillputonsomeperformancesattheparty.Besides,wellexchangesomesmallgifts.Everyoneisexcited.例三：You long for an mp3 for a long time,your parents promised to buy one for you last month,but you refused.Please tell us why you have refused it.Idea1:我已经长大，不需要向父母要钱，我我已经长大，不需要向父母要钱，我打算在高考后，暑假自己打工，既打算在高考

6、后，暑假自己打工，既可以赚钱，又可以获得社会及工作可以赚钱，又可以获得社会及工作经验，这就是我为什么拒绝我父母经验，这就是我为什么拒绝我父母给我买给我买mp3的原因。的原因。Idea2:我的好朋友，他叔叔送了我的好朋友，他叔叔送了mp3作为他生作为他生日礼物，日礼物，所以我打算买他的二手所以我打算买他的二手mp3,比新的便宜很多，我可以用我比新的便宜很多，我可以用我自己的零用钱买。自己的零用钱买。Idea3:我参加了一个英语口语竞赛，令我兴奋我参加了一个英语口语竞赛，令我兴奋的是，我获得了大赛的第一名，我可的是，我获得了大赛的第一名，我可以得到以得到mp3的奖品。这就是我为什么的奖品。这就是我

7、为什么拒绝我父母为买拒绝我父母为买mp3的原因。的原因。例四：例四：When your mother comeshomefromwork,shefindsthelivingroominaterriblemess.She asks you thereason.You tell her whathappened.内容提示：内容提示：1小孩玩耍小孩玩耍2我找东西我找东西3小偷来袭小偷来袭4小猫玩耍小猫玩耍5强风刮的等强风刮的等Version1:This afternoon when I wassleeping,Iwaswokenupbyanoise fromtheliving room.Igot u

8、p to see what washappening.I was walkingoutwardwhensuddenlyIsawastrangerinthelivingroomthroughthecrackofthedoor.He was searching andthrowing things here andthere.Hemustbeathief.Then I called the policewithoutcausinghisnotice.Thethiefwascaughteasily.Version2:IwasstudyingthisafternoonwhenIheardthecatm

9、ewing.Iwentoutandfoundthecatwrappedbyyouknittingwool.It was bumping here andthere.I wanted to help youout.ButassoonasIgotclosetoit,it ran away at once andjumped up and down.Theknitting wool was throwneverywhere.The paper andthebooksfelltotheground.Thecatmadethelivingroominaterriblemess.例五：例五：ItwasaM

10、ondaymorningofthesummer.Intheclassroom Amy found aBand-Aid on Billys ankle.She asked Billy what waswrongwithhisankle.SupposeyouareBilly,pleasetellAmywhathappenedtoyourankle.思路开拓：思路开拓：1踢足球踢足球2打破杯子打破杯子3下楼跌倒下楼跌倒4蚊虫叮咬蚊虫叮咬5小猫小猫挠挠的的6某种某种东东西划西划伤伤Version1:OnSunday,IwenttoXiangShanpark with my friends.It was

11、 verybeautiful there.We climbed themountainandwalkedbythemeadow.We enjoyed ourselvesthere.There was nothing wrongwith me.But after I came backhome,Isawmyleftanklecoveredwithabitofblood.Theanklemustbelaceratedbysomekindofplant.SoIputaBand-Aidhere.Version2:OnSundayIplayedfootballwithsome boys on the p

12、layground.WhenIrantocontroltheball,Ibumpedintoanotherboy.Wefellto the ground.His feet hit myrightankle.Therewassomethinghard on his shoes and it mademy ankle bleeding.So I put aBand-Aid here after returninghome.例六：例六：On a cold winter afternoon Iwas sent back home,badlyhurtontheleftleg.Mumwasshockeda

13、ndwantedtoknowwhat had happened.You tellherwhathappened.开放作文：开放作文：1建筑物上掉下来的建筑物上掉下来的东东西西砸伤砸伤2打球摔打球摔伤伤3路上路上发发生生车祸车祸4骑骑摩托摩托车车摔倒摔倒Version1:This afternoon we had a P.E.class.Iplayedbasketballwithmyclassmates.Ijumpedupandthenfell to the ground heavily.I feltmyleftlegachingassoonasIlayon the ground.My teac

14、her sentme to the hospital at once.Thedoctor examined me and saidthat my left leg was broken forlackofcalcium.AndImuststayathomeforamonth.Version2:ThisafternoononmywayhomeIcould see few people in thestreet.Perhaps people preferredto stay at home because of thecold weather.So I rode veryquickly when

15、I was to cross alane.Suddenly,abikerushedoutof the lane at high speed.Wecrashedintoeachother.IfelltothegroundsoheavilythatIbrokemyleftleg.II.议论类：观点明确，论据充议论类：观点明确，论据充分分例一(东城0405)May31,NoSmokingDay,isdrawingnear.Nowwhatdoyouwantto saytothesmokerstohelpthemgetridofthebadhabit?Todaymoreandmorepeoplecare

16、fortheproblemofsmoking.Onthatday,nobodyisallowedtosmoke,becausesmokingispollutingtheair,alsoitsharmfultothepeopleshealthandwillcauselungcancer.Whatsmore,itsawasteofmoney.Ihopeyoushouldmakeaplantogetridofthebadhabit.Itsourhopethatwealltakeanactivepartintheactivity.Imsureyoullsucceedingivingupsmoking.

17、例二例二Youllfinishtheseniorschooleducationsoon.Youaretalkingwithyourfamilyaboutyourfuture.Whatsyouropinion?IwanttogotoTsinghuaUniversitytostudycomputer.Youknowithasbeenmydreamformanyyears.IminterestedinITandIdoverywellinmaths.Whatsmore,myidolisBillGates.IdohopeonedayIcandogreatcontributionstothewholewo

18、rld.05期末西城区开放作文SupposewearehavingafreetalkinanEnglishclass.ThetopiciswhichisthebestwayoftransportinBeijingwhenweareoutgettingaround.Totakeabus,theCityrail,ataxiortorideabike?Pleasetellusyourchoices(atleasttwoorthree)andwhyyoupreferthem.开放作文Asfaras.concerned.IpreferbecauseFurthermore,Moreover,besides

19、,and,Comparedwith.,TheexpenseofusingtaxisMostofthetimeIbutsometimesIbecause.As far as city transport is concerned,I prefer buses because they are the cheapest way to get around.Furthermore,compared with the City rail,there are many more bus routes throughout the town,which make any trip easy.As the

20、expense of using taxis is much greater,I seldom take them.Sometimes I ride a bike because by this means Im free to go wherever Id like to,the places which buses or the City rail dont reach.III.说明类：几种方法说明类：几种方法/建议建议/可能性可能性例一（海淀0404）OnthemorningofJune7,LiMingistakingabusonhiswaytotaketheentranceexamin

21、ation.Unfortunately,heiscaughtinatrafficjambecauseofanaccident.Howcanhemanagetogetthereintime?Pleasethinkouttwoorthreedifferentwaysforhim.Firstofallhecanpersuadethebusdrivertoallowhimtogetoffsothathecanwalkoutoftheheavytrafficjamtotakeanotherbusorataxi.Orhecangetoffandaskanassistantinanearbyshoptole

22、ndhimabike.Sinceitisanimportantdayforthehighschoolgraduates,dialing110andgettinghelpfromthepoliceisoneofthechoicesaswell.例二(北京04春)Onasunnymorning,XiaoHongfromOrangeTownwasonherwaytoherfriendshouseinGreenHill,asmalltownshehadneverbeentobefore.Atacrossroads,shefoundthesignpost(路标路标)showingthedirection

23、shadfallenover.Shegotlost.Howcouldshefindoutwhichwaytogo?Considertwoorthreedifferentwaysofworkingouttheproblem.Firstofall,XiaoHongcouldaskapasser-byfordirections.Sinceitwasasunnyday,shecouldalsousethepositionofthesuntotellthedirections.Andfinallyshecouldalsoreplacethesignpostsothatitcorrectlynamedth

24、edirectionshehadcomefrom.Thenitwouldbecorrectforalltheotherdirections.例三（北京例三（北京04夏）夏）XiaoMingtellsyouthathehad100yuanyesterdaymorning,whichheputintothepocketofhisjacket.Hespent40yuanyesterdayafternoon.Butnowwhenhereachesintothepocketofhisjacket,herfindsonly10yuan.Heiswonderingwhathashappenedtothere

25、stofthemoney.Ashisfriend,yousuggesttohimthreeorfourdifferentpossibilitiesconcerningthemissingmoney.Maybeyouforgotyouhadspentthemoneyonsomethingelseyesterdayafternoon.Itsalsopossibleapickpocketstoleyourmoneywhileyouwereshopping.Ormaybeyoulostitonyourwayhome.Andonelastpossibilityisthatyouhaventlostita

26、tall-Youputonadifferentjacketthismorning,andyouhappenedtoleave10yuaninthejacketearlier.Sothemissingmoneystillmustbeintheotherjacket,theoneyouwerewearingyesterday.05东城区期末开放作文东城区期末开放作文根据下面提供情景，写一段接续文字，词数不少于50。Yourgrandpahasretired(退休）退休）recently.Heisntusedtotheidle(闲散的）闲散的）lifeandoftenfeelsveryunhappy

27、anddepressed(压抑压抑).Youareworriedabouthim,soyougivehimsomeadvice(atleastthreepieces),tryingtomakehimcheerful.Yousaytohim.I think youd better .such asYou can also.likePerhaps you can I think the most important thing for you is to so that you can and wont.表示建议的句式Dear grandpa,I think youdbetter take par

28、t in some outdoor activities,such as going mountain climbing,playing Taiji.You can also take up some hobbies like gardening or playing chess.Perhaps you can keep a pet like a dog or a cat.And I think the most important for you is to make some friends with the people of your age,so that you can do things together.Having friends means that you can have someone to talk to so that you wont feel lonely and depressed.