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1、福建省部分名校2020-2021学年上学期高二英语期中试题精选汇编写作专题福建省师范大学附属中学2020_2021学年高二英语上学期期中试题VI.书面表达 （共20分）80. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。About a half-mile behind our Minnesota farm lay a pond. In summer, my brother Harry and I would run through a stand of oak trees to skip stones there. The pond wore a collar of black

2、 mud. It was not a place for swimming.In late summer, the pond would be covered by a green and bubbly scum（起泡的浮渣）. Sometimes a strong, unpleasant smell rose from it. We stayed away.When winter came the pond was once again an inviting place. One day when ice covered it, Harry said to me, “Try walking

3、 across.”The ice looked solid. No water showed through it, but I hesitated. “Go ahead.” Harry urged. “Try it. Youre lighter than I am. If the ice holds, we can run and slide carefully on it. Itll be fun.” I wanted to please Harry, and I thought about the fun of a long slide on the ice. I began to sl

4、ide across the pond.In the middle of the pond, the ice gave way with a sudden crack（裂缝）! I stretched out（伸展）my arms. The next thing I knew I was hanging on to the edge of a hole in the ice by arms outstretched on the ice. From my shoulders down I hung in icy water. I thought of the bottom of the pon

5、d. I knew it would be black and awful down there, full of mud and maybe rotting creatures. I tried to climb out of the hole, but when I got a knee on the ice, it broke like window glass. Again and again I tried to get out. Again and again the ice broke into pieces. The hole widened. I was wearing a

6、coat of heavy material. As it became completely wet, it dragged me down. I was tired of the struggle and rested with my arms stretched out on the ice.I looked at Harry on shore. He seemed rooted to the spot. “I cant get out!” I screamed when I caught some breath.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2. 至少使用5个短文中标有

7、下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1: Harry turned and ran from the pond. _Paragraph2:The moment I crashed through the kitchen door, sobbing, mum rushed over. _【答案】He turned and ran from the pond. Staring at his familiar figure out of sight, I wondered:“Is he runnin

8、g for help, or is he running away and leaving me sliding to the bottom? ” After what seemed to be centuries of waiting, I was on the edge of collapse. Suddenly, Harry came back with a branch,which was large, black, and v-shaped. He pushed the branch toward me. I grabbed it immediately and was eventu

9、ally dragged out of the icy water by Harry. What a narrow escape! We stumbled home, with my clothes dripping water.The moment I crashed through the kitchen door, sobbing, mum rushed over. She helped me take off my coat, and gave me a quick bath, then passed me a cup of milk to warm me up.I tearfully

10、 complained to her about all that had happened and Harry was blamed for getting me sibling into such a trouble. His head drooping, Harry murdered an apology to me. I was comforted and relieved, but in fact, the pond was still attractive to young Harry and me, especially when winter came again.【解析】【分

11、析】这是一篇记叙文。文章叙述了作者小时候与哥哥去附近农场后面的池塘滑冰，冰面裂开，作者不小心掉进冰窟窿的故事。【详解】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，有一年冬天，作者由于小时候与哥哥哈利到农场后面的一个池塘玩耍，池塘表面结了冰，哥哥认为冰面足够坚固，能够撑得住作者的体重，所以鼓励作者从冰面上走过去。作者很想取悦哥哥，同时也非常想感受滑冰的快乐，于是就尝试着划过去。突然，冰裂开了，作者掉进了冰窟窿，双肩以下都泡在冰冷的水里！续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：他转身从池塘里跑开了因此，下文应该续写哥哥跑走了以后，作者独自挣扎求生的心理过程。要详细叙述哥哥返回后，带着一个树杈把作者从冰窟

12、窿里面拉出来的情景。第二段的开头是：当我哭着冲进厨房的门时，妈妈冲了过来因此，下文应该续写作者回到家后，妈妈首先匆忙帮作者脱掉冰冷的外套，给他洗个热水澡以及喝一杯热牛奶；然后，作者缓过来以后，委屈的向妈妈叙述事情发生的经过，妈妈责备哥哥没有照顾好作者；文章最后，作者认为，尽管经此劫难，当冬天到来，那个池塘对哥哥和他依然是极大的诱惑。续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，用下划线标出所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。

13、如：run away，leave sb. doing，take off等高级词汇；非限制性定语从句Harry came back with a branch,which was large, black, and v-shaped，after引导的时间状语从句，with my clothes dripping water复合结构等高级句式。福建省福州第一中学2020-2021学年高二英语上学期期中试题71. 假如你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意。请给该校写一封信，询问有关情况。（箭头所指内容）注意：1. 词数100左右2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。

14、3. 参考词汇：住宿accommodation_【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. Having seen your ad, Id like to know something more about your six-week English course. First, when will the course start and how many class hours are there p

15、er week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class. Id also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be host family or university dormitory?I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达

16、属于应用文，要求考生给英国某学校写信，就暑期该校为期六周的英语课程的某些事项进行咨询。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1. 表明写信目的2. 咨询内容课程开始的时间、班级大小、时长费用食宿类型第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）plan to do sth.; course; would like to do sth.; pay for; host family; look forward to第三步：连词成句1.I am a student in China and I pl

17、an to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation. 2.Having seen your ad, Id like to know something more about your six-week English course. 3.When will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? 4.I wish there would not be too many students in a class. 5.Id also l

18、ike to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.6.Would there be host family or university dormitory?7.I am looking forward to your early reply.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First 2.表并列补充关系：Besides连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，【点睛

19、】高分句型1 Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class.该句wish后是省略了连接词that的宾语从句，且从句运用了虚拟语气。高分句型2 Id also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.该句中whether引导宾语从句。高分句型3 Having seen your ad, Id like to know something more about your six-w

20、eek English course.句中使用了现在分词的完成时作状语。福建省厦门市湖滨中学2020-2021学年高二英语上学期期中试题第一节：应用文（满分15分）46. 假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike来信告诉你，他即将来中国生活一年。请你写封回信给他，简要告知他在中国生活需要了解的一些事情，比如中国的美食、旅游、以及购物等。注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】One Possible version:Dear Mike, Knowing that you are coming to China, I am so excited that I cant

21、 wait to see you. Here I list a few things you need to know about living in China. As you know, China boasts one of the worlds greatest cuisines, which are things you should try. Besides, rich in tourism resources, China attracts millions of people from every corner of the world. Why not travel far

22、and wide while you are here? Finally, you will find life here convenient. With highly developed e-commerce, you can get just about anything without even leaving your place of residence. I am sure you will have a good time here. Let me know if you have any more questions. Looking forward to seeing yo

23、u soon. Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国朋友Mike写一封回信，简要告知他在中国生活需要了解的一些事情。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1. 表示问候；2. 介绍购物，美食和旅游的相关情况;3. 表达期待。第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）cant wait to do sth.； know about；be rich in ；millions of；from every corner of the world；

24、place of residence；have a good time；look forward to第三步：连词成句1.Knowing that you are coming to China, I am so excited that I cant wait to see you. 2.Here I list a few things you need to know about living in China.3.As you know, China boasts one of the worlds greatest cuisines, which are things you shou

25、ld try. 4.Besides, rich in tourism resources, China attracts millions of people from every corner of the world. 5.Why not travel far and wide while you are here? 6.Finally, you will find life here convenient. 7.With highly developed e-commerce, you can get just about anything without even leaving yo

26、ur place of residence.8.I am sure you will have a good time here. Let me know if you have any more questions.9.Looking forward to seeing you soon.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：Finally2.表并列补充关系： Besides 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，【点睛】高分句型1 As you know, China boasts on

27、e of the worlds greatest cuisines, which are things you should try.(as引导非限制性定语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句)高分句型2 Knowing that you are coming to China, I am so excited that I cant wait to see you.(现在分词knowing作状语，that引导宾语从句)第二节: 读后续写(满分15分)47. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。It was one of the hottest days of the

28、dry season. We had not seen rain in almost a month. The crops were dying. Cows had stopped giving milk. The streams were long gone back into the earth. If we didnt see some rain soon we would lose everything. It was on this day that I learned the true lesson of sharing and witnessed the best miracle

29、 I have ever seen in my life.I was in the kitchen making lunch for the family when I saw my six-year old son, Billy, walking toward the woods. I could only see his back. He wasnt walking with his usual steps. He was obviously walking with great effort. trying to be as still as possible. Minutes afte

30、r he disappeared into the woods, he came running out again, toward the house. I went back to make sandwiches, thinking that whatever he had been doing was completed. Moments later, however, he was once again walking in that slow purposeful long step toward the woods. This activity went on for over a

31、n hour: walking cautiously to the woods, then running back to the house. Finally, my curiosity got the best of me. I crept out of the house and followed him on his journey.He was cupping both hands in front of him as he walked; being very careful not to spill(溅出) the water he held in them. I stepped

32、 close as he went into the woods. Branches and thorns slapped his little face but he did not try to avoid them. He might have a much greater purpose, I thought. As I came closer, I saw the most amazing sight. Several large deer stood in front of him. Billy walked right up to them, at the sight of wh

33、ich I almost screamed for him to get away. A huge buck (雄鹿) was dangerously close. But the buck neither threatened him nor even moved as Billy knelt down. And I saw a baby deer lying on the ground, obviously suffering from heavy loss of water and heat exhaustion, lifting its head with great effort t

34、o lap (舔) up the water cupped in my boys hands.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语；Paragraph 1:When the water was gone, Billy jumped up to run back to the house. I followed him_Paragraph 2:This time I joined him, with a small pot of water from t

35、he kitchen_【答案】When the water was gone, Billy jumped up to run back to the house. I followed him back to the tap. Billy turned it on and began to cup both hands. He knelt down, letting the drip slowly fill up his “cup”. And now I knew what was going on. Obviously, was afraid of being scolded for was

36、ting water, so he avoided asking me for help. When he stood up and turned back, I walked toward him. His eyes were filled with tears. “Mom, Im not wasting.”This time I joined him, with a small pot of water from the kitchen. I let him tend to the baby deer alone while I just helped fetch the water. A

37、s the tears that rolled down my face began to hit the ground, they were suddenly joined by other drops. and more drops. and more. I looked up at the sky. It was as if God, himself, was weeping with pride. I cant believe it was raining!【解析】【分析】这是一篇续写。【详解】1.第一段给出的首句是When the water was gone, Billy jump

38、ed up to run back to the house. I followed him这一句是故事发展的转折点。可以从“我跟着他回到水龙头旁。比利打开电视，双手捧起杯子。”入手扩展开去，无论从何角度拓展，需注意与续写第二段首句呼应。2.第二段所给首句This time I joined him, with a small pot of water from the kitchen这一句呼应前文，紧接着可以从“我让他一个人照顾小鹿，而我只是帮忙打水。”入手续写。【点睛】这篇续写段落衔接紧密，紧扣主题，且应使用5个以上短文中标有划线的关键词语，符合续写要求。同时文中使用高级句子。He kne

39、lt down, letting the drip slowly fill up his “cup”.现在分词作伴随状语；now I knew what was going on. Obviously, was afraid of being scolded for wasting water,句中what引导宾语从句；It was as if God, himself, was weeping with pride.句中as if 引导表语从句。福建省泉州第十六中学2020-2021学年高二英语上学期期中试题第一节（满分15分）你校外教Boris暑假期间准备在本地开一家西餐小店，要招若干大学

40、生为打工人员。下面是招聘启事：Wanted6 college studentsDo service work and act as translatorsHealthy and helpfulSmall wagesContact：bjpub假定你叫李华，愿意应聘，请写封电子邮件，介绍自己，并说明应聘理由。注意：1.词数：80词左右。2开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。Dear Boris， My name is Li Hua. I happened to have read your advertisement. _第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Jenny was the only child in her home. She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily. She couldnt help weepin