高考英语读后续写精读精炼（十二）含答案解析.doc

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1、2022高考英语读后续写精读精炼（十二）一：原文重现Id been invited to join a group of people who took water and breakfast to a local park where day laborers gathered, hoping to be chosen for work. My friend Kim and I spoke with a Mexican man in his forties named Natal, wearing a T-shirt and faded jeans. Next to him, on the

2、low wall where he sat, rested a large backpack and a bedroll.We had a wonderful conversation, ranging from the difficulty of finding work to artwork, from Santa Fe history to Natals “beautiful home,” as he described it. Natal told us of his travels in search of work. He had traveled all over the U.S

3、. and Canada, taking jobs where he found them, meeting people, and seeing the sights. He told us hed especially loved Oregon.He was filled with praise, too, for the beauty of the Sangre de Cristo Mountains outside Santa Fe and for all the history in the town. We agreed that the area was extremely be

4、autiful. He grinned and told us it was important to appreciate beauty. Then, he invited us to visit him in his home in the mountains. He wanted to show us the beauty of the trees and have us smell the freshness in the mountains. He wanted to be a good host.We continued to talk and it became clear th

5、at Natals “home” was a clearing under the trees. His bed was the bedroll he carried with him, spread on the ground under the starlight. He loved it there and wanted to share it with us. We declined, telling him that we were honored by the invitation, but that our classes would keep us too busy to ma

6、ke the trip.Natals love of his “home” was in sharp contrast to my complaint about the water in my pipes not heating up fast enough, about my bedroom ceiling being too low, about not having central air conditioning, about my lack of a fenced yard. How annoying I was! If I was amazed by his appreciati

7、on for everything he had, I was completely floored (击倒) by what happened next. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。I have always hated socks and it was a warm June day, so I was wearing no socks._He thought I felt his socks werent good enough for me._二：文本解析【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者被邀请去参加一个志愿者选拔工作，在等待的过程

8、中，作者和朋友金与一个墨西哥人Natal交谈，他们谈论了很多，交谈过程中作者因Natal对“家”的爱而对自己常抱怨感到羞愧。更令作者感到感动的是，Natal看到作者没穿袜子，马上拿出来一包新袜子，还说袜子是新的，这种给予和收获的行为使作者很感慨。【详解】1.段落续写：.由第一段首句内容“我一直讨厌袜子，而且那是一个温暖的六月天，所以我没穿袜子。”可知，第一段可描写Natal看见作者没有穿袜子，问作者是否需要袜子，并从他的背包里拿出来一包袜子。作者告诉他自己不需要袜子。.由第二段首句内容“他认为我觉得他的袜子配不上我。”可知，第二段可描写Natal向作者解释这些袜子是全新的、没穿过的。作者感谢了

9、他并解释了自己不要袜子。作者被Natal的行为感动了。2.续写线索：Natal看见询问作者拿出袜子作者拒绝Natal解释作者解释感动作者作者感悟3词汇激活行为类.注意到：notice/ find/ be aware of.拿出：pull out/ take out情绪类.荣幸：honored/ be in great pleasure.感动：touched/ moved/ emotional高分句型1. In the midst of conversation, Natal noticed that I had no socks on my feet.（运用了由that引导的宾语从句作noti

10、ced的宾语）2. What he didnt know was that I was absolutely touched, almost to the point of tears.（运用了由what引导的主语从句和由that引导的表语从句）3. Lets not forget that we volunteers are never the only ones with something to giveand many times, when we reach out to help others, we receive more than we give.（运用了由that引导的宾语

11、从句作forget的宾语和由when连接的时间状语从句）三：续写单句训练1. 我一直都讨厌袜子，那是一个温暖的六月日，所以我不穿袜子。 2. 在谈话的过程中，纳塔尔注意到我的脚上没有袜子。 3. 他指着头问我是否需要袜子。 4. 我看着我的脚，好像它们刚在那里长大了。 5. 他评论说我没有穿袜子，我必须需要袜子。 6. 他毫不犹豫地打开背包，拿出一包袜子，给我看。 7. 我很快告诉他，不，不，我不需要袜子。 8. 他觉得我觉得他的袜子对我不够好。 9. 他想让我知道，他们从来没有被任何人穿过。全新的！ 10. 这已经足够好了！我告诉他，我很荣幸他会把袜子给我，但我真的不喜欢穿袜子。 11. 他

12、承认我并没有因为穿袜子而感到不安；我就是根本不想要穿袜子。 12. 他不知道的是，我完全被感动了，几乎流到了眼泪。 13. 让我们不要忘记，我们志愿者从来都不是唯一有付出的人 14. 很多时候，当我们伸手帮助别人时，我们得到的比我们付出的更多。 15. 这对我们来说是多么大的祝福啊。 四：佳作展现I have always hated socks and it was a warm June day, so I was wearing no socks._ He thought I felt his socks werent good enough for me._ 五：课后练笔“Ouch!”

13、 I howled in pain as I dropped the hammer onto my foot.I felt foolish.It was pouring with rain,and,lame for a moment,I hopped around to the drivers side.“No luck?” said George.We had a flat tyre(轮胎)and I was trying to change the wheel.But it was stuck firm.We had driven ten hours along the road thro

14、ugh the jungle without seeing another soul.In the distance was an ox working in the field.“So what do we do now?How can we find a garage?” asked George,as I got back into the car.About fifteen minutes later,the rain stopped.Out of the jungle came an old woman.She walked towards us carrying something

15、 long and thin.“Uh,oh,here comes danger!” said George,“Shes got a spear.”She was wearing traditional garments,with short sleeves,a colorful necklace and other jewelry.As she got closer,we saw the spear was just a wooden pole.I got out.“Hello!” I said,in English.“Can you help us?” I pointed to the wh

16、eel.She stared at it,and then gestured for us to follow her back to the jungle.George and I looked at each other,and then set off after her.Soon we came to a tent under some trees.It had a firm framework of wooden poles,like the one the woman was carrying,covered with heavy cloth,and fastened with r

17、opes made of some kind of loose plant fiber.All round were corn plants.It was harvest time for the grain,and a spade,a fork and other tools were lying on the ground.Nearby were some chicks and a rooster,and a pig tied to a post.The woman folded back a cloth and invited us in.My eyes had to adjust to

18、 the darkness inside.The tent was furnished with a few mats on the floor,and a low table with a teapot.She picked up a photo and showed it to us.Was it her husband?The man in the photo was bare to the waist.He looked much too young.She was probably a widow(寡妇).Maybe her son or her nephew?Our hostess

19、 poured some tea,and watched smilingly as we drank.“Say something,” said George.Paragraph 1:I was wondering what to say when I heard the sound of footsteps out of the tent._ Paragraph 2:Together we walked back to the car. _ 六：单句训练1 当我听到从帐篷里发出的脚步声时，我正想知道该说些什么。 2 我们俩都抬起头来。这正是照片中的那个人，但他看起来要强壮得多。 3 那个女人

20、对他说了些什么，微笑着看着我们。 4 “需要一些帮助吗？”他问道。 5 他说了很好的英语，真是太棒了！ 6 乔治和我互相看着，眼睛亮了起来。 7 “是的，我们想知道能不能换个轮胎。” 8 “跟我来！”他说，听起来像个命令。 9 我们一起走回车里。那人用一只手抓住轮子，另一只手抓住扳手。 10 喊了一声，轮胎松开了。“你只需要一点力气。 11 乔治和我站在那里，看着他完成了整个工作，感激和钦佩。 12 我脚部的疼痛、冰冷的雨和顽固的平轮胎也松开了，在女人的温暖的茶里，男人的英雄叫喊，远处的山景和能够再次出发的快乐。 参考答案三：单句训练1) I have always hated socks a

21、nd it was a warm June day, so I was wearing no socks.2) In the midst of conversation, Natal noticed that I had no socks on my feet. 3) He pointed and asked if I needed socks. 4) I looked at my feet as though they had just grown there. 5) He commented that I wasnt wearing socks and that I must need s

22、ocks. 6) Without hesitation, he opened his backpack, pulled out a package of socks, and showed me. 7) I quickly told him that, no, no, I didnt need socks.8) He thought I felt his socks werent good enough for me. 9) He wanted me to know they had never been worn by anyone. Brand-new! Good enough!10) I

23、 told him I was honored he would give me his socks but that I truly disliked wearing socks.11) He accepted that I wasnt disturbed by the idea of wearing his socks; I just didnt want any socks at all. 12) What he didnt know was that I was absolutely touched, almost to the point of tears.13) Lets not

24、forget that we volunteers are never the only ones with something to give14) and many times, when we reach out to help others, we receive more than we give. 15) What a blessing for us.六：单句训练1 I was wondering what to say when I heard the sound of footsteps out of the tent.2 We both looked up.It was ex

25、actly the man in the photo but he looked much stronger.3 The woman said something to him,looking at us smilingly.“Need some help?” he asked4 .It was amazing that he was speaking very good English!5 George and I looked at each other,eyes lit up.6 “Yes,and we are wondering if you could have one of our

26、 tyres changed.” 7 “Follow me!” he said,sounding like sort of an order.8 Together we walked back to the car.9 The man grabbed the wheel with one hand and a spanner with the other.10 With a shout,the tyre was loosened up.“You just need a bit of effort.Hah!” 11 George and I stood there dumbfounded wat

27、ching him finishing the whole job,gratitude and admiration rushing in my heart.12 The knot that had been tied up by the pain in my foot,the cold soaking rain and the stubborn flat tyre was loosened up too,in the warm tea from the woman,the heroic shout of the man,the mountain view in the distance an

28、d the joy of being able to set off again.四：佳作展现（一）I have always hated socks and it was a warm June day, so I was wearing no socks. In the midst of conversation, Natal noticed that I had no socks on my feet. He pointed and asked if I needed socks. I looked at my feet as though they had just grown the

29、re. He commented that I wasnt wearing socks and that I must need socks. Without hesitation, he opened his backpack, pulled out a package of socks, and showed me. I quickly told him that, no, no, I didnt need socks.He thought I felt his socks werent good enough for me. He wanted me to know they had n

30、ever been worn by anyone. Brand-new! Good enough! I told him I was honored he would give me his socks but that I truly disliked wearing socks. He accepted that I wasnt disturbed by the idea of wearing his socks; I just didnt want any socks at all. What he didnt know was that I was absolutely touched

31、, almost to the point of tears. Lets not forget that we volunteers are never the only ones with something to giveand many times, when we reach out to help others, we receive more than we give. What a blessing for us.（二）I was wondering what to say when I heard the sound of footsteps out of the tent.W

32、e both looked up.It was exactly the man in the photo but he looked much stronger.The woman said something to him,looking at us smilingly.“Need some help?” he asked.It was amazing that he was speaking very good English!George and I looked at each other,eyes lit up.“Yes,and we are wondering if you cou

33、ld have one of our tyres changed.” “Follow me!” he said,sounding like sort of an order.Together we walked back to the car.The man grabbed the wheel with one hand and a spanner with the other.With a shout,the tyre was loosened up.“You just need a bit of effort.Hah!” George and I stood there dumbfound

34、ed watching him finishing the whole job,gratitude and admiration rushing in my heart.The knot that had been tied up by the pain in my foot,the cold soaking rain and the stubborn flat tyre was loosened up too,in the warm tea from the woman,the heroic shout of the man,the mountain view in the distance and the joy of being able to set off again.