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1、高考读后续写素材积累：暮色Who is the boy with the reddish brown hair? I asked. Ilookedat him from the corner of my eye, and he was still staring at me, he had a slightly frustrated expression.Thats Edward. Heshandsome, of course, but dont waste your time. He doesnt date.Obviously none of the girls here are good-

2、looking enough for him. Jessica sniffed, a clear case of sour grapes. I wondered when hed turned her down.I bit my lip to hide my smile. Then I glanced at him again. His face was turned away, but I thought his cheek appeared lifted, as if he were smiling, too.Later, the four of them left the table t

3、ogether. It was unsettling to watch. The one named Edward didnt look at me again.I sat at the table with Jessica and her friends longer than I would have if Id been sitting alone. I was anxious not to be late for class on my first day. One of my new acquaintances, Angela, had Biology II with me. So

4、we walked to class together.Angela already had a neighbor. In fact, all the tables were filled but one. Then I recognized Edward Cullen by his unusual hair, sitting next to that single open seat.As I walked down to introduce myself to the teacher, I was watching him secretly. Just as I passed, he su

5、ddenly wentstiff. He stared at me again, meeting my eyes with the strangest expression on his face it was hostile,angry. I looked away quickly, shocked, going red again.Id noticed that his eyes were black coal black.Mr. Banner he had no choice but to send me to the one open seat in the middle of the

6、 room. I kept my eyes down as I went to sit by him, confused by thehostilestare hed given me.I didnt look up as I set my book on the table and took my seat, but I saw his posture change from the corner of my eye. He was leaning away from me, sitting on the extreme edge of his chair and turning away

7、his face like he smelled something bad. Unnoticeably, I sniffed my hair. It smelled like strawberries, thefragranceof my favorite shampoo. It seemed a(an) _ smell. His suffering couldnt have anything to do with it. I let my hair fall over my right shoulder, making a dark curtain between us, and trie

8、d to pay attention to the teacher.11The class seemed to drag on longer than the others. Was it because the day was finally coming to a close, or because I was waiting for his tight fist to loosen? It never did; he continued to sit so still it looked like he wasnt breathing. What was wrong with him?

9、Was this his normal behavior?12I peeked up at him one more time, and regretted it. He was glaring down at me again, his black eyes full of disgust. As I flinched(退缩)away from him, moving back against my chair, the phraseif looks could killsuddenly ran through my mind.13At that moment, the bell rang

10、loudly, making me jump, and Edward Cullen was out of his seat. Fluidly he rose his back to me, and he was out the door before anyone else was out of their seat.14I sat frozen in my seat, staring blankly after him. He was so mean. It wasnt fair. I began gathering up my things slowly, trying to block

11、the anger that filled me, for fear my eyes would tear up. I usually cried when I was angry.15Arent you Isabella Swan? a male voice asked.16I looked up to see a cute, baby-faced boy, with pale blond hair, smiling at me in a friendly way. He obviously didnt think I smelled bad.17When we were going out

12、 of the class, he teased, So, did you stab Edward with a pencil or what?细节描写心理描写The class seemed to dragon longer than the others. Was it because the day was finally coming to a close, or because I was waiting for his tight fist to loosen? It never did; he continued to sit so still it looked like he

13、 wasnt breathing. What was wrong with him? Was this his normal behavior?As I flinched(退缩)away from him, moving back against my chair, the phrase if looks could killsuddenly ran through my mind.动作细节描写I bit my lip to hide my smile. Then I glanced at him again. His face was turned away, but I thought h

14、is cheek appeared lifted, as if he were smiling, too.I didnt look up as I set my book on the table and took my seat, but I saw his posture change from the corner of my eye. He was leaning away from me, sitting on the extreme edge of his chair and turning away his face like he smelled something bad.外

15、貌描写Id noticed that his eyes were black coal black.I looked up to see a cute, baby-faced boy, with pale blond hair, smiling at me in a friendly way.神态描写He was glaring down at me again, his black eyes full of disgust.He stared at me again, meeting my eyes with the strangest expression on his face it w

16、as hostile, angry. I looked away quickly, shocked, going red again.6. sniff in para2 to say sth in a complaining or disapproving way:抱怨；不以为然地说 sniff in para10to breathe air in through the nose in order to discover or enjoy the smell of sth: （吸着气）嗅，闻 drag: (of time or event) to pass very slowly: 过得很慢

17、；拖沓进行7. No, “ drag” is better than “go”, because the former word filled with feelings that I suffered from the hostile attitude from Edward and expected the class to be over soon. In a way, it exaggerated the feelings while “go” is much more plain without subjective emotions. It seems that I pull wi

18、th her full effort but in vain. Time went as if it stopped.8. 1) I looked at him from the corner of my eye, and he was still staring at me, he had a slightly frustrated expression.2) Then I glanced at him again3) Then I recognized Edward Cullen by his unusual hair, sitting next to that single open s

19、eat4) I was watching him secretly. Just as I passed, he suddenly went stiff. He stared at me again, meeting my eyes with the strangest expression on his face it was hostile, angry. I looked away quickly, shocked, going red again.5) I kept my eyes down as I went to sit by him, confused by the hostile

20、 stare hed given me.6) I peeked up at him one more time, and regretted it. He was glaring down at me again, his black eyes full of disgust.7) I sat frozen in my seat, staring blankly after him.练一练（细节描写）1. 当我和杰西卡一起走进自助餐厅的时候，我努力不让自己偷瞄他所在的地方，但没有成功。2. 他微笑着，弯起的嘴角是那么的迷人，以至于我只能像个白痴一样盯着他看。参考答案1. But when I walked into the cafeteria with Jessica, I tried to keep my eyes from sweeping the place for him, but failed entirely.2. I looked up to see him smiling such a beautiful crooked smile that I could only stare at him like an idiot.学科网（北京）股份有限公司