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1、基础写作基础写作-建议建议信信写作攻略写作攻略1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。写作步骤写作步骤首段首段：表明写作意图表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。介绍自己，注意语气。主体段落主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情然后再写

2、需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告况提出具体建议或忠告。千万注意不要。千万注意不要让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是提建议。让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是提建议。结尾段结尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，要注对提出的建议进行总结，要注意有礼貌使读者容易接受。意有礼貌使读者容易接受。建议信常用写作句型建议信常用写作句型1.开头：表对对方的情况表示理解，并乐意帮忙：开头：表对对方的情况表示理解，并乐意帮忙：1.I know you have trouble inafter reading your letter2.I am writing to share some advice with you.

3、3.Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to 4.You have asked me for my advice onand 5.In order to,I am going to make the following suggestions.二、正文：二、正文：提建议的句式提建议的句式1.It is useful/helpful/important/necessaryfor you to do2.It should be a good idea for you to do3.It will certainly

4、help a lot to do sth /It also helps to do sth4.In my opinion,it would be better if you do6.If I were you,I would7.I feel that it would be more beneficial if you could 8.You may consider doing三：表意见并列的连词三：表意见并列的连词表先后次序：表先后次序：First,second,third.Finally Firstly,secondly，eventually to begin with/to start

5、 with,at last递进关系：递进关系：furthermore;moreover;besides;meanwhile;in other words;at the same time；四、结尾：建议信常用句式四、结尾：建议信常用句式1.I believe you will take my advice into consideration.2.I hope you will find these suggestions useful /helpful/practical.3.I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it.4.I

6、will be more than happy to see improvements in this matter.5.Im willing to discuss this matter with you whenever you need.写作模板写作模板Dear _,You have asked me for my tips concerning_(问题问题),and I will try to make some suggestions here.As far as Im concerned,it would be wise to take the following actions:

7、First,_(建建议议一一);in addition_(建建议议二二);whats more _(建建议议三三).I hope youll find these proposals useful,and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you about further details.Good luck with you!Yours sincerely,Li Ming 基础写作基础写作（5句话）句话）假设你是李华，你的笔友张明来信说他假设你是李华，你的笔友张明来信说他英语学的不大好，请你给他写一封回信，英语学的不大好，请你给他写一封

8、回信，提一些建议，帮助他学好英语。提一些建议，帮助他学好英语。内容提示：内容提示：1.一定要做好课前预习一定要做好课前预习2.课堂上认真听讲，记好笔记课堂上认真听讲，记好笔记3.课后认真独立完成作业课后认真独立完成作业4.每天进行英语听说练习每天进行英语听说练习5.加强课外阅读扩大词汇量加强课外阅读扩大词汇量Dear Zhang Ming:I know that you are not good at English after reading your letter.Id like to give you some advice on learning English.Firstly,you

9、 should preview/prepare for the next lesson.Secondly,youd better listen to the teacher carefully and take some notes in class.Then,I hope you can finish your homework by yourself/on your own.Whats more,you must practise listening and speaking every day.Finally,read more books after class in order to

10、 enrich/enlarge your vocabulary.Practice makes perfect!I hope you find my advice useful.Yours,Li Hua 第一步：列举要点第一步：列举要点英语学的不大好英语学的不大好 You are not good at EnglishYou are not getting along well with English提一些建议，帮助他学好英语。提一些建议，帮助他学好英语。give you some advice on English/learning English.1.做好课前预习做好课前预习 Previe

11、w /Prepare for 2.课堂上认真听讲课堂上认真听讲Listen to the teacher carefully记好笔记记好笔记 Set down/take some notes3.课后认真独立完成作业课后认真独立完成作业Finish your homework by yourself/on your own.4.每天进行英语听说练习每天进行英语听说练习 Practise listening and speaking every day.5.加强课外阅读扩大词汇量加强课外阅读扩大词汇量Enrich/enlarge your vocabulary.Dear Zhang Ming:I

12、know that you _ English after reading your letter.Id like to give you some advice on learning English.Firstly,you should _ the next lesson.Secondly,youd better _and _ in class.are not good at preview/prepare forlisten to the teacher carefullytake some notes Then,I hope you can finish your homework _

13、.Whats more,you must _ every day.Finally,read more books after class in order to _ your vocabulary.Practice makes perfect!I hope you find my advice useful.Yours,Li Hua by yourself/on your own practise listening and speaking enrich/enlargeDear Zhang Ming:I know that you are not good at English after

14、reading your letter.Id like to give you some advice on learning English.Firstly,you should preview/prepare for the next lesson.Secondly,youd better listen to the teacher carefully and take some notes in class.Then,I hope you can finish your homework by yourself/on your own.Whats more,you must practi

15、se listening and speaking every day.Finally,read more books after class in order to enrich/enlarge your vocabulary.Practice makes perfect!I hope you find my advice useful.Yours,Li Hua 实战演练实战演练 广州某电视台打算开办一个面向中学生观广州某电视台打算开办一个面向中学生观众的英语节目众的英语节目,新聘任了来自英国的新聘任了来自英国的JohnJohn作为作为节目编辑助理。现在节目编辑助理。现在,John,John

16、就节目内容向广大就节目内容向广大中学生征求意见。中学生征求意见。写作内容写作内容 假如你是学生李华假如你是学生李华,建议开办建议开办“广州全接触广州全接触”(All-round Guangzhou)节目。请根据以节目。请根据以下节目设想给下节目设想给John写信：写信：节节目内容目内容 介介绍绍广州的广州的历历史、教育、著名景点、史、教育、著名景点、饮饮食、名人食、名人播放播放时间时间 每周六、日，方便学生周末每周六、日，方便学生周末观观看看其他其他设设想想 邀邀请请中学生参加中学生参加节节目，提高学生的目，提高学生的收看收看兴兴趣趣开开办办理由理由1.中学生可以更多地了解广州文化，中学生可以

17、更多地了解广州文化，以便向外国游客介以便向外国游客介绍绍广州广州2.有助于提高中学生的英有助于提高中学生的英语语水平水平预预期效果期效果 将会受到中学生的将会受到中学生的欢欢迎迎Dear John，I know youre going to set up an English program for middle school students.So Im writing to suggest a program “All-round Guangzhou”.I hope you can take my suggestion into consideration.Sincerely yours,

18、Li Hua节节目内容目内容 介介绍绍广州的广州的历历史、教育、著名景点、史、教育、著名景点、饮饮食、名人食、名人播放播放时间时间 每周六、日，方便学生周末每周六、日，方便学生周末观观看看其他其他设设想想 邀邀请请中学生参加中学生参加节节目，提高学生的目，提高学生的收看收看兴兴趣趣开开办办理由理由1.中学生可以更多地了解广州文化，中学生可以更多地了解广州文化，以便向外国游客介以便向外国游客介绍绍广州广州2.有助于提高中学生的英有助于提高中学生的英语语水平水平预预期效果期效果 将会受到中学生的将会受到中学生的欢欢迎迎例题导写例题导写1、审题：养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题、审题：养成重视审题

19、的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。文章的体裁文章的体裁 建建议议信，信，应应用文用文文章的主文章的主题题 建建议议开开办节办节目目第几人称第几人称 第一人称第一人称时态时态 一般一般现现在在时时、将来、将来时时语语气气 委婉委婉2、信息重组。我们可以把题中信息整合成以下、信息重组。我们可以把题中信息整合成以下5个汉语句子：个汉语句子：节目包括广州的历史、教育、著名景点、饮节目包括广州的历史、教育、著名景点、饮 食、名人。食、名人。建议每周六、日举办，方便学生周末观看。建议每周六、日举办，方便学生周末观看。建议邀请中学生参加节目建议邀请中学

20、生参加节目,激发学生的收看兴激发学生的收看兴 趣。趣。这个可以使中学生更多地了解广州文化这个可以使中学生更多地了解广州文化,还有助还有助于提高中学生的英语水平于提高中学生的英语水平,这样他们就能向外国游这样他们就能向外国游客介绍广州。客介绍广州。我肯定这个节目一定会收到中学生的欢迎。我肯定这个节目一定会收到中学生的欢迎。词语翻译词语翻译 翻译或完成下列词或短语。翻译或完成下列词或短语。cover/include句句1：(1)包括包括(节目节目)_(2)历史，教育，景点历史，教育，景点，饮食，名人，饮食，名人 _cover/includehistory,education,scenic spot

21、s/tourist attractionsfoodfamous people/places of interest句句3：(3)激发某人的兴趣激发某人的兴趣 _句句4：(4)提高英语水平提高英语水平_句句5：(5)受到欢迎受到欢迎spark/arouse ones interestimprove ones Englishbe popular among/with sb.be well-receivedby/be welcomed by3、难句翻译。、难句翻译。翻译下列每组句子并合并成一句。翻译下列每组句子并合并成一句。句句2：(1)(这个节目将于这个节目将于)每周六、日每周六、日(播放播放)。

22、It would be better to broadcast it on weekends.I suggest that the program be broadcast on weekends.It is a good idea to broadcast it on weekends.2)方便学生周末观看。方便学生周末观看。We students can have the chance to watch it.It will be convenient for us students to watch it.合并合并:It would be better to broadcast it o

23、n weekends so that we students can have the chance to watch it.句句3：(3)(你也可以你也可以)邀请中学生参加节目。邀请中学生参加节目。You can also invite some middle school students to get involved in/take part in the program.(4)(这个节目可以这个节目可以)提高学生的收看兴趣。提高学生的收看兴趣。It will surely arouse/spark other students interest in it.合并：合并：You can

24、 also invite some middle school students to get involved in/take part in the program,which will surely arouse/spark/stimulate other students interest in it.句句4：(5)(这个节目帮助这个节目帮助)中学生可以更多地了解广州文化。中学生可以更多地了解广州文化。This program can get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou.(6)(中学生可以中学生可以)向外国游客介绍广

25、州。向外国游客介绍广州。The students can introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors.(7)(这个节目这个节目)有助于提高中学生的英语水平。有助于提高中学生的英语水平。This program helps students improve their English.合并：合并：Not only will this program help students improve their English,but also get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou so as to

26、introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors This program will cover topics like the history,education,famous scenic spots,food and famous people of Guangzhou.It would be better to broadcast it on weekends so that we students can have the chance to watch it.Besides,you can also invite some middle school

27、students to get involved in the program,which will surely arouse other students interest in it.Not only will this program help students improve their English,but also get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou so as to introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors.I am sure it will be well-recei

28、ved by the middle school students.Dear John，I know youre going to set up an English program for middle school students.So Im writing to suggest a program “All-round Guangzhou”.This program will cover topics like the history,education,famous scenic spots,food and famous people of Guangzhou.It would b

29、e better to broadcast it on weekends so that we students can have the chance to watch it.Besides,you can also invite some middle school students to get involved in the program,which will surely arouse other students interest in it.Not only will this program help students improve their English,but al

30、so get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou so as to introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors.I am sure it will be well-received by the middle school students.I hope you can take my suggestion into consideration.Sincerely yours,Li HuaDear John，I know youre going to set up an English progr

31、am for middle school students.So Im writing to suggest a program “All-round Guangzhou”.I hope you can take my suggestion into consideration.Sincerely yours,Li Hua 由于废气、污水、白色垃圾等环境污染已危及由于废气、污水、白色垃圾等环境污染已危及到人类的健康与生存到人类的健康与生存,为鼓励大家节能环保为鼓励大家节能环保,你们你们学校将举办一次学校将举办一次“低碳行动低碳行动”的环保活动的环保活动,假设你假设你是高三是高三6班的一名学生班

32、的一名学生,将要在这个活动中向全体将要在这个活动中向全体师生发起师生发起“低碳生活低碳生活”的倡议的倡议,以下是倡议的内容：以下是倡议的内容：1.尽量绿色出行：采取步行或自行车方式尽量绿色出行：采取步行或自行车方式;2.少喝一次瓶装水；少喝一次瓶装水；3.尽量不用一次性制品尽量不用一次性制品,如一次性木筷子和塑如一次性木筷子和塑 料袋；料袋；4.每周至少手洗衣服一次；每周至少手洗衣服一次；5.每周少开手机、电视一天。每周少开手机、电视一天。写作内容写作内容1.活动背景活动背景;2.倡议目的倡议目的;3.倡议内容。倡议内容。Hello everyone,I am Li Hua from Clas

33、s Six,Senior Three.I believe everyone,as a member of this global village,should take responsibility to take part in the global green campaign!Hello everyone,I am Li Hua from Class Six,Senior Three.I am Li Hua from Class Six,Senior Three.We human beings are seriously threatened by the environmental p

34、ollution,such as waste gases,dirty water and white pollution.In order to encourage all of us to save energy and protect our environment,I am going to make the following suggestions.It is suggested that we should walk or take bikes if we go out.To avoid white pollution，we can reduce the use of bottle

35、d water and unrecyclable items such as disposable chopsticks and plastic bags.Whats more,if we can wash clothes by ourselves at least once a week as well as turn off our TVs and mobile phones for one day every week,it will be of great benefit to saving energy.I believe everyone,as a member of this global village,should take responsibility to take part in the global green campaign!Li Hua