写作---感谢信.ppt

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1、Letter writing假设你的加拿大笔友假设你的加拿大笔友peter听说近来山东大听说近来山东大旱，来信向你表示慰问。请回信表示感谢，旱，来信向你表示慰问。请回信表示感谢，内容包含以下：内容包含以下：1.对关心表示感谢对关心表示感谢.2.描述本地干旱现状描述本地干旱现状,分析其原因分析其原因.3.倡议携手保护大自然，防止类似极端天气倡议携手保护大自然，防止类似极端天气的频繁发生。的频繁发生。要求：要求：1词数词数120150.2可适当增加细节可适当增加细节.A thank-you letterThank you(very much)for.Its(very)kind of you to

2、Im grateful to you for Im writing to express my thanks to you for and tell you something aboutstructures of expressing thanks书信正文篇章结构：书信正文篇章结构：正文内容结构：正文内容结构：信头信头 对关心表示感谢对关心表示感谢 描述干旱现状描述干旱现状,分析原因分析原因 倡议携手保护大自然倡议携手保护大自然 落款落款首段首段主体段主体段结尾段结尾段表明意图表明意图陈述事由陈述事由提出愿望、希望或总结提出愿望、希望或总结相关词汇：相关词汇：drought,disaster

3、,rain,snow,rainfall(降雨),snowfall(降雪),dry,extreme climates,weather,terrible,serious,hit,destroy,ruin,damage拓展：拓展：earthquake,fire,flood,hurricane,volcano,typhoon,glance/average/tend to/come about/take measures/call on sb.to do/prevent Try to use some of these words and phrases2010年9月23日以来，山东省平均降水量16.9

4、毫米，较常年偏少90.2%，是1951年以来同期最少值。山东省防汛抗旱指挥部办公室主任杨振东说，山东相继有69万人、30万头大牲畜出现临时性饮水困难。有2900多万亩冬小麦受旱，约占全省小麦播种面积的53%，其中重旱483万亩。有366条河道断流、391座水库干涸，干涸的池塘布满龟裂缝隙。如果到3月底仍无大范围有效降雨，山东旱情将进一步加剧。Requirements for good writings整洁卷面整洁卷面 蠢错不犯蠢错不犯 句式多变句式多变 要点不漏要点不漏亮点若干亮点若干巧妙串联巧妙串联语意连贯语意连贯层次不乱层次不乱Dear Peter:Im writing to expres

5、s my deep appreciation for your kind sympathies.In 2010，a serious drought hit Shandong Province and it was 60 years since people had experienced such a terrible oneThe dry weather surely damaged the agriculture.Just a glance at the fields,you can get a clear idea about how great the influence of dro

6、ught on crops is.Whats worse,it is predicted that the drought condition tends to become more serious.How does it come about that extreme climates such as flood and drought have been happening so often?In my opinion,it is climate changes caused by humans unwise activities that increase the frequency

7、of natural disasters like floods and droughts.I think its high time we did something to prevent this from happening again and create a wonderful world to live in.Every effort counts!Yours Li Hua Beautiful sentences1.Im writing to express my thanks to you for your caring about/concern for the drought in my hometown and tell you something about it.2.Thousands of people and animals are struggling to live without enough water to drink.Good bye!