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1、会计学1English Paragraph Writing 英语英语(yn y)段落写作段落写作第一页，共73页。What is a paragraph?n nIt is a part of a larger piece of writing composition.n nA paragraph is a unit of thought.It must be about one single topic.n nEach sentence should be logically and structurally joined to the one before it.n nA paragraph

2、 must be adequately充分(chngfn)地 developed.第1页/共73页第二页，共73页。Paragraph Structure 段落段落(dunlu)结构结构 n nTopic Sentence (Beginning)主题(zht)句n nSupporting ideas/sentences 支撑句n nConcluding sentence 结论句第2页/共73页第三页，共73页。Find out the topic sentence,supporting sentences and the concluding sentence of the Find out

3、the topic sentence,supporting sentences and the concluding sentence of the following paragraph.following paragraph.n nMusic affects us in many ways.It can affect us Music affects us in many ways.It can affect us physiologically.Exciting music can increase our heart rate,physiologically.Exciting musi

4、c can increase our heart rate,our breathing,and our blood pressure.Calming music can our breathing,and our blood pressure.Calming music can relax our muscles and even lower our skin temperature.relax our muscles and even lower our skin temperature.Music can affect us physically too.Everyone has foun

5、d Music can affect us physically too.Everyone has found themselves tapping their feet or wanting to get up and themselves tapping their feet or wanting to get up and dance to their favorite song.Music can definitely affect dance to their favorite song.Music can definitely affect our mood and emotion

6、s.Music is slow and quiet makes us our mood and emotions.Music is slow and quiet makes us feel relaxed and less stressed,and stimulating music can feel relaxed and less stressed,and stimulating music can energize us and make us feel playful and alive.energize us and make us feel playful and alive.第3

7、页/共73页第四页，共73页。Find out the topic sentence,supporting sentences and the concluding sentence of the following Find out the topic sentence,supporting sentences and the concluding sentence of the following paragraph.paragraph.n nMusic affects us in many ways.Music affects us in many ways.It can affect

8、us It can affect us physiologically.physiologically.Exciting music can increase our heart rate,our Exciting music can increase our heart rate,our breathing,and our blood pressure.Calming music can relax our breathing,and our blood pressure.Calming music can relax our muscles and even lower our skin

9、temperature.muscles and even lower our skin temperature.Music can Music can affect us physically too.affect us physically too.Everyone has found themselves Everyone has found themselves tapping their feet or wanting to get up and dance to their tapping their feet or wanting to get up and dance to th

10、eir favorite song.favorite song.Music can definitely affect our mood and Music can definitely affect our mood and emotions.emotions.Music is slow and quiet makes us feel relaxed Music is slow and quiet makes us feel relaxed and less stressed,and stimulating music can energize us and less stressed,an

11、d stimulating music can energize us and make us feel playful and alive.and make us feel playful and alive.第4页/共73页第五页，共73页。Topic sentence 主题主题(zht)句句n n at the beginning:mostly n n at the end:sometimes n n in the middle：rarely 第5页/共73页第六页，共73页。Please write Please write a topic sentencea topic senten

12、ce for the following paragraph.for the following paragraph.n nSome sportsmen use music to help them train and perform better.People listen to music to pass the time while driving through traffic.Couples might use music to create a romantic evening.Some businesses even use music to increase productiv

13、ity and efficiency.第6页/共73页第七页，共73页。Please write Please write a topic sentencea topic sentence for the following paragraph.for the following paragraph.n nWe/People often use music to do certain things.Some sportsmen use music to help them train and perform better.People listen to music to pass the t

14、ime while driving through traffic.Couples might use music to create a romantic evening.Some businesses even use music to increase productivity and efficiency.第7页/共73页第八页，共73页。A topic sentence shouldn n be a complete sentence.(subject+Verb)n n control all the supporting ideas.n n be clear and concise

15、.n n not too general,and not too specific.第8页/共73页第九页，共73页。n nMusic affects us in many ways.Music affects us in many ways.It can affect us It can affect us physiologically.physiologically.Exciting music can increase our heart rate,our Exciting music can increase our heart rate,our breathing,and our

16、blood pressure.Calming music can relax breathing,and our blood pressure.Calming music can relax our muscles and even lower our skin temperature.our muscles and even lower our skin temperature.Music can Music can affect us physically too.affect us physically too.Everyone has found themselves Everyone

17、 has found themselves tapping their feet or wanting to get up and dance to their tapping their feet or wanting to get up and dance to their favorite song.favorite song.Music can definitely affect our mood and Music can definitely affect our mood and emotions.emotions.Music is slow and quiet makes us

18、 feel relaxed and Music is slow and quiet makes us feel relaxed and less stressed,and stimulating music can energize us and make less stressed,and stimulating music can energize us and make us feel playful and alive.us feel playful and alive.第9页/共73页第十页，共73页。Too Generaln nMusic is good for us.Music

19、is good for us.It can affect us physiologically.It can affect us physiologically.Exciting music can increase our heart rate,our Exciting music can increase our heart rate,our breathing,and our blood pressure.Calming music can breathing,and our blood pressure.Calming music can relax our muscles and e

20、ven lower our skin temperature.relax our muscles and even lower our skin temperature.Music can affect us physically too.Music can affect us physically too.Everyone has found Everyone has found themselves tapping their feet or wanting to get up and themselves tapping their feet or wanting to get up a

21、nd dance to their favorite song.dance to their favorite song.Music can definitely affect Music can definitely affect our mood and emotions.our mood and emotions.Music is slow and quiet makes us feel Music is slow and quiet makes us feel relaxed and less stressed,and stimulating music can energize us

22、 relaxed and less stressed,and stimulating music can energize us and make us feel playful and alive.and make us feel playful and alive.第10页/共73页第十一页，共73页。Too Specificn nMusic affects us physiologically,physically,and emotionally.Exciting music can increase our heart rate,our breathing,and our blood

23、pressure.Calming music can relax our muscles and even lower our skin temperature.Everyone has found themselves tapping their feet or wanting to get up and dance to their favorite song.Music is slow and quiet makes us feel relaxed and less stressed,and stimulating music can energize us and make us fe

24、el playful and alive.第11页/共73页第十二页，共73页。Supporting Sentences 第12页/共73页第十三页，共73页。Supporting sentences shouldn n describe,explain,and prove the topic sentence.n n be close to the topic sentence.n n support the topic sentence.n n be close to each other.n n be logical.第13页/共73页第十四页，共73页。Direction:decide

25、 which is the topic sentence of the paragraph first.Then,arrange the supporting Direction:decide which is the topic sentence of the paragraph first.Then,arrange the supporting sentences in logical order.sentences in logical order.n n a.Later on,people began a.Later on,people began toto write on piec

26、es of leather,which were rolled into scrolls.write on pieces of leather,which were rolled into scrolls.n n b.In the earliest times,people carved(carve:b.In the earliest times,people carved(carve:雕刻雕刻)or painted messages on rocks.)or painted messages on rocks.n n c.In the Middle Ages,heavy paper call

27、ed parchment c.In the Middle Ages,heavy paper called parchment（羊皮纸）（羊皮纸）was used for writing;was used for writing;books were laboriously books were laboriously（艰苦（艰苦(jink(jink)地，费力地）地，费力地）copied by hand.copied by hand.n n d.With the invention of the printing press d.With the invention of the printin

28、g press（印刷机）（印刷机）in the middle of the fifteenth in the middle of the fifteenth century,the modern printing industry was born.century,the modern printing industry was born.n n e.Some forms of written communication have been used through out the centuries.e.Some forms of written communication have bee

29、n used through out the centuries.第14页/共73页第十五页，共73页。n nSome forms of written communication have been used through out the centuries.In the earliest times,people carved or painted messages on rocks.Later on,people began to write on pieces of leather,which were rolled into scrolls.In the Middle Ages,h

30、eavy paper called parchment was used for writing;books were laboriously copied by hand.With the invention of the printing press in the middle of the fifteenth century,the modern printing industry was born.第15页/共73页第十六页，共73页。Read the following paragraph carefully.Then underline the Read the following

31、 paragraph carefully.Then underline the controlling controlling ideaidea and cross out the sentences that do not help to develop the controlling idea.and cross out the sentences that do not help to develop the controlling idea.n n Once people were very much afraid of ghosts Once people were very muc

32、h afraid of ghosts鬼鬼.Their fear led them.Their fear led them toto develop elaborate develop elaborate精细的精细的 ritualsrituals典礼典礼 toto ward off ward off 避开避开 encounters encounters遭遇遭遇 with the dead.For example,since primitive with the dead.For example,since primitive原始的原始的 people believed that ghosts c

33、ould capture their spirit at funeralspeople believed that ghosts could capture their spirit at funerals葬礼葬礼,they carried wooden images of,they carried wooden images of themselves in the hope that the ghosts would be fooled into carrying off the images.Images have themselves in the hope that the ghos

34、ts would be fooled into carrying off the images.Images have been popular with people from primitive times until today.Once people believed that taking a been popular with people from primitive times until today.Once people believed that taking a picture of someone would rob the person of his or her

35、soulpicture of someone would rob the person of his or her soul灵魂灵魂.It is possible,too,that the.It is possible,too,that the tradition of sitting up with the dead comes from a belief that ghosts escape in the night.Certainly tradition of sitting up with the dead comes from a belief that ghosts escape

36、in the night.Certainly the ritual of laying tombstonesthe ritual of laying tombstones墓碑墓碑 is derived from a superstition is derived from a superstition迷信迷信 about the dead.People once about the dead.People once believed that stones piled on top of a grave would keep the dead persons ghost from escapi

37、ng and believed that stones piled on top of a grave would keep the dead persons ghost from escaping and haunting haunting（haunt:haunt:鬼神鬼神(gu(gu shn)shn)出没）出没）the living.Eventually the number of stones diminished the living.Eventually the number of stones diminished减减少少 until only one stone,the tomb

38、stone,was left as a reminder until only one stone,the tombstone,was left as a reminder 提醒提醒of the ancient superstitionof the ancient superstition迷信迷信.第16页/共73页第十七页，共73页。Read the following paragraph carefully.Then underline the controlling idea Read the following paragraph carefully.Then underline th

39、e controlling idea and cross out the sentences that do not help to develop the controlling idea.and cross out the sentences that do not help to develop the controlling idea.n n Once people were very much afraid of ghosts Once people were very much afraid of ghosts鬼鬼.Their fear led them.Their fear le

40、d them toto develop develop elaborateelaborate精细的精细的 rituals rituals典礼典礼 toto ward off ward off 避开避开 encounters encounters遭遇遭遇 with the dead.For with the dead.For example,since primitiveexample,since primitive原始的原始的 people believed that ghosts could capture their spirit at people believed that ghost

41、s could capture their spirit at funeralsfunerals葬礼葬礼,they carried wooden images of themselves in the hope that the ghosts,they carried wooden images of themselves in the hope that the ghosts would be fooled into carrying off the images.Images have been popular with people would be fooled into carryi

42、ng off the images.Images have been popular with people from primitive times until today.Once people believed that taking a picture of someone from primitive times until today.Once people believed that taking a picture of someone would rob the person of his or her soulwould rob the person of his or h

43、er soul灵魂灵魂.It is possible,too,that the tradition of.It is possible,too,that the tradition of sitting up with the dead comes from a belief that ghosts escape in the night.Certainly the sitting up with the dead comes from a belief that ghosts escape in the night.Certainly the ritual of laying tombsto

44、nesritual of laying tombstones墓碑墓碑 is derived from a superstition is derived from a superstition迷信迷信(mxn)about the(mxn)about the dead.People once believed that stones piled on top of a grave would keep the dead dead.People once believed that stones piled on top of a grave would keep the dead persons

45、 ghost from escaping and haunting persons ghost from escaping and haunting（haunt:haunt:鬼神出没）鬼神出没）the living.Eventually the living.Eventually the number of stones diminishedthe number of stones diminished减少减少 until only one stone,the tombstone,was left as a until only one stone,the tombstone,was left

46、 as a reminder reminder 提醒提醒of the ancient superstitionof the ancient superstition迷信迷信(mxn).(mxn).第17页/共73页第十八页，共73页。Please write some supporting sentences for the following topic Please write some supporting sentences for the following topic sentencesentencen n The New Year is a time for resolution

47、.The New Year is a time for resolution.第18页/共73页第十九页，共73页。Please write some supporting sentences for the following Please write some supporting sentences for the following topic sentencetopic sentencen n The New Year is a time for resolution.The New Year is a time for resolution.n nMentally,at least

48、,most of us could compile formidable lists of dos and Mentally,at least,most of us could compile formidable lists of dos and donts.We resolve to get up earlier each morning,eat less,find more donts.We resolve to get up earlier each morning,eat less,find more time to play with the children,do a thous

49、and and one jobs about the time to play with the children,do a thousand and one jobs about the house,be nice to people we dont like,drive carefully,and take the dog house,be nice to people we dont like,drive carefully,and take the dog for a walk every day.However,most of us fail in our efforts at se

50、lf-for a walk every day.However,most of us fail in our efforts at self-improvement because our schemes are too ambitious and we never have improvement because our schemes are too ambitious and we never have time to carry them out.We also make the fundamental error of time to carry them out.We also m