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1、读后续写高分素材积累与扩展（一）1.受伤He bit me! Bruce hissed, the wordsmuffledaround the thumb shoved in his mouth.“他咬我!”布鲁斯嘶嘶地说，他的话因为含在嘴里的手指而模糊不清。Ivanelbowed him sharplyin the ribs and Gilbertclutched his side, coughing and wincing.伊凡狠狠地用胳膊肘捅了他的肋骨，吉尔伯特按住他的侧腹，咳嗽着畏缩。Gayley had doubled over into something like the fet

2、al position,his hands pressing on the wound.It wasnt doing much good. He was losing a lot of blood.He groaned, only semi-conscious.They wouldnt be able to move him.格利弯下腰来，像胎儿一样，双手压在伤口上。这并没有带来什么好处。他正在大量失血。他呻吟着，只是半清醒的状态。他们无法移动他。Gayley stirred.With a wheeze of pain, he turned his head, facing in the sa

3、me direction Lucifer was staring.Gayley动了一下。伴随着一阵痛苦的喘息，他转过头来，面对着路西法注视的方向。Clint had just gotten back from a mission gone wrong.Arm in a sling, paler than one would consider healthy and plagued with a terrible sounding cough, Barton shrugged off his teammates concernas always.克林特刚从一个失败的任务中回来。手臂吊着绷带，面色

4、苍白，严重的咳嗽。巴顿像往常一样，对队友的关心不屑一顾。France suddenly swooned, nearly collapsing, and had to be caught by Britain.弗朗西斯突然昏倒，几近崩溃，不得不被亚瑟抓住。It started small.There was a nagging ache in his chest, phantom pain from where the bullets had pierced his flesh, in the overwritten timeline that never will be.刚开始只是轻微的疼痛。

5、他的胸口有一种挥之不去的疼痛，那是在被重写的时间线里子弹穿过他身体的地方产生的幻觉般的疼痛。He stumbled back from the counter, lungs burning, and flailed to grab onto the edge of the kitchen island, barely able to keep balance.Five squeezed his eyes shut, and desperately willed himself to stop, to get his body back under control, even as he sho

6、ok with tremors.他从柜台上踉踉跄跄地走了回来，肺里火辣辣的。他拼命地想抓住岛式厨房的边缘，几乎无法保持平衡。五号紧紧地闭上了他的眼睛，拼命地强迫自己停下来，让自己的身体恢复控制，尽管他在颤抖。The pain struck him again,stabbing deep in his chest, cutting him off mid-sentence. He choked on a breath and broke down with rattling coughs, shaking as his body rebelled against him.疼痛再次袭来，深深刺进他

7、的胸膛，打断了他的话。他喘不过气来，咳嗽得直打颤，身体在反抗。And then, everything, the pain, the noise, the terror, all of it slipped into the dark, as the blackness dragged him under.然后，所有的一切，痛苦，噪音，恐惧，所有的一切都消失在黑暗中，黑暗将他拖入水中。2.生病Dean looked awful,a light sheen of sweat covered his forehead, his eyes looked sunken and had dark pur

8、ple bags underneath, he looked pale as a sheet. Sam brought the back of his hand to his older brothers forehead and frowned at the excessive warmth. He didnt need a thermometer to know Dean was running s fever.迪安看上去很可怕，额头上冒出了一层淡淡的汗珠，眼睛深陷，下面是深紫色的眼袋，脸色苍白得像一张床单。萨姆把手背放在哥哥的额头上，对这种过分的温暖皱起了眉头。他不需要温度计就知道迪安在

9、发烧3.恐慌发作Whats the matter, dearest? But the pale man just shook his head, dropped his cigarette and clung to himburying his face in the blonds neck,his shoulders shaking, hands clutching at fabric.The blond man blinked, expression shifting from awkward to worried and Jody moved forward, concern in he

10、r voice, hands moving to help.“怎么了，亲爱的?”但那个苍白的男人只是摇了摇头，扔掉了香烟，贴着他把脸埋在金发男人的脖子上，肩膀颤抖，双手抓着布料。那个金发男人眨了眨眼睛，表情从尴尬变成了担心。乔迪走上前，声音里透着关切，伸手想要帮助他。4.移动With a grunt and a frustrated sigh, Tony continued to army crawl through the vent.托尼哼了一声，沮丧地叹了口气，继续从通风孔里爬过去。Frost glittered on the ground as he slowly, absently p

11、laced one foot after the other on the dimly lit path in St. Jamess Park.他慢慢地、漫不经心地一步步走在圣詹姆斯公园灯光昏暗的小路上，地上的霜闪闪发光。Ivan batted low hanging twigs and leaves out of his way, careful not to trip over anything.伊万把低垂的树枝和树叶扔到一边，小心翼翼地不被任何东西绊倒。So I walked about the camp to get my mind off of it, even though mor

12、e walking was exactly the opposite of what my legs wanted to do.所以我在营地里走了一圈，把我的注意力从它身上移开，尽管更多的行走和我的腿想做的完全相反。He climbed down the stone stairs and stepped out from behind the statue, walking the halls and scanning the outside for any proof one of the kids had been there. But to no avail, his eyes didn

13、t spot any of the children as he made his way down to the Hogwarts entrance.他爬下石阶，从雕像后面出来，在大厅里踱来踱去，看看外面有没有孩子来过的痕迹。但是没有用，当他走向霍格沃茨的入口时，他的眼睛没有看到一个孩子。I had to walk back here under that immense grey curtain of rain.我不得不在那巨大的灰色雨幕下走回来。5.告别Antonio lightly smacked Gilberts arm.“Be careful, okay?”“I will.”Gil

14、bert hugged him, patting back roughly, and then let go.安东尼奥轻轻地拍了一下吉尔伯特的胳膊。“小心点，好吗?”“我会的。吉尔伯特抱着他，草草地拍了拍他的后背，然后松开手。he gave his brother a final hug in farewell.告别时，他给了哥哥最后一个拥抱。/他给了哥哥最后一个拥抱向他告别6.睡觉醒来Alfred let out another jaw splitting yawn just as the bus turned the corner. Tears formed in the corners

15、of his eyes, but the stretch of his muscles did nothing to alleviate the sleepiness that clouded his mind就在公共汽车拐弯的时候，阿尔弗雷德又打了个哈欠。泪水在他的眼角里打转，但他的肌肉的伸展并没有减轻他迷糊的睡意。he saw Gilbert slumped against the wall, Matthew cuddled against his chest, as they both slept. He grunted softly, sitting up, and rolled hi

16、s neck and shoulders to work out kinks.他看到吉尔伯特靠在墙上，马修依偎在他的胸前，他们都睡着了。他轻轻地哼了一声，坐了起来，转动着脖子和肩膀，放松僵硬的肌肉。I pushed myself up to a sitting position and looked him in the eye. He be musingly blinked back at me.“Thank you for a good Samsun. I had a pleasant time,”I told him, and kissed his cheek just next to

17、his eye. Then I fell back down and finished my nap on his legs.我勉强坐起来，看着他的眼睛。他困惑地对我眨了眨眼睛。“谢谢你的善举。我对他说，并在他眼睛旁边的脸颊上亲了一下。然后我又倒下来，在他腿上睡了个午觉。（二）1.“哭”：Perhaps this is why when he spoke to me, tears came stinging to my eyes.也许这就是为什么当他对我说话时，泪水刺痛了我的眼睛。I didnt want Mother to see me crying, but the tears poole

18、d in my eyes before I could think of how to stop them.我不想让姆妈看到我哭，但在我思考如何止住眼泪之前，眼泪就在我的眼睛里打转了。Long before Auntie had finished reading this letter, the tears had begun to flow out of me just like water from a pot that boils over.姨婆还没读完这封信，我的眼泪就像沸腾的锅里直淌出来的水一样夺眶而出。2.小词妙用I froze there to listen to them.我僵

19、在那里听他们说话。“I cant picture the girls living anywhere else.”“我无法想象这些女孩生活在其他地方的样子。”I lunch with a friend most days.我大部分时间和朋友一起吃午饭。When friends bring photographs from their trips to Kyoto, I often think that Geon has thinned out like a poorly kept garden, increasingly overrun with weeds.当朋友们带来他们去京都旅行的照片时

20、，我常常以为祗园就像一个被人荒废的花园一样杂草丛生。After Mr. Tanaka had left, I tried to busy myself in the kitchen, but I felt a bit like Satsu, for I could hardly see the things before me.田中先生走后，我试着在厨房里忙活，但我感觉自己有点像Status，因为我几乎看不见眼前的事物。To me, he seemed to see the sap bleeding from the trunks of the pine trees, and the circ

21、le of brightness in the sky where the sun was smothered by clouds.在我看来，他似乎看到了松树树干渗出的汁液，也看到了天空中被云遮住的太阳发出的光圈。（“block”一词可足以传达原文之意，但是要逊色不少。“smother”用在此处无比生动，赋予“clouds”人化动感，可见作者用词之巧妙。）3.修辞：a.Simile（明喻）:Probably it(our tipsy house) would have collapsed if my father hadnt cut a timber from a wrecked fishin

22、g boat to prop up the eaves, which made the house look like a tipsy old man leaning on his crutch.如果不是我父亲从一艘失事的渔船上砍下一根木头来支撑屋檐，它(我们“醉醺醺的”房子)很可能早就倒塌了。这样一来房子看起来像一个手拄拐杖醉酒老人。（将“house”比喻成“a tipsy old man”）The sea was violent, with waves like stones chipped into blades, sharp enough to cut.大海如此狂暴，海浪就像被凿成刀片

23、的石头，锋利得足以切割。（将“waves”比喻成“stones”）Simile：a word or phrase that compares sth to sth else, using the words like or as , for example a face like a mask or as white as snow ; the use of such words and phrases明喻；明喻的运用b.Metaphor（暗喻）One day I asked him, “Daddy, why are you so old?” He hoisted up his eyebrow

24、s at this, so that they formed little sagging umbrellas over his eyes.有一天我问他，“爸爸，为什么你这么老?”听了这话他扬起的眉毛形成了一把把耷拉着的小伞，遮住眼睛。（将“eyebrows”比喻成“little sagging umbrellas”）His spine was a path of knobs. His head, with its discolored splotches, might have been a bruised fruit. His arms were sticks wrapped in old

25、 leather, dangling from two bumps.他的脊梁骨是一条凹凸不平的小径。他的头上因为有色斑的缘故看起来像一个淤青的果实。他的双臂像裹着旧皮革的木棍，挂在两个肿块上摇摇晃晃。（将“spine”比喻成“a path of knobs”，将“head”比喻成“a bruised fruit”，将“arms”比喻成“sticks”）Metaphor：a word or phrase used to describe sb/sth else, in a way that is different from its normal use, in order to show th

26、at the two things have the same qualities and to make the description more powerful, for example She has a heart of stone ; the use of such words and phrases暗喻；隐喻c.Rhetoric question:Was life nothing more than a storm that constantly washed away what had been there only a moment before, and left behi

27、nd something barren and unrecognizable?难道生命只不过是一场风暴，不断地冲刷掉片刻之前还在那里的东西，留下的是一片荒芜，令人无法辨认?Rhetoric question:a question to which no answer is required: used esp for dramatic effect. An example is Who knows? (with the implication Nobody knows)不必回答,只为加强语气及效果的反问d.Hyperbole(夸张）Her face was drooping with exha

28、ustion, and the weight of all her clothing seemed as if it might pull her right onto the ground.她的脸累得耷拉下来，全身衣服的重量似乎足以把她拽到地上。Hyperbole: a way of speaking or writing that makes sth sound better, more exciting, dangerous, etc. than it really is夸张4.经典名篇开头段1.In my younger and more vulnerable years my fat

29、her gave me some advice that Ive been turning over in my mind ever since. Whenever you feel like criticizing any one, he told me, just remember that all the people in this world havent had the advantages that youve had.（了不起的盖茨比）2.lamer Gantry was drunk.He was eloquently drunk, lovingly and pugnaciou

30、sly drunk.（埃尔默甘特利）3.A green hunting cap squeezed the top of a fleshy balloon of a head.一顶绿色的猎帽卡在隆起的头部。4.The cold passed reluctantly from the earth, and the retiring fogs revealed an army stretched out on the hills, resting.寒冷迟疑地从大地上退去，随着薄雾渐散开，可以看见一支军队分散在山坡上睡觉。红色英勇勋章5.It was a queer, sultry summer, t

31、he summer they electrocuted the Rosenbergs,and I didnt know what I was doing in New York.钟形罩6.As Gregory Samosa awoke one mooring from uneasy dreams he found himself transformed in his bed into a gigantic insect.变形记7.It was love at first sight.The first time Yossarian saw the chaplain he fell madly

32、in love with him.8.Under certain circumstance there are few hours in life more agreeable than the hour dedicated to the ceremony known as afternoon tea.9.It was inevitable: the scent of bitter almonds always reminded him of the fate of unrequited love.霍乱时期的爱情10.He was an old man who fished alone in a skiff in the Guff Stream and he had gone eighty-four days now without taking a fish.老人与海学科网（北京）股份有限公司