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1、问题解决型问题解决型问题解决型问题解决型（problem solutionproblem solution）一、英语作文语言的形成过程二、问题解决型作文写作方法和特点总结二、问题解决型作文写作方法和特点总结三、习作实例讲解和句式总结三、习作实例讲解和句式总结第1页/共47页一、英语作文语言的形成过程一、英语作文语言的形成过程一、英语作文语言的形成过程一、英语作文语言的形成过程Simple ChineseSimple English Compound and complex English第2页/共47页写作实例如果我们每个人都减少一次性塑料袋的使用，这对环境保护非常重要。If each of

2、us can reduce the usage of disposal plastic bags,it is very important to environmental protection.第3页/共47页第一步优化第一步优化：句子结构优化（使用主：句子结构优化（使用主语从句合成句子）语从句合成句子）It is very important to environmental protection that each of us reduce the usage of disposal plastic bags in our daily life.第4页/共47页第二步：对词汇进行优化（四

3、级词汇在写作中的应用）第二步：对词汇进行优化（四级词汇在写作中的应用）第二步：对词汇进行优化（四级词汇在写作中的应用）第二步：对词汇进行优化（四级词汇在写作中的应用）It is very important to environmental protection that each of us reduce the usage of disposal plastic bags in our daily life.significantessentialof vital importance mean a lot第5页/共47页 It means a lot to environmental p

4、rotection that each of us reduce the usage of disposal plastic bags in our daily life.minimize第6页/共47页二、问题解决型作文写作方法和特点总二、问题解决型作文写作方法和特点总结结 The Writing Method of the Passage 1:The Writing Method of the Passage 1:A Problem Response Evaluation Structure This is very commonly used structure in English.N

5、ormally,some part of a situation is introduced before the problem.Then,solutions are taken to solve the problem.Afterwards,some evaluationmight occur in the actions taken.第7页/共47页Jimmy,was born with brain damage due to a lack of oxygen at his birth.My mother taught Jimmy practical things.My life rev

6、olved around Jimmys.My father held the family together with his patience and understanding.I protected Jimmy when the kids picked on him.My father and Jimmy were inseparable and did everything together.ProblemResponseEvaluationWritingStructure Writing Sample 1Part 1 of the Text Sample 1Part 1 of the

7、 Text第8页/共47页N H C EWriting PatternBack预习预习课文课文导入导入小结小结写作实践写作实践 随随 笔笔 Example 2 from the TextProblem:Jimmy was a wreck when my father died of a heart attack in 1991.He was simply in disbelief.He now quit speaking all together.No matter how hard I tried,Jimmy could not accept the hard fact.(Para.4)My

8、 mother died of lung cancer six months later and I alone was left to look after Jimmy.(Para.5)第9页/共47页问题解决型作文写作思路亦可称为：解决问题型作文。一般在首段现象描述，之后进行问题分析（原因或危害），最后提出建议措施,第10页/共47页问题解决型试题回顾问题解决型试题回顾08年12月英语四级作文真题Limiting The Use of Disposable Plastic Bags 1.一次性塑料袋曾被广泛的使用 2.造成的问题 3.限制使用的意义 第11页/共47页2010年6月Topi

9、c：Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling.1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写2.出现这种情况的原因3.为了改变这种状况，我认为第12页/共47页现象描述段（正反）2008-06：娱乐活动多种多样2011-06：现在网上购物已成为一种时尚引出话题具体描述总结第13页/共47页2000年1月四级作文真题 How I Finance My College Education 1、上大学的费用可以通过多种途径解决 2、哪种途径适合于我（说明理由）第14页/共47页特点总结特点总结特点总结特点总结1、目前存在某个问题 2、这种问题的危害或产生的原因 3、

10、给出解决的方法 第15页/共47页三、习作实例讲解和句式总结三、习作实例讲解和句式总结Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Global Shortage of Fresh Water on the outline(given in Chinese)below:1、人们以为淡水是取之不尽的 2、实际上淡水是非常紧缺的 3、我们应该怎么办 第16页/共47页 STEP ONE:Content Analysis（内容扩展）1、人们以为淡水是取之不尽的fr

11、eshwaterVarious kinds of freshwaterrainriverwelllake第17页/共47页2、实际上淡水是非常紧缺的 Short of freshwaterindustrypopulationpollutiondrought？原因？原因？第18页/共47页3、我们应该怎么办 We/studentsscientistsgovernmentSave Save technologytechnologyinstituteinstitute laws laws第19页/共47页STEP TWO:Writing Process Analysis（写作分析）General R

12、equirement for Every Paragraph:Topic sentenceSupport sentence 1Support sentence 2Support sentence 3第20页/共47页1、人们以为淡水是取之不尽的FreshwaterVarious kindsrainriverwelllakeThere are many individuals who hold the opinion that the worlds supply of freshwater is never used up.topic sentenceAccording to them,ther

13、e are so many kinds of sources as the rain,rive and lake,that it is always sufficient for use,which contributes to a shocking waste of water.Support sentence第21页/共47页2、实际上淡水是非常紧缺的 Short of freshwaterindustrypopulationpollutiondroughtAs a matter of fact,human beings are confronted with the crisis of

14、insufficient fresh water,which can be attributed to the following reasons.topic sentence第22页/共47页Short of freshwaterpopulationpollutionIt is known that the world population is growing rapidly day by day.So enough fresh water is needed to feed such a big population.support sentence 1Whats more,with t

15、he development of industry,factories and vehicles produce poisonous gases or wastes,which consequently results in the pollution of water.support sentence 2第23页/共47页3、我们应该怎么办 We/studentsscientistsgovernmentsave save technologytechnologyinstituteinstitute laws lawsAs far as I am concerned,it is an urg

16、ent task for us students to do our part to save water in our daily life.第24页/共47页3、我们应该怎么办scientiststechnologytechnologySecond,scientists are expected to work even harder to purify sea water and polluted water,and try to find substitutes to reduce the use of fresh water.第25页/共47页3、我们应该怎么办governmenti

17、nstituteinstitute laws lawsThirdly,governments are expected to launch campaigns against water pollution第26页/共47页问题解决型写作句式总结问题解决型写作句式总结首句引出现象1.Nobody/No one could have failed to notice the fact that kids lack of independence has become a grave problem in many families.负面：a grave problem练习：一次性塑料袋、水资源第

18、27页/共47页 2008-12：一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用 Nobody/No one could have failed to notice the fact that white pollution has become a grave problem in the contemporary society.current第28页/共47页2023/2/5 正面a common/popular phenomenon/practice第29页/共47页首句2.In the contemporary society,there is no denying the fact that+客观事实（

19、提纲1）.练习：住房需求紧张问题第30页/共47页首句3.On many campuses/In the contemporary society/In the present-day society/In recent decades,the shortage of housing is one of the most serious problems with which people are confronted.第31页/共47页首句4(正反均可)Nowadays/In the present-day society/In recent decades,it can be notice

20、d that children depend more on their parents than ever before.(比较级引出问题)第32页/共47页练习：用比较级引出问题网上购物Nowadays/In the present-day society/In recent decades,it can be noticed that more people purchase items online than ever before.第33页/共47页首句5(正反均可)：In the present-day society/In recent years,it has become a

21、 prevalent/prevailing tendency/trend/practice for _人_ to _动作_.第34页/共47页首句6:（正面）In recent decades,_ has/have gained great popularity among _.popularity public attention/publicity(负面)第35页/共47页首句7The past years/decades have seen/witnessed the huge/speedy advancement/development of _.第36页/共47页2023/2/5现象

22、描述写作范例1：Unhealthy Living Habits1.现在很多大学生有不健康的生活习惯2.这些习惯的危害3.我的建议第37页/共47页2023/2/5第38页/共47页2023/2/5第39页/共47页你在写下篇作文时，将如何运用上面你在写下篇作文时，将如何运用上面的方法写出多样的句型？的方法写出多样的句型？Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic:Dating Is Popular with College Students.You should

23、write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:大学生对校园恋爱并不陌生；大学生对校园恋爱并不陌生；对此方方面面态度不一；对此方方面面态度不一；谈谈你的观点。谈谈你的观点。第40页/共47页Dating Is Popular with College Students Dating is a concept not far away from college students.On campus some lovers walk hand in hand,and some kiss or hug

24、in public.When the majority of ones close friends are in committed(有密切关系的)relationships,to get rid of loneliness,some will date fellow classmates,while others are in long-distance relationships.第41页/共47页 Different people show different attitudes.Young lovers say they have right and freedom to fall i

25、n love.Some parents think college students mature a litter faster,but its not good to start dating too early,and they should tell dating from marriage.Some teachers are worried that dating might be a great distraction(分散)from their schoolwork.School authorities(官方)neither encourage nor discourage it

26、.第42页/共47页 In my opinion,striking a balance between learning and dating is science as well as art.Students may benefit from these relationships.To balance work and play,they encourage each other to work hard.They can work more efficiently(有效率地)this way.So they get high grades while keeping a happy r

27、elationship.However,there are also some concerns:its a big deal for students to have a boyfriend or a girlfriend,and they should take their relationships seriously.When they love at first sight,they should love on second thought.第43页/共47页I.TOEFL作文题目1 Directions:You will have thirty minutes to plan a

28、nd write an essay on the topic given below.Use the first few minutes to read the topic carefully and think about what kind of essay you will write.You may use the space immediately below the essay topic to make notes.Write your essay on the lined pages that follow.You will have enough space if you w

29、rite on every line and keep your handwriting to a reasonable size.People should be realistic rather than romantic in order to live a better life.Do you agree or disagree with the statement?Use specific reasons to support your answer.第44页/共47页II.TOEFL作文题目作文题目2 Directions:You will have thirty minutes

30、to plan and write an essay on the topic given below.Use the first few minutes to read the topic carefully and think about what kind of essay you will write.You may use the space immediately below the essay topic to make notes.Write your essay on the lined pages that follow.You will have enough space if you write on every line and keep your handwriting to a reasonable size.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Boys and girls should attend separate schools.第45页/共47页第46页/共47页感谢您的观看。第47页/共47页