2023江苏省中考英语复习专题11书面表达之半命题式(考点+真题)150.pdf

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1、专题 11 书面表达之半命题式 【考点详解】中考英语的书面表达有一部分属于“半开放性的命题作文”，一般含有 4 个方面的要求：题目所给内容、规范使用的语言和体裁格式以及自己的观点表达。内容是按照题目的要求去写，不得遗漏任何一个要点，不能随意发挥去写一些与主题无关的话。语言的要求是正确、恰当、清楚、连贯，要有至少两个复杂句。体裁格式正确，单词的大小写正确、标点符号正确以及词数不少于 90 字或者 100字。自己的观点要符合题目要求，要与考生学习和生活实际相符。一、审好题目 仔细审查所给的内容提示（包括文字和图表等），明确要求写的内容，确定文章的体裁、人称、时态等。二、看要点，写片段 对于易于表达

2、的内容，一次成句；对于一时难于表达的内容，写出词组。此时，既注意不遗漏内容要点，也不要随意添加任何内容。三、连词成句（1）选用比较有把握的词汇，用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。在熟悉的基础上，鼓励多用高级词汇和结构复杂的复杂句。如表达“为了”时，可用 in order to do 或 so as to do.也可用so that 引导目的状语从句。（2）写出的句子要达意，完整，语法正确，合乎习惯，特别是句式、谓语动词形式要有根有据。（3）尽量避免使用汉语式的英语。四、衔接得当 一般分成三段：（1）为了使句子或段落语义连贯，表达合理准确，可以适当加入一些连接词语。如表达转折可用but,h

3、owever,otherwise 等，表达递进可用 and,also,besides,Whats more 等，表达因果 so,as a result等，表达对比可用 while 等，表达让步可用 though,although 等。有时还需要加入一些必要的过渡句子以达到承上启下的效果。（3）仔细推敲在文章的哪些地方可用复杂句。切忌生搬硬套。尽量使用我们熟悉的宾语从句、状语从句和定语从句。五、检查到誊写 认真检查以下几点：（1）内容有无遗漏或误词，最好一一对应检查。（2）体裁格式对不对。（3）句子是否有语法结构错误，特别要检查句子中的冠词、代词、名词复数、动词的时态、语态、主谓一致等方面是否有

4、错误。（4）句子是否合乎英语表达习惯，是否达意。（5）书写字迹和标点符号是否规范清晰，词数是否基本上符合要求。【好题分享】【2022-南通中考】八、书面表达（本题满分 20 分）81.华夏大地，人杰地灵；中华文明，源远流长。假如你是李华，你国外的朋友 Andy想了解中国，请根据下图提示，选择或自拟至少两个要点进行介绍。注意：1.词数 90 左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。2.表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。Learning that you are interested in China,I feel honored to introduce my country to you._【答案】L

5、earning that you are interested in China,I feel honored to introduce my country to you.First,there are many great men in our country,such as Yuan Longping.Yuan Longping is known as the“father of hybrid rice”.He made a great contribution to the world food supply.Second,there are many famous places of

6、 interest in China,such as the Great Wall.It is known as one of the seven Wonders of the World.Third,China also has many traditional festivals,such as Spring Festival,Dragon Boat Festival,Mid-Autumn Festival and so on.Chinese people attach the most importance to the Spring Festival.【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材

7、料作文。根据所给图示提示，选择至少两个要点，向 Andy 介绍中国的人物、名胜、节日等。2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第三人称为主。本文介绍时可以根据所给的人物、景点、节日描述，也可以自拟要点介绍。行文确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。【2022-泰州中考】八、书面表达（满分 20 分）78.我们在变化中成长，成长让我们的人生充满意义。回首三年初中时光，我们在学习、思想、性格、生活等方面发生了很多变化。你所在学校公众号的英语写作栏目正在开展“我的成长”征文活动，请分享你初中三年中的成长故事，具体讲述其中一个变化。要点如下：1.变化是什么？2.变化过程是什么？3.你从中得到了什么启发？

8、要求：1.必须含有所有要点，并适当拓展；2.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；3.词数 100 左右。_【答案】We grow up in change.Growth makes our life full of meaning.Looking back on the three years of junior high school,I have experienced many changes in my study,thoughts,personality,life and so on.The biggest personal change Ive ever made is th

9、at I have fallen in love with reading.When I was a child,I didnt enjoy books at all.Later,my mother always read stories for me and bought me books.Gradually,I began to love reading.While reading,I feel like talking with a wise man.Reading is also a fantastic way to enjoy my free time.Books are my fr

10、iends.And they will benefit me a lot.【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示问题，分享自己初中生活以来的一个变化，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时、一般过去时和现在完成时。作文可分为三段，第一段介绍变化是什么；第二段介绍变化过程是什么；第三段介绍从中得到了什么启发。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。【2022-常州中考】七、书面表达(共 1 题;满分 15 分)57.某中学生英文报 Your Voice 栏目中有如下征文通知，请你写篇英语文章投稿，谈谈你的想法。Its not very easy for teena

11、gers to make true friends.Some of them make friends by following suit(随大流).That means they do the same as their friends,such as playing online games or saying bad words behind others,although theyre not willing to.Share your ideas about the topic.1.Is it wise to follow suit in order to make friends?

12、2.How can teenagers make true friends?Dont forget to support your ideas with your experience as an example.注意：1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；2.词数 100 左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。I want to share my ideas about the topic._【答案】I want to share my ideas about the topic.In my opinion,making friends by following suit is not

13、 wise.Because everyone is an individual,with his own interests and personality.So dont follow the crowd and just do what other people like to do.We should make friends with those who can give us help and share our happiness and sadness.To make true friends,you must be friendly to others.Smile at oth

14、ers and you will get a smile in return.You can make friends with those who share the same interest with you or those who are totally different from you.Try to help your friends when they are in trouble because a friend in need is a friend indeed.【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“交友”为话题，结合提示内容进行写作。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。写作时要以

15、第一、第二人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍自己认为为了交朋友而跟风是否是明智的；第三段介绍青少年怎样才能交到真正的朋友。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。【2022-镇江中考】七、书面表达(共 1 题;满分 15 分)66.假如你是李华，看到某英语报社将要组织的劳动体验和体育锻炼夏令营活动的宣传。请用英语给编辑写一封信，谈一谈你更想参与的一种活动及理由，并对你选择的活动提出建议。要求：1.所写内容必须包括一种活动的所有信息，可适当发挥;2.对你所选择的活动说明理由，并对其提出建议;3.文章不少于 90 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数;4.文中不得出现真实的

16、姓名、校名等信息。Dear Sir/Madam,Thanks for offering such meaningful camps.I prefer_ Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,Thanks for offering such meaningful camps.I prefer living skills training because all the living skills I will get during the process will be of great value to my later life.The living skills t

17、raining will be on a farm.There,I can live with local people who will help me learn more about their customs and lifestyles.Moreover,what makes me interested is that I can cook by myself.In the summer camp,I can take part in activities on the farm such as feeding animals and picking fruit.I also hav

18、e some advice for you.I hope there will be more activities like growing plants and vegetables.I hope I will enjoy myself on the farm.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本文属于书信作文写作，要求根据提示要点内容给报社编辑写一封信，谈谈你会选择的夏令营活动项目及选择的理由，并对活动提出建议。本文主要采用第一人称单数来写，时态以一般现在时为主，一般将来时为辅。写作时承接短文开头，即直接说明选择的活动项目以及总体原因，作为信件的第一段；第二段根据提示要点依次说明选择此项目

19、的具体原因；第三段对此项目提出一两个建议并结尾。具体原因的阐述为本文重点，写作时应巧妙运用衔接语言，使列举原因更有条理，更清晰易懂。【2022-无锡天一实验中学初三三模】八、书面表达（本大题共 20 分）65.近日，教育部正式印发义务教育课程方案，将劳动从原来的综合实践活动课程中完全独立出来，并发布义务教育劳动课程标准（2022年版）。今秋开学，劳动课将正式成为中小学的一门独立课程，每个孩子都要学习日常生活劳动，生产劳动及服务性劳动。作为一名热爱劳动的学生，你被老师邀请在本周的班会课上来为同学们做一次讲座，请结合你目前的劳动情况，谈谈参与劳动的动机及好处，并倡议同学们一起参与劳动。请参考下图提

20、示，写一篇发言稿。What do you do:at home:cooking.in the community:volunteering Why you work:Develop life skills Make others happy How you feel:Proud Sense of achievement 注意事项：1.发言稿内容须根据提示自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；2.图中所给为非限定性内容，仅供参考；3.词数 100 左右，发言稿首尾已给出，不计入总词数。Hi,everyone.Recently,the Ministry of Education has enlisted

21、labor education as a compulsory course for school students at all levels.Today Id like to share something with you about labor education._ Thanks for listening!【答案】Hi,everyone.Recently,the Ministry of Education has enlisted labor education as a compulsory course for school students at all levels.Tod

22、ay Id like to share something with you about labor education.In my spare time,I often do various kinds of labor tasks.At home,I will help my parents do some housework,such as cooking,washing clothes,doing the dishes and taking out the rubbish.Whats more,I often volunteer in my community.I often help

23、 clean the community and help the old people in our community.Doing labor tasks is of great beneficial to us.It not only develops our life skills by doing these tasks but also can make others happy.The most important is that I feel very proud of myself and have a sense of achievement after doing lab

24、or tasks.Lets do more labor tasks from now on.Thanks for listening.【解析】本文主要围绕“劳动”展开并结合题干表格中的内容写一篇文章，可适当增加细节。本文以一般现在时和第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段描述自己目前的劳动情况；第三段主要讲述为什么做这些劳动以及劳动后的感受；第四段发出号召。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误.【2022=常州朝阳中学初三二模】七、书面表达(共 1 题，满分 15 分)若说青春是一段旅程，初中三年一定是其重要的一程。回顾过往三年，你一定感慨万千：谁在你成功时

25、为你呐喊？谁在你失败时给你安慰和力量？谁又在你彷徨时指引你前进？也许是父母，也许是老师，也许是同伴.毕业在即，你一定有话想对他们说。假如你是李悦，请围绕以下要点写一篇英文感谢信：（1）Who do you want to write to？(2)Why do you want to write to the person?（3）What happened between you and the person?（4）What have you learned from the experience?注意：1.内容必须包含以上要点，并适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；3.不少于 100

26、词 Dear _ I am writing to express my sincere thanks to you because_ _ Best wishes Li Yue【答案】Dear Miss Gao,I am writing to express my sincere thanks to you because you have helped me a lot in the past three years.I still remember that you devoted your spare time to helping me with my English.I wasnt g

27、ood at English when I entered this school.Thus,I was so worried about it that I often cried silently after class.It was you who comforted me a lot and promised to help me improve it.I was advised to read aloud in the morning and speak as much as possible in class.Because of your useful advice and my

28、 hard work,I have made great progress in English in the past three years.Last year,I came first in the final English exam and both of us were very excited!I will never forget you though I will leave you soon.I really hope one day I will become an excellent English teacher like you so that I will help more children like me fall in love with English!Best wishes!Li Yue