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1、高二英语家庭亲情篇母亲节的惊喜早餐试题再现阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning fbr Mothers Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast a

2、nd chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice int

3、o a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until J

4、eff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.(3) Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting

5、 to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeffs hand touched the hot

6、 burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appearedThe twins c

7、arried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.Word BankPara 1.French toast and chicken porridge 法式吐司和鸡肉粥Para 2. sink v.下沉;下陷;(sink-sank-sunk) n.(厨房里的)洗涤池，洗碗槽the other slice of bread 另一片面包Para 3.steam n蒸汽 shoot out of the pot 从锅里射击 put out the fire 把火扑灭 stayed calm保持冷静stovestauv n.火炉 be a me

8、ss一 团糟 burner n.煤气头;煤气灶火圈 a cry of pain 痛 苦的叫喊Then she caught the smell of burning.然后她闻至了 烧焦的味道I.理解材料回答下面几个问题，检测一下你是否读懂了原材料。1. Who are the characters in the text?2. What were they doing?3. How was everything going?完成下面故事山3.climax2.Building up1.Opening4. resolution5.Ending.首句精研研读两段给出句，想想它们给我们提供了哪些续写线

9、索？Para 1: As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.Para 2: The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.II .范文学习根据括号中的提示，补出范文缺失的部分，并关注哪些语言回答了“首句精研”的 问题。As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. （别害怕爸爸边 说边递给他们一人一块湿毛巾

10、，帮他们快速清理干净一切脏乱。非谓语动词作状语）After the cleaning, he began helping them prepare breakfast. The twins acted as their fathers little helpers, and it was a pleasure to team up with their father. （在爸爸的精心指 导下，没过多久法式吐司和鸡粥就做好了。it表示时间的用法）Everything settled, their father left the kitchen, promising to keep their s

11、ecret.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Happy Mothers Day!” shouted the twins. And we have a surprise for you!” （这份惊喜如此美 好，妈妈兴奋地摇醒了爸爸，这时候爸爸正假装酣睡呢。sothat倒装）Her face lit up with happiness. Mother hugged the twins and showed her thanks. She tasted a piece of French toas

12、t and said that it was the best breakfast she had ever had. Love filled the whole room. （这是多么美妙又甜蜜的惊 喜啊！ 感叹句）范文部分 正在忙某事 打扫干净 高兴起来 溜回去睡觉 一看见与合作（脸）放光彩范文部分 正在忙某事 打扫干净 高兴起来 溜回去睡觉 一看见与合作（脸）放光彩be up to sth.clean upcheer upsneak back to bed at the sight ofteam up with light up检测一下你对本文的亮点语块和句式掌握了吗?材号部分充满兴奋b

13、e filled with excitement计划做某事 plan to do sth.轻而易举There is / was nothing to it一切进展顺利直到Everything was going smoothly until 痛苦地呼喊出来give a cry of pain闻到烧焦的味道 catch the smell of burning1. Without a second thought （毫不犹豫）,Dad offered t preparing the Mothers Day surprise.2. The twins assisted their father w

14、ith the breakfast, and 2 wns a pleasure to term up with their father （很高兴能与他们的父亲合作）.3. He cleaned the kitchen in less than 5 minutes and continued with （继续） the unfinished cooking.4. Soon, the delicious smell of breakfast filled the kitchen.（厨房里弥漫着早餐的香味）Then he sneaked back to bed.（偷偷回到床上）5. Everyth

15、ing settled （切者B解决了 ） , Father left the kitchen, promising to keep their secret.6. They said Happy Mothers Day”, with their eyes twinkling with excitement.（他们的 眼睛闪烁着兴奋的光芒。）Her face lit up （她的脸亮了起来）with happiness.7. When she saw the breakfast, her eyes widened up （她的眼睛睁大了）and twinkled with excitement

16、.8. Mother bit into a sandwich （咬了一口三明治）and exclaimed （惊叫，呼喊）it was the best sandwich she had ever tasted.（这是她吃过的最好的三明治）。快餐版版读后续写资料,：一、喜乐The smile on her face shone like a diamond. （shine-shone- shone）她脸上的笑容像钻石 一样闪闪发光。His eyes twinkled with pleasure.他的眼睛闪烁着快乐Her eyes were sparkling like diamonds.她的眼

17、睛闪着钻石般的光芒。She was overflowing with happiness,她洋溢着幸福。二、愤怒：His anger boiled over.他的愤怒爆发 了。He was breathing fire and fury.他充满着怒火。His voice trembled with anger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。He gave me a look of burning anger.他愤怒地看了 我一眼。三、悲伤烦恼He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks.他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。Hearing the ne

18、ws, so desperate was he that he drowned sadness in wine.听到这个消息，他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒里。Upon hearing the bad news, she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldnt help crying bitterly.（被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣。）四、害怕：At the sight of the ferocious wolf, I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees weak看到这只残忍的狼

19、，我感到撒子发紧，膝盖发软。（At the sight of the ferocious wolf, so scared did I feel that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.）He turned to me, with his eyes full of horror.他转过身来，眼里充满了 恐惧。A flood of fear welled up in him. / Fear flooded over him,他心中涌起一阵恐惧/恐惧淹 没了他。五、感动：一一Tears filling her eyes, she offered

20、 her heartfelt gratitude.她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢。With tears streaming down her face, she stared into the distance.她盯着远处，泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来。I suddenly felt my eyes brim（充满）with tears, realizing.突然我感到眼里嗡满 / 泪 水 七、绝望： Overcome with bitter disappointment at his failing to win a prize, he locked himself up in his room.（

21、沉浸在沮丧而情绪中；将自己锁起来）His heart sank when he heard the news that he failed to win a prize.（心、沉）（3） The news that he didnt win a prize immediately threw him into low spirits.（精神不 振；情绪低落）八、震惊： Hearing the bad news, Mary felt very shocked.Hearing the bad news, Marry fainted away on the spot and fell into un

22、consciousness. （当场晕倒，陷入昏迷）When Mary heard the bad news, her eyes widened further and his mouth opened. （睁大了眼睛，张大了嘴巴） Hearing the bad news, Mary froze with shock, as if rooted on the ground.（僵住了,像扎根在地上一样）九、疲惫：Crooks eyelids drooped and he yawned.克鲁克的眼皮聋拉下来，打了个哈欠。 十、思考（think）： .After he knew what the

23、problem was, his mind began to race, trying to think of a good solution.（大脑飞速运转）When left alone, he would always be haunted by that horrible experience.（不好的回忆萦绕心头挥之不去）（3）When he was taking a shower, a brilliant idea suddenly crossed his mind.（突然闪过某人的脑海）H一讲话（talk）：The whole company is gossiping about

24、 the reason for his dismissal.整个公司都在谈论他被免职的原因。He murmured against the strict rules of the reality show.他私下低声抱怨真人秀的 严苛规则。Treated so unfairly, she howled in pain and anger.被如此不公正地对待，她痛苦而又愤怒的嚎叫。十二、行走（walk）： She slipped out of bed and tiptoed to the window.她溜下床，踮起脚尖走向窗户。 The minion made a rush for the d

25、oor and escaped from the scene. 小黄人向门冲去, 逃离了现场。十三、说say说 ask问add补充说reply/respond/answer回答state陈述；郑重说 explain 解释 interrupt 打断 comment 评论 remark 说；议论；评论 conclude 断定； 做结论一、_claim要求；声称announce宣布；预示；播报declare声明；宣布 续写标点示范句：（独创）Michael often says JI have a pet dog named Ah Hua.”1. “I have a dog calling itse

26、lf Ah Hua, says Michael.2. .Never is Ah Hua late fbr its bone, “ laughed Michael, He canft live without it.” 4. “Ah Hua has a girl friend, “ explained Michael, adding that they had three babies that year.主旨类句子1. .The world always makes way for dreamers.世界总是为梦想者让路。2. Everyone is the architect of his

27、own fate.每个人都是自己命运的建筑师Life is full of laughter and tears. Only by accepting both can we enjoy life.生活充满 了欢笑和泪水。只有接受两者，我们才能享受生活。*,、么.3. Sometimes a little kindness can make a big difference.有时候，一点点善意就能带来 很大的不同。主旨句一：入门句That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever.那天是如此难忘，它将永远留

28、在我的记忆。遇到危险并且最终成功脱险的经历，想必对我们每个人来说一定是一生中难忘的 经历。所以这个句子使用的场合还是挺多的。句子中使用了 sothat的句式结构： 如此以至于。unforgettable是一个形容词，表示“无法忘记的”。主旨句二：中级句 Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way.直到那时，我才意识到，正是勇敢才能克服一 切困难。 遇到危险后，勇敢面对，才能解决问题。这个句子突出了“勇敢”这个核 心，这在“脱险型”的故事里，是非常

29、恰当的。这句话使用了倒装的结构和强调结构 结合的方太，也属于高分亮点句。主旨句三： 高级句 It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty we are faced with （= we may face）, we mustnt give up our hope. “正是这种 独特的经历使我理解了我们所面临的任何困难，我们不能放弃我们的希望。” 主旨句四：综合型 即把前几种方式进行组合，我们可以记住这个组合公式：结 果+难忘的经历+感悟 我们再说具体点儿，“结果”指的是获救的结果，如走出森 林，获救后见到家人等。“难忘的经历”就是我们刚刚学到的第一个主旨句。“体悟” 日这种“脱险型”里，无非就是突出冷静，勇敢，不放弃希望等信念的重要性。我们来一个例句:Finally, we didWhat an unforgettable experience! It turns outthat theres always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm.最后，我们做某事。（这里写结果）多么难忘的经历啊！（这是一个万能句） 事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困境。（作者的体悟，可以把“保 持冷静”，换成“不放弃希望”等。