中考英语-第三轮-题型实战-第43讲-书面表达习题ppt课件 .ppt

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1、山西省山西省英语英语第第4343讲书面表达讲书面表达考情分析：近5年山西书面表达，均给学生提供了三点写作要点，围绕这三个要点让学生自由发挥。考查学生在一定的情境中，使用恰当的词汇、语态和篇章结构表达情感。话题以学校生活、分享成果、表达观点为主。预计2016年将仍以配图的形式，给出三点内容提示出现。同时话题的选取也以学生的日常生活、情绪情感表达为主。中考书面表达对考生的作文要求基本有四点：1.内容完整，条理清晰；2.语句通顺，行文流畅；3.没有语法错误；4.书写规范。所以，在写作文的时候，应该从三个阶段着手准备，达到要求。一、行文前1认真审题，抓住要点细心审题，细读题目中每一项提示，或观察每一幅

2、画，弄清题意，明确中心，特别是对于我们看来非常熟悉的内容，更要仔细推敲，有自己独特的立意。根据所给的提示，按照一定的规律，如事件的先后顺序，地点的更换等内在的联系排序，分出层次。抓住每一要点，使表达的内容有条理性。2确定体裁，注意格式中考作文的题型有故事、书信、日记，对人和物的介绍等等，各种文体都有自己的格式。动笔前一定要弄清题目的要求，以便根据不同的体裁，写出不同格式的文章。3草拟提纲，理清思路条理清晰是中考作文得高分的一个条件。因此，草拟提纲是非常必要的。将提示中的要点按照一定的逻辑顺序排列好，然后围绕这一顺序进行选词，选句型，为动笔做好准备。二、行文中1语言规范，把握时态语言准确恰当是中

3、考作文得高分的关键。行文过程中，首先要切忌逐词逐句翻译，避免受汉语影响，写出汉式英语。其次，学会“扬长避短，迂回表达”，尽量使用自己熟悉的正确的表达方式。最后，可适当展开联想，但不要随意发挥。同时，正确使用时态也是重头戏。一般来说，记叙文多描述过去发生的事情，应以过去时为主；说明文阐述事实，提供信息，多用一般现在时。2多用简单句，慎用长难句适当使用长句能展示出扎实的语言基础，但是在没有把握的情况下慎用或不用结构复杂，成分繁多的长难句，多用简单句和有把握的复合句。以免得带来不必要的损失。3巧用连词，行文连贯行文连贯是中考作文评分的一个重要标准。要使文章逻辑性强，上下文连贯，巧用关联词是关键。如果

4、在简单句的基础上，恰当采用递进、让步、转折、因果等连词，使得文章自然流畅，有浑然一体的感觉。4拼写正确，书写规范，卷面整洁认真细心，避免单词拼写错误。同时，工整、美观的字体使人赏心悦目，也会给评卷老师留下美好的印象。三、成文后作文完成后，要全面检查，避免单词拼写、标点符号等低级错误出现。首先，要检查内容要点是完整；其次，检查是否存在语法错误，如：名词单复数和冠词问题；时态的前后呼应；人称与动词的变化等。同时对一些单调重复的句式做一些变动，使文章读起来语感更好。总之，英语写作能力的提高，需要组词、造句语言基本能力的提高，多读文章，多加思考，就能在中考书面表达中取得理想的成绩。(2015，太原一模

5、)家庭是我们温暖的港湾。你知道每年5月15日是“国际家庭日”(International Day for Families)吗？你的家庭幸福吗？请讲述一个发生在你家庭成员之间难忘故事。你打算为你的家庭做怎样的事情？请根据提示要求写一篇英语小短文。提示：Do you have a happy family?Tell us an unforgettable story that happened in your family.What will you do for your family?注意：1.词数：80词左右；2不要出现真实的人名及校名；3请把答案写在答题卡相应的位置上。【审题指导】1讲述

6、一件发生在家庭成员之间难忘的事，时态用一般过去时。2写作人称可以是第一人称和第三人称。3写自己将来的打算用一般将来时。4建议写个题目，如A happy family等。5词数80，不要出现真实的人名及校名。6根据三点提示去写，可适当发挥。【写作指导】1自拟题目。2开头引出事件。我有一个幸福的家庭，爸爸妈妈对我关怀备至。3第二段描述一件发生在我和妈妈之间的事，注意时间、地点，事件的过程描述。可以用上下列词语：on the morning of.在的上午；find sth.adj.发现；run out angrily生气地跑出去；wonder on the street在大街上徘徊；care ab

7、out关心，在意；share.with与分享；be responsible for为负责；go to school，hungry饿着去上学4结尾表达自己的感受，终于理解了母亲对我的爱，作为家庭一员，决定承担责任，使家庭更幸福。【美文欣【美文欣赏赏】From my point of view，having a happy family is the first important thing.Luckily，I have a happy and warm family.We offer to give love and trust，and share things with each other

8、.My family gives me love without asking for return.I think happiness is around me every moment.Every child is surrounded by the deep love.However，we often turn a blind eye to the love.On that day I deeply felt the love.One day I hurried home for lunch after school，because there would be an exam in t

9、he afternoon and I had expected to go back to school early to prepare for theexam.But when I got home，the lunch was not ready yet，I felt unhappy.When the dishes were served，I found none I like.I ran out of my house angrily and wondered on the street for a while，hungry.Then I walked to school.When I

10、got into the classroom，I saw a lunch box on my desk.One classmate told me that it was my mother who had brought it here.After opening the box，I found my favorite food inside.My eyes were almost with tears.My parents always pay attention to my growing and my achievement，but I never care about themsel

11、ves.I will do a lot formy family，such as doing housework and sharing tasks in our family.As a family member，it is my duty to be responsible for my family.I will make efforts to do better.【范文点【范文点评评】from my point of view引出自己引出自己对对家庭生活的看法。家庭生活的看法。We offer to give love and trust，and share things with e

12、ach other.这这是文章的主是文章的主题题句。句。We often turn a blind eye to the love.我我们们经经常常对对身身边边的的爱爱视视而而不不见见。这这句句话话用得很好用得很好，自然引出下面自然引出下面发发生的不愉生的不愉快的事。快的事。第第二二段段连连用用了了三三个个长长句句when.，I.叙叙述述连连贯贯，有有节节奏奏感感，一一步步紧紧扣一步扣一步，扣人心弦扣人心弦，令人感令人感动动。最最后后一一段段pay attention to，care about，do housework，make efforts to写出了自己的真写出了自己的真实实感受感受，

13、结结束全文。束全文。(2014，山西)学习方法、自我反思、合作交流、同伴互评是学习过程中几个重要的方面。其中，有效的学习方法能使你的学习境界大开，成为一种享受。在你初中的三年学习过程中，你一定会有一些好的学习方法与你的同伴分享，请按照以下要求写一篇短文，内容需包含以下要点：Your good learning method(s)An experience that you helped your partnersYour thoughts and feelings要求：1.词数80词左右，提示词仅供参考；2文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。One possible version：Good lea

14、rners must have good ways.Discussing in a group really helps me have a better understanding of what Ive learned.It broadens our mind and allows us more chances to express our thoughts.Shy and nervous，my classmates Jeff used to hide himself behind books.Answering questions in public was quite a diffi

15、cult job for him.Once our math teacher asked us to solve a difficult problem，I encourage him to write his idea with us and we found his way was so creative.Then we advised him to write his answer on theblackboard and explain his way to us.Believe it or not，he did it and we saw his great improvement

16、after that.Discussing in a group not only makes me enjoy the happiness of being a good learner but also deepens the friendship between Jeff and me.Knowledge es from municating and questioning.By discussing，we learn more wisely and better.A(2015，青岛)现在，很多学生被近视困扰，请就此现象写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。内容包括：1.造成近视的原因；2近视对学习或

17、生活的影响；3你认为应该如何保护视力？(至少两条建议)要求：1.字数：80100字。开头已给出，不计入总字数。2文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。参 考 词 汇：eyesight视 力；nearsighted近 视 的；have good eyesight视力好；have bad eyesight视力差One possible version：Quite a lot of students have bee nearsighted now.I think the main reason is that students dont have a good habit while studying.B

18、ad eyesight brings trouble to our life and study.For example，if we leave our glasses at home，we cant take notes in class.We will feel unfortable when we swim with glasses.Here is my advise：on the one hand，teenagers shouldnt study for hours without breaks because our eyes need to relax.On the other h

19、and，having sports and doing eye exercises are also helpful.Its very important to have good eyesight.So lets take good care of our eyes.B(2015，中考考前适应性训练)“任性(willful)”，可以意为恣意放纵，但是如今的我们更愿意把它理解为率真不做作，坚持自我，不言放弃。有时候，当我们面对困难时，确实需要一点“任性”。请根据以下三个提示，写一篇英语短文：Are you easy to give up when facing problems?Tell us

20、 a story that you overcame the problem you met.Please list at least 2 ways to deal with the problems.要求：1.词数不少于80词；2不要出现真实的人名和校名。One possible version：Life is full of ups and downs.When we are in trouble，we should not give up easily.What matters is to face the problems bravely and spare no effort to

21、make a new start.I used to be a top student in primary school.But much to my disappointment，in the first math exam，I only got 85 points.Instead of feeling frustrated，I soon calmed down and managed to find out the reasons for my failure.Then I went out of my way to study following the teachers advice

22、 such as carefully previewing the lessons，correcting my mistakes and learning from them.My hard work was rewarded withgreat progress.Along with happiness，there must be problems and difficulties on the way to success.When we are in trouble，it is better to stick to our dream.We must keep believing our

23、selves.Furthermore，we are expected to e up with different ways to solve the problems.In addition，asking for help is necessary at times.Keep trying and you are sure to succeed!C(2015，陕西)请根据提示内容，以A visit to home为题，为学校英文报写一篇短文，叙述你探亲或访友的一词经历。提示：When？Whose home？How？What?Your feelings.要求：1.请将短文题目补充完整；2参考提

24、示内容，可适当发挥；3语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；4文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；5词数：不少于70词。One possible version：A visit to my friends homeLast Sunday afternoon，I went to my friends home.It was not far.So I went there by bike.In her home，we watched an English movie and listened to music.We also made some toys with old clothes.It

25、 was not easy，but we tried.We cut the clothes into pieces.Then we put the pieces and other things together.At last，these pieces were made into different toys.How lovely they were！We had much fun when we did it.We were very proud.What a pleasant visit!D(2015，泰安)假如你是某中学初三(1)班班长李华，请你为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，记述你们

26、前天主题班会“To be sent to school or not”的讨论情况。内容要点包括：1.部分同学认为上学应该接送，省时又安全；2部分同学认为步行或骑自行车是最好的方式，环保又健身；3你的看法和建议。注意：1.词数：801002可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；3文中不要出现真实姓名和校名。One possible version：To be sent to school or notNowadays many parents often send their kids to school by car.Should we be sent to school or not？Today we

27、have a class meeting and have a discussion.Different students have different ideas.Some think we should be sent to school by car.It can save us a lot of time.Whats more，it is a safe way to go to school.Others think we should go to school on foot or by bike as often as possible.Regular walking and cy

28、cling are not only good for our health but also good for our environment.In my opinion，we should be sent to school.It provides us a good chance to municate with our parents.So we can get on well with them.E(2015，江西)英文有句谚语“East，west，homes best.”某英文报以此为标题，向广大中学生征文。请根据下面图表信息写一篇短文，介绍你家的情况。内容包括：你家的居室及居住环

29、境、家庭成员及家庭成员之间的关系，并谈谈如何让你的家更美好。提示：1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；2短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；3词数不少于80,开头已给出，不计入总词数。One possible version：East，west，homes bestThere is an old saying，“East，West，Homes Best.”I live in a house in the countryside.Theres a big living room，three bedrooms，a kitchen and a washroom in it.There a

30、re some trees and flowers around my house.The air is really clean，and I often hear birds singing.There are four people in my family.Theyre my parents，my sister and IWe are helpful and friendly.And we always get on will with each other.I am happy I have a good family.I will do what I can do to help d

31、o more housework and farm work.Ill study harder so that I can make more money in the future.With our effort，Im sure my home will be better and better.F(2015，嘉兴)文明社会，从我做起。请就下图的不文明行为和所产生的后果用英语写一篇短文，向校刊English Garden投稿，倡导做文明人。注意：1.短文必须包括所给图片的信息，合理想象并补全第3幅图片的内容。2必须谈谈你对此事的看法。3文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。4词数：80100。短文

32、首句：Last Sunday afternoon，I went to the park with my cousin.参考词汇：果皮 skin，踩在上摔倒 slip on(slipped，slipped)，救护车ambulanceOne possible version：Last Sunday afternoon，I went to the park with my cousin.When we were walking around，we saw a boy eat a banana and throw the skin on the ground.Just as we were going

33、 to pick it up，a man slipped on the skin.He was badly hurt and couldnt move.We called 120.Soon an ambulance came and took him to the hospital.It was really bad of the boy to do that!We must say no to this bad behaviour.Everyone should care about his daily behaviour and follow the social rules so tha

34、t the world will be a better place.G(2015，内江)假设你校英语报English Star为初三学生开设了个专栏：谈谈你的个坏习惯。请根据以下提示，用英语写篇短文，向报社投稿。(1)你的坏习惯是什么？(2)产生该坏习惯的原因是什么？(3)该习惯产生的不良后果是什么？(写两点)(4)你打算如何改掉这个坏习惯？要求：(1)所写内容必须包括以上要点；(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；(3)内容连贯，并进行合理拓展；(4)100词左右；(5)题目已写好，不计入总词数。One possible version：My bad habitMy bad habit is

35、that I spend too much time playing too many puter games.In the past，I thought it was fun and could make me relaxed.But now I realize Im wrong.On the one hand，this bad habit has made me always forget to do homework and my study has fallen behind.On the other hand，playing puter games is bad for my eye

36、s and I have to wear glasses.So I have made up my mind to give up playing them.I will spend more time studying and doing more sports instead.H(2015，衡阳)你喜欢阅读吗？阅读能使人明智，使人充实。请你以“Reading Is Very Important”为题，写一篇有关阅读的短文。要求：1.阅读的益处；2你的阅读习惯(喜欢的书籍、阅读的时间、地点、购书方式等)；3你的阅读体会；4你的阅读计划；5号召大家多阅读。提示：1.短文中不得出现真实的人名和地

37、名；2短文中应包含至少3个要点；3书写工整、语句通顺、连贯，词数不少于80。注意：文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。One possible version：Reading Is Very ImportantReading can not only open up our eyes but also improve our knowledge.I like reading a lot.In my spare time，I often read newspapers and magazines，from which I can get lots of fun and learn about what

38、s going on around the world.I also read my favorite books such as story books，novels and so on，which make me relaxed and happy.On weekends I usually spend a whole afternoon reading in the library.And I often read for about half an hour before going to bed.Now I usually buy my favorite books online.S

39、ummer vacation is ing.I plan to read more English books to improve my English abilities.I often share my favorite books with my friends and classmates.Its time for us to form a good reading habit because its important and necessary for us.Lets do more reading together.I(2015，自贡)假如你是Kim，请给你最想交流的人写一封信

40、，介绍你某一学科的一次考试，包括考前、考中和考后的感受。提示：1.请补全横线上的称谓；2文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名；3词数在80词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Possible version 1：Dear Carol，Im writing to tell you about my English exam.You know Im not good at English.I find it difficult.My English teacher advised me to listen to something interesting and do more exercise

41、s.I did what she told me and made progress.We had an English exam last week.I was very nervous.But I tried to keep my cool and did very carefully.For the first time I did well.Im so happy and I feel successful now.I want to share my happiness with you.Lets help each other.Yours，Kim Possible version

42、2：Dear Mum and Dad，Im writing to tell you about my math exam.Im sorry I failed again.Before the test，I didnt sleep well，and I had a headache.So when the test began the next day，I felt a little nervous and didnt do very well.After the exam the teacher talked to me，and I promised him to work harder.I

43、will make good use of time and listen carefully in class.Ill ask the teacher for help after class.Please dont be angry.Im sure Ill improve my math quickly.Believe me and I can fly.Yours，KimJ(2015，青海)假如你是某英语杂志社编辑王林，根据下面中学生小明的来信，给他写一封回信，解答他的困惑。要求：1.观点鲜明，结构合理，内容连贯；2词数80左右，信的开头和落款已给出，不计入总词数。Dear editor，

44、Nowadays，many junior high school students are pletely getting relaxed from busy study after graduation，so what they would like to do most is to throw books away，hang out with friends at daytime and stay up late at night playing puter games or watching TV.Whats your opinion about this？Im looking forw

45、ard to your reply.Yours sincerely，XiaomingOne possible version：Dear Xiaoming，In my opinion，graduation from junior high school is a turning point of life.As for teenagers，the most important thing is to have a strong body，so we should fall into a good habit of study and rest according to the timetable

46、.Besides，learning is a lifelong journey，therefore，we should make a good preparation for high school courses and never stop learning.It will be better if we take part in some social activities to enrich our experience.Later in our life，we will face many challenges including failure and success.No mat

47、terwhat we may meet with，my advice is，“Keep moving！Dont stop！”Yours，Wang LinK(2014，苏州)假设你校为了配合创建“文化校园高效课堂”活动，最近以“学生做作业时是否应该在网上找答案？”为题做了一个调查。调查发现一些学生赞成，但许多学生反对这种做法。请你根据调查情况和下列表格中的要点提示，以“Think Before You Search Online”为题用英语写一篇短文。注意：1词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；2短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；3短文中不得出现真实的

48、人名、校名等相关信息。赞成者反对者你自己观点1.不会做题2.学习别人3.节省时间1.不利能力提升2.不利思维发展(至少2点)考生自拟One possible version：Think Before You Search OnlineSome students now have a new use for the Internethelping them with their homework.But different people have different ideas about it.Some students agree with it.They sometimes dont kn

49、ow the answers to the problems，so they have to turn to the Internet.They think they can learn from other people.At the same time，its easy and it saves time.However，not all the students wele this.Many students think simply copying the answers wont improve their abilities and it may make students stop thinking.I think students should first think over the problems by themselves.If we use the Internet properly，it could be a good way to study.