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1、Follow-up writing characters:event:Reuben(a 12-year-old boy)Dora(the boys mother)The shopkeeper Reuben,a 12-year-old boy,wanted to buy a beautiful brooch for his mother,Dora.Read for brief information theme:LoveRead for detailed information1.Why did the brooch cause his heart racing?2.What kind of p

2、erson is his mother?3.Whats Reubens behavior when asking the shopkeeper what he wanted?4.In order to collect enough money,what did he decide to do?A boy saw a beautiful brooch in a shop window that set his heart racing.But the price was too high for him.Slim and beautiful,she was the center of the h

3、ome,the glue that held it together.Standing proud and straight in his flour-sack shirt and washed-out trousers,he told the shopkeeper what he wanted.On hearing the sound of hammering from a side street,Reuben suddenly had an idea that he would raise money by selling used nail bags.非谓语非谓语同位语从句同位语从句定语

4、从句定语从句形容词作状语形容词作状语beginning:Wish to present his mother with an expensive giftdeveloping:Carry out his plan secretly to buy the giftending:Discuss the questions,write down some pointsPredict 1、How did Reuben find enough used nail bags?2、What trouble might Reuben go through?3、What encouraged him to in

5、sist?4、What did Reuben feel during the money-saving process?Every day after school,Reuben started his plan.Organize the points by using advanced sentence patterns.sentence patterns(句式句式)定语从句定语从句,状语从句状语从句,名词性从句名词性从句,强调句强调句.非谓语非谓语Predict 1、What would Reuben do?2、Whats his mothers reaction?Finally the

6、time came!To my surprise,my daughter who always drives me crazy presented me with the flowers.The moment I saw the flowers,tears welled up in my eyes.Moved and speechless,I hugged her tightly.It is my daughter who teaches me a lesson of love.定语从句定语从句状语从句状语从句形容词作状语形容词作状语强调句强调句A possible versionEvery

7、day after school,Reuben started his plan.Cold and hungry,Reuben wandered the streets,searching for the nail bags carefully.To save more money,he even decided to deliver papers in the early morning.Exhausted and tired as he felt,he still insisted.It was the brooch in the shop window that reminded him

8、 what he did was worthwhile.After a long time of hard work,he made it eventually.Paragraph 1:Finally the time came!A possible versionParagraph 2:Finally the time came!He took out the soda tin,poured the coins out and began to count.Five dollars!His hard work paid off!Holding the soda tin firmly,Reub

9、en rushed for the shop to buy the brooch.The moment he got the beautiful brooch,he burst through the front door and placed it in Doras hand.Never had Dora received such a gift.Speechless and happy,she held her son tightly into her arms,with tears welling up in her eyes.Homework Polish your writing b

10、y using advanced sentence patterns and proper connections.注意：所续写短文的词数应为150左右；应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。问题1.对话（直接引语）太多2.第一段行数太少（6-7行）3.无下划线4.时态乱用5.个别情节扯太远 （捡到戒指归还，失主奖励 捡钉子袋晚回家遭妈妈责骂，撒谎 受好心人捐赠）坚持Stick(stuck stuck)to doingInsist on doing Carry on捡Pick up美句赏析1.Bad a

11、s the weather was,his desire for the brooch never changed.302蓝素倩2.He ran against the strong wind,searching for the nail bags.302王轶雯3.It was his determination as well as his love to his mother that helped him to get the brooch from the shopkeeper.302徐逸文4.Staring at the money he gained,his heart was f

12、ull of excitement and happiness.302曹威5.With the dark approaching,Reuben felt tired and hungry,but love inspired him to carry on.302戴梦娜6.Every time he thought that he could buy the brooch soon,excitement and happiness crowded in on him.302戴梦娜7.He rushed to the shop with money tightly held in his hand

13、.302戴梦娜8.Love is really a fantastic thing that makes the family warm.302钱雨薇9.Love,such a magical thing,made the family full of warmth in the cold days.302孙雪颖10.Mothers love inspired him to overcome all the difficulties.302谭荧莹11.He picked up the nail bags one after another,exhausted but satisfied.302

14、谭12.Every time he thought of his mother,he felt energetic to raise the money.302钱滢13.The heavier the soda tin was,the happier he was.302 胡雪苑14.With the beautiful brooch held in hands carefully,he walked straight to his mother.301周可行15.She held Reuben in arms,enjoying the happiest moment in her life.

15、301周16.No matter how bad the weather was,he still ran from one corner to another,tired but happy.301金东辉17.Nevertheless,he still did it happily without complaint.301高展阳18.Mother opened the box with a surprised look.301 赵烨男19.Bad as the weather was,he carried on seeking nail bags to exchange them for

16、five cents.301施怡潇A possible versionEvery day after school,Reuben started his plan.Cold and hungry,Reuben wandered the streets,searching for the nail bags carefully.To save more money,he even decided to deliver papers in the early morning.Exhausted and tired as he felt,he still insisted on.It was the

17、 brooch in the shop window that reminded him of what he did was worthwhile.After a long time of hard work,he made it eventually.Paragraph 1:Finally the time came!A possible versionParagraph 2:Finally the time came!He took out the soda tin,poured the coins out and began to count.Five dollars!His hard

18、 work paid off!Holding the soda tin firmly,Reuben rushed for the shop to buy the brooch.The moment he got the beautiful brooch,he burst through the front door and placed it in Doras hand.Never had Dora received such a gift.Speechless and happy,she held her son tightly into her arms,with tears welling up in her eyes.