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1、高考英语满分作文高考英语满分作文 1 1作文题目 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友 Bob 将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为 25 平方米，月租 500 元。注意：1词数：100 左右：2参考词汇：房租Tent(n.).Im veryhappy to receive your letter,and Im glad to hear that you will goto China to learn Chinese here.I have already found a fiat for you.It

2、is on Fangcao Street,which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.Bus No.11 can take you there,and it is one stop before the ChineseSchool.The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms,one of which isbedroom,the other two are bathroom and kitchen.There are a bed,asofa,a desk and some chairs in this 25

3、 square-metres small fiat,andthe rent is 500 yuan per month.Maybe this fiat is not as good asyour wish,but Ill try my best to meet your needs.If it is notsuitable enough,write to me and I will look for another better place.Hope you will come here soon!All the best!Yours,Li Hua满分理由本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自

4、然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以which，引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。Dear Bob,Welcome toChina!You wrote to me to find a place for you.I have found anapartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School.It is on thethird floor and therere three rooms in it:a bedroom,a kitchen,and a bathroom.There is a

5、bed,a sofa,a desk and a chair in thebedroom.The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan permonth.Also from this house you can get to your school easily.Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building.Itis only one stop.At last,will you please tell me the time youarrive?Th

6、en IU be able to meet you at the airport,see you.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua满分理由本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。Dear Bob,How are you these days?Im soglad to know that youll come to our city to learn Chinese.Youasked me to find a place for you.Now Ive found one whi

7、ch I thinkis pretty good.The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near theNo.11 bus stop.Its just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.There are three rooms,a kitchen,a bathroom and a bedroom.Though itis not very big,only 25 square metres,I think it is suitable.Bythe way,the rent is 500 yuan pe

8、r month.I hope youll like it.Ifnot,Ill try to find another place for you.Yours,Li Hua满分理由本文内在逻辑性很强，由远及近。由外及内，层次分明，错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处，很出彩，再则结构完整，从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。作文：Dear Bob,Im glad to hear from you.Welcome to our city in september.Ive found a suitable house foryou.The house is on Fang Cao Street,not

9、 far from the JianxinChinese School.If you take the No.11 bus,it is just one stop.It is a flat on the third floor of a building.It has three rooms,aliving-room,a bathroom and a kitchen.You can cook yourself.Themirror,the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you.In theliving-room,there is a

10、bed,a sofa and a desk with chair.The deskis next to the window.It will be good for study.The total size is25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.Will you besatisfied with this flat,or you want another one?Just let me know.Ill try my best to help you.Yours,Li Hua满分理由本文内容详实，描述具体细腻，用词适当准确，如“

11、suitablehouse”、“not far from等，另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。假如你是王华，18 岁生日后，真的有种长大成人的感觉。于是你想就父母对你的关怀和你今后的打算，以书信形式同爸爸妈妈谈谈。信的开头如下：DearMum and Dad,How are you doing?范文Dear Mum and Dad,How are you doing?I m writing to you of my gratitude for yourhaving brought me up and my future plan.Dear Mum and Dad,I amalready 18 y

12、ears old,which shows that I have grown up.Whenever I amthinking of this,I cant help feeling grateful to you.It is youwho first give me encoutagement when I meet with difficulties,especially when I am not getting along well with my studies.Indeed,your inspiration seems to be a lamp,which offers me li

13、ght of hope,courage and confidence.And more importantly,you are always teachingme to be good to others,and try to contribute to our society.Dear Mum and Dad,I an now a senior three student,who is facing thecompetitive national college entrance examinations,So first of all,I ought to try my best to p

14、ass the exams.I am sure that through mygreat efforts I can and will be able to realize my beautiful dream ofbeing a key university student.Then,I will strive to be anindependent youth.The social situation I will be facing must be morecompetitive,so I will develop and prepare myself to be a youth wit

15、ha strong sense of cooperation and competition.Believe in me,Mum andDad,I will make a difference.Best regards to you.Yourssincerely,Wang Hua根据报道东方绿洲(Oriental Greenboat)要更名，有外国人建议用”Discovery Land”“Family Park”或“YouthHeaven”。写出你的看法；或者你自己拟个名字，并陈述理由。范文如下：As is reported,Oriental Greenboat is planning to

16、change itsname.Many citizens as well as the foreigners have great interest ingiving a new name such as“Discovery Land”“Family Park”or“Youth Heaven”.It suddenly occurs to me that why dont wecall it“The World of Discovery”.Ive got several reasons toaccount for it.First of all,the word“world”has a more

17、meaningful definition than“park”or“land”.According to myvisit,Oriental Greenboat covers a vast area,and it is moreappropriate to call it a“world”rather than a“park”.Secondly,Oriental Greenboat provide the chance to enhance therelationship between family members and promote friendship betweenthe yout

18、h.We are give the opportunity to relax and enjoy,thusdiscovering what is of great importance in our life.Thirdly,students are involved in many activities there.They come to discoverhow they should cooperate and overcome the difficulties with theirown efforts.This is a world for them to discover how wonderful andable they are!To sum up,I think it would be a wise choice toname it“The World of Discovery”.