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1、一:具体化：我是一个老师-我是一个英语老师我是上海环球雅思主教雅思写作的老师关键关键：一双慧眼：能够敏锐地敏锐地找出一个句子中比较笼统的，适合用具体化的思路进比较笼统的，适合用具体化的思路进行改写的对象。行改写的对象。In the last century，the first man walking on the moon said：“It is a big step formankind。In the last century：In the 1960s（20 世纪 60 年代);Man:American astronaut Armstrong;Said:announcedInIn theth

2、e 1960s,1960s,when AmericanAmerican ArmstrongArmstrong landed on the moon for the first time,he proudlyannouncedannounced that it was a great step for the mankind二：单词转换：优先转换：动词；形容词Food can be produced much more cheaply today because of improved fertilizers andbetter machinery.Produce;cheaply；improve

3、d；better；Produce-manufactureCheaply-economically(improved；better）-advancedNowadays,people can manufacturemanufacture food much more economicallyeconomically thanks to moreadvancedadvanced fertilizers and machinery.谓语动词转换：谓语动词转换：英语句子不外乎是两种结构：实义动词和 be 动词结构因此可以在什么怎么样和什么是什么之间什么怎么样和什么是什么之间进行切换切换来实现改写。Man

4、y people say teachers should only teach students academic subjects；Others sayteachers should also take the responsibility of teaching students to judge what is rightand wrong.Discuss the both viewpoints and give your own opinion.第一句：teach sb sth：（什么怎么样-什么是什么）老师只应该教学生功课（什么怎么样）-教好学生功课是老师唯一的职责(什么是什么）So

5、me people believe that it it is is thethe solesole tasktask forfor a a teacherteacher toto introduceintroduce academicacademicknowledge to the studentsknowledge to the students。下面一句试试看：Others say teachers should also take the responsibility of teachingstudents to judge what is right and wrong。（1）Som

6、e others hold that a truly outstanding teacher should be the mentor of bothshould be the mentor of bothknowledge and life to their disciplesknowledge and life to their disciples。(2)Some others saythe responsibility of a teacherthe responsibility of a teacher are not justnot just passing on professio

7、nal skills，butbutalso the improvements of soundalso the improvements of sound judgmentAlthough the practice has its benefits，the potential problemsshould never beshould never be ignored.Despite the benefits,on no accounton no account should the potential problems be ignored.(五)加上常用句型:Air travel has

8、benefited a lot of peopleAir travel has benefited a lot of people，but it is claimed that nonbut it is claimed that non essential travelessential travelshould be reducedshould be reduced。To what extent do you agree or disagree？People are involved in the discussion about whetherPeople are involved in

9、the discussion about whether air travel should be restricted。试一试:Do you think it is better to send criminals to jail or let them receive education orjob training?开头句：The treatment of criminal has been open to debate in recent years。加上常用句型加上常用句型：There is much controversy over whetherThere is much con

10、troversy over whether to send criminals to jails or or tolet them receive education or job training.（一般的水平）Paraphrase 往往是多种技巧的综合运用：SomeSome peoplepeople believe that air travel shouldbelieve that air travel should bebe prohibitedprohibited as itas it usesuses upup fuelfuel resourcesresourcesand caus

11、es pollutionand causes pollution。Do you agree or disagree with the statement？You should useyour own experience to support your argument.1。具体化不好的：critics 或者 opponents(反对者)好的：supporter(支持者)或者 advocator(倡导者)2。单词转换：prohibit,use up,causeProhibit-banUse up fuel resources-consume toomuch fuelCause-contribu

12、te toCause；lead to；result in指 A 造成 B 的唯一因素而现在是一果多因,所以用 contribute3.关键词：andAnd-as well asAccording to some critics critics（Some critics argue thatcritics argue that），air travel should bebannedbannedduedueto the factto the fact that it contributes tocontributes to the environmental problems as well as

13、 consumes toomuch fuel。Some people believe that air travel should be prohibited as it uses up fuel resources andcauses pollutionPolice in Britain do not carry guns.Some people believe that it will make citizensunprotected，but some suggest that it would reduce violence in society.Discuss thosetwo views。背景句：In some countries,it is a convention that police do not carry guns.加上常用句型：There is a perception thatThere is a perception that it will make citizens unprotected，while awhile acounter-argument iscounter-argument is that it would reduce violence in society.（普通印象)