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1、广州市中考英语作文专题复习一个人情况 Revised by BETTY on December 25,202020182018 年广州市中考英语作文专题复习（一）个人情况年广州市中考英语作文专题复习（一）个人情况一、与专题相关的话题项目：一、与专题相关的话题项目：Personal information/Daily routines/personal interests/feelings andmoods二、与话题相关的知识准备：二、与话题相关的知识准备：1.相关单元：七上 Unit 2 Daily life,Unit8 Collecting things七下?Unit 8 From hobb

2、y to career八下?unit 8 Life in the future2.语法相关：一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时3.词语相关：描写人物外貌特征的形容词有：描写人物外貌特征的形容词有：tall，short,old,young,thin/slim,strong,heavy,beautiful,attractive,handsome,fat/plump,well built 等描写人物性格特征的形容词：描写人物性格特征的形容词：kind,friendly,smart,outgoing，funny,cute,serious,clever,quiet,lovely,honest,shy,l

3、ovely，hard-working,generous,careful,confident,active?等。描写兴趣爱好时可能用到的单词或短语有：描写兴趣爱好时可能用到的单词或短语有：hobby,favorite,be interested in,be fond of,enjoy/like doing,be keenon,be friendly to,preferto等。4.经典句型：I study at Middle School.I study at Middle School.Im in Class Grade.Im in Class Grade.I am good at.I am g

4、ood at.My best subject is.My best subject is.I am keen on.I am keen on.I am interested in.I am interested in.My hobby is doing.My hobby is doing.I enjoy doing very much.I enjoy doing very much.I think it is to.I think it is to.I study very hard at school.I study very hard at school.I want to be in t

5、he future.I want to be in the future.I used to beI used to beIm interested inIm interested inI oftenI oftenI practicevery hard.I practicevery hard.I am gladI am gladI want toI want towhenIgrow up.whenIgrow up.My favourite subject isMy favourite subject isYou are the candle lighting my future.You are

6、 the candle lighting my future.（你就像一支蜡烛,照亮我的前程）二、经典例题：（2009 年 广州市中考考题）你叫李华，你校将开展一个题为“All about me”的英文写作活动。请按要求写一篇英语短文。内容包括：1、你的爱好；2、你的优点和缺点；3、用具体事例说明你的某个优点或缺点。注意：1、词数 80 左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）；2、不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。All about meMy name is Li Hua and Im from Class 2,Junior 3.解题思路：解题思路：1.审题：a.本文共有 3 个要

7、点b.时态主要采用一般现在时c.人称是_I_2.可能用到的短语和句型a.你的爱好enjoy/like doing,be friendly to,preferto等。My hobby is doing.My hobby is doing.I am keen on.I am keen on.b.你的优点hard-working,generous,careful,confident,activeMy best subject is.My best subject is.I am good at.I am good at.My favourite subject isMy favourite subj

8、ect isc.你的缺点Myweakest?subject is.Myweakest?subject is.I ampoor?at.I ampoor?at.3.3.成文成文：I like playing football and basketball.I am always playing basketball on?.lesson.Atmy free times,I often play football with my friends.We areenjoyourself.At study,I goodat maths,but I poorin English.I cant gethigh

9、 grade at my English.I cant get high grade at my English,nowIamdomore English exectriseso that I can improve my English.I should do morein my study.点评：整篇文章对要点的把握基本到位，但是拼写和简单的语法错误较多。部分句子的表达过于中式4.检查思路：完成作文自查表：1.如果没有问题的，请在项目后打。2.如果有问题，请在项目中圈出来，并在文中做出修改。项目布局与内容要点第一次自查第二次自查人称 时态、主谓一致动词搭配、介词搭配?拼写错误?好词好句?分

10、项分档评分表分项分档评分表项目内容6 分要素给分表5切合题意，6-体现要点有所发挥21055准 确语 法性6 分词 汇机械性：大小写，拼写和格式等错误流 畅结构性3 分自评总分：5.5.参考例文：参考例文：54 42102 210000My name is Li Hua and Im from Class 2,Junior 3.I like pop music.Ivecollected a lot of CDs and I always do my homework with music on.Myfriends think I am a happy boy and they like to

11、spend time with me.ButIm not a very hard-working student like some of my friends.I often goto movies during weekends,sometimes I watch TV late at night and playsports a lot even before important exams.My parents feel worried about me,but I still do well at school.Maybe I should study harder,then I c

12、anlearn better.(增加正能量，给老师好印象 0三、练习三、练习：假如你叫李芳，昨天从报纸上看到海珠区要组织一次“全民学英语”活动，在暑假要招聘一批英语志愿者的广告，你想应聘。请你用英语写一封简短的书信，根据表格提供信息，表示愿意为广州市民服务。姓名姓名身高身高性格性格爱好爱好特长特长其他情况其他情况Dear Sir,I read your advertisement in the newspaper yesterday,I am writing to tellyou Id like to work as a volunteer for the Haizhu district.注意

13、：1.词数 80-100 个2.文中不得出现真实的地址和姓名3.可适当发挥。解题思路解题思路：1.审题：a.本文共有个要点b.时态主要采用c.人称是_2.可能用到的词语（写在要点旁边）_3.可能用到的句型_李芳160cm外向（outgoing）体育运动英语,唱歌，跳舞年龄年龄健康状况健康状况15良好4.成文：_检查思路：完成作文自查表：1.如果没有问题的，请在项目后打。2.如果有问题，请在项目中圈出来，并在文中做出修改。项目布局与内容要点人称 时态、主谓一致动词搭配、介词搭配?拼写错误?好词好句?参考例文参考例文：Dear Sir,I read your advertisement in th

14、e newspaper yesterday,I am writing to tellyou Id like to work as a volunteer for the Haizhu district.My name is Li Fang.I am fifteen,andI am 160 cm.I am an outgoing girl,sosoI would liketoI would liketomakefriends with othersfriends with others.In my free timeIn my free time,I like doing some sports

15、,such assuch asrunning,swimming,playing table tennisand so onand so on.I think it is good for ourhealthI think it is good for ourhealthand I am quite healthy.I am also good atsinging and dancing.My bestsubjectMy bestsubjectisEnglish.I alwaysfind the chancefind the chancetotopractise my English.And I won the first prize in the English speechcompetition in our school last year.If I am?lucky enough toI will try my best to do the job welllucky enough toI will try my best to do the job well.Yours truly,第一次自查第二次自查Li Fang