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1、 1/2 写作提升:如何写好新闻报道 写作探究 新闻报道的结构一般分为四个部分:(一)标题、(二)导语、(三)主体、(四)结语。标题是新闻的题目,是编辑对最有新闻价值内容的浓缩、概括、提炼和再创造。撰写标题是为了撷取新闻要点、诠释新闻意义、吸引读者阅读。在今天繁忙的现代社会中,报纸的读者大多是标题浏览者。导语是消息开头的第一段或第一句话,它扼要地揭示出消息的核心内容。主体是消息的主要部分,它用充足的事实表现主题,是对导语内容的进一步开展和阐释。新闻报道的结语一般是最后一句话或者一段话,通常对全文内容作概括性的总结,或对新闻事件的发展趋势作出预测。有时,作者根据报道的事实在结语中提出令人深思的问
2、题。一般来说,标题、导语和主体是构成新闻报道的必不可少的三部分。可根据新闻报道的内容而确定是否要结语或其它内容(如事件和历史背景等),有时,还可将它们暗含在主体中。在写新闻报道时,首先要注意新闻的标题具有语言幽默风趣的特点,有较强的吸引力。同时,写作依据的材料要充分,要用事实来说话,语言力求简洁。最后,报道中要有亮点,能引人深思或能让人产生强烈的兴趣。典题示例 近日,在临沂确诊了第一例甲型 H1-N1 流感。患者是一个 6 岁的孩子,加拿大籍。从加拿大回国后出现了相关的甲型 H1-N1 流感症状。现在临沂接受治疗。官方正在寻找与其接触过的相关人员。同时专家呼吁:我们个人要做好防范,注意卫生。参
3、考词汇:甲型流感 the H1-N1 flu,症状 symptoms,确诊的 confirmed 写作要点 1.导语:陈述临沂确诊第一例甲型流感的客观事实,引起话题。2.主体:分析患者的情况,及官方的举措。3.结语:官方及专家的建议。4.要尽量做到详略得当,层次分明,条理清晰。参考范文 Linyi has reported its first confirmed case of the H1-N1 flu Linyi has reported its first confirmed case of the H1-N1 flu.The patient is in 2/2 Linyi now,a
4、city of Shandong province.His symptoms appeared after he returned from Canada.Health officials say the patient is a 6-year-old child.He developed fever and other symptoms after arriving in Linyi on an Air Shandong flight.Health authorities are looking for those whove been in close contact with him.H
5、ealth authorities said,“Passengers who traveled in the same carriage of the train or people who knew them,please report to health authorities as soon as possible.Well make efforts to ensure your health safety.”Experts appealed that we should prevent ourselves from the H1-N1 flu,and we should keep ou
6、rselves clean.For example,we should wash our hands frequently and soap should be effective against all flu viruses.Consider buying a mask in case you need it when you go out.Try to avoid people who are coughing and sneezing.Keep sick kids out of school,and stay home from work if you are sick.Avoid s
7、urfaces and objects that may be handled by many people.名师点评 1.本篇范文涵盖了新闻要点内容,语言简练,详略得当,尤其根据专家的建议进行了丰富,使我们应该注意的内容更加具体化。具有新闻报道的实用性和可读性。2.本文使用了 authority,appeal,frequently,effective,handle,be in contact with,make effort to do,preventfrom等高级词汇和短语,丰富了文章语言。3.多出使用了定语从句(Passengers who traveled or people who knew them;Try to avoid people who are coughing and all sneezing;Avoid surfaces and objects that may be handled),还有非谓语动词(consider buying a mask)以及状语从句(in case you need it when you go out)等复杂句式。句式灵活是本文的一大亮点。4.丰富了专家的建议,体现了半开放式作文对学生所要求具备的能力和素质,是本文的精彩之处。
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