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1、叙述叙述视角不同的角不同的续写写结尾尾1.有限有限视角角主人公见证者WhenIarrivedat6a.m.inthelargehospitalkitchen,Rosewasalreadycheckingnametagsonthetrays(托盘).“Hi,ImJanet.”Itriedtosoundcheerful,althoughIalreadyknewRosesreputationforbeingimpossibletoworkwith.“Imscheduledtoworkwithyouthisweek.”Rosestoppedwhatshewasdoingandpeeredoverher

2、readingglasses.Icouldtellfromherexpressionthatshewasntpleasedtoseeastudentworker.“Whatdoyouwantmetodo?Startthecoffee?”Iasked.Rosecoldlynoddedandwentbacktocheckingnametags.Ifilledthe40-cuppotwithwaterandbeganmakingcoffeewhenRoseyelled,“Thatsnotthewaytomakecoffee.”Shesteppedinandtookover.NothingIdidpl

3、easedher.Allmorning,hereagleeyesmissednothingandhersharpwordshurt.Fightingbacktears,Iwrestledwithmydilemmaaloneinmyroomafteralongday.“WhatshallIdo?”Theanswercaughtmecompletelybysurprise:IneededtoloveRose.WorkingwithRosethenextmorning,IignoredthehurtfulremarksthrowninmydirectionanddidthingsRoseswayas

4、muchaspossible.IsilentlybegantosurroundRosewithawarmblanketoflove.Overthenextfewdays,anamazingthingbegantohappen.Myfocusshiftedfromwhatshewasdoingtome.Iwastheonewhochangedfirst.Ashericytensionbegantomeltaway,Rosecriticizedlessandless.Throughouttherestofthesummer,wehadnumerousopportunitiestoworktoget

5、her.Eachtime,sheseemedtrulyhappytoseeme.AsIworkedwiththislonelywoman,Ilistenedtoher.Ilearnedthatshewasburdenedbyelderlyparentswhoneededhercare,byherownhealthproblemsandbyanalcoholichusbandshewasthinkingofleaving.Thedaysslippedbyquickly.Isoonwouldbereturningasafull-timeuniversitystudent.【来源：南师附中】(Par

6、a1)Oneday,whileIwasworkingaloneinoneofthehospitalkitchens,Roseenteredtheroom.(Para2)AlthoughIneversawRoseagain,Istillrememberhervividly.【来源：南师附中】AlthoughIneversawRoseagain,Istillrememberhervividly.Imissedheronceeaglebutkindeyes,Imissedherhumorousremarks,Imissedherlastwarmhug.Idecidedtovisitheroneaft

7、ernoon,onlytofindRosehadresignedbutleftmealetter.Itread,“MydearJanney,youtoldmeeverycloudhadasilverliningifyoudaredtochangeItistimeformetoact.Blessme.”Istoodtheremotionless,asifalightingofhappinessstruckme.“Comeon,Rose!”Iexclaimedinmyheart.InmymistedeyesIheardRosesjokingblame,“Thatsnotthewayto.”Igig

8、gled.2.全知全知视角角例一1.有限有限视角角主人公见证者Finally the time came when the king had to be thrown away to the island.Amidthefuryroarofwildanimals,（氛围）athrilloffearranthroughtheking.（有删节）Inthecompanyofsoldiers,hestepped/landedontheisland.Astheyoungmanhadwished,thescaryislandwastransformedintoabeautifulplace.Deepdo

9、wnheknewthatthecouragetoconquerchallenge,alongwithfullpreparations,wouldfinallypayoff.（有删节）Finally the time came then the king had to be thrown away to the island.Everyonewassurprisedtofindthattheislandhadbecomeaprosperousvillage.Theworkershadsettledontheislandandturnedoveranewleaf.Theyextendedtheir

10、sincerestwelcometothekingandofferedhimacozyshedtolivein.Bathedinthesunandfeelingthebreezefromthesea,thekingknewthatanewpageoflifewasabouttounfold.He,withhiswisdomanddetermination,canchangehisdestiny.2.全知全知视角角Finally the time came when the king had to be thrown away to the island.Theyoungkingwascalmt

11、oaccepttheawfuldestiny.Thestrongsoldierscametohispalace.Buttheysaid,“Wecomeundertheconstitution.Butfiveyearsaretooshortforamercifulking.Weappreciateyourdiligenceforthekingdom.Youmaybethekinguntilyourdeath.”Theyoungkingwassurprised.Eventhoughtheruleisruthless,thetendermercycanwarmpeoplesheartwhichwil

12、lfightagainsttherule.反面例子：反面例子：Finally the time came when the king had to be thrown away to the island.Unwillingly,withtearsintheireyes,thesoldiersaccompaniedhimaboard.Beforetheysetsail,asthekingwatchedthehugeswarmofpeople-theentirenation,tobeexact-kneelingonthebeachpleadinghimnottoabandonthem,henot

13、icedamanrushingtowardshisdirection.Theman,withthemostdelightedexpression,shoutedatthetopofhislungs,“theconstitutionhasbeenmodified;anewrulehasbeenpassed,Hewhobenefitsthepeopleshallnotbethrown!”主题被吃了？总结思考思考真真题思考思考JustafterNewYears,beforeschoolvacationended,Iwentoutforawalk.ItwasawalkIdbeenmeaningtota

14、keeversincewemovedtothehouse.ItookmycamerathefirsttimeIdtakenmycameraoutsincewecametothecountryandwent,dressedinmydownjacketandwearingheavyboots.IwalkedtowardtheseeminglyabandonedhousethatIcouldseeacrossthefieldsfromtheupstairswindow.Atruckwasparkedattheendoftheroad,besideatiny,weather-beatenhouse.T

15、herewassmokecomingoutofthechimney,andcurtainsinthetwolittlewindowsoneithersideofthedoor.Adogwasintheyard,whobarkedwhenhesawmecoming.Andbesidethetruckno,actuallyinthetruck,oratleastwithhisheadinsideit,wasaman.“Hi,”Icalled.Itwouldhavebeensillytoturnaroundandstartwalkinghomewithoutsayinganything,eventh

16、oughIvepromisedmyparentsallmylifethatIwouldnevertalktostrangemen.Heliftedouthishead,agrayhead,smiledanicesmileandsaid,“MissChalmers.Imgladyouvecometovisit.”“Meg,”Isaid.Iwaspuzzled.HowdidheknowwhoIwas?“ForMargaret?”heasked,comingoverandshakingmyhand.“Forgiveme.Myhandsareverydirty.Mybatterydiesinthisc

17、oldweather.”“HowdidyouknowmynamewasChalmers?”Hewipedhishandsonatowelthatwashangingfromthedoorhandleofthetruck.“Mydear,Iapologize.Ihavenotevenintroducedmyself.MynameisWillBanks.Anditsmuchtoocoldtostandouthere.Yourfeetmustbefrozen,eveninthoseboots.Comeinside,andIllmakeuseachacupoftea.AndIlltellyouhowI

18、knowyourname.”Istoodunmoved.Hesawmehesitate,andsmiled.“Meg,”hesaid,“Imseventyyearsold.Completelyharmless,eventoabeautifulyounggirllikeyou.Comeoninandkeepmecompanyforabit,andgetwarm.”Ilaughed,becauseheknewwhatIwasthinking,andveryfewpeopleeverknowwhatImthinking.ThenIwentinhishouse.(Para1)Hetookmyjacke

19、tandhungitupwithhis,andpouredteaintotwothickpotterymugs.(Para2)Itsnicetohaveanewfriend,likeWill.参考词句参考词句1.Sometimes,asweetliecangreatlytransformoneslifeandtheseedsofkindnesswillgrowintobigtreessoonerorlater.2.Ilearnt,atthatmoment,howawhiteliecouldprotectaboysdreamandmeanwhilechangehislife.3.Yousee,s

20、ometimes,asmallgesturecanbringhugeblessings.4.Allofusknewthatloveandcaremattermorethananythingelse.5.AftersomanyyearsIvefinallyunderstoodthesilence.Myfathervaluedusmorethantheflowers,whichledhimtoforgiveus.6.Toparents,theirchildrenarethemostbeautifulflowersofalltime.7.Itwastherealworldratherthanthei

21、maginaryworldincomputergamesthatwasmoreimportanttohim,hethought.8.NotonlydidAlbertmakesomenewfriendsintheseactivities,buthealsolearnedthatover-addictionreallydidharmtodailylifeandweshouldkeepeverythinginbalance.9.Itwasatthatmomentthattheydecidednottoquarrelanymorebutlearnedtocompromise.10.Itwastheworstoftimes,butitwasalsothebestoftimes.Wecannotchangethisunfairworldthatmaketherichandpoordivide,butatleastwecanofferourkindness,forthehelplesssouls,eveninacitywhere“therearenovans.”感感谢聆听聆听