Unit2WritingEvaluation课件2021-2022学年高中英语人教版必修第一册.pptx

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1、应用文写作M1U2 Writing Evaluation:A recommendation letter In this class,well focus on evaluation from the aspects of.In this class,well focus on evaluation from the aspects of.Evaluating directionsformatbasic writing elementscontenthandwritingwritten communicationrecommendation letter Rubric（量表）1 Format

2、and basic writing elementsRubric 1Rubric 1ExcellentExcellentGoodGoodFairFairPoorPoorFormatproper formatting(recommen-dation,reasons&hopes)most parts are written correctlyall parts are present but only some are written correctlyonly some of the parts are presentBasic elementsrules of grammar,usage,ca

3、pitalization,and punctuation are followed;spelling is correctrules of.are followed with minor errors that do not distract from the readabilityletter contains a few errors(grammatical,punctuation,spelling.)letter contains numerous errorsDear Mike,Glad to know that you are coming China for your summer

4、 vacation.Id like to recommend the city of Hangzhou to you.Hangzhou locates in the east of China with an area of about 17,000 square kilos!Its a really funny place,and there is a lot to see.You can walk along the West Lake and even see some fountain displays in the evening!Its sure to enjoy your vis

5、it.You can plan your vacation today!I hope my recommendation helpful.The nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable.Yours,Li HuaWork 1Rubric 1Rubric 1ExcellenExcellent tGoodGoodFairFairFormatproper formatting(recommen-dation,reasons&hopes)most parts are written

6、 correctlyall parts are present but only some are written correctlyBasic elementsrules of grammar,usage,capitalization,and punctuation are followed;spelling is correctrules of.are followed with minor errors that do not distract from the readabilityletter contains a few errors(grammatical,punctuation

7、,spelling.)Rubric 1 Format and basic writing elementsRubric 1Rubric 1ExcellentExcellentGoodGoodFairFairPoorPoorFormatproper formatting(recommendation,reasons&hopes)most parts are written correctlyall parts are present but only some are written correctlyonly some of the parts are presentBasic element

8、srules of grammar,usage,capitalization,and punctuation are followed;spelling is correctrules of.are followed with minor errors that do not distract from the readabilityletter contains a few errors(grammatical,punctuation,spelling.)letter contains numerous errorsDear Mike,Glad to know that you are co

9、ming China for your summer vacation.Id like to recommend the city of Hangzhou to you.Hangzhou locates in the east of China with an area of about 17,000 square kilos!Its a really funny place,and there is a lot to see.You can walk along the West Lake and even see some fountain displays in the evening!

10、Its sure to enjoy your visit.You can plan your vacation today!I hope my recommendation helpful.The nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable.Yours love,Li Huacoming to ChinafunIm sure youllI hope my recommendation will be helpful.Polished work 1:Correct gramma

11、r and spelling are the first step to an excellent recommendation letter.is located inHang zhou,located in the east of China,covers an area of.square kilos!Rubric 2Rubric 2ExcellentExcellentGoodGoodFairFairPoorPoorContent a meaningful letter using strong details to indicate the recommending purposewr

12、iting may wander off topic and need more detailsbasic understanding,using limited ideas or detailsdisplay no understanding/few detailsRubric 2:Contentrecommend a foreign friend to visit Hangzhou in summer vacation meaningful*located in the east of China,an area of about 17,000 square kilos!*a really

13、 fun place*walk along the West Lake.see fountain displays in the eveningDiscussing:1.Are these reasons well-functioned for the writing purpose?2.How can you fill it with more contents?purpose aspects to state reasons your personal recommendationa travel destinationthe landscapethe weather and climat

14、elocal history and culturetypical customs and eventslocal delicacies the atmosphere of the local peopleactivities tourists can do what will impress the tourists most personal travel experience of the writerthe characteristic that will appeal to foreigners Content gives you a direction to list reason

15、s for your recommendation.Rubric 3Rubric 3ExcellentExcellentGoodGoodFairFairPoorPoorwritten communicationsomewhat clear with vague statements to support main idea;uses appropriate terms in complete sentences to communicate required messagesomewhat unclear;poor and/or inaccurate word choice in incomp

16、lete sentencesoff-topic;word choice interferes with clarity;many errors in sentence structureRubric 3 Written communicationspecific statements to reinforce main idea(vivid description and appropriate words in complete and varied sentences)purpose reasons recommend a foreign friend to visit Hangzhou

17、in summer vacation Co-work:Polish each reason following Rubric 3.Hangzhou,located in the east of China,covers an area of about 17,000 square kilos!Its a really fun place,and there is a lot to see.You can walk along the West Lake and even see some fountain displays in the evening!You are sure to enjo

18、y your visit.You can schedule your vacation today!Hangzhou,located in the east of China,covers an area of about 17,000 square kilos!Its a really fun place,and there is a lot to see.You can walk along the West Lake and even see some fountain displays in the evening!You are sure to enjoy your visit.Yo

19、u can schedule your vacation today!Examples of how to polish the language how to describe your general impression of HZ vividly:how to describe your general impression of HZ vividly:a _ modern cityencyclopedia-style encyclopedia-style languagelanguageWill the language of this style attract tourists

20、to Hangzhou?the main _ Chinese-style citya city of the _ poets in Chinese historya city _ for its historic relics and natural environmenta _ tourist destination for its history and culturea beautiful city with _ heavenly attractionsa city _polishing the sentence like this:polishing the sentence like

21、 this:Hangzhou is a most picturesque modern city located in East China.with _ scenery杭州是位于中国东部的风景如画的现代城市。杭州是位于中国东部的风景如画的现代城市。Hangzhou is the main representative Chinese-style city renowned for its historic relics and natural environment.try to combine two impressions try to combine two impressions H

22、angzhou is a city where headquarter of Alibaba lies,thus attracting many computer engineers like you.If Mike is a computer expert,you can tell him.If Mike is a computer expert,you can tell him.Tip 1:adj.s&clauses will make the recommendation more attractive prosperouspicturesquerepresentativemost ce

23、lebratedrenownedpopularnumerouswhere headquarter of Alibaba liesIts a really fun place with a lot to see.You can wander in the West Lake Wonderland and admire the evening fountain displays.Hangzhou,located in the east of China,covers an area of about 17,000 square kilos!Its a really fun place,and th

24、ere is a lot to see.You can walk along the West Lake and even see some fountain displays in the evening!You are sure to enjoy your visit.You can schedule your vacation today!too general and simple,too general and simple,lacking strong detailslacking strong detailsHow can you improve the sentence and

25、 reinforce the main idea of the letter?Tip 2:Diversify the verbs and sentences to make the reasons more attractive.Hangzhou never fails to be a boring city.Cycling in the West Lake Wonderland and appreciating the fountain displays give you a unique experience.杭州从来不是一个无聊的城市。骑行在西湖胜景、欣赏喷泉表演都会给你一种独特的经历。

26、photograph sunset views on Broken Bridgeappreciate Impression West Lake,an open night showsee well-preserved old buildingsexplore typical Chinese stores Hangzhou,located in the east of China,covers an area of about 17,000 square kilos!Its a really fun place,and there is a lot to see.You can walk alo

27、ng the West Lake and even see some fountain displays in the evening!You are sure to enjoy your visit.You can schedule your vacation today!whats unique about Hangzhou:whats unique about Hangzhou:Longjing teaten tourist attractions around the West Lake;silk;Long-jing tea;ancient capital cityTip 3Tip 3

28、：Create sentences to describe the citys uniqueness.Create sentences to describe the citys uniqueness.your own sentences _your own sentences _a pan-roasted green teaproduced by handrenowned for its high qualityhas a legend behind itLongjing tea,a pan-roasted green tea,has a legend behind it.Produced

29、by hand,Longjing tea is renowned for its high quality.With a legend behind it,Longjing tea is another attraction for you to visit Hangzhou.If you go there,I recommend you to taste Longjing tea,a symbol of Hangzhou culture.General impression is general and recommendation of activities will be limited

30、 by seasons.Then what else makes a place impress you forever?Dear Mike,Glad to know that you are coming to China for your summer vacation.Id like to recommend the city of Hangzhou to you.Hangzhou is a most picturesque city located in the east of China.It has so much to offer.You can enjoy the refres

31、hing breeze as you bike along the world-famous West Lake.You can also experience the charm of a bustling downtown section full of historical heritages.If you prefer a quiet getaway,take a stroll to its silk museum to admire the unique charm of Chinese art!I hope my recommendation helpful.The nice we

32、ather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable.Yours,Li Hua a possible version vivid description(adj.)colorful activities(v.)unique characteristic(n.)varied sentence types What makes a good recommendation letter?Reference questions for self-evaluationDo you think Mr.James

33、 will be persuaded when the writer lists all these qualities of Wang Ming?What is needed to be a good host for an English speech contest?Is“he”the only subject to state WMs traits?Keep the rubric in mindPractice:Work 2Your polished draft Display Display your your polished polished draft draft and an

34、d read read it it aloud aloud to to the the whole class.whole class.Highlight Highlight the the improvement improvement that that you make to the first draft.you make to the first draft.Tell us why you make such changes?Tell us why you make such changes?02 a recommendation letter choose a persons tr

35、aits appropriate for the positionspecific reasonslist the reasons making a place unique&attractiveI sincerely hope It would be highly appreciated if you could.Im grateful if you could take my recommendation.writing purpose Basic principle:vivid description(adj.)colorful activities(v.)unique characte

36、ristic(n.)varied sentence typesEvaluating summary wishes&hopesDear Mr.James,Im Li Hua,a student in your oral English class.Having known that you are looking for a host for the coming English Speech Contest,I strongly recommend my friend Wang Ming as a qualified candidate.Humorous and outgoing,he nev

37、er fails to bring laughter to the people around.Besides,his knowledge of English and English literature is a huge advantage to this position,which help inspire the participation of contestants.Most importantly,he is rich in personal experience of hosting large gatherings in junior and high school.Th

38、ank you for considering my recommentation,for he is the kind of host you are seeking.Yours sincerely,Li Hua Remember:choose traits appropriate for the positionpersonalitiespersonalitiesstrengths in learning and work strengths in learning and work skills making him versatileskills making him versatil

39、eabilities to qualify for the positionabilities to qualify for the positionrelevant relevant past experiencespast experiencesachievements that merit highlightingachievements that merit highlightingwillingness to do the jobwillingness to do the jobpersonal story to stroke the feeling of personal stor

40、y to stroke the feeling of the letter-receiver the letter-receiver Homework:1Appreciate the possible version 2 attached below.2Learn to write a second recommendation letter,referring to the rubric we have learned today.假假如如你你是是高高三三学学生生李李华华，你你的的英英国国朋朋友友Jim在在给给你你的的邮邮件件中中提提到到他他对对中中国国文文化化很很感感兴兴趣趣，计计划划明明

41、年年来来中中国国上上大大学学。他他向向你你咨咨询询相相关关信信息息，并并且且请请你你推推荐荐一一所所大大学学。请请给给他他回回封封邮邮件件，说说明明你你所所推推荐荐的的大大学学以以及及推推荐荐理由。理由。Rubric for a recommendation letter(see your worksheet)whole whole RubricRubricExcellentExcellentGoodGoodFairFairPoorPoorFormatwritten with proper formatting(salutation,body&closing)most parts are wr

42、itten correctlyall parts are present but only some are written correctlyonly some of the parts are presentGrammar,punctuation&spellingrules of grammar,usage,capitalization,and punctuation are followed;spelling is correctrules of.are followed with many minor errors that do not distract from the reada

43、bilityletter contains a few errors(grammatical,puctuation,spelling.)Letter contains numerous grammatical.errorsContent a meaningful letter using strong details to indicate purposewriting may wander off topic and need more detailsbasic understanding,using limited ideas or detailsdisplay no understand

44、ing/few detailsWritten communicationclearly written with specific statements to reinforce main idea(vivid and approriate language in complete and varied sentences to convey required information)somewhat clear with vague statements to support main idea;uses appropriate terms in complete sentences to communicate required informationsomewhat unclear;poor and/or inaccurate word choice in imcomplete sentencesoff-topic;word choice interferes with clarity;many errors in sentence stuctureThank you for your involvement in listening！