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1、浙江省部分学校2021-2022学年高一上学期期中联考英语解析版试卷汇编应用文写作专题浙江省温州新力量联盟2021-2022学年高一上学期期中联考英语试题（解析版）86.假如你是李华，你的笔友Mike写信告诉你，由于学习压力过大，他经常不吃饭，也不 锻炼，导致身体虚弱，学习状态欠佳。请你给他回信。内容要点：1 .对他的现状表示担忧；2,提出一些健康生活的建议（如合理饮食，加强锻炼，劳逸结合）。注意事项：1 .词数100左右；.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Mike,Yours,Li Hua浙江省温州十校联合体2021-2022学年高一上学期期中考试英语试题（解析版）46.假如你是“

2、Growing Pains”栏目专家Susan Luo,你收到了来自Troubled Girl的信。阅读 下面的信件，然后请你回信给她一些建议。内容点包括：1 .表示安慰；.给予建议。注意：L词数80左右.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Susan,I am a girl who has just started senior high school. Recently, I am having some trouble with my classmates. Im getting along well with a boy in my class. We often do scho

3、olwork together and enjoy helping each other. We have become really good friends.But our friendship are misunderstood. Other students have started gossiping （说长道短）,saying that this boy and I have fallen in love. This has made me angry. I dont want to end the friendship,but I hate others gossiping. W

4、hat should I do?Troubled Girl浙江省台州市“十校联盟”202L2022学年高一上学期期中考试英语试题（解析版）73.假定你是李华，你的朋友李越刚进入高中，因为学习压力和没有朋友而感到很焦虑，不 知如何排解，写信求助于你。请你用英语回一封信给他，提出一些合理建议，内容包括：1 .转变心态，正确对待学习压力；2听听歌曲，释放学习压力；3,多与同学交流，和他们成为朋友；注意：1.词数100左右；2 .可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。浙江省北斗联盟2021-2022学年高一上学期期期中联考英语试卷（解析版）56.假如你是李华。你的笔友Amy最近写了一封e-mail给你，表达了

5、因体重过重带来的烦 恼。请你安慰Amy,并给她建议。内容包括：1 .表达安慰；.给出建议；2 .你的祝愿。注意：L词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。浙江省衢温“51”联盟2021-2022学年高一上学期期中考试英语试题（解析版）61 .假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Mark得知2022年北京冬奥会需要外籍志愿者，他想申 请加入，但不知作何准备，发来邮件向你求助。请你回复邮件，内容包括：1 .写信目的；.你的建议；2 .表示祝愿。注意：1 .词数80左右;.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考答案浙江省温州新力量联盟2021-2022学年高一上学期期中联考英语试题（解析版）86. D

6、ear Mike,I was overcome with worry and concern when I heard your present situation. Under too much pressure, you often skip meals and lack necessary exercise, resulting in a weak body and a worse state of mind. Thus, Fm writing to offer you some suggestions of a healthy life, aiming to kick your bad

7、 habits which are harmful to your health. My suggestions are listed as follows.First of all, you should keep a balanced diet and have meals regularly, which will not only recover your strength but offer sufficient nutrients for your body and mind. Secondly, you can spend more time taking exercising,

8、 such as jogging and swimming. Only after you take more exercise can you feel refreshed and energetic, thus enabling you to devote more time to your study. Last but not least, you should strike a balance between work and leisure. As an old saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.I ho

9、pe you can take my suggestions, build up your body and make steady progress with your study.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本书面表达是一篇提纲类作文。【详解】一、思路点拔本文是一篇应用文。审题：假如你是李华，你的笔友Mike写信告诉你，由于学习压力过大, 他经常不吃饭，也不锻炼，导致身体虚弱，学习状态欠佳。请你给他回信。内容要点：1. 对他的现状表示担忧；2.提出一些健康生活的建议（如合理饮食，加强锻炼，劳逸结合）要 求根据题干要求给笔友写一封回信，短文必须根据题干要求从两个方面进行写作。短文时态 以

10、一般现在时为主，人称代词以第一人称为主，要确保要点齐全，句子通顺，无语法错误。 二、亮点语块l.be overcome with为所压倒/制服2上e harmful to对有害处3.build up 增强三、高分句型1.1 was overcome with worry and concern when I heard your present situation, （when 弓I 导的时 间状语从句）2. Tm writing to offer you some suggestions of a healthy life, aiming to kick your bad habits wh

11、ich are harmful to your health, （aiming to现在分词作状语；which引导限制性定语从句） 3. Initially, you should keep a balanced diet and have meals regularly, which will not only recover your strength but offer sufficient nutrients for your body and mind, （which 弓| 导的非限制性定语 从句）【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符 合逻

12、辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句。1.1 was overcome with worry and concern when I heard your present situation, （when 引导的时间状语从句）2. Im writing to offer you some suggestions of a healthy life, aiming to kick your bad habits which are harmful to your health.（aiming to现在分词作状语；which引导限制性定语从句）3. Initially, you should k

13、eep a balanced diet and have meals regularly, which will not only recover your strength but offer sufficient nutrients for your body and mind, （which引导的非限制性定语从句）。全文中没有中 国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句 转换自然，为文章增色添彩。浙江省温州十校联合体2021-2022学年高一上学期期中考试英语试题（解析版）46. Troubled Girl,I am sorry you are h

14、aving trouble with your classmates. There is nothing wrong with you and this boy being friends and studying together. So dont be upset. Here is my advice about what you should do.First, do what you think is right. A boy and a girl can be good friends, and ending your friendship would be a stupid thi

15、ng to do. You will lose a good friend and someone to study with. Second, tell your classmates that what they see isnt real and gossiping about your friendship is completely ridiculous. Also, you can just ignore your classmates. That way you will show them that you are more grown-up than they are. La

16、st, when in trouble, seeking help from your teachers is always a good choice. They are more experienced and helpful in dealing with such a problem.Hope my advice will be helpful.Best wishSusan Luo【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Troubled Girl回信，针对她遇到的问题给她 一些建议。【详解】1 .词汇积累沮丧的：upsetannoyed/sad/unhappy止匕外：Also -Be

17、sides/Whats more完全地：completely一thoroughly/totally 处理，解决 deal withcope with2 .句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： You will lose a good friend and someone to study with.拓展句： You will lose a good friend and someone who you can study with.【点睛】【高分句型 11 Here is my advice about what you should do. （isffi T what 引导的宾语 从句）高分句型 2

18、1 when in trouble, seeking help from your teachers is always a good choice.（运用 了 when引导的时间状语从句且省略了从句中的主语和be动词）浙江省台州市“十校联盟”2021-2022学年高一上学期期中考试英语试题（解析版）73. Dear Li Yue,You wrote that you are under great stress and have no friend at school. I understand quite well that you are anxious and lonely. As y

19、our best friend, Id like to give you some suggestions.First of all, I recommend that you have a positive attitude towards your study. After all, stress is only part of students9 life. Besides, I think you can listen to songs in your spare time, which can relieve your stress. Last but not least, why

20、not try to communicate with your classmates and even make friends with them? Through the communication you can find support, which will encourage you to overcome difficulties in your study and life.I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you. Believe in yourself and you will make it. Yours, Li Hua【

21、分析】这是一篇应用文，要求考生回一封信给刚进入高中不知如何排解的朋友李越提出一 些合理建议。【详解】L词汇积累承受巨大的压力：under great stressunder great pressure 给某人提供建议：give sb. some suggestions一give advice to sb. 克月艮：overcomeget over有助于：be helpful tobe beneficial to2 .句型拓展祈使句改条件状语从句原句： Believe in yourself and you will make it. 拓展句：If you believe in yoursel

22、f, you will make it.【点睛】高分句型 1 I understand quite well that you are anxious and lonely.运用 了 that 引导的 宾语从句高分句型 2| Besides, I think you can listen to songs in your spare time, which can relieve your stress.运用了 which引导的非限制性定语从句。高分句型 3 I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.使用省略 that 的宾语从句。 浙江省北斗联

23、盟2021-2022学年高一上学期期期中联考英语试卷（解析版） 56. Dear Amy,Im terribly sorry to know that you are troubled by your weight problem. I understand how you feel. It normal fbr teenagers to feel anxious and annoyed if they are overweight. Maybe I can give you some advice and things will get better soon.Besides having

24、a healthy diet, I recommend that you try to do some healthy exercises, such as playing ball games and swimming. It is a good way to keep fit and healthy. If you keep on doing these, I am sure you will become slimmer and healthier. In addition, you should not mind your own appearance a lot. Everyone

25、has different appearances and you should tell your friends about this. I am sure they will be friendly to you again.I hope my advice works. Write to me again if you have further problems.Love,Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给你的笔友Amy回复一封邮件，写信安慰因 体重过重而烦恼的Amy,并给她建议。【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。

26、结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求：1 .表达安慰；.给出建议；2 .你的祝愿。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）give some advice, do some healthy exercises, such as, keep fit, keep on, in addition, be friendly tOo第三步：连词成句Tm terribly sorry to know that you are troubled by your weight problem.1.1 understand how you feel. Ifs normal

27、fbr teenagers to feel anxious and annoyed if they are overweight.3.Maybe I can give you some advice and things will get better soon.4.Besides having a healthy diet, I recommend that you try to do some healthy exercises, such as playing ball games and swimming.5.If you keep on doing these, I am sure

28、you will become slimmer and healthier.6.1n addition, you should not mind your own appearance a lot.7.Everyone has different appearances and you should tell your friends about this.8.1 am sure they will be friendly to you again.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1 .表并列补充关系：Besides, In additio

29、n连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔 接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，【点睛】高分句型1I hope you will find these suggestions helpful.我希望你会认为这些建议由 帮助。（应用了宾语从句）高分句型 2I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration.我希望那你会考虑我的建 议。（应用了宾语从句）浙江省衢温“51”联盟2021-2022学年高一上学期期中考试英语试题（解析版）61. Dear Mark,I am glad to receive your letter, in which

30、 you told me you wanted to apply for the position of the foreign volunteer for Beijing Winter Olympic Games, but didnt know how to prepare for it. So I am writing to give you some advice.Firstly, you should learn Chinese well, which enables you to communicate smoothly with Chinese athletes. Secondly

31、, you should get familiar with all the information about the WinterOlympic Games, such as the events and the stadiums. Thirdly, you should let the interviewer know your positive personalities, such as being helpful and outgoing, which are essential to be a volunteer.Hope you can be admitted.【分析】本篇书面

32、表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Mark写封信，给他提一些申请做 北京冬奥会外籍志愿者的准备工作的建议。【详解】L词汇积累高兴的：gladdelighted职位：position-post建议：advicesuggestion必要的：essential一necessary2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Secondly, you should get familiar with all the information about the Winter Olympic Games, such as the events and the stadiums.拓展句：Secondly, you sh

33、ould get familiar with all the information about the Winter Olympic Games, which includes the events and the stadiums.【点睛】高分句型 1I am glad to receive your letter, in which you told me you wanted to apply for the position of the foreign volunteer for Beijing Winter Olympic Games, but didnt know how to prepare for it.（运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句）高分句型 2Firstly, you should learn Chinese well, which enables you to communicate smoothly with Chinese athletes.（运用了 which引导的非限制性定语从句）