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1、高考英语写作训练2021年广州二模续写Aram and Rossis BakeryWalking along the narrow brick sidewalk, Aram took a deep breath. The air smelled of lemons and baked bread and coffee, coming from Rossis Italian Bakery.He was almost there.first. Rossi 同意教配料买齐 开始烘焙 学习提升 焕发生机 顾客归来 For Aram, it was a weight off his mind. 心理 回

2、应 In the following days, Aram ordered all the necessary ingredients online and the empty bottles on the shelves were refilled.具体动作+结果With Mrs. Rossis guidance, Arams baking sk川s improved day by day.情节发展 动作Old customers started to come back, and the faded bakery seemed to regain its life.结果Sometimes

3、Mrs. Rossi would sit in an armchair outside and greeted people under the new wooden sign, which now read “Aram and Rossis Bakery”. 平凡结尾一日常一扣题全文呈现Then a thought occurred to Aram that he could ask Mrs. Rossi to teach him. Dear Mrs. Rossi, his eyes shone like the stars in the night sky, ul love bakery

4、from my childhood and its my dream to provide delicious bread and cakes for others. When people are in a bad mood, I believe tasty food can bring them happiness, and I want to become that person who spread joy through my own efforts! Please teach me!” Mrs. Rossi raised her eyebrows and carefully mea

5、sured the young man, who stood nervously waiting for her answer.Mrs. Rossi finally said, Lets buy the ingredients first. For Aram, it was a weight off his mind. In the following days, Aram ordered all the necessary ingredients online and the empty bottles on the shelves were refilled. With Mrs. Ross

6、is guidance, Aram5s baking sk川s improved day by day. Old customers started to come back, and the faded bakery seemed to regain its life. Sometimes Mrs. Rossi would sit in an armchair outside and greeted people under the new wooden sign, which now read “Aram and Rossis Bakery”.Aram still couldn,t bel

7、ieve his luck. All his friends were working boring summer jobswaiting tables and babysitting. And here he was, about to start as an actual bakers assistant, doing what he loved. It was all thanks to his Aunt Rita. She knew Mrs. Rossi and had arranged everything. It was the perfect experience for his

8、 future career. Rossis Bakery, he was sure, would one day be known as the place where he got his start.Ah, here he wasthe bakery. A faded wooden sign over the door read “Rossis Bakery. Aram straightened his shoulders and entered. Mrs. Rossi was sitting at the counter, looking old and wise. Aram gree

9、ted her and stuck out his hand. Mrs. Rossi looked at it for a second before turning around and waving him inside. JTm ready to learn everything/5Aram said.u Great. Lefs start with the cash register/5 Mrs. Rossi said, because thafs what youll be doing. She showed him how to use the cash register. It

10、wasnt hard. The pastry trays were all marked by price, and there weren5t that many choices anyway. Thafs it?” Aram said, his heart sinking. But when do we bake?55“Bake? I order wholesale now. No more baking.Im too old. Then Mrs. Rossi silently held up her hands. Aram took in her knotted, swollen fin

11、gers, and he understood. A wave of disappointment struck him. Sadness overwhelmed him so suddenly that he couldnt think of a word to say.He sighed, and Mrs. Rossi sighed, too. I used to bake it all. Bread and cakes. And no one did it better than me. But that was when these things worked,” said Mrs.

12、Rossi holding up her hands once more and glancing across the shelves filled with empty bottles labelled with names of the various ingredients （酉己料） she once used. Suddenly she came alive, waving her arthritic （关节炎的）hands. People used to line up around the corner. Everyone wanted my baked bread.55Ara

13、m来实习的年轻人未来职业憧憬失望Mrs. Rossi店主老女人高超烘焙技巧被迫放弃Then a thought occurred to Aram that he could askMrs. Rossi to teach him. Aram 请求教“Dear Mrs. Rossi J his eyes shone like the stars in the night sky, u love bakery from my childhood and ifs my dream to provide delicious bread and cakes for others. When people

14、are in a bad mood, I believe tasty food can bring them happiness, and I want to become that person who spread joy through my own efforts! Please teach me!”过去梦想一现在观点一未来期许：提出要求Mrs. Rossi raised her eyebrows and carefully measured the young man, who stood nervously waiting for her answer.过程说服提出教一同意？（不合理）不同意？一反复请求一心理变化（对话、原因、复杂）沉默Mrs. Rossi finally said, Lets buy the ingredients